Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX9W00M11C833CGBVJTNGD

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Duration:
33.8s
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$0.005973
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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pendant burned against her chest like a coal that refused to cool. Rory pressed her palm flat against her sternum, feeling the frantic rhythm of the Heartstone through her thin delivery jacket. Three weeks she'd owned this thing. Three weeks of strange warmth, of faint crimson pulses that came and went without explanation. Tonight marked the first time it had grown hot enough to leave her skin tender. The standing stones of Richmond Park rose ahead, ancient oaks twisted into shapes that defied the natural order of growth. She'd passed this corner of the park a hundred times on her delivery route. The Golden Empress had regulars in this neighbourhood, wealthy types who tipped poorly and complained about salt content. But she'd never noticed the stones before. Never felt the pull that had dragged her off her scooter and into the wet grass at half past midnight. Her phone had died the moment she stepped through the first stone's shadow. The screen flickered once, showed her lock screen with its cracked glass and the photo of Eva from last summer, then went dark as a grave. She'd stood there like an idiot, pressing the power button again and again until the cold had seeped through her trainers and into her bones. *Get the delivery done. Get back to the bike. Go home.* But there was no delivery. The address the man had given her, a scrawled thing on a crumpled receipt, didn't exist. 14 Grove Lane. She'd checked twice. The houses jumped from 12 to 18 with nothing in between but a narrow gap choked with brambles. The stones formed a rough circle, perhaps thirty feet across. Wildflowers carpeted the ground between them, impossibly vibrant for late November. Rory counted at least four varieties that shouldn't bloom until spring. The air hung motionless, thick with the scent of honey and something else underneath, something copper and sharp. *Blood.* The thought surfaced unbidden. *Old blood, dried and forgotten.* She took a step backward. Her heel caught on a root and she stumbled, arms pinwheeling, before catching herself against the nearest stone. The bark beneath her palm felt wrong. Too smooth. Too warm. She snatched her hand away and watched the wood ripple like disturbed water, settling back into its twisted configuration. *Get out. Now.* The pendant pulsed stronger, a steady heartbeat that matched her own racing pulse. She'd read about panic attacks in one of Eva's psychology textbooks. The tunnel vision, the racing heart, the conviction that something terrible approached from just out of sight. This felt like that. This felt like that multiplied by a thousand. A sound reached her from the far side of the clearing. The whisper of footsteps on grass. Slow. Deliberate. Patient. Rory spun, scanning the darkness between the stones. Nothing. Just the strange wildflowers and the twisted oaks and the moonlight that seemed wrong somehow, too white, too clinical, like the fluorescent tubes in hospital corridors. *There's no one there. You're tired. You're stressed. Evan's been leaving messages again and you haven't slept properly in days and this is what sleep deprivation does to people.* The footsteps came again, closer this time. She counted four distinct steps before silence reclaimed the grove. "Hello?" Her voice cracked on the second syllable. No answer. Of course no answer. The monsters in her life didn't answer when she called. They just circled and waited and struck when she'd convinced herself the danger had passed. She moved toward the gap between two stones, the way she'd entered. The path had vanished. Not blocked, not overgrown, but simply gone, replaced by another oak standing sentinel where open ground had been. She tried the next gap. Same result. The third. A fourth. The circle had closed. *Okay. Okay. Think.* She pressed her back against one of the stones and forced her breathing to slow. *Someone brought you here. The delivery order. The address that doesn't exist. This was planned.* The pendant's heat intensified. She pulled the chain over her head and held the gemstone away from her body, watching its inner glow strengthen. The crimson deepened to something almost purple, and the pulse became a steady thrum that she felt in her molars. *Hel portal.* The words surfaced from somewhere she couldn't name. She'd never heard them before, had no context for them, but she understood their meaning with bone-deep certainty. *The pendant detects Hel portals. And something here is opening one.* The wildflowers began to turn. Not in the wind, there was no wind. They turned toward her. Dozens of pale faces tilted in her direction, their petals stretching and straining like blind things seeking warmth. The movement spread in ripples, flowers she hadn't noticed before, hidden in the grass and climbing the stones, all of them orienting on her position. Rory backed away. Her shoulders hit another stone. She'd lost track of the direction she'd been facing, lost track of everything except the flowers and their slow, hungry attention. "You shouldn't have come tonight." The voice drifted from no discernible direction. Female. Ancient. Amused. Rory's hand found the crescent scar on her left wrist and traced it with her thumb, an old habit from childhood that surfaced in moments of extreme stress. The small ridge of tissue anchored her to reality. "Someone sent me." She kept her voice steady through sheer force of will. "A delivery order. Paid in advance." "Yes. I know." A figure resolved from the shadows between two stones. Tall. Impossibly tall, the proportions wrong in ways that made Rory's eyes water. She might have been beautiful once, in the way that poisonous things were beautiful, but centuries had stretched and twisted her into something that only wore the shape of a woman. The wildflowers bowed. The creature stepped closer, and the pendant blazed like a brand. Rory dropped it with a hiss of pain, watching it fall to the grass where it continued to glow, pulsing faster now, a desperate warning that had come too late. "Aurora Carter." The creature pronounced each syllable with care, as if tasting the name. "Daughter of Brendan. Daughter of Jennifer. Heir to debts you never knew existed." The standing stones began to hum. The sound originated from deep within the wood, resonating through the earth and into Rory's bones. She recognised the pitch from somewhere, a frequency she'd heard in dreams, and the recognition terrified her more than the creature's presence. "The pendant was a gift," the creature continued. "From an old friend who thought to protect you. But protections, my dear, are merely invitations to those patient enough to wait." Rory's heel found the edge of something solid. The pendant. She bent to retrieve it without breaking eye contact, and her fingers closed around warmth that felt almost alive. *Run,* instinct screamed. *Run now.* But the circle remained closed, and the flowers continued their slow rotation, and the creature smiled with teeth that had been filed into points sometime in the last millennium. "You carry something of mine, Aurora Carter. Something stolen long before your grandmother's grandmother drew breath. And I have waited so very, very long to reclaim it." The humming intensified. The standing stones began to bleed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"grave"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"racing"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count2
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"sentinel"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"resolved"
count1
13
word"almost alive"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"flickered"
2"grave"
3"pulsed"
4"racing"
5"pulse"
6"whisper"
7"footsteps"
8"scanning"
9"silence"
10"sentinel"
11"traced"
12"resolved"
13"almost alive"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences116
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
61.90% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords83
totalWords1202
ratio0.069
matches
0"Get the delivery done. Get back to the bike. Go home."
1"Blood."
2"Old blood, dried and forgotten."
3"Get out. Now."
4"There's no one there. You're tired. You're stressed. Evan's been leaving messages again and you haven't slept properly in days and this is what sleep deprivation does to people."
5"Okay. Okay. Think."
6"Someone brought you here. The delivery order. The address that doesn't exist. This was planned."
7"Hel portal."
8"The pendant detects Hel portals. And something here is opening one."
9"Run,"
10"Run now."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1115
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Richmond1
Park1
Golden1
Empress1
Eva2
Grove1
Lane1
November1
Hel2
Rory9
persons
0"Empress"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
34.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like that multiplied by a thousand"
1"seemed wrong somehow, too white, too clinical, like the fluorescent tubes in hospital corridors"
2"as if tasting the name"
33.61% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.664
wordCount1202
matches
0"Not blocked, not overgrown, but simply gone, replaced by another oak standing sentinel"
1"not overgrown, but simply gone, replaced by another oak standing sentinel"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean29.32
std19.43
cv0.663
sampleLengths
013
156
279
364
411
545
650
710
853
93
1053
1120
1235
1329
1417
158
1631
1745
184
1933
2044
2139
225
2355
2429
255
2610
2737
2819
293
3053
313
3241
3327
3444
3530
3629
375
3829
3927
409
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences116
matches
0"stressed"
1"been filed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs186
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences122
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1116
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03942652329749104
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005376344086021506
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean9.85
std7.89
cv0.801
sampleLengths
013
120
26
315
415
520
614
718
87
920
1013
1126
1225
134
145
152
165
1716
183
193
2018
2110
2211
2311
2418
255
265
275
2818
297
302
312
3219
332
341
3513
3611
3717
384
398
4011
416
421
431
441
458
461
4726
484
492
55.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.39344262295081966
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences93
matches
0"Just the strange wildflowers and"
1"Of course no answer."
2"Impossibly tall, the proportions wrong"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences93
matches
0"She'd passed this corner of"
1"Her phone had died the"
2"She'd stood there like an"
3"She'd checked twice."
4"She took a step backward."
5"Her heel caught on a"
6"She snatched her hand away"
7"She'd read about panic attacks"
8"She counted four distinct steps"
9"Her voice cracked on the"
10"They just circled and waited"
11"She moved toward the gap"
12"She tried the next gap."
13"She pulled the chain over"
14"She'd never heard them before,"
15"They turned toward her."
16"Her shoulders hit another stone."
17"She'd lost track of the"
18"She kept her voice steady"
19"She might have been beautiful"
ratio0.237
62.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences93
matches
0"The pendant burned against her"
1"Rory pressed her palm flat"
2"Tonight marked the first time"
3"The standing stones of Richmond"
4"She'd passed this corner of"
5"The Golden Empress had regulars"
6"Her phone had died the"
7"The screen flickered once, showed"
8"She'd stood there like an"
9"The address the man had"
10"She'd checked twice."
11"The houses jumped from 12" 12/1/2001, 12:00:00 AM
12"The stones formed a rough"
13"Wildflowers carpeted the ground between"
14"Rory counted at least four"
15"The air hung motionless, thick"
16"*Blood.* The thought surfaced unbidden."
17"She took a step backward."
18"Her heel caught on a"
19"The bark beneath her palm"
ratio0.796
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The standing stones of Richmond Park rose ahead, ancient oaks twisted into shapes that defied the natural order of growth."
1"The pendant pulsed stronger, a steady heartbeat that matched her own racing pulse."
2"Just the strange wildflowers and the twisted oaks and the moonlight that seemed wrong somehow, too white, too clinical, like the fluorescent tubes in hospital c…"
3"Rory's hand found the crescent scar on her left wrist and traced it with her thumb, an old habit from childhood that surfaced in moments of extreme stress."
4"Rory dropped it with a hiss of pain, watching it fall to the grass where it continued to glow, pulsing faster now, a desperate warning that had come too late."
5"But the circle remained closed, and the flowers continued their slow rotation, and the creature smiled with teeth that had been filed into points sometime in th…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"The creature pronounced, as if tasting the name"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"The creature pronounced (pronounce)"
1"the creature continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.4
77.0538%