Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX9FWKVQ6ETRT4HM4S20EE

Run Details

Duration:
18.8s
Cost:
$0.001525
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted thick with honey and something darker, richer—like molasses left to burn at the edges of a pan. Rory adjusted the Heartstone pendant around her neck, its faint crimson pulse quickening as they stepped beyond the standing stones. The oak trunks loomed unnaturally tall, their bark smooth as polished bone, roots twisting into the earth like grasping fingers. "Time moves differently here," Nyx murmured, their voice barely more than a rustle of leaves. Their shadowy form flickered at the edges, solid one moment, translucent the next. "Watch your step." Rory glanced down. Wildflowers she didn’t recognize bloomed between the roots—petals too symmetrical, colors too vivid. A deep violet blossom turned toward her as she passed, its center pulsing like a slow-beating heart. She swallowed hard. "Yeah. Noted." Isolde moved ahead, her silver hair catching light that shouldn’t have existed beneath the dense canopy. No footprints marked the moss where she walked. "The grove remembers visitors," she said, trailing a hand over a low-hanging branch. The leaves shivered at her touch. "Even those who do not belong." A breeze curled through the trees, carrying the scent of crushed mint and something metallic. The further they walked, the more the forest twisted—branches knitting together overhead into archways, roots forming staircases that led nowhere. The ground sloped downward, soft earth giving way to smooth stone veined with luminescent blue. Nyx paused, their violet eyes narrowing. "That wasn’t here before." A pool stretched before them, its surface perfectly still. Not water—something thicker, darker. It reflected nothing, swallowing the light whole. Rory crouched, fingers hovering just above it. The pendant burned against her skin. "Don’t." Isolde’s hand closed around her wrist. "Some doors aren’t meant to be opened." Rory pulled back. The pool rippled anyway, as if something beneath had stirred. A sound cut through the silence—a low, resonant hum, like a struck crystal singing. The trees shuddered. Between them, something flickered—a doorway of woven branches, beyond which the air shimmered like heat off pavement. Isolde exhaled sharply. "Ah." Nyx’s form darkened, edges sharpening. "That’s new." Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. The Fae-forged blade at her hip felt colder than ever. "What is it?" Isolde stepped forward, her lavender eyes fixed on the distortion. "A crossing. But not one I made." The humming grew louder, harmonizing with itself until it vibrated in Rory’s teeth. The trees beyond the doorway bent as if in a gale, their leaves turning silver, then gold, then a color that hurt to look at. Nyx shifted, their voice dropping to a whisper. "We should leave." But the doorway pulsed, and the grove held its breath.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:16:42.904Z" 2/19/2026, 12:16:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde’s hand closed around [around]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.154
77.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount446
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount446
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"crystal"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"loomed"
2"flickered"
3"silence"
4"crystal"
5"shimmered"
6"vibrated"
7"whisper"
8"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences37
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences37
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences47
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords438
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount391
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Rory6
Fae-forged1
Nyx4
Isolde4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places(empty)
globalScore0.733
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount438
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean25.76
std16.65
cv0.646
sampleLengths
060
131
238
349
450
510
633
714
813
934
104
117
1219
1317
1438
1511
1610
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs70
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences47
ratio0.128
matches
0"The air tasted thick with honey and something darker, richer—like molasses left to burn at the edges of a pan."
1"Wildflowers she didn’t recognize bloomed between the roots—petals too symmetrical, colors too vivid."
2"The further they walked, the more the forest twisted—branches knitting together overhead into archways, roots forming staircases that led nowhere."
3"Not water—something thicker, darker."
4"A sound cut through the silence—a low, resonant hum, like a struck crystal singing."
5"Between them, something flickered—a doorway of woven branches, beyond which the air shimmered like heat off pavement."
88.95% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount399
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.05263157894736842
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.010025062656641603
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences47
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences47
mean9.32
std6.01
cv0.645
sampleLengths
020
120
220
315
413
53
63
713
817
93
102
1116
128
1313
146
156
1615
1720
1815
196
204
219
224
237
247
256
267
277
283
2910
3014
313
3217
333
341
355
362
376
3810
393
4010
417
4213
4325
448
453
4610
75.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.48936170212765956
totalSentences47
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences37
matches
0"Their shadowy form flickered at"
1"She swallowed hard."
2"she said, trailing a hand"
3"It reflected nothing, swallowing the"
ratio0.108
14.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences37
matches
0"The air tasted thick with"
1"Rory adjusted the Heartstone pendant"
2"The oak trunks loomed unnaturally"
3"Nyx murmured, their voice barely"
4"Their shadowy form flickered at"
5"Rory glanced down."
6"Wildflowers she didn’t recognize bloomed"
7"A deep violet blossom turned"
8"She swallowed hard."
9"Isolde moved ahead, her silver"
10"she said, trailing a hand"
11"The leaves shivered at her"
12"A breeze curled through the"
13"The further they walked, the"
14"The ground sloped downward, soft"
15"Nyx paused, their violet eyes"
16"A pool stretched before them,"
17"It reflected nothing, swallowing the"
18"Rory crouched, fingers hovering just"
19"The pendant burned against her"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Isolde moved ahead, her silver hair catching light that shouldn’t have existed beneath the dense canopy."
1"The trees beyond the doorway bent as if in a gale, their leaves turning silver, then gold, then a color that hurt to look at."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx murmured, their voice barely more than a rustle of leaves"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.154
73.7251%