Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX9E9JG2D5AW607GH6P9NP

Run Details

Duration:
10.1s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the cobblestones, turning the city’s veins into a slick river of light. Detective Harlow Quinn felt the night’s cold bite seep through her coat, her leather watch ticking against her wrist as if marking time for a duel. She chased a silhouette slipping between streetlamps, the suspect’s coat flaring like a phantom banner. Her boots splashed in puddles, each step a metronome of purpose. “Stop!” she shouted, voice cutting through the downpour. The figure darted into an alley, the neon green glow of The Raven’s Nest flickering above the entrance like a warning. Quinn’s brown eyes narrowed; the rain blurred the sign’s letters, but the green hue remained unmistakable. She vaulted the trash bin, landing on the cracked pavement with a grunt. The alleys narrowed, walls closing in like a throat. The suspect turned, a flash of silver reflected in a puddle—a pocketknife glinting under the streetlight. Quinn’s hand tightened around the grip of her sidearm, though she rarely drew it. She trusted the weight of her training more than metal. “Don’t make this harder,” she growled, the words slick with rain. The suspect’s shoulders hunched, then he vaulted a low fence, disappearing into a doorway that led downwards. Quinn crouched, feeling the slick stone under her knuckles. She peered into the darkness, catching a glimpse of a stairwell lit by a flickering bulb. The air smelled of damp stone and something metallic, like old blood. She took a breath, steadied herself, and descended. The stairwell opened into a vaulted chamber, walls lined with old maps and black‑and‑white photographs—faces of explorers, war zones, and a few unrecognizable shadows. The green neon sign from above was now a distant memory, replaced by the low hum of a hidden market. The Veil Market sprawled before her, a labyrinth of stalls draped in tattered cloths, each stall guarded by figures whose eyes glowed faintly under the gloom. A token lay on a wooden counter, bone white and polished, its surface etched with an intricate sigil. Quinn’s eyes flicked to it, recalling the whispered rumors of entry requirements. She reached for it, but a hand brushed her wrist, stopping her. “Don’t touch that,” a voice warned, low and thick with an accent she couldn’t place. Quinn turned, meeting the gaze of a man with olive skin and a scar tracing his left forearm. The scar was fresh enough to catch the light, a reminder of a recent wound. Around his neck dangled a Saint Christopher medallion, its metal catching a stray ray from a cracked ceiling lamp. “Tomás Herrera,” he said, his tone flat but edged with urgency. “You shouldn’t be here.” Quinn’s jaw set. “I’m chasing a lead. He went through here.” Tomás glanced toward a narrow doorway where a curtain of black fabric swayed. “The market isn’t a place for police. It eats people who wander in.” The suspect’s silhouette reappeared, now perched on a stall’s edge, a vial of something shimmering in his palm. He glanced back, eyes flashing with something that might have been fear, might have been triumph. “Come on, Quinn,” he shouted, voice echoing off stone. “You can’t catch me in the dark.” Quinn’s breath misted, her mind racing. She could retreat, climb back to the street and report what she’d seen, but the trail would grow cold. She could follow him deeper, into a world she barely understood. The market’s stalls promised enchantments, banned alchemy, and whispers that could turn a detective’s night into a nightmare. “Tomás,” she said, the word a command. “You know this place. Give me a way out if I need it.” Tomás lifted his chin, the medallion catching a glint. “I can’t promise safety. I can’t promise anything.” A stall vendor, cloaked in a tattered coat, leaned forward, offering a small bottle that pulsed with an inner light. “For a price, detective,” he hissed. “What do you want? Knowledge? Power?” Quinn stared at the bottle, then at the shadowed figure slipping away. She heard the rain’s echo still drumming above, a reminder of the world she left behind. The market’s air thickened, scented with incense and something metallic. “Give me the token,” she demanded, voice razor sharp. “I’ll trade.” The vendor smiled, a thin line that revealed a tooth missing at the edge. “You have none.” Tomás stepped forward, his scarred forearm flexing. “I have one. It’s old, but it works.” He placed the bone token on the counter, its surface pulsing faintly. “Enough,” Quinn said, eyes locked on the vendor. “Move aside.” The vendor’s smile widened. “You think you can walk through the Veil without paying the price?” Quinn’s hand brushed the worn leather watch on her left wrist, the strap creaking. She felt the weight of eighteen years of service, the loss of DS Morris, the ghost of a case that had slipped into the supernatural. She could feel the city’s pulse, the rain’s rhythm, the market’s breath. “Where’s the exit?” she asked, not waiting for an answer. Tomás pointed toward a narrow corridor lined with crates, a faint glow emanating from within. “That leads to the old tube. It’s the only way out if you want to surface.” The suspect paused at the edge of the stall, his eyes meeting Quinn’s. “You’re late,” he sneered. “The market changes every full moon. You won’t find me here tomorrow.” Quinn’s jaw tightened, the memory of her partner’s unsolved mystery surfacing. “I’m not chasing ghosts,” she replied. “I’m chasing a man.” The suspect laughed, a sound that seemed to echo off the stone walls. “You think you can catch me in a place where the rules don’t apply?” Tomás stepped between them, his medallion clinking against his chest. “Rules change here. But you can still choose.” Quinn’s gaze flicked to the hidden back room of The Raven’s Nest, a memory of a secret door behind a bookshelf she had once used for clandestine meetings. The market’s layout resembled a maze, each turn a potential trap. “What’s the cost?” she asked Tomás, voice low. “Your safety,” he answered, his eyes never leaving the suspect. “Your mind.” The suspect’s hand tightened around the vial, a liquid inside swirling like a storm. “You want this?” he asked, offering the bottle to Quinn. She reached out, fingers brushing the glass. The liquid seemed to pulse, as if alive. She felt a chill travel up her arm, a whisper of something unseen. “Keep it,” Tomás said, his tone firm. “It’s a bait, not a cure.” Quinn snatched the vial, slamming it into her coat pocket. The suspect’s eyes widened, then narrowed. “You think you’ve won? The market will swallow you whole.” She stepped forward, rain still dripping from her hair, the neon green sign’s memory a phantom behind her. “I’m not here to win,” she said. “I’m here to finish what started three years ago.” The suspect turned, sprinting toward a vaulted archway lined with crates. Shadows swallowed his form. Quinn followed, her boots splashing against the uneven floor, the sound echoing like gunfire in a tunnel. Inside the archway, a narrow staircase spiraled down, lit by flickering lanterns that cast jittery shadows on the walls. The air grew warmer, scented with incense and a metallic tang. The stairs led to a subterranean chamber—The Veil Market’s heart. A crowd of figures moved like a current, their faces obscured by hoods and masks. In the center, a table displayed artifacts: glass eyes that glowed, silver coins that sang when touched, a book bound in cracked leather that seemed to breathe. The suspect slipped behind the table, pulling a small, ornate box from his coat. He opened it, revealing a crystal that pulsed with an inner light, casting eerie patterns on the walls. Quinn approached, her breath steady. “What is that?” she asked, voice flat. The suspect turned, his face half‑hidden by a scarf. “A key,” he whispered. “A key to the world you think you protect.” Tomás emerged from the crowd, his scarred forearm outstretched, the Saint Christopher medallion glinting. “You can’t take that,” he warned, the words heavy with warning. The suspect’s eyes flicked between Quinn and Tomás. “You have a choice. Walk away, stay in the rain, or step into darkness.” Quinn’s mind raced—her badge, her partner’s memory, the case that had slipped into the supernatural. She could retreat, go back to the streets, file a report, watch the market continue its secret trade. She could follow, risk the unknown, perhaps uncover the truth behind her partner’s death. She glanced at Tomás, his scar a reminder of wounds both physical and hidden. He gave her a small nod, his eyes urging her forward. She took a step toward the box, her boots thudding on the wooden floor. The crystal’s light reflected in her brown eyes, a fire she hadn’t seen in years. The market’s hum rose, a chorus of whispers and distant clinks. “Enough,” she said, voice cutting through the chatter. “Give me the box.” The suspect stared, then laughed, a sound that reverberated off the stone. “You think you can take it? The market owns it.” Tomás moved, his hand brushing Quinn’s shoulder, a silent promise of support. He whispered, “If you go, watch your back.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. She reached for the box, feeling the weight of the crystal against her fingertips. The market seemed to hold its breath, the rain’s echo faint, distant, as if the city itself waited for her decision.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:16:41.275Z" 2/19/2026, 12:16:41 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.489
leniency0.979
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1575
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1575
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"glinting"
count2
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count3
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count3
8
word"echoing"
count2
9
word"racing"
count1
10
word"glint"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count2
12
word"echo"
count3
13
word"could feel"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count2
15
word"clandestine"
count1
16
word"potential"
count1
17
word"chill"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
19
word"crystal"
count3
20
word"raced"
count1
21
word"reverberated"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"weight"
2"gloom"
3"etched"
4"intricate"
5"flicked"
6"tracing"
7"reminder"
8"echoing"
9"racing"
10"glint"
11"pulsed"
12"echo"
13"could feel"
14"pulse"
15"clandestine"
16"potential"
17"chill"
18"whisper"
19"crystal"
20"raced"
21"reverberated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences108
matches
0"d with urgency"
1"felt a chill"
50.26% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences108
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1571
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
65.64% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1304
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.69
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn22
Raven2
Nest2
Veil2
Market2
Saint2
Christopher2
Tomás11
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Market"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Tomás"
8"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.656
windowScore0.667
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if marking time for a duel"
1"sound that seemed to echo off the stone walls"
2"leather that seemed to breathe"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1571
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean29.09
std14.95
cv0.514
sampleLengths
066
145
262
328
445
570
642
715
852
915
1011
1126
1234
1316
1454
1520
1617
1732
1838
1911
2017
2127
2210
2316
2451
2510
2631
2729
2821
2927
3018
3139
328
3312
3424
3528
3613
3726
3834
3932
4040
4142
4232
4312
4422
4525
4622
4747
4825
4940
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs248
matches(empty)
34.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences132
ratio0.038
matches
0"Quinn’s brown eyes narrowed; the rain blurred the sign’s letters, but the green hue remained unmistakable."
1"The suspect turned, a flash of silver reflected in a puddle—a pocketknife glinting under the streetlight."
2"The stairwell opened into a vaulted chamber, walls lined with old maps and black‑and‑white photographs—faces of explorers, war zones, and a few unrecognizable shadows."
3"The stairs led to a subterranean chamber—The Veil Market’s heart."
4"Quinn’s mind raced—her badge, her partner’s memory, the case that had slipped into the supernatural."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1308
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.0191131498470948
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0030581039755351682
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean11.9
std5.46
cv0.459
sampleLengths
014
126
215
311
48
521
616
713
89
916
1014
1110
1211
1317
149
1516
1612
178
1824
1920
2026
2118
2212
2312
2415
2518
2615
2719
2811
294
303
318
3213
3313
3418
3516
369
377
386
3919
4011
4118
427
4313
449
458
4620
476
486
4912
39.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2196969696969697
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences102
matches
0"She chased a silhouette slipping"
1"Her boots splashed in puddles,"
2"she shouted, voice cutting through"
3"She vaulted the trash bin,"
4"She trusted the weight of"
5"she growled, the words slick"
6"She peered into the darkness,"
7"She took a breath, steadied"
8"She reached for it, but"
9"he said, his tone flat"
10"He glanced back, eyes flashing"
11"he shouted, voice echoing off"
12"She could retreat, climb back"
13"She could follow him deeper,"
14"she said, the word a"
15"She heard the rain’s echo"
16"she demanded, voice razor sharp"
17"He placed the bone token"
18"She felt the weight of"
19"She could feel the city’s"
ratio0.363
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences102
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn felt the"
1"She chased a silhouette slipping"
2"Her boots splashed in puddles,"
3"she shouted, voice cutting through"
4"The figure darted into an"
5"Quinn’s brown eyes narrowed; the"
6"She vaulted the trash bin,"
7"The alleys narrowed, walls closing"
8"The suspect turned, a flash"
9"Quinn’s hand tightened around the"
10"She trusted the weight of"
11"she growled, the words slick"
12"The suspect’s shoulders hunched, then"
13"Quinn crouched, feeling the slick"
14"She peered into the darkness,"
15"The air smelled of damp"
16"She took a breath, steadied"
17"The stairwell opened into a"
18"The green neon sign from"
19"The Veil Market sprawled before"
ratio0.961
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn felt the night’s cold bite seep through her coat, her leather watch ticking against her wrist as if marking time for a duel."
1"She chased a silhouette slipping between streetlamps, the suspect’s coat flaring like a phantom banner."
2"The suspect’s shoulders hunched, then he vaulted a low fence, disappearing into a doorway that led downwards."
3"She felt the weight of eighteen years of service, the loss of DS Morris, the ghost of a case that had slipped into the supernatural."
4"Quinn followed, her boots splashing against the uneven floor, the sound echoing like gunfire in a tunnel."
5"Inside the archway, a narrow staircase spiraled down, lit by flickering lanterns that cast jittery shadows on the walls."
6"Quinn’s mind raced—her badge, her partner’s memory, the case that had slipped into the supernatural."
7"The market seemed to hold its breath, the rain’s echo faint, distant, as if the city itself waited for her decision."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"she shouted, voice cutting through the downpour"
1"he said, his tone flat but edged with urgency"
2"he shouted, voice echoing off stone"
3"she said, the word a command"
4"He placed, its surface pulsing faintly"
5"Quinn said, eyes locked on the vendor"
6"she asked, not waiting for an answer"
7"she asked, voice low"
8"Tomás said, his tone firm"
9"she asked, voice flat"
10"she said, voice cutting through the chatter"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"she growled (growl)"
2"a voice warned (warn)"
3"he shouted (shout)"
4"he hissed (hiss)"
5"she demanded (demand)"
6"he sneered (sneer)"
7"he whispered (whisper)"
8"he warned (warn)"
9"He whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.468
leniency0.936
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.426
69.8078%