| 46.15% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde’s hand closed around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.231 | | leniency | 0.462 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |
| 77.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 446 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 446 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "crystal" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 37 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 438 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.27% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 391 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Isolde | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.733 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 438 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 25.76 | | std | 16.65 | | cv | 0.646 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 47 | | ratio | 0.128 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted thick with honey and something darker, richer—like molasses left to burn at the edges of a pan." | | 1 | "Wildflowers she didn’t recognize bloomed between the roots—petals too symmetrical, colors too vivid." | | 2 | "The further they walked, the more the forest twisted—branches knitting together overhead into archways, roots forming staircases that led nowhere." | | 3 | "Not water—something thicker, darker." | | 4 | "A sound cut through the silence—a low, resonant hum, like a struck crystal singing." | | 5 | "Between them, something flickered—a doorway of woven branches, beyond which the air shimmered like heat off pavement." |
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| 88.95% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 399 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.05263157894736842 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010025062656641603 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 47 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 47 | | mean | 9.32 | | std | 6.01 | | cv | 0.645 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 10 |
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| 75.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.48936170212765956 | | totalSentences | 47 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "Their shadowy form flickered at" | | 1 | "She swallowed hard." | | 2 | "she said, trailing a hand" | | 3 | "It reflected nothing, swallowing the" |
| | ratio | 0.108 | |
| 14.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted thick with" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the Heartstone pendant" | | 2 | "The oak trunks loomed unnaturally" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured, their voice barely" | | 4 | "Their shadowy form flickered at" | | 5 | "Rory glanced down." | | 6 | "Wildflowers she didn’t recognize bloomed" | | 7 | "A deep violet blossom turned" | | 8 | "She swallowed hard." | | 9 | "Isolde moved ahead, her silver" | | 10 | "she said, trailing a hand" | | 11 | "The leaves shivered at her" | | 12 | "A breeze curled through the" | | 13 | "The further they walked, the" | | 14 | "The ground sloped downward, soft" | | 15 | "Nyx paused, their violet eyes" | | 16 | "A pool stretched before them," | | 17 | "It reflected nothing, swallowing the" | | 18 | "Rory crouched, fingers hovering just" | | 19 | "The pendant burned against her" |
| | ratio | 0.892 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 18 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde moved ahead, her silver hair catching light that shouldn’t have existed beneath the dense canopy." | | 1 | "The trees beyond the doorway bent as if in a gale, their leaves turning silver, then gold, then a color that hurt to look at." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, their voice barely more than a rustle of leaves" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.154 | | leniency | 0.308 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |