Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX9RVXXSY2RKH0ZA1QBXKX

Run Details

Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.137175

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Quinn's boots pounded against wet pavement as she chased the figure ahead through the downpour. Rain hammered the narrow Soho streets, turning neon reflections into bleeding watercolors on the asphalt. The suspect—male, dark jacket, moving with purpose—had bolted the moment she'd shown her warrant card outside The Raven's Nest. Water streamed down her face, soaking through her coat despite its weather-resistant claims. Her leather watch caught on her sleeve as she radioed in her position. "Suspect heading east on Old Compton Street. Request backup." Static crackled back. The storm was playing havoc with communications tonight. The figure vaulted over a barrier into a construction site. Quinn followed, her military training kicking in as she cleared the obstacle smoothly. Mud sucked at her shoes. Scaffolding loomed like skeletal fingers against the bruised sky. She glimpsed movement between the steel poles—there, cutting through toward Greek Street. Her breathing came steady despite the exertion. Eighteen years on the force had taught her to pace herself. The suspect was younger, faster, but panic made people sloppy. They always made mistakes. Lightning split the sky as they emerged onto Greek Street. The suspect skidded on the slick pavement, arms windmilling for balance. Quinn gained ground. Twenty meters. Fifteen. Close enough to make out details—medium build, trainers that looked expensive even in the rain, a strange pendant bouncing against his chest as he ran. He ducked into an alley between a closed newsagent and a kebab shop. Quinn knew this neighborhood like her own reflection. Dead end ahead. She had him. But the alley was empty. She slowed, hand moving to her radio again. Water dripped from fire escapes above, each drop loud in the sudden quiet. A skip overflowed with cardboard turned to mush. No doors. No windows low enough to reach. Where— Movement below caught her eye. A grate in the pavement sat askew, darkness yawning beneath. Quinn crouched beside it. The opening led to what looked like old maintenance access, probably connecting to the Tube network. The metal was wet but not from rain—someone had definitely passed through moments ago. She should call it in. Wait for backup. Follow protocol. Morris would have waited. Morris always followed protocol, right up until the night three years ago when protocol hadn't been enough. When something impossible had torn through their crime scene like tissue paper, leaving her partner's body twisted in ways that still visited her dreams. The brass had buried the report. Gas leak explosion, they'd called it. Quinn had kept her mouth shut and her eyes open ever since. She descended into darkness. The maintenance tunnel was cramped, forcing her to duck. Emergency lighting cast everything in harsh shadows. Her footsteps echoed off concrete walls slick with condensation. Pipes ran overhead, occasionally releasing drops that found the gap between her collar and neck. After fifty meters, the tunnel opened into a wider passage. Tiles covered the walls—old Victorian craftsmanship from the Underground's early days. But something was wrong with the layout. This wasn't on any tube map she'd studied. Voices drifted from ahead. Multiple people. Quinn pressed against the wall, edging forward. The passage opened into a vast chamber lit by strings of bare bulbs. Her breath caught. It was a market. But not like any market she'd seen. Stalls crowded the platform of what must have been an abandoned station. Vendors hawked their wares in dozen languages, some she recognized, others that made her ears ache. Glass bottles filled with luminous liquids lined one table. Another displayed weapons that seemed to shift and blur when she looked directly at them. And the people. Some appeared normal enough—a woman in a business suit examining what looked like a human skull, a teenager with a skateboard negotiating over a leather-bound book. But others... Quinn's mind struggled to process what she was seeing. A vendor with too many joints in his fingers. A customer whose shadow moved independently. A child who flickered in and out of existence like a badly tuned television. Her suspect was there, twenty meters ahead, talking animatedly with a stall owner. The pendant she'd glimpsed during the chase caught the light—a small bone carving that made her teeth ache to look at. "First time at the Veil Market?" Quinn spun. A man stood behind her—olive skin, medical scrubs visible beneath a rain jacket. Spanish accent. The scar along his forearm caught the light as he raised his hands peacefully. "Easy. I'm not looking for trouble." "Police." The word came out steadier than she felt. "This is... what is this place?" His mouth quirked. "Complicated question. I'm Tomás. I provide medical services here sometimes. You're Detective Quinn, yes? From the Morris case?" Ice flooded her veins. "How do you—" "Your partner stumbled into our world three years ago. Wrong place, wrong time. We tried to help, but..." He touched the medallion at his throat. "Some things even I can't fix." "You were there? You saw what happened?" "I arrived after. Tried to stabilize him, but the damage..." Tomás shook his head. "Listen, you need to leave. Now. Mundane police have no jurisdiction here, and more importantly, no protection. That warrant card won't help you if the wrong vendor takes interest." Quinn's jaw tightened. "That suspect is connected to a murder investigation." "And if you arrest him here, in front of all these witnesses?" Tomás gestured at the crowd. "Best case, you never make it to the surface. Worst case, you do, but something follows you home." Her radio crackled. Through the static, she heard units responding to her last position. Backup was coming, but they'd never find this place. She was alone in a world that shouldn't exist, chasing a suspect who might hold answers to cases the department pretended never happened. The smart play was to retreat. Mark the entrance, come back with resources, plan properly. But the suspect was moving again, deeper into the market. In seconds, she'd lose him in the crowd of impossible things. Morris had been smart too. Careful. It hadn't saved him from whatever lurked in London's shadows. Quinn met Tomás's eyes. "Which way does he usually exit?" The former paramedic sighed. "You're not going to leave, are you?" "Would you? If you could finally get answers?" He studied her for a long moment. Then: "Camden. If he's smart, he'll surface near Camden. But detective—once you cross that threshold, once you truly enter the market, you can't unknow what you learn. The veil doesn't lift twice." Quinn looked back at the tunnel she'd come through. Safety lay that way. Protocol. The world she understood. Ahead, her suspect vanished between stalls selling bottles of dreams and maps to places that didn't exist. She stepped forward into the Veil Market.
total_cost0.137175

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"footsteps"
2"echoed"
3"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences108
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1123
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.35% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount914
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn12
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Greek2
Street2
Movement1
Tube1
Victorian1
Underground1
Tomás3
London1
Veil1
Market1
Morris3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Greek"
3"Street"
4"Tube"
5"Underground"
6"London"
7"Veil"
8"Market"
globalScore0.844
windowScore1
39.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like old maintenance access, proba"
1"weapons that seemed to shift and blur when she looked directly at them"
2"appeared normal enough—a woman in a business suit examining what looked like a human skull, a teenager with a skateboard negotiating over a leather-bound book"
3"looked like a human skull, a teenager wit"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1123
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"lay that way"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean23.89
std14.69
cv0.615
sampleLengths
050
126
29
311
449
532
652
727
85
938
1015
1134
1210
1345
1424
154
1640
1736
1813
1916
2011
2152
2231
2338
2434
256
2631
276
2815
2921
307
3131
327
3343
3411
3535
3646
3715
3821
3916
4010
4111
428
4339
4418
4517
467
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"was cramped"
80.24% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was playing"
1"was seeing"
2"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences122
ratio0.074
matches
0"The suspect—male, dark jacket, moving with purpose—had bolted the moment she'd shown her warrant card outside The Raven's Nest."
1"She glimpsed movement between the steel poles—there, cutting through toward Greek Street."
2"Close enough to make out details—medium build, trainers that looked expensive even in the rain, a strange pendant bouncing against his chest as he ran."
3"Where—"
4"The metal was wet but not from rain—someone had definitely passed through moments ago."
5"Tiles covered the walls—old Victorian craftsmanship from the Underground's early days."
6"Some appeared normal enough—a woman in a business suit examining what looked like a human skull, a teenager with a skateboard negotiating over a leather-bound book."
7"The pendant she'd glimpsed during the chase caught the light—a small bone carving that made her teeth ache to look at."
8"A man stood behind her—olive skin, medical scrubs visible beneath a rain jacket."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount925
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02702702702702703
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011891891891891892
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean9.2
std6.25
cv0.679
sampleLengths
016
115
219
313
413
59
63
78
810
913
105
119
1212
137
1411
1510
164
1710
1811
193
202
211
2225
2313
248
253
263
275
288
2913
308
312
326
331
345
3510
364
3716
3814
395
403
412
424
4317
4424
456
466
4712
484
499
87.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5573770491803278
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners68
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences96
matches
0"Her leather watch caught on"
1"She glimpsed movement between the"
2"Her breathing came steady despite"
3"They always made mistakes."
4"He ducked into an alley"
5"She had him."
6"She slowed, hand moving to"
7"She should call it in."
8"She descended into darkness."
9"Her footsteps echoed off concrete"
10"Her breath caught."
11"It was a market."
12"Her suspect was there, twenty"
13"His mouth quirked."
14"He touched the medallion at"
15"Her radio crackled."
16"She was alone in a"
17"It hadn't saved him from"
18"He studied her for a"
19"She stepped forward into the"
ratio0.208
53.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences96
matches
0"Detective Quinn's boots pounded against"
1"The suspect—male, dark jacket, moving"
2"Water streamed down her face,"
3"Her leather watch caught on"
4"Static crackled back."
5"The storm was playing havoc"
6"The figure vaulted over a"
7"Quinn followed, her military training"
8"Mud sucked at her shoes."
9"She glimpsed movement between the"
10"Her breathing came steady despite"
11"The suspect was younger, faster,"
12"They always made mistakes."
13"Lightning split the sky as"
14"The suspect skidded on the"
15"Quinn gained ground."
16"He ducked into an alley"
17"Quinn knew this neighborhood like"
18"She had him."
19"She slowed, hand moving to"
ratio0.813
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Close enough to make out details—medium build, trainers that looked expensive even in the rain, a strange pendant bouncing against his chest as he ran."
1"Pipes ran overhead, occasionally releasing drops that found the gap between her collar and neck."
2"Vendors hawked their wares in dozen languages, some she recognized, others that made her ears ache."
3"She was alone in a world that shouldn't exist, chasing a suspect who might hold answers to cases the department pretended never happened."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.1810%