Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX9RZ78TH025JQTT94E5DQ

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Duration:
6.3s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Wooden door swung open, a gust of cold air flooding the cramped flat. Aurora paused mid‑sort of the delivery bags, the bright blue of her eyes narrowing as she caught sight of the man in the charcoal suit. The ivory‑handled cane in his hand caught the dim light, the blade hidden within glinting like a promise. “Luc,” she said, voice level despite the sudden rush of adrenaline. “You’re late.” “Fashionably early,” he replied, his amber eye flickering to the black one, a silent joke only he understood. “The city’s a maze; I took the shortcut through the back alleys.” She stepped back, the small crescent scar on her left wrist catching the flicker of the kitchen bulb. The scar, a souvenir from a childhood accident, felt like a reminder of past wounds she never quite healed. “Thought you’d be at the Empress now, delivering the night orders,” she said, gesturing to the stack of insulated containers on the counter. “You look like you’ve been hunting ghosts.” “The ghosts are in the paperwork,” he quipped, his voice smooth as polished marble. “And a few in the back of my mind.” She crossed her arms, the black hair pulled into a neat knot at the nape of her neck. “You always did love riddles.” A faint clink of his cane against the floor echoed, a sound that seemed to vibrate the very air. “Riddles are for people who can’t speak plainly,” he said, eyes flicking to the scar. “You still wear it like a badge.” She lifted her hand, the scar a dark crescent against pale skin. “It’s a reminder that I can’t be broken.” His lips curled. “Or perhaps a reminder that you can be cut.” The room seemed to shrink as the tension crackled between them, like the sudden spark of a match in a dark cellar. “Why are you here, Luc?” she asked, the question hanging between them like a blade waiting to be drawn. “You said you needed help with the… delivery route.” He tapped the cane, the hidden blade clicking softly against the wooden floor. “I have information that could make your night easier.” Aurora’s mind raced, a flash of the night’s schedule, the cursed client who’d demanded a package after midnight, the shady contact who’d warned her about a new player in the underworld. “You’re not here for the package,” she muttered, a half‑smile playing on her lips. “You’re here for something else.” He stepped closer, the scent of his cologne—sharp, metallic, with a hint of sandalwood—filling the space. “I’m here because the past doesn’t stay buried.” She could feel the pulse of his voice, the underlying current of something she hadn’t felt in months. “You left when I needed you most,” she said, voice low. “You walked away from the night the fire took everything.” His eyes hardened, the amber flashing a warning. “I didn’t walk away. I was forced.” She glanced at the window, the street below a blur of neon signs and hurried pedestrians. “Forced by who?” she asked, the question a dagger. He glanced at the door, as if listening for an unseen presence. “By a debt that follows me like a shadow. By a pact that ties my blood to a realm you’ve never seen.” Aurora’s breath caught. The scar on her wrist aled, a reminder of the accident that had once forced her to the brink. “You think I can help you?” she asked, the words slipping out like a whispered warning. He lifted his cane, the hidden blade now visible, gleaming in the dim light. “I think you can, Rory. And I think you want to.” She stared at the blade, the metal cold and sharp. “You always were a gambler.” “Only when the stakes are worth it,” he answered, his voice barely above a whisper. “And the stakes are… higher than ever.” A sudden crash sounded from the hallway, a metal locker being thrown against the wall. Both turned, eyes wide. “Who’s there?” Aurora demanded, her hand moving instinctively toward the kitchen drawer where she kept a small kitchen knife. The door at the end of the hallway creaked open, a figure slipping through the darkness. A silhouette, tall, wrapped in a dark coat, eyes glinting like a predator’s. Lucien’s cane twitched, the hidden blade ready. “Stay back,” he warned, voice low, the words a promise that something terrible was about to unfold. Aurora’s heart hammered, the rhythm matching the tick‑tock of the old clock on the wall. She could feel the weight of the moment, the unspoken words that had lingered between them for months. The figure stepped into the lamplight, revealing a woman with a scar similar to Aurora’s, the same crescent shape on her left wrist. Her hair was a tangled mess of black curls, her eyes a stormy green. “Eva?” Aurora whispered, the name a shockwave through the quiet. The woman smiled, a thin, bitter curve. “You thought I’d stay hidden, didn’t you?” Lucien’s eyes flicked between the two women, his mind racing. “What is this?” he asked, his tone a blend of curiosity and warning. “The debt you speak of,” Eva replied, voice low. “It’s not yours alone. It belongs to all of us.” Aurora felt a cold sweat bead on her forehead, the scar on her wrist burning as if the past itself were reopening. “You brought her here?” she asked, voice shaking. Lucien’s cane tapped the floor, the sound a metronome of impending danger. “I didn’t bring her. She followed me.” The woman’s gaze lingered on Aurora’s scar, a silent accusation. “You think you can hide from what you are?” she hissed. Aurora swallowed, the words forming a shield. “I’m not hiding. I’m surviving.” A sudden scream pierced the air, a high‑pitched wail that seemed to come from the very walls. The woman’s eyes widened, a flash of fear breaking through her icy façade. “Someone’s coming,” she whispered. “They’re already inside.” The floorboards creaked as a shadow moved across the hallway, a figure cloaked in darkness, the outline of a knife glinting in its hand. Lucien stepped forward, his cane now fully revealed, the hidden blade sliding out with a soft sigh. “Leave her be,” he growled, the words a promise and a threat. Aurora’s hand tightened around the kitchen knife, her breath shallow. “What do we do?” she asked, the question a plea for direction. He glanced at her, the amber eye softening. “We fight.” The cloaked figure lunged, the knife aiming for Lucien’s throat. He parried with the cane, the hidden blade meeting the assailant’s weapon in a bright flash. The sound of metal on metal rang out, a harsh, metallic clang that seemed to echo through the flat. “Run!” Lucien shouted, his voice a command that cut through the chaos. Aurora darted toward the back door, the scar on her wrist throbbing like a drumbeat. She could feel the weight of the night’s danger pressing against her ribs. The cloaked figure stumbled, the knife clattering to the floor. The woman in the dark coat lunged, a scream tearing from her throat. Lucien seized the moment, his cane flicking, the hidden blade slashing through the air. The cloaked figure fell, the knife slipping from its grasp. Silence fell, broken only by the ragged breathing of the three. Aurora turned, her eyes meeting Lucien’s, the amber and black glinting with unspoken questions. “You… you saved me,” she whispered, the words a confession and a demand. He nodded, the smile thin. “I’ve always been good at keeping promises.” The woman in the dark coat slipped away, disappearing into the night, leaving behind only the echo of her footsteps. Aurora lowered her knife, the scar on her wrist still warm. “What now?” she asked, the question a promise of more to come. Lucien’s cane clicked as he she it, the blade retracting with a soft sigh. “Now we settle the debt.” She stared at him, the unspoken words between them like a spark waiting to ignite. A sudden crash sounded from the kitchen, the sound of a door being forced open. The dark figure re‑emerged, a menacing grin spreading across its face, a glint of something hidden in its hand. “Did you really think it would be that easy?” the figure hissed, voice a low growl. Aurora’s eyes widened, the scar on her wrist burning brighter than ever. Lucien tightened his grip on the cane, the hidden blade now a promise waiting to be fulfilled. The night outside pressed against the thin walls, the city’s pulse beating like a drum. A single, desperate breath escaped Aurora’s lips. “Whatever comes next,” she whispered, the words a promise and a threat. The figure lunged. The door slammed shut, and the flat fell into darkness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.519
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1462
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"softly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1462
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"glinting"
count4
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count4
3
word"marble"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count3
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"gleaming"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"predator"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"unspoken"
count3
14
word"flicked"
count1
15
word"racing"
count1
16
word"echo"
count2
17
word"silence"
count1
18
word"footsteps"
count1
19
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"flicker"
2"reminder"
3"marble"
4"echoed"
5"tension"
6"raced"
7"could feel"
8"pulse"
9"gleaming"
10"whisper"
11"predator"
12"weight"
13"unspoken"
14"flicked"
15"racing"
16"echo"
17"silence"
18"footsteps"
19"glint"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"the weight of the moment"
2"a flash of fear"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1460
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1146
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora16
Eva1
Lucien10
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.802
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like a reminder of past wounds she"
1"sound that seemed to vibrate the very air"
2"as if listening for an unseen presence"
3"wail that seemed to come from the very walls"
4"clang that seemed to echo through the flat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1460
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
82.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean21.47
std9.45
cv0.44
sampleLengths
013
143
213
330
437
530
623
723
841
920
1012
1122
1219
1331
1450
1524
1639
1715
1825
1934
2038
2125
2215
2322
2419
2519
2629
2724
2833
2937
3010
3114
3223
3319
3430
3519
3621
3712
3830
397
4024
4129
4222
4310
4426
4519
4612
4728
4823
4924
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"being thrown"
1"being forced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs186
matches
0"were reopening"
94.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences117
ratio0.017
matches
0"“The city’s a maze; I took the shortcut through the back alleys.”"
1"He stepped closer, the scent of his cologne—sharp, metallic, with a hint of sandalwood—filling the space."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1148
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02003484320557491
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006097560975609756
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean12.48
std5.56
cv0.445
sampleLengths
013
125
218
311
42
518
612
718
819
923
107
1114
129
1318
145
1519
1615
177
1812
198
203
219
2222
2319
2422
259
2631
2714
285
2916
308
3118
3211
3310
348
357
3616
379
3812
3922
403
4119
4216
4314
4411
4510
465
4715
487
4915
47.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences90
matches
0"she said, voice level despite"
1"he replied, his amber eye"
2"She stepped back, the small"
3"she said, gesturing to the"
4"he quipped, his voice smooth"
5"She crossed her arms, the"
6"he said, eyes flicking to"
7"She lifted her hand, the"
8"His lips curled."
9"she asked, the question hanging"
10"He tapped the cane, the"
11"she muttered, a half‑smile playing"
12"He stepped closer, the scent"
13"She could feel the pulse"
14"she said, voice low"
15"His eyes hardened, the amber"
16"She glanced at the window,"
17"she asked, the question a"
18"He glanced at the door,"
19"she asked, the words slipping"
ratio0.422
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences90
matches
0"Aurora paused mid‑sort of the"
1"The ivory‑handled cane in his"
2"she said, voice level despite"
3"he replied, his amber eye"
4"She stepped back, the small"
5"The scar, a souvenir from"
6"she said, gesturing to the"
7"he quipped, his voice smooth"
8"She crossed her arms, the"
9"A faint clink of his"
10"he said, eyes flicking to"
11"She lifted her hand, the"
12"His lips curled."
13"The room seemed to shrink"
14"she asked, the question hanging"
15"He tapped the cane, the"
16"Aurora’s mind raced, a flash"
17"she muttered, a half‑smile playing"
18"He stepped closer, the scent"
19"She could feel the pulse"
ratio0.989
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The scar on her wrist aled, a reminder of the accident that had once forced her to the brink."
1"Aurora felt a cold sweat bead on her forehead, the scar on her wrist burning as if the past itself were reopening."
2"Lucien seized the moment, his cane flicking, the hidden blade slashing through the air."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount18
matches
0"he quipped, his voice smooth as polished marble"
1"he said, eyes flicking to the scar"
2"He tapped, the hidden blade clicking softly against the wooden floor"
3"she muttered, a half‑smile playing on her lips"
4"she said, voice low"
5"she asked, the question a dagger"
6"she asked, the words slipping out like a whispered warning"
7"he answered, his voice barely above a whisper"
8"Aurora whispered, the name a shockwave through the quiet"
9"he asked, his tone a blend of curiosity and warning"
10"Eva replied, voice low"
11"she asked, voice shaking"
12"he growled, the words a promise and a threat"
13"she asked, the question a plea for direction"
14"Lucien shouted, his voice a command that cut through the chaos"
15"she whispered, the words a confession and a demand"
16"she asked, the question a promise of more to come"
17"she whispered, the words a promise and a threat"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags26
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"he quipped (quip)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"Aurora demanded (demand)"
3"he warned (warn)"
4"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
5"she hissed (hiss)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
7"he growled (growl)"
8"Lucien shouted (shout)"
9"she whispered (whisper)"
10"the figure hissed (hiss)"
11"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.462
effectiveRatio0.462
66.7953%