Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX9E4S3GDM36F889GDENSA

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Duration:
20.2s
Cost:
$0.010928
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain needled down in icy sheets, blurring the glow of streetlamps into smudged halos across Soho’s slick cobbles. Harlow Quinn’s breath came sharp and even, each exhale a white ghost in the cold. Her worn leather boots slapped the pavement, water already seeping through worn soles, but she didn’t slow. Not with the figure ahead—small, hooded, darting like a rat between newsstands and closing pubs—vanishing into the narrow throat of Wardour Street. Her fingers brushed the butt of her sidearm, holstered low on her hip. Standard issue. Useless, probably, for what she was chasing. But instinct kept her hand there, grounded in procedure even as the world around her slipped into something else. Three years. That’s how long it had been since Morris vanished in the alley behind St. Pancras—no body, no blood, just his radio crackling with static that sounded like whispering. The investigation stalled. Officially, it was an unsolved disappearance. Unofficially, Quinn had spent every spare hour chasing whispers of her own. Clandestine meetings. Strange symbols scrawled on brickwork. Disappearances with no pattern, unless you looked too closely. And now this. A tip-off—anonymous, untraceable—about a man selling cursed relics near the old Tube tunnels. A connection to the Raven’s Nest. To *them*. The clique. She rounded the corner fast, shoulder braced, eyes scanning. The figure was gone. Vanished. Only the green neon sign of the Raven’s Nest remained, flickering weakly above a black door, rain slicking the glass. It pulsed once, twice, then steadied. Like a heartbeat. Quinn hesitated. Silas’ bar. Known to police as a low-key dive, frequented by musicians, strung-out poets, people who liked their secrets dark and cheap. But her sources—unreliable, but persistent—claimed it was a front. A gateway. She stepped inside. The air was thick with cigarette smoke and the sour tang of old beer. No music. Just the low hum of murmured conversation and the clink of glasses. A man with silver hair and a face like carved oak stood behind the bar, polishing a tumbler with a cloth. Silas. He didn’t look up. Her badge snapped open. “Detective Quinn. Metropolitan Police.” She held it up, slow, deliberate. “Saw someone come in here. Hooded. Running.” Silas exhaled through his nose. “Place is open to the public, Detective.” “Don’t play that with me. You know what I’m after.” He set the glass down. Lifted his eyes. Cold. Assessing. “And if I did? You think a badge means anything here?” She glanced past him. Behind a false bookshelf near the restrooms, a sliver of light—flickering, gone. The secret room. The one her intel mentioned. “You’ve got three seconds,” she said, voice low, “to tell me who he was.” Silas wiped his hands on his apron. “Or what? You’ll raid the place? Go ahead. Find nothing. Waste your time. Like last time.” She stepped forward, jaw tight. “Last time, someone died. A constable. Found him in the Thames with his eyes… *gone*. You heard about that, didn’t you? The one who came snooping around your little club?” Silas didn’t flinch. “Can’t say I have.” Liar. She turned on her heel and headed for the bookshelf. “Quinn.” She stopped. “You go back there,” Silas said, “you don’t come out the same.” She didn’t answer. Just shoved the bookshelf. It groaned, then gave way with a hollow click, revealing a narrow stone staircase descending into darkness. Cold air rushed up, damp and ancient, smelling of earth and something metallic. Blood? Rust? She flicked on her torch. The beam cut through black, revealing moss-streaked tiles, steps worn uneven with time. She took them one at a time, hand on her gun, ears straining. The stairs emptied into a wide tunnel—abandoned Underground, maybe. But not empty. Lights glowed ahead. Yellow bulbs strung on wires. The clatter of carts. Voices—not English. Snatches of Latin, Aramaic, something guttural and unplaceable. A market. A *living* black-market bazaar buried beneath Camden. The Veil Market. Tents of faded velvet and rusted iron stood in crooked rows. Stalls overflowed with jars of preserved eyes, vials of smoking liquid, cages holding creatures with too many limbs. A woman with no mouth bartered with a man whose shadow moved independently. Quinn’s pulse hammered, but she kept her face blank. *Move. Stay seen. Don’t show fear.* She followed the edge of the market, eyes scanning. Then she saw him—the hooded figure—ducking behind a stall stacked with ancient books bound in what looked like skin. She moved. A hand clamped her wrist. Tight. Warm. She spun, fist cocked. “Easy.” Tomás Herrera. Olive skin slick with rain, curls damp against his forehead. His Saint Christopher medallion gleamed under a string of flickering lanterns. He wore a battered leather jacket, hands up now. “You don’t want to do this,” he said. “You’re under arrest.” She reached for cuffs. He didn’t resist—just held her gaze. “For what? Breathing? You’re not in your jurisdiction anymore, Detective.” “This is *England*.” “And this,” he said, glancing at the market, “isn’t.” She tried to pull free. He didn’t tighten his grip, but he didn’t let go, either. “You don’t know what’s down here,” he said. “That man you’re chasing? He stole a memory vial. Belonged to a grieving mother. Now it’s leaking ghosts into the ventilation. You chase him, you’ll walk into a haunting. Or worse.” Her voice was steel. “You’re part of this. All of it. The Raven’s Nest, the disappearances, Morris—” His expression flickered. “Morris?” She saw it. The recognition. Too quick to hide. “You *knew* him.” He looked away. “He came here. Asking questions. Didn’t listen when we told him to leave.” Her breath caught. “Where is he?” “I don’t *know*.” Tomás’ voice dropped. “But if you keep going, you’ll end up like him. Or worse.” A scream tore through the market—from the direction the hooded man had gone. Not pain. Not human. A sound like glass breaking inside a throat. People scattered. Tents flapped. Shadows twisted unnaturally along the tunnel walls. Tomás’ grip tightened. “That’s the vial. It’s cracked. Whatever’s in there is loose.” Quinn looked at the chaos. Then at the path the suspect had taken. She yanked her wrist free. “Stay here,” she said. He caught her arm again. Not rough. Firm. “You don’t have the token. They’ll know you’re an outsider. You walk into a hunting ground blind, you die.” “I don’t care.” She met his eyes. “Morris didn’t come out. I’m not leaving without answers.” He studied her—her sharp jaw, the pulse in her temple, the way her fingers trembled not from fear, but from need. Then he reached into his jacket. Pulled out a small, carved bone token. Held it out. “If you go,” he said, “you’re on your own. No badge. No backup. No rules. You break one law down here—*any* law—and you don’t walk back up.” She took the token. It was cold. Carved with symbols she didn’t recognize. He stepped aside. She moved forward, into the flickering light, heart loud in her ears. Behind, Tomás whispered, low, “God help you.” She didn’t look back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"standard"
count1
1
word"clandestine"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"standard"
1"clandestine"
2"scanning"
3"pulsed"
4"flicked"
5"velvet"
6"pulse"
7"flickered"
8"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences136
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences160
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords13
totalWords1169
ratio0.011
matches
0"them"
1"gone"
2"living"
3"Move. Stay seen. Don’t show fear."
4"England"
5"knew"
6"know"
7"any"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount869
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.58
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Quinn5
Wardour1
Street1
Morris1
St1
Tube1
Raven2
Nest2
Silas5
Underground1
English1
Latin1
Aramaic1
Camden1
Veil1
Market1
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Silas"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"Wardour"
2"Street"
3"St"
4"Market"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like whispering"
1"looked like skin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.855
wordCount1169
matches
0"not from fear, but from need"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean17.19
std15.09
cv0.878
sampleLengths
072
141
267
326
414
529
62
733
83
954
1021
1112
1210
1321
1424
1514
1623
1735
187
191
2010
211
222
2312
2424
2515
2631
2712
2831
293
3051
316
3228
332
3411
351
3632
378
387
3916
403
419
4216
4339
4417
454
469
473
4816
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs170
matches
0"was chasing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences160
ratio0.069
matches
0"Not with the figure ahead—small, hooded, darting like a rat between newsstands and closing pubs—vanishing into the narrow throat of Wardour Street."
1"Pancras—no body, no blood, just his radio crackling with static that sounded like whispering."
2"A tip-off—anonymous, untraceable—about a man selling cursed relics near the old Tube tunnels."
3"But her sources—unreliable, but persistent—claimed it was a front."
4"Behind a false bookshelf near the restrooms, a sliver of light—flickering, gone."
5"The stairs emptied into a wide tunnel—abandoned Underground, maybe."
6"Voices—not English."
7"Then she saw him—the hooded figure—ducking behind a stall stacked with ancient books bound in what looked like skin."
8"He didn’t resist—just held her gaze."
9"A scream tore through the market—from the direction the hooded man had gone."
10"He studied her—her sharp jaw, the pulse in her temple, the way her fingers trembled not from fear, but from need."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount480
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.03333333333333333
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences160
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences160
mean7.31
std6.05
cv0.828
sampleLengths
018
115
217
322
413
52
67
719
82
914
1014
113
126
1312
142
155
169
173
1813
196
202
212
229
234
241
2520
266
273
282
292
3020
319
322
333
3414
352
3612
3721
381
394
404
4110
427
435
447
4510
465
473
481
491
72.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.45625
totalSentences160
uniqueOpeners73
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences100
matches
0"Officially, it was an unsolved"
1"Unofficially, Quinn had spent every"
2"Only the green neon sign"
3"Just the low hum of"
4"Just shoved the bookshelf."
5"Then she saw him—the hooded"
6"Too quick to hide."
7"Then at the path the"
8"Then he reached into his"
ratio0.09
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences100
matches
0"Her worn leather boots slapped"
1"Her fingers brushed the butt"
2"She rounded the corner fast,"
3"It pulsed once, twice, then"
4"She stepped inside."
5"He didn’t look up."
6"Her badge snapped open."
7"She held it up, slow,"
8"He set the glass down."
9"She glanced past him."
10"she said, voice low"
11"She stepped forward, jaw tight."
12"She turned on her heel"
13"She didn’t answer."
14"It groaned, then gave way"
15"She flicked on her torch."
16"She took them one at"
17"She followed the edge of"
18"She spun, fist cocked."
19"His Saint Christopher medallion gleamed"
ratio0.4
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences100
matches
0"Rain needled down in icy"
1"Harlow Quinn’s breath came sharp"
2"Her worn leather boots slapped"
3"Her fingers brushed the butt"
4"That’s how long it had"
5"Pancras—no body, no blood, just"
6"The investigation stalled."
7"Disappearances with no pattern, unless"
8"A tip-off-anonymous, untraceable—about a man"
9"A connection to the Raven’s"
10"She rounded the corner fast,"
11"The figure was gone."
12"It pulsed once, twice, then"
13"She stepped inside."
14"The air was thick with"
15"A man with silver hair"
16"He didn’t look up."
17"Her badge snapped open."
18"She held it up, slow,"
19"Silas exhaled through his nose."
ratio0.71
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Pancras—no body, no blood, just his radio crackling with static that sounded like whispering."
1"Known to police as a low-key dive, frequented by musicians, strung-out poets, people who liked their secrets dark and cheap."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice low,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Behind Tomás whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.242
leniency0.485
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.061
86.8642%