| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1342 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1342 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "flicked" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "fleeting" | | 5 | "chilled" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "electric" | | 10 | "down her spine" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "predator" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "glistening" | | 16 | "warmth" | | 17 | "chill" | | 18 | "flicker" | | 19 | "whisper" | | 20 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 172 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.72% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 172 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 173 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 30 | | totalWords | 1335 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon is a quarter full. The stones drink in the light. Mark the one that drinks deepest." | | 1 | "was" | | 2 | "Just see if the seam is still intact," | | 3 | "In and out." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1330 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.38 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Evan | 2 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Yu-Fei" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 23.74% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a postcard from an expensive" | | 1 | "felt like wading into a cold, shallow s" | | 2 | "knots that seemed to writhe if she looked at them too long" | | 3 | "felt like chilled bone" | | 4 | "whisper that seemed to come from the leaves above" |
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| 50.19% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.498 | | wordCount | 1335 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a pulse of warmth, but a sudden, sharp chill" | | 1 | "Not rising from below, but coalescing from the very air above it" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 26.7 | | std | 18.62 | | cv | 0.698 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 72 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 56 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 42 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 43 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 38 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 97.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "being toyed" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "being swallowed" |
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| 96.91% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "wasn't dying" | | 2 | "was glowing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 173 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "The battery wasn't dying; the light itself was being swallowed, eaten by the thickening dark between the trees." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1337 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay quiet against her" | | 1 | "small, leather-bound journal" | | 2 | "long, bone-white fingers" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.027673896783844427 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005983545250560957 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 173 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 173 | | mean | 7.72 | | std | 5.22 | | cv | 0.676 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 33.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 29 | | diversityRatio | 0.2774566473988439 | | totalSentences | 173 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the stone and its" | | 1 | "Slowly, she turned." | | 2 | "Then another, from the north." | | 3 | "Then another, from directly behind" | | 4 | "*Just see if the seam" | | 5 | "Instead of backing toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 75.48% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't copper." | | 1 | "It was richer, fouler." | | 2 | "She’d expected a hum, a" | | 3 | "It looked like a postcard" | | 4 | "She unzipped the small backpack" | | 5 | "She flicked on her torch." | | 6 | "It felt like wading into" | | 7 | "It wasn’t the dry scrape" | | 8 | "It was damp." | | 9 | "She forced her breathing into" | | 10 | "She focused on the stones." | | 11 | "They weren't arranged in a" | | 12 | "They leaned against each other" | | 13 | "She walked the perimeter, her" | | 14 | "They all felt like chilled" | | 15 | "It was inside the clearing" | | 16 | "She counted them." | | 17 | "Her stomach clenched." | | 18 | "It didn't move with the" | | 19 | "It lay still, a pool" |
| | ratio | 0.361 | |
| 66.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 122 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of copper thickened" | | 1 | "Rory paused, her fingers closing" | | 2 | "It wasn't copper." | | 3 | "It was richer, fouler." | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant lay quiet" | | 5 | "She’d expected a hum, a" | | 6 | "Dymas had described this place" | | 7 | "It looked like a postcard" | | 8 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible constellations" | | 9 | "A rustle behind her." | | 10 | "Rory didn't turn." | | 11 | "She unzipped the small backpack" | | 12 | "The instructions were in the" | | 13 | "*The moon is a quarter" | | 14 | "The stones drink in the" | | 15 | "She flicked on her torch." | | 16 | "The beam cut through the" | | 17 | "It felt like wading into" | | 18 | "This one from her left," | | 19 | "The sound was wrong." |
| | ratio | 0.787 | |
| 32.26% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it came from three" |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "This one from her left, near a tangle of blackberry brambles that were heavy with fat, out-of-season fruit." | | 1 | "It pulsed, a slow, deep thrum that echoed the frantic beat of her own heart." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |