Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX9Q7KYTKXT3HW23JEP26Q

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Duration:
22.7s
Cost:
$0.013052
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain barely had time to rattle before the door cracked open, the top bolt still engaged. “Rory.” Lucien. He stood on the step like a man who’d rehearsed this moment a hundred times and still gotten it wrong. His charcoal overcoat was dusted with rain, collar turned up against the damp East End chill. One hand rested on his ivory cane, the other braced against the jamb, fingers curled just short of touching the chipped green paint. Not invited in. Not turned away. Aurora didn’t step back. Didn’t smile. Her bare feet pressed into the cold floorboards, toes flexing slightly, as if testing their loyalty to stay. “You don’t knock like other people.” “Other people don’t live behind three deadbolts and a warded threshold.” He tilted his head, the streetlamp catching the amber of one eye, the other black as a starless pit. “You changed the wards.” “You left a gap in the west sigil. A child could’ve slipped through.” “I left a gap so *you* could find me if you wanted to.” Silence. The neon from the *Spice Sultan* below flickered across the hallway mirror, casting a saffron stripe over his shoulder. Ptolemy, the tabby, wound between Aurora’s ankles, purring like a faulty engine. She didn’t bend to pick him up. Didn’t close the door. “You’re soaked,” she said. “And you’re still wearing that scar like a badge.” His gaze dropped to her left wrist, where the crescent-shaped mark peeked from beneath the cuff of her jumper. “Some girls get tattoos. You get nostalgic.” “I got honest.” A flicker in his jaw. The kind that showed when she’d cut too close before. “It’s been eight months,” he said. “Eleven days longer than I needed.” He exhaled through his nose. Not quite a laugh. Not quite surrender. “Can I come in? Or do we negotiate the truce in the corridor?” “You don’t get a truce. You get five minutes.” She stepped back. The door groaned on its hinges. He limped inside, the blade in his cane clicking softly against the wood. No, not a limp—too smooth for injury. A performance. A reminder. Aurora shot the middle bolt. Left the top one open. The flat smelled of cardamom, old paper, and the bitter tang of burnt coffee. Scrolls spilled from a leather satchel onto the sofa. A half-drunk mug sat beside a cracked tablet displaying a rune sequence she didn’t recognise. Lucien didn’t sit. Didn’t touch anything. He scanned the room like a man checking for traps. Or ghosts. “You’re still translating Infernal,” he said. “And you’re still dressed like a funeral director.” “Some roles require the uniform.” “Which one are you playing tonight? Broker? Watchdog? Lover?” His fingers tightened on the cane. “I’ve never pretended to be what I wasn’t.” “No. You just withheld.” “You asked not to know.” “I asked for honesty. There’s a difference.” He turned, slowly, and met her eyes. The heterochromia made it impossible to tell where his focus settled—was it her face, her neck, the pulse she knew was jumping there? “You were human then,” he said. “Still are, technically. I kept you out of the blood games because you *needed* to stay clean. Blind. Safe.” “I didn’t need coddling. I needed a partner.” “You wanted a fairy tale. I’m not the prince in that story.” “No.” She stepped forward. Close enough to smell the rain in his hair, the faint musk of sandalwood beneath. “You’re the monster who lied while holding my face like he meant every word.” His breath caught. Just once. A tiny fracture in control. “I didn’t lie.” “Then what was last winter? The way you touched me—like I was something sacred. Then silence. Radio silence for eight months.” “You were healing.” “From *you*.” Another silence, thick as velvet. Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill and began kneading the curtain, claws snagging the fabric in rhythmic pulls. Lucien looked away first. “I came because someone’s hunting half-demons in Camden. Three bodies. Throats slit with blessed silver. No motive, no message. Just execution.” “And you think I care.” “I think you cared *enough* to learn Infernal just to find me when I vanished.” Her breath stuttered. He’d seen the grimoire. The one under her bed. Leather-bound, pages edged in ash. Her private obsession. Her punishment. “You broke into my flat.” “Aurora. Look at me.” She did. And there it was—the flicker of the man beneath the mask. Not the broker, the fixer, the half-demon with a blade in his cane and a network of spies in every borough. But the one who’d held her in a safehouse in Soho when her hands wouldn’t stop shaking. The one who’d kissed her scars like prayers. “I didn’t vanish,” he said, voice lower now, rougher. “I was banished.” “By who?” “My father’s court. For consorting with a human.” She laughed, sharp and brittle. “You’re telling me now?” “I couldn’t warn you. Every word I sent would’ve been traced. They’d have come for you.” “And now?” “Now the hunter’s using spells from *my* bloodline. Someone wants me exposed. Wants me weak.” “So you run to me. Convenient.” “No.” He took a step, then another, until the cane pressed lightly against her thigh. Not a threat. An offering. “I ran to you because you’re the only one who’s ever seen me without the armour. And lived.” Aurora didn’t move. Didn’t breathe. The street below erupted in laughter—diners spilling from the curry house, drunk and loud. For a moment, the world returned. Then silence fell again. She reached out. Not for his face. Not for his heart. But for the cane. Her fingers brushed the ivory grip. Cold. Smooth. “You kept it,” he said. “The blade?” “The memory.” She let go. Stepped back. “You have five minutes left.” Outside, a car alarm wailed. Somewhere, a woman laughed. A kettle began to scream in a flat down the hall. Normal life, bleeding through the cracks in the night. Lucien exhaled. “They’ve taken someone else tonight. A girl. Sixteen. Half-human. Her mother came to me screaming.” Aurora froze. “Why tell me?” “Because you’ve got the only safe flat north of the river with a working salt barrier and a girl-sized bed.” “You want to bring her *here*?” “She’s got your eyes. And she’s bleeding out.” The words landed like bricks. Aurora turned. Walked to the kitchen. Poured water into the sink. Washed her hands slowly, methodically, as if scrubbing off something foul. When she turned back, her voice was ice. “Get her here. Now.” Lucien didn’t move. “What?” she snapped. “You don’t get to be furious and noble at the same time.” “Watch me.” He nodded once. Then turned to the door. As he reached for the handle, she spoke again. “Luc.” He stopped. “You ever show up unannounced again,” she said, “and I’ll shoot you myself.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Wouldn’t dream of it, Laila.” The door closed behind him. The top deadbolt slid into place. And Aurora stood in the silence, heart hammering, the taste of old betrayal sharp on her tongue—and the unmistakable, traitorous warmth of hope rising beneath it. Then the window shattered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
3"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"silence"
count6
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count2
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"silence"
2"flickered"
3"flicker"
4"reminder"
5"scanned"
6"pulse"
7"velvet"
8"rhythmic"
9"traced"
10"warmth"
11"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords8
totalWords1191
ratio0.007
matches
0"you"
1"Spice Sultan"
2"needed"
3"you"
4"enough"
5"my"
6"here"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"As he reached for the handle, she spoke again."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount725
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
East1
End1
Silence1
Aurora7
Close1
Soho1
Lucien5
Didn4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Lucien"
places
0"East"
1"End"
2"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if testing their loyalty to stay"
1"as if scrubbing off something foul"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1191
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs94
mean12.67
std12.21
cv0.964
sampleLengths
017
11
21
365
424
56
634
713
813
91
1042
114
1235
133
1415
156
166
1725
189
199
2024
2110
2238
2318
246
258
265
279
2814
294
305
317
3230
3325
348
3512
3633
3710
383
3921
403
412
4222
4325
445
4515
463
4719
485
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"was dusted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs129
matches
0"was jumping"
53.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences159
ratio0.031
matches
0"No, not a limp—too smooth for injury."
1"The heterochromia made it impossible to tell where his focus settled—was it her face, her neck, the pulse she knew was jumping there?"
2"And there it was—the flicker of the man beneath the mask."
3"The street below erupted in laughter—diners spilling from the curry house, drunk and loud."
4"And Aurora stood in the silence, heart hammering, the taste of old betrayal sharp on her tongue—and the unmistakable, traitorous warmth of hope rising beneath it."
94.47% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount734
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04632152588555858
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009536784741144414
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean7.49
std6.1
cv0.815
sampleLengths
017
11
21
320
416
523
63
73
84
92
1018
116
1230
134
1413
1513
161
1719
1812
197
204
214
2228
237
243
255
2610
276
286
295
304
313
3213
339
343
356
3613
377
382
392
405
415
4214
439
4415
453
463
4710
482
496
57.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.37735849056603776
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners60
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences82
matches
0"Then silence fell again."
1"Somewhere, a woman laughed."
2"Then turned to the door."
3"Then the window shattered."
ratio0.049
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences82
matches
0"He stood on the step"
1"His charcoal overcoat was dusted"
2"Her bare feet pressed into"
3"He tilted his head, the"
4"She didn’t bend to pick"
5"His gaze dropped to her"
6"He exhaled through his nose."
7"She stepped back."
8"He limped inside, the blade"
9"He scanned the room like"
10"His fingers tightened on the"
11"He turned, slowly, and met"
12"She stepped forward"
13"His breath caught."
14"Her breath stuttered."
15"He’d seen the grimoire."
16"Her private obsession."
17"he said, voice lower now,"
18"She laughed, sharp and brittle."
19"He took a step, then"
ratio0.293
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences82
matches
0"The chain barely had time"
1"He stood on the step"
2"His charcoal overcoat was dusted"
3"Aurora didn’t step back."
4"Her bare feet pressed into"
5"He tilted his head, the"
6"The neon from the *Spice"
7"Ptolemy, the tabby, wound between"
8"She didn’t bend to pick"
9"His gaze dropped to her"
10"A flicker in his jaw."
11"The kind that showed when"
12"He exhaled through his nose."
13"She stepped back."
14"The door groaned on its"
15"He limped inside, the blade"
16"Aurora shot the middle bolt."
17"The flat smelled of cardamom,"
18"Scrolls spilled from a leather"
19"A half-drunk mug sat beside"
ratio0.634
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Her bare feet pressed into the cold floorboards, toes flexing slightly, as if testing their loyalty to stay."
1"Washed her hands slowly, methodically, as if scrubbing off something foul."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, voice lower now, rougher"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.031
86.5124%