| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn approached slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |
| 93.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1461 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 65.78% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1461 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "practiced ease" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "treacherous" | | 4 | "wavered" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "electric" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1440 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.18% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1059 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.42 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | London | 3 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 15 | | Old | 1 | | Compton | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Morris | 6 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Former | 1 | | Spain | 1 | | Shaftesbury | 1 | | Avenue | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Chinatown | 1 | | Herrera | 12 | | Victorian | 2 | | Afghanistan | 1 | | Rain | 1 | | November | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Saint" | | 4 | "Christopher" | | 5 | "Herrera" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Old" | | 2 | "Compton" | | 3 | "Street" | | 4 | "Spain" | | 5 | "Shaftesbury" | | 6 | "Avenue" | | 7 | "Camden" | | 8 | "Chinatown" | | 9 | "Victorian" | | 10 | "Afghanistan" |
| | globalScore | 0.792 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a Saint Christopher medallion" | | 1 | "looked like a dead end" | | 2 | "looked like bone" |
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| 61.11% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.389 | | wordCount | 1440 | | matches | | 0 | "Not modern concrete steps, but stone worn smooth by centuries of feet" | | 1 | "not electric but flame, casting dancing shadows on tunnel walls" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 37.89 | | std | 22 | | cv | 0.581 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 71 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 55 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 61 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 70 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 42 | | 37 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.66% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 169 | | matches | | 0 | "was heading" | | 1 | "wasn't trying" | | 2 | "was leading" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.107 | | matches | | 0 | "After the thing that had killed Morris, which the official report had called a \"structural collapse\" but which she'd seen with her own eyes—impossible geometry, shadows that moved wrong, Morris's scream cutting off mid-syllable." | | 1 | "Ahead, the figure—male, judging by the build, maybe five-ten, wearing what looked like a Saint Christopher medallion that caught the light—glanced back." | | 2 | "A black cab's wing mirror clipped her shoulder—she barely felt it." | | 3 | "Herrera cut down a narrow lane between Victorian terraces, and Quinn registered the shift in atmosphere—the way the streetlights seemed dimmer here, the shadows deeper." | | 4 | "There—a groove, barely visible." | | 5 | "Not abandoned—something worse." | | 6 | "The gate bore a symbol Quinn didn't recognize—three interlocking circles surrounding what might have been a bird or a flame." | | 7 | "Not a threatening gesture—more like a prayer." | | 8 | "\"I keep them alive. That's all. When they come to me bleeding from wounds that shouldn't exist, when they're poisoned by substances that aren't in any medical textbook, I keep them alive.\" His eyes—warm brown, too young for the exhaustion they carried—met hers." | | 9 | "\"Because I treated one of the people who was there that night. Who saw what you saw.\" He pulled something from his pocket—small, white, the size and shape of a domino." | | 10 | "The air that rose from below carried scents that didn't belong in London—incense and copper, ozone and something organic Quinn couldn't name." | | 11 | "But Morris's face surfaced in her memory—the expression of absolute terror in his final seconds, the way his body had simply come apart under forces that defied physics." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1080 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.027777777777777776 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008333333333333333 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 12.86 | | std | 9.37 | | cv | 0.729 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 82.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5178571428571429 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 58 | |
| 78.43% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the normal city" | | 1 | "Then she followed Herrera through" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd lost her taste for" | | 1 | "His face registered surprise, then" | | 2 | "She knew him from the" | | 3 | "His accent carried the warmth" | | 4 | "He hit Shaftesbury Avenue at" | | 5 | "He wasn't trying to lose" | | 6 | "He was leading her somewhere." | | 7 | "Her skin prickled." | | 8 | "He hit the wall at" | | 9 | "She reached the wall seconds" | | 10 | "He stood in the rain," | | 11 | "She blinked it away, keeping" | | 12 | "His eyes—warm brown, too young" | | 13 | "He pulled something from his" | | 14 | "Her training, her experience, every" | | 15 | "He started down the stairs" |
| | ratio | 0.188 | |
| 89.41% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hammered London's pavements" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped" | | 2 | "The shout died in the" | | 3 | "Quinn's hand instinctively went to" | | 4 | "She'd lost her taste for" | | 5 | "The suspect vaulted over a" | | 6 | "Quinn followed, her leather watch" | | 7 | "The alley stank of piss" | | 8 | "His face registered surprise, then" | | 9 | "She knew him from the" | | 10 | "The superintendent had flagged him" | | 11 | "The ones that reminded her" | | 12 | "His accent carried the warmth" | | 13 | "He hit Shaftesbury Avenue at" | | 14 | "Quinn followed, her sharp jaw" | | 15 | "A black cab's wing mirror" | | 16 | "Herrera was heading north." | | 17 | "Quinn's mind catalogued the route" | | 18 | "He wasn't trying to lose" | | 19 | "He was leading her somewhere." |
| | ratio | 0.741 | |
| 58.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "To document the location, secure" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 14.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped against wet concrete as she sprinted down Old Compton Street, her breath coming in controlled bursts that spoke of milita…" | | 1 | "Ahead, the figure—male, judging by the build, maybe five-ten, wearing what looked like a Saint Christopher medallion that caught the light—glanced back." | | 2 | "He hit Shaftesbury Avenue at a dead run, dodging between taxis that blared horns into the wet night." | | 3 | "Quinn's instincts screamed at her, the same instincts that had kept her alive through eighteen years of police work and a tour in Afghanistan before that." | | 4 | "The three interlocking circles began to glow with a dull green phosphorescence that pushed back the darkness." | | 5 | "But Morris's face surfaced in her memory—the expression of absolute terror in his final seconds, the way his body had simply come apart under forces that defied…" | | 6 | "And the case file on her desk, growing thicker every month with incidents that made no sense, that followed patterns she could feel but not prove, that all some…" |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached, fingers searching the wet brick" | | 1 | "Quinn approached slowly, hands visible" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |