Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX93AX49N0Z2G2PNFYJFHV

Run Details

Duration:
19.5s
Cost:
$0.010333
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain on the door rattled as the deadbolts clicked open one by one. Aurora didn’t speak. She just pulled the door half-open, the brass security chain still limiting the gap, her bare feet planted on the warped pine floor behind her. The scent of turmeric and cumin drifted up from the curry house below, thick in the humid evening air. Lucien stood on the landing, his back straight beneath a perfectly tailored charcoal coat. Rain glistened in his platinum hair, though his shoulders were dry—no umbrella, but he hadn’t run. He’d taken his time. His right hand rested on the ivory head of his cane, thumb tracing the curve like he was recalibrating a compass. “Rory.” His voice was low, French accent smoothing the edges of her nickname like worn stone. She didn’t smile. “You remember the chain?” “I remember you always hated opening the door.” He tilted his head slightly, just enough for the uneven light from the hallway bulb to catch both eyes—one amber, alive with fire; the other black as obsidian. “Still don’t trust easy entrances.” “You’re soaking the landing.” “I’ll dry.” She hesitated. A flicker of something—recognition, maybe pain—passed behind her bright blue eyes. The crescent scar on her left wrist twitched as she gripped the doorframe. Then, with a quiet click, she released the chain. The door opened wider. He stepped in, careful not to brush against her as he passed. His shoes left faint marks on the floorboards, not from rain but from city grime. She shut the door behind him, re-engaging the deadbolts with sharp, deliberate throws. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound between her ankles, purring like a struck engine. She scooped him up, holding him like a shield. “You got a cat.” “You remember I hate cats.” “Apparently not enough to keep one away.” She carried Ptolemy to the cluttered kitchenette, setting him down beside an open book on sigil degradation in post-Chaos cosmologies. Her flat was chaos in the truest sense—scrolls curled at the edges, ink-stained index cards stacked beside half-empty mugs of tea. A map of London’s ley lines covered one wall, pinned with red threads and coded annotations in three languages. Lucien didn’t touch anything. He stood just inside the living space, cane vertical, coat dripping onto the mat she hadn’t offered him. His gaze moved over the shelves, the symbols, the faint residue of chalk dust on the coffee table. “Still studying?” “Still meddling?” He almost smiled. Almost. “Only when asked.” “Then why are you here?” The silence thickened. The hum of the refrigerator cycled off. Somewhere below, a wok sizzled. “You moved.” “Three years ago,” she said. “You took your time noticing.” “I didn’t know you’d want me to.” She turned, arms crossed. “You didn’t ask.” “I sent letters.” “To Silas. Not to me.” “They reached you.” “Eventually. After you knew I’d moved on.” His jaw tightened. “That’s not why I sent them.” “No? Then why? A courtesy? A postscript to something that ended with you vanishing the morning after the summoning at Blackfriars?” He exhaled through his nose. “You know why I left.” “I know what you said. I don’t know why it was easier to run than to talk.” “I protected you.” “From what? Your own father’s realm breathing down our necks? Because newsflash, Lucien—your *half-demon* blood doesn’t scare me. It never did.” Her voice cracked slightly on the last sentence. She turned away, busying herself with rinsing a mug. “It wasn’t about fear.” He stepped forward, slow. “It was about control. You were standing in the circle, Rory. You drew the runes. You spoke the invocation. You weren’t just in the crossfire—you were *pulling the trigger*. And when it went wrong, when the rift cracked open and shadows started crawling through—he *felt you*.” She froze, mug in hand. “He tasted your defiance. Your blood. Your mind.” Lucien’s voice dropped. “And he whispered your name.” The tap dripped. “That’s why you left,” she said quietly. “That’s why I *had* to.” “And yet you’re here now.” “Because someone’s hunting half-breeds in Camden. Two found dead last week—throats slit, hearts missing. One was a contact. The other, a girl who once worked for me. They died screaming in Enochian.” Her eyes narrowed. “That’s not demon work. That’s ritual murder.” “No. It’s something older. Something that knows how to open doors.” He paused. “And it’s using *your* research.” She turned sharply. “My research is locked. Encrypted. Guarded by wards.” “It was. Someone broke your seal at the British Library’s occult annex. Found your notes on dimensional thresholds. They rebuilt the summoning sequence—your sequence—with modifications. They’re not opening rifts. They’re *fishing*.” She set the mug down. “For what?” “For heirs.” He looked at her. “For children of mixed blood. For people like me. Like the girl who died.” His jaw worked. “And now… they’ve started carving sigils into the walls near Silas’ bar. Your bar. Your flat.” Her breath caught. “You’re in it again, Rory. Whether you want to be or not.” She crossed the room in three strides, got in his face. “You don’t get to come here after three years of silence and drop a war on my doorstep like it’s a takeaway order.” “I didn’t come to start a war. I came to warn you.” “To warn me?” She laughed, sharp and bitter. “You walked out when things got real. When *we* got real. You didn’t warn me then. You didn’t look back.” “I looked every day,” he said, voice rough. “I just couldn’t stay.” “Why not?” “Because every time I looked at you, I saw how close I came to getting you killed. And I knew—if I stayed, I’d do it again. I’d choose you over survival. Over sense. Over everything.” His heterochromatic eyes held hers. “And that’s the one thing I can’t afford.” The room went still. She uncrossed her arms. Took a half-step back. Swallowed. “You think I needed protecting?” “I think you needed a chance.” “A chance you didn’t give me.” “No.” He dropped his gaze, then lifted it again. “I didn’t.” Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill, tail flicking. Outside, the streetlamp buzzed to life, casting long shadows across the room. Rory reached up, tucked a strand of black hair behind her ear. Her fingers trembled—just once. “You smell different,” she said. “Three years in Prague. Smoke and old libraries.” “You shaved your stubble.” “It irritated a wound.” She almost smiled. Almost. Then she walked to the couch, shoved a pile of books onto the floor, and sat. “Sit,” she said. “You’re making the room tense.” He didn’t move. “You letting me in?” She looked at him—really looked. At the tired lines around his eyes, the way his left hand flexed around the cane like it ached, the truth in the way he wouldn’t quite meet her gaze. “No,” she said. “But I’m not sending you away.” For the first time, something in him softened. He sat.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Her voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.246
leniency0.493
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.058
78.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
2"sharply"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"coded"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"flicker"
2"coded"
3"silence"
4"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords10
totalWords1156
ratio0.009
matches
0"half-demon"
1"pulling the trigger"
2"felt you"
3"had"
4"your"
5"fishing"
6"we"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount609
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
French1
Ptolemy3
London1
Lucien3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite meet her gaze"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.865
wordCount1156
matches
0"not from rain but from city grime"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean15.01
std15.24
cv1.015
sampleLengths
061
155
216
37
441
54
62
735
84
940
1022
114
125
137
1460
1540
162
172
187
195
2015
212
2210
237
247
253
265
273
287
299
3021
3110
3217
333
3438
3554
365
3716
383
397
405
415
4232
4310
4418
4511
4631
477
4839
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs115
matches
0"was recalibrating"
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences126
ratio0.048
matches
0"Rain glistened in his platinum hair, though his shoulders were dry—no umbrella, but he hadn’t run."
1"“I remember you always hated opening the door.” He tilted his head slightly, just enough for the uneven light from the hallway bulb to catch both eyes—one amber, alive with fire; the other black as obsidian."
2"A flicker of something—recognition, maybe pain—passed behind her bright blue eyes."
3"Her flat was chaos in the truest sense—scrolls curled at the edges, ink-stained index cards stacked beside half-empty mugs of tea."
4"Her fingers trembled—just once."
5"She looked at him—really looked."
88.14% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount621
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"beside half-empty mugs"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.04669887278582931
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00966183574879227
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean9.17
std8.44
cv0.92
sampleLengths
014
13
225
319
414
516
64
721
816
93
104
1136
125
134
142
152
1611
1713
189
194
2012
2115
2213
2313
249
254
265
277
2820
2921
3019
314
3218
3318
342
352
363
371
383
395
403
417
425
432
445
455
467
474
483
493
43.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.30158730158730157
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences64
matches
0"Then, with a quiet click,"
1"Somewhere below, a wok sizzled."
2"Then she walked to the"
ratio0.047
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences64
matches
0"She just pulled the door"
1"He’d taken his time."
2"His right hand rested on"
3"His voice was low, French"
4"She didn’t smile."
5"He tilted his head slightly,"
6"He stepped in, careful not"
7"His shoes left faint marks"
8"She shut the door behind"
9"She scooped him up, holding"
10"She carried Ptolemy to the"
11"Her flat was chaos in"
12"He stood just inside the"
13"His gaze moved over the"
14"He almost smiled."
15"She turned, arms crossed."
16"His jaw tightened."
17"He exhaled through his nose."
18"Her voice cracked slightly on"
19"She turned away, busying herself"
ratio0.609
14.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences64
matches
0"The chain on the door"
1"Aurora didn’t speak."
2"She just pulled the door"
3"The scent of turmeric and"
4"Lucien stood on the landing,"
5"Rain glistened in his platinum"
6"He’d taken his time."
7"His right hand rested on"
8"His voice was low, French"
9"She didn’t smile."
10"He tilted his head slightly,"
11"A flicker of something—recognition, maybe"
12"The crescent scar on her"
13"The door opened wider."
14"He stepped in, careful not"
15"His shoes left faint marks"
16"She shut the door behind"
17"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound"
18"She scooped him up, holding"
19"She carried Ptolemy to the"
ratio0.891
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He stepped, slow"
1"he said, voice rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.101
leniency0.203
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.029
81.4678%