| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |
| 87.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1208 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "lightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1208 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "tinged" | | 5 | "fractured" | | 6 | "desire" | | 7 | "unspoken" | | 8 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 149 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1214 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "Turned" | | 1 | "Grown" | | 2 | "Hell" | | 3 | "unfurled" | | 4 | "sound" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 913 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 14 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Eva | 8 | | Nyx | 8 | | One | 2 | | Aurora | 2 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "One" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.733 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 30.95% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as though replying to something deep below the soil" | | 1 | "as if moving between frames of a film" | | 2 | "felt like both" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.824 | | wordCount | 1214 | | matches | | 0 | "not the amber-tinged sky above, but stars" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 64 | | mean | 18.97 | | std | 16.31 | | cv | 0.86 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 50 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 37 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 37 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 149 | | ratio | 0.087 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t wind — nothing so ordinary." | | 1 | "Behind them, the muddy path through Richmond Park still existed — oaks thick with ivy, the distant call of a pheasant — but ahead, the trees arched inward unnaturally, forming a tunnel of gnarled trunks and silver bark." | | 2 | "Not silence — never silence — but a hush so complete it rang." | | 3 | "Flowers bloomed beneath their boots — scarlet poppies with black centres, violets that chimed when brushed." | | 4 | "The pendant beneath her coat flared again — stronger this time." | | 5 | "A pool of still water, mirror-flat, reflecting not the amber-tinged sky above, but stars — constellations none of them recognised." | | 6 | "The trunk bore a pattern — a spiral of knots forming something too symmetrical to be accidental." | | 7 | "Her reflection stared back — but not as she was now." | | 8 | "A thin white scar across her collarbone — one she didn’t have." | | 9 | "A breeze stirred — though no wind had touched the grove before." | | 10 | "Nestled in its palms was a small object — a shard, jagged and glass-thin, glowing a faint, sickly amber." | | 11 | "But the pendant burned now — a sharp heat against her skin." | | 12 | "With *sound* — a dissonant chord that wasn’t music, wasn’t speech, but felt like both." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 907 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.03307607497243661 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009922822491730982 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 149 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 149 | | mean | 8.15 | | std | 6.11 | | cv | 0.75 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 58.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.37583892617449666 | | totalSentences | 149 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 71.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the grove opened." | | 1 | "Then, from beneath the roots" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t wind — nothing" | | 1 | "It was a shift in" | | 2 | "Their edges blurred, as though" | | 3 | "She wore a gown of" | | 4 | "Her lavender eyes held no" | | 5 | "It pulsed once, warm and" | | 6 | "She crossed the threshold." | | 7 | "Her hair, usually so obedient," | | 8 | "Their shadow-form darkened, edges sharpening" | | 9 | "She knelt at the water’s" | | 10 | "Her reflection stared back —" | | 11 | "she said, turning to Aurora" | | 12 | "They didn’t burn when they" | | 13 | "They sunk into the grass" | | 14 | "It didn’t walk." | | 15 | "It *unfurled*, stepping sideways as" |
| | ratio | 0.172 | |
| 78.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed before the" | | 1 | "It wasn’t wind — nothing" | | 2 | "It was a shift in" | | 3 | "Aurora felt it first in" | | 4 | "The crescent on her left" | | 5 | "Eva muttered, stopping mid-step" | | 6 | "The standing stones flanking the" | | 7 | "Nyx whispered, their voice skimming" | | 8 | "The stones were massive, carved" | | 9 | "Their edges blurred, as though" | | 10 | "Eva backed up, one hand" | | 11 | "Isolde stood between the stones." | | 12 | "She wore a gown of" | | 13 | "Her lavender eyes held no" | | 14 | "Rory tightened her grip on" | | 15 | "It pulsed once, warm and" | | 16 | "Eva glanced at Nyx." | | 17 | "Nyx stepped forward, their shadow-form" | | 18 | "She crossed the threshold." | | 19 | "The sound of the park" |
| | ratio | 0.763 | |
| 53.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them lay a clearing" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The crescent on her left wrist warmed, subtle at first, then insistent, as though replying to something deep below the soil." | | 1 | "The temperature stayed constant, but the air felt heavier, as if layered with something unseen." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice skimming the back of Rory’s neck like mist" | | 1 | "Eva asked, voice tight" |
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| 54.76% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.19 | |