Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX9T1S6HN5Y58XF54WG56G

Run Details

Duration:
42.9s
Cost:
$0.033990
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered London's pavements in sheets, turning the sodium glow of street lamps into hazy coronas that barely penetrated the downpour. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped against wet concrete as she sprinted down Old Compton Street, her breath coming in controlled bursts that spoke of military conditioning. Twenty metres ahead, the figure in the dark jacket cut left into a side alley. "Metropolitan Police! Stop!" The shout died in the rain. Quinn's hand instinctively went to her hip, fingers brushing the reassuring weight of her baton. She'd lost her taste for firearms three years ago, after Morris. After the thing that had killed Morris, which the official report had called a "structural collapse" but which she'd seen with her own eyes—impossible geometry, shadows that moved wrong, Morris's scream cutting off mid-syllable. The suspect vaulted over a rubbish bin with practiced ease. Quinn followed, her leather watch catching rainwater as she planted one hand on the metal rim and launched herself over. The alley stank of piss and rotting food. Ahead, the figure—male, judging by the build, maybe five-ten, wearing what looked like a Saint Christopher medallion that caught the light—glanced back. His face registered surprise, then something else. Recognition? "Tomás Herrera!" She knew him from the file. Former paramedic, struck off the register eighteen months ago. The superintendent had flagged him as a person of interest in what she privately called "the weird cases." The ones that didn't add up. The ones that reminded her of Morris's death. "I just want to talk!" "Talking's what got me into this mess." His accent carried the warmth of southern Spain even through the rain's roar. He hit Shaftesbury Avenue at a dead run, dodging between taxis that blared horns into the wet night. Quinn followed, her sharp jaw set. A black cab's wing mirror clipped her shoulder—she barely felt it. Herrera was heading north. Toward Camden. Quinn's mind catalogued the route as her legs pumped: past the neon-lit shopfronts of Chinatown, through the darker residential streets where curtains glowed with television light, along the canal path where the rain stippled black water. He wasn't trying to lose her in crowds or duck into buildings. He was leading her somewhere. That thought should have made her stop. Should have made her call for backup, wait for uniform to seal the area. But Morris's case file was still open on her desk, and Herrera's name had appeared in the margins of her notes too many times. Three witnesses who'd all visited him for medical treatment off the books. Two of them now missing. One dead in circumstances the coroner had labeled "unexplained." The rain plastered her salt-and-pepper hair to her skull. Water ran down her collar, soaked through her jacket. Herrera cut down a narrow lane between Victorian terraces, and Quinn registered the shift in atmosphere—the way the streetlights seemed dimmer here, the shadows deeper. Her skin prickled. The lane terminated at what looked like a dead end. Brick wall, eight feet high, slick with rain and moss. Herrera didn't slow. He hit the wall at full speed, found handholds Quinn couldn't see in the darkness, and hauled himself up and over. "Bloody hell." She reached the wall seconds later, fingers searching the wet brick. There—a groove, barely visible. Another above it. Someone had carved holds into the mortar. She climbed. On the other side, the lane continued, but the paving stones were older here. Victorian cobbles, uneven and treacherous in the rain. The buildings pressed closer, their windows dark and empty. Not abandoned—something worse. Deliberately unoccupied. Quinn's instincts screamed at her, the same instincts that had kept her alive through eighteen years of police work and a tour in Afghanistan before that. Herrera had stopped twenty metres ahead. He stood in the rain, chest heaving, the scar on his left forearm visible where his sleeve had ridden up. Behind him, the lane ended at a rusted metal gate set into a brick archway. The gate bore a symbol Quinn didn't recognize—three interlocking circles surrounding what might have been a bird or a flame. "You shouldn't have followed me, Detective." "I'll decide what I should and shouldn't do." Quinn approached slowly, hands visible. Not threatening. "You've been treating people. People involved in cases I'm investigating. I need to know what they told you." "Patient confidentiality." But his voice wavered. "You're not a licensed paramedic anymore. That privilege doesn't apply." Rain ran down her face. She blinked it away, keeping her eyes locked on his. "Talk to me here, Tommy. Before this goes somewhere neither of us can walk back from." Herrera's hand moved to his medallion. Not a threatening gesture—more like a prayer. "The things you're investigating. The cases that don't make sense. You think I'm involved." "Are you?" "I keep them alive. That's all. When they come to me bleeding from wounds that shouldn't exist, when they're poisoned by substances that aren't in any medical textbook, I keep them alive." His eyes—warm brown, too young for the exhaustion they carried—met hers. "And I don't ask questions because the answers would make me complicit." "Complicit in what?" "In knowing. In seeing. In being unable to unsee." Herrera backed toward the gate. "Go home, Detective Quinn. Tell your superintendent you lost me in the rain. Write it off as one more unsolved puzzle. Trust me when I say that's the better outcome." "I lost my partner three years ago." The words came out harder than Quinn intended. "He died in front of me, and the official explanation was bullshit. I watched something kill him, Tommy. Something that shouldn't exist. So don't tell me to go home and forget." Herrera's expression shifted. Recognition again, but deeper this time. Understanding. "Morris. Your partner was Morris." Quinn's hand went to her baton. "How do you know that name?" "Because I treated one of the people who was there that night. Who saw what you saw." He pulled something from his pocket—small, white, the size and shape of a domino. In the rain-diffused light, it looked like bone. "This is a bad idea, Detective. Possibly the worst idea either of us will ever have." "Tell me something I don't know." Herrera turned and pressed the bone token against the gate's lock. The metal shuddered. The three interlocking circles began to glow with a dull green phosphorescence that pushed back the darkness. The gate swung inward on hinges that shouldn't have been able to move after years of rust and weather. Beyond the gate, stairs descended into earth. Not modern concrete steps, but stone worn smooth by centuries of feet. The air that rose from below carried scents that didn't belong in London—incense and copper, ozone and something organic Quinn couldn't name. Voices echoed up, speaking languages she didn't recognize. Light flickered, not electric but flame, casting dancing shadows on tunnel walls. "The Veil Market." Herrera's voice was barely audible over the rain. "It moves every full moon, but Camden's rotation is tonight. You wanted answers about what happened to Morris? They're down there. Along with a thousand other things you'll wish you'd never learned." Quinn stared down the stairs. Her training, her experience, every ounce of professional judgment told her to call for backup. To document the location, secure the entrance, approach this with procedure and protocol and proper police work. But Morris's face surfaced in her memory—the expression of absolute terror in his final seconds, the way his body had simply come apart under forces that defied physics. And the case file on her desk, growing thicker every month with incidents that made no sense, that followed patterns she could feel but not prove, that all somehow connected to people and places that existed in the gaps between official records. "You're going down there regardless of what I do." Herrera nodded. "I have someone who needs treatment. A woman who was poisoned with something called widow's breath. I have maybe two hours to find the antidote before her heart stops." "And if I follow you?" "Then you'll see things that'll crack your understanding of how the world works. But you'll also see the truth about Morris. About what killed him." He started down the stairs. "Your choice, Detective." The rain continued its relentless assault on London's streets. Somewhere in the normal city above, patrol cars circled their beats and dispatch crackled with routine calls. Quinn looked back once at the lane, at the ordinary darkness of a rainy November night. Then she followed Herrera through the gate and down into the earth, the bone-token's green glow fading behind them as the entrance sealed itself against the rain.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:16:53.312Z" 2/19/2026, 12:16:53 PM
model"anthropic/claude-4.5-sonnet-20250929"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency1376
moderation_latency204
generation_time42589
tokens_prompt1140
tokens_completion2280
native_tokens_prompt1125
native_tokens_completion2041
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.03399
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"d8bee848-f020-454a-b2be-4a7ce868f99f"
id"29b6df63-ddbb-442d-b8e9-b820cd428826"
is_byokfalse
latency1375
model_permaslug"anthropic/claude-4.5-sonnet-20250929"
provider_name"Amazon Bedrock"
status200
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1771503413-JA9CDXZoT76Lhr59lWQQ"
upstream_id"29b6df63-ddbb-442d-b8e9-b820cd428826"
total_cost0.03399
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Amazon Bedrock"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn approached slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.057
93.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1461
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1461
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"practiced ease"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"treacherous"
count1
4
word"wavered"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"practiced ease"
2"warmth"
3"treacherous"
4"wavered"
5"echoed"
6"flickered"
7"electric"
8"dancing"
9"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1440
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.18% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1059
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London3
Harlow1
Quinn15
Old1
Compton1
Street1
Morris6
Saint1
Christopher1
Former1
Spain1
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Camden1
Chinatown1
Herrera12
Victorian2
Afghanistan1
Rain1
November1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Herrera"
places
0"London"
1"Old"
2"Compton"
3"Street"
4"Spain"
5"Shaftesbury"
6"Avenue"
7"Camden"
8"Chinatown"
9"Victorian"
10"Afghanistan"
globalScore0.792
windowScore0.833
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a Saint Christopher medallion"
1"looked like a dead end"
2"looked like bone"
61.11% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.389
wordCount1440
matches
0"Not modern concrete steps, but stone worn smooth by centuries of feet"
1"not electric but flame, casting dancing shadows on tunnel walls"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean37.89
std22
cv0.581
sampleLengths
063
13
266
368
454
555
659
771
846
944
1029
1162
1261
136
1433
156
1641
1727
182
1955
203
2144
2246
2315
2412
2555
266
2750
2861
2943
3037
3170
329
3331
345
3533
3642
3727
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
81.66% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was heading"
1"wasn't trying"
2"was leading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences112
ratio0.107
matches
0"After the thing that had killed Morris, which the official report had called a \"structural collapse\" but which she'd seen with her own eyes—impossible geometry, shadows that moved wrong, Morris's scream cutting off mid-syllable."
1"Ahead, the figure—male, judging by the build, maybe five-ten, wearing what looked like a Saint Christopher medallion that caught the light—glanced back."
2"A black cab's wing mirror clipped her shoulder—she barely felt it."
3"Herrera cut down a narrow lane between Victorian terraces, and Quinn registered the shift in atmosphere—the way the streetlights seemed dimmer here, the shadows deeper."
4"There—a groove, barely visible."
5"Not abandoned—something worse."
6"The gate bore a symbol Quinn didn't recognize—three interlocking circles surrounding what might have been a bird or a flame."
7"Not a threatening gesture—more like a prayer."
8"\"I keep them alive. That's all. When they come to me bleeding from wounds that shouldn't exist, when they're poisoned by substances that aren't in any medical textbook, I keep them alive.\" His eyes—warm brown, too young for the exhaustion they carried—met hers."
9"\"Because I treated one of the people who was there that night. Who saw what you saw.\" He pulled something from his pocket—small, white, the size and shape of a domino."
10"The air that rose from below carried scents that didn't belong in London—incense and copper, ozone and something organic Quinn couldn't name."
11"But Morris's face surfaced in her memory—the expression of absolute terror in his final seconds, the way his body had simply come apart under forces that defied physics."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1080
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.027777777777777776
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008333333333333333
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean12.86
std9.37
cv0.729
sampleLengths
022
126
215
33
46
515
611
734
810
920
108
1122
127
131
148
159
1624
178
185
1920
2018
216
2211
234
242
2536
2612
275
287
2914
3024
3112
325
339
349
359
3625
373
3810
3910
403
4121
4213
434
443
457
462
4714
488
499
82.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5178571428571429
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners58
78.43% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Somewhere in the normal city"
1"Then she followed Herrera through"
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences85
matches
0"She'd lost her taste for"
1"His face registered surprise, then"
2"She knew him from the"
3"His accent carried the warmth"
4"He hit Shaftesbury Avenue at"
5"He wasn't trying to lose"
6"He was leading her somewhere."
7"Her skin prickled."
8"He hit the wall at"
9"She reached the wall seconds"
10"He stood in the rain,"
11"She blinked it away, keeping"
12"His eyes—warm brown, too young"
13"He pulled something from his"
14"Her training, her experience, every"
15"He started down the stairs"
ratio0.188
89.41% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences85
matches
0"The rain hammered London's pavements"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped"
2"The shout died in the"
3"Quinn's hand instinctively went to"
4"She'd lost her taste for"
5"The suspect vaulted over a"
6"Quinn followed, her leather watch"
7"The alley stank of piss"
8"His face registered surprise, then"
9"She knew him from the"
10"The superintendent had flagged him"
11"The ones that reminded her"
12"His accent carried the warmth"
13"He hit Shaftesbury Avenue at"
14"Quinn followed, her sharp jaw"
15"A black cab's wing mirror"
16"Herrera was heading north."
17"Quinn's mind catalogued the route"
18"He wasn't trying to lose"
19"He was leading her somewhere."
ratio0.741
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"To document the location, secure"
ratio0.012
14.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped against wet concrete as she sprinted down Old Compton Street, her breath coming in controlled bursts that spoke of milita…"
1"Ahead, the figure—male, judging by the build, maybe five-ten, wearing what looked like a Saint Christopher medallion that caught the light—glanced back."
2"He hit Shaftesbury Avenue at a dead run, dodging between taxis that blared horns into the wet night."
3"Quinn's instincts screamed at her, the same instincts that had kept her alive through eighteen years of police work and a tour in Afghanistan before that."
4"The three interlocking circles began to glow with a dull green phosphorescence that pushed back the darkness."
5"But Morris's face surfaced in her memory—the expression of absolute terror in his final seconds, the way his body had simply come apart under forces that defied…"
6"And the case file on her desk, growing thicker every month with incidents that made no sense, that followed patterns she could feel but not prove, that all some…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She reached, fingers searching the wet brick"
1"Quinn approached slowly, hands visible"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.3270%