Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX9SQ0Q1GWR6SS58CB4GGW

Run Details

Duration:
20.9s
Cost:
$0.011474
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air changed before the ground did. It wasn’t wind — nothing so ordinary. It was a shift in pressure, like stepping into a cathedral after the storm breaks outside. Aurora felt it first in her ears, a soft pop, then in the pulse beneath her scar. The crescent on her left wrist warmed, subtle at first, then insistent, as though replying to something deep below the soil. "Something’s wrong with the light," Eva muttered, stopping mid-step. Rory turned. Behind them, the muddy path through Richmond Park still existed — oaks thick with ivy, the distant call of a pheasant — but ahead, the trees arched inward unnaturally, forming a tunnel of gnarled trunks and silver bark. The standing stones flanking the entrance stood not where they had been five minutes ago. Or perhaps they had always been there, waiting. "Nothing’s wrong," Nyx whispered, their voice skimming the back of Rory’s neck like mist. "It’s just listening." The stones were massive, carved with spirals that didn’t sit still when stared at. Their edges blurred, as though seen through ripples in water. Eva backed up, one hand flying to the pepper spray clipped to her belt. "This wasn’t here last time. I’ve jogged this trail every Sunday for three years." "You weren’t meant to see it," said a third voice. Isolde stood between the stones. No one had seen her approach. No sound, no displacement of leaves. She wore a gown of woven moss and twilight, silver hair unbound, flowing like smoke caught in slow motion. Her lavender eyes held no reflection. Rory tightened her grip on the Heartstone pendant beneath her coat. It pulsed once, warm and slow, like a drowsy heartbeat. “You said we could pass,” Rory said. “I said you could seek,” Isolde corrected. "Passing is earned." Eva glanced at Nyx. “You knew this was going to be weird, didn’t you?” Nyx stepped forward, their shadow-form flickering between solidity and haze. One moment tall and defined, the next a smudge across the dimming air. “You don’t walk into a Fae grove expecting normal. You walk in knowing you might not walk out the same.” Rory exhaled. "Then we go in knowing that." She crossed the threshold. The sound of the park vanished. Not silence — never silence — but a hush so complete it rang. Birdsong didn’t stop. It changed. Notes stretched into melodies older than language. Flowers bloomed beneath their boots — scarlet poppies with black centres, violets that chimed when brushed. The path ahead coiled like a resting serpent, lined with trees whose bark shimmered like polished bone. "Time bends here," Isolde said, already several paces ahead. "Speak only what you mean. The grove remembers." Eva’s breath stuttered. "Did the trees just—" "Watch," Nyx murmured. One of the silver-barked oaks shifted. Not grew. *Turned*. A slow swivel of roots and limbs, its hollow where a face might have been tilting toward them. A low creak, like joints of ancient wood protesting. "Don’t look directly," Isolde said without turning. "They see intent. Not eyes." Rory forced her gaze forward, but her neck prickled like she was being studied, catalogued. The pendant beneath her coat flared again — stronger this time. A warning? The deeper they went, the thicker the air became. Sweet and metallic at once, like crushed petals and iron rain. The temperature stayed constant, but the air felt heavier, as if layered with something unseen. Rory’s skin tingled. Her hair, usually so obedient, lifted slightly at the ends, repelled by some subtle charge. Then the grove opened. Before them lay a clearing untouched by decay. Grass so green it looked painted. A pool of still water, mirror-flat, reflecting not the amber-tinged sky above, but stars — constellations none of them recognised. And in the centre, a single hawthorn tree, thorns black as coal, blossoms glowing faintly blue. Eva took a step back. "That’s not a tree. That’s… watching." It was. The trunk bore a pattern — a spiral of knots forming something too symmetrical to be accidental. A face. Not carved. *Grown*. And its branches didn’t sway. They waited. Nyx drifted toward the pool. Their shadow-form darkened, edges sharpening as they neared the water. When they looked down, their reflection didn’t appear. “The pool shows truth,” Isolde said. “But not yours.” Rory approached slowly. She knelt at the water’s edge. Her reflection stared back — but not as she was now. Older. Hair longer, streaked with silver. Eyes sharper. A thin white scar across her collarbone — one she didn’t have. And behind her, smoke. Fire. Something vast and winged in shadow. She blinked. The image fractured into ripples. "What did you see?" Eva asked, voice tight. "Nothing. Or too much." Nyx crouched beside her. "The grove shows paths. Not futures. Possibilities." Isolde moved to the hawthorn. "Three centuries I have tended this place. Three centuries of whispers through the roots. The Veil thins. Rifts grow. And you," she said, turning to Aurora, "carry a stone from a realm where hunger rules." Rory’s hand flew to the pendant. "How do you—" "The Heartstone calls to the edges. It knows its origin. Dymas does not release lightly." "Dymas? Like… *Hell*?" "Not as you know it," Nyx said. "No fire. No chains. But worse, in some ways. A place where desire becomes prison." Rory stood. "I didn’t ask for this. It was left on my doorstep with no note." “And yet you wear it,” Isolde said. “Choice, even unspoken, is still choice.” A breeze stirred — though no wind had touched the grove before. The hawthorn’s blossoms released a shower of blue light, falling like embers. They didn’t burn when they landed. They sunk into the grass and vanished. Then, from beneath the roots of the tree, something emerged. Not alive. Not dead. A shape of woven bark and thorn, no taller than a child, with eyes like slivers of moonlight. It didn’t walk. It *unfurled*, stepping sideways as if moving between frames of a film. Eva gasped. "What in God’s name—" The creature raised a twig-finger toward Rory. Isolde bowed her head. "The Grove remembers your bloodline." "My… what?" "Your father’s mother. She danced under Fae moons. Broke vows. Crossed rivers not meant for mortals. You carry the taste of old pacts." Rory’s breath came shallow. "That can’t be true. My grandmother died before I was born. Cancer." “Not all cancers are from cells,” Isolde said quietly. “Some grow from broken promises.” The thorn-being extended both hands. Nestled in its palms was a small object — a shard, jagged and glass-thin, glowing a faint, sickly amber. Nyx recoiled. “That’s Hel matter. Corrupted.” The creature offered it to Rory. She hesitated. "Don't take it," Eva said. "It’s a trap. It’s always a trap with these things." But the pendant burned now — a sharp heat against her skin. The shard pulsed in reply. Rory reached out. The moment her fingers brushed the amber fragment, the ground trembled. Not violently. A deep, slow shudder, like the grove inhaling. Above, the false sky cracked. Not with thunder. With *sound* — a dissonant chord that wasn’t music, wasn’t speech, but felt like both. The standing stones at the edge of the clearing began to glow, their carvings writhing. And the Veil, somewhere far, frayed.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:16:52.965Z" 2/19/2026, 12:16:52 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.048
87.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"tinged"
count1
5
word"fractured"
count1
6
word"desire"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"pulsed"
2"silence"
3"shimmered"
4"tinged"
5"fractured"
6"desire"
7"unspoken"
8"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1214
ratio0.004
matches
0"Turned"
1"Grown"
2"Hell"
3"unfurled"
4"sound"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount913
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory14
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde9
Heartstone1
Eva8
Nyx8
One2
Aurora2
Veil1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Eva"
3"Nyx"
4"One"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.733
windowScore0.667
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as though replying to something deep below the soil"
1"as if moving between frames of a film"
2"felt like both"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.824
wordCount1214
matches
0"not the amber-tinged sky above, but stars"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean18.97
std16.31
cv0.86
sampleLengths
07
161
29
363
417
552
610
742
821
97
1010
1114
1243
138
144
156
1658
1717
187
193
2036
2112
2228
2353
244
2550
2611
2731
2823
299
309
3142
327
338
344
3511
3640
379
3815
393
4022
4116
4213
4337
4410
4537
466
477
489
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"being studied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs170
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences149
ratio0.087
matches
0"It wasn’t wind — nothing so ordinary."
1"Behind them, the muddy path through Richmond Park still existed — oaks thick with ivy, the distant call of a pheasant — but ahead, the trees arched inward unnaturally, forming a tunnel of gnarled trunks and silver bark."
2"Not silence — never silence — but a hush so complete it rang."
3"Flowers bloomed beneath their boots — scarlet poppies with black centres, violets that chimed when brushed."
4"The pendant beneath her coat flared again — stronger this time."
5"A pool of still water, mirror-flat, reflecting not the amber-tinged sky above, but stars — constellations none of them recognised."
6"The trunk bore a pattern — a spiral of knots forming something too symmetrical to be accidental."
7"Her reflection stared back — but not as she was now."
8"A thin white scar across her collarbone — one she didn’t have."
9"A breeze stirred — though no wind had touched the grove before."
10"Nestled in its palms was a small object — a shard, jagged and glass-thin, glowing a faint, sickly amber."
11"But the pendant burned now — a sharp heat against her skin."
12"With *sound* — a dissonant chord that wasn’t music, wasn’t speech, but felt like both."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount907
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03307607497243661
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009922822491730982
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean8.15
std6.11
cv0.75
sampleLengths
07
17
216
317
421
59
62
738
815
98
1014
113
1214
1310
1414
1514
1610
175
186
196
2019
216
2211
2310
247
257
263
274
2810
2910
3013
3120
322
336
344
356
3613
373
382
397
4016
4117
429
438
443
454
463
476
482
491
58.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37583892617449666
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners56
71.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"Then the grove opened."
1"Then, from beneath the roots"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences93
matches
0"It wasn’t wind — nothing"
1"It was a shift in"
2"Their edges blurred, as though"
3"She wore a gown of"
4"Her lavender eyes held no"
5"It pulsed once, warm and"
6"She crossed the threshold."
7"Her hair, usually so obedient,"
8"Their shadow-form darkened, edges sharpening"
9"She knelt at the water’s"
10"Her reflection stared back —"
11"she said, turning to Aurora"
12"They didn’t burn when they"
13"They sunk into the grass"
14"It didn’t walk."
15"It *unfurled*, stepping sideways as"
ratio0.172
78.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences93
matches
0"The air changed before the"
1"It wasn’t wind — nothing"
2"It was a shift in"
3"Aurora felt it first in"
4"The crescent on her left"
5"Eva muttered, stopping mid-step"
6"The standing stones flanking the"
7"Nyx whispered, their voice skimming"
8"The stones were massive, carved"
9"Their edges blurred, as though"
10"Eva backed up, one hand"
11"Isolde stood between the stones."
12"She wore a gown of"
13"Her lavender eyes held no"
14"Rory tightened her grip on"
15"It pulsed once, warm and"
16"Eva glanced at Nyx."
17"Nyx stepped forward, their shadow-form"
18"She crossed the threshold."
19"The sound of the park"
ratio0.763
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Before them lay a clearing"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The crescent on her left wrist warmed, subtle at first, then insistent, as though replying to something deep below the soil."
1"The temperature stayed constant, but the air felt heavier, as if layered with something unseen."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx whispered, their voice skimming the back of Rory’s neck like mist"
1"Eva asked, voice tight"
54.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Eva muttered (mutter)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde corrected (correct)"
3"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.19
83.6782%