Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTX9YRRV3MDYSJ01AYMB1NZ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.076076
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had turned London into a blurred watercolour of neon and grey, but the cold biting at Harlow Quinn’s cheeks was sharp enough to cut. She didn’t feel the water soaking through her trench coat, nor the ache in her knees that usually flared up int this damp weather. She only felt the hunt. Her boots slammed against the pavement, kicking up sprays of oily water as she sprinted down the alleyway. "Met Police! Stop!" The command was a reflex, useless and lost to the wind. The figure ahead of her didn't even flinch. He—if it was a ‘he’—moved with a fluid, impossible grace that made Harlow’s stomach turn. He wasn't running so much as flowing over the obstacles, vaulting a stack of pallets and clearing a six-foot chain-link fence without breaking stride. Harlow hit the fence a second later. She didn't have his grace. She scrambled, metal biting into her palms, and dropped to the wet concrete on the other side with a heavy grunt. She was forty-one, and nights like this reminded her that she wasn't a twenty-year-old rookie anymore. But she had the endurance of a mule and the stubbornness of a tectonic plate. She wiped mud from her eyes. The suspect had veered off the main thoroughfare, heading toward the skeletal remains of the huge construction project near Camden—the one that had been stalled in litigation for three years. He was heading underground. Harlow pushed harder, her breath coming in ragged tears. She saw him slip through a boarded-up entrance to what should have been a sealed service tunnel. When she reached the entrance, she halted. The boards were thick, rotted plywood, nailed shut. There physically wasn't space for a human to pass through. "Where did you go..." she whispered, the steam of her breath clouding her vision. She clicked on her heavy-duty flashlight. The beam cut through the gloom, illuminating graffiti tags and trash. Nothing. No loose board. No hidden door. Then, the beam caught something white on the muddy floor. Harlow crouched. It was a token. Small, heavy, made of bone. It felt warm to the touch, vibrating slightly against her thumb. Instinct screamed at her to drop it. It triggered the same primitive alarm bells that had rung the night she found DS Morris in that warehouse, twisted and broken by things that didn't belong in a police report. *Entry requirement,* a thought surfaced, unbidden. She looked at the blockade. On a hunch, she pressed the bone token against the wood. The air pressure dropped so sharply her ears popped. The wood didn't move; it rippled like a disturb pool of water, turning translucent, then gaseous. A smell hit her—ozone, frankincense, and the copper tang of old blood. The barrier was gone. In its place, a dark staircase spiralled down into the earth, far deeper than the Tube lines ran. Harlow stood at the precipice. This was the threshold. Above her was London—rules, paperwork, the slow but logical grind of the justice system. Below was... Morris’s world. The world that killed him. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 02:23 AM. "Damn it," she muttered. She drew her baton, flicking her wrist to extend the steel shaft with a sharp *clack*. She stepped onto the stairs. The descent was silent, the noise of the rain fading instantly. By the time she reached the bottom, the air was dry and warm. She turned a corner and stopped dead. It was an abandoned Tube station, recognizable by the oxblood tiles and the curved architecture, but it had been colonized. Lanterns hung from the arched ceiling, burning with a silent, spectral green fire that cast long, dancing shadows. It was a market. Stalls lined the platform, draped in heavy purples and velvets. Instead of commuters, figures in hooded robes and heavy coats moved between the vendors. Harlow saw a jar on a nearby table containing a human hand that was flexing its fingers. She backed up against a tiled pillar, heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. *The Veil Market.* The name from Morris's notes. It was real. She scanned the crowd, her detective’s eye dissecting the chaos. There. Fifty yards down the platform, near a stall selling dried bundles of grey herbs, stood her quarry. He had pushed his hood back. Dark curly hair. Olive skin. He was rubbing a scar on his left forearm, looking agitated. He spoke to the vendor, handing over a few coins that glinted with an unnatural lustre. Harlow took a breath. Fear was a chemical reaction. She could suppress it. She had a job to do. She stepped out from the pillar, marching down the platform with the military precision that defined her bearing. The crowd parted around her—not out of respect, but out of confusion. They smelled the law on her; the scent of cheap precinct coffee and rigid morality. "Herrera!" The name echoed unnaturally loud in the cavernous station. The suspect froze. He turned slowly, eyes wide. He wore a Saint Christopher medallion over a grey henley. Tomás Herrera. The name she’d pulled from a tip-off two days ago after a string of unauthorized medical procedures popped up on the radar. Herrera stared at her, then at the baton in her hand. He didn't run. He looked... pitying. "Detective Quinn," he said, his voice carrying a soft Spanish lilt. "You have walked very far from home." Harlow stopped ten feet from him. She kept the baton raised. "Hands where I can see them, Tomás. You're coming in for questioning regarding the assault on High Street and practicing medicine without a license." A low, raspy chuckle came from the vendor behind Herrera—a creature whose face was entirely wrapped in bandages. "License," it wheezed. "She speaks of licenses in the Raven's basement." "Quiet," Harlow snapped, not taking her eyes off Herrera. "Tomás. Now." "You don't understand," Herrera said, raising his hands slowly, palms open. "You holding that bone token... it let you in. But it doesn't mean you belong. If the Guardians see a badge down here..." "I don't care about your club rules," Harlow said, though her knuckles were white around the baton handle. "I care about the law." Herrera stepped closer, lowering his voice. "The law stops at the street level, Quinn. Look around. Do you think you can arrest a warlock? Do you think you can cuff a shade?" Harlow looked. She saw a figure to her left whose shadow moved independently of his body. She saw the banded merchant sharpening a knife that seemed to absorb the light. The memory of Morris hit her again—the emptiness in his eyes. "I can try," she said, her voice steel. "I lost a partner to this freakshow. I'm not losing a suspect." Herrera looked at her, searching her face. He saw the sharp jawline, the tired eyes, the grief hardened into anger. "Morris," Herrera said softly. "You're the one who wouldn't let it go." "He was my partner." "He was in over his head. Just like you are right now." Herrera glanced past her shoulder, toward the stairs. His expression tightened. "Don't look, but we have company." Harlow instinctively tensed. "I said hands up." "Put the stick away, Quinn," Herrera hissed, stepping into her personal space. "There are three Skin-Eaters coming down the stairs. They smell fear and they smell authority. If you initiate violence, they will strip the flesh from your bones before you can read me my rights." Harlow held his gaze. He looked terrified, but honest. The paramedic in him was surfacing—triage. Assessing the threat. She lowered the baton but didn't collapse it. "Give me one reason not to drag you out right now." "Because I'm the only one here who speaks human," Herrera whispered. "And because I know what really happened to DS Morris." The air in the station seemed to grow colder. The green lanterns flickered. Harlow felt a chill crawl up her spine that had nothing to do with the rain. She looked at the exit, then back at Herrera. "You talk," she said, her voice low and dangerous. "Fast." "Not here," Herrera said, grabbing her elbow and steering her away from the stairs, deeper into the market. "We have to blend in. Walk. Don't stare at anyone. And for God's sake, put the weapon away." Harlow hesitated. Every protocol she knew screamed at her to secure the scene. But the scene was impossible. She collapsed the baton and shoved it into her belt. She fell into step beside Herrera, walking past a stall selling bottles of fog. "You're not escaping," she murmured. "Detective," Herrera said, guiding her toward the dark tunnels at the far end of the platform. "At this point, I'm just trying to keep your soul attached to your body."
created_at"2026-02-19T12:16:58.142Z" 2/19/2026, 12:16:58 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Herrera said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.056
76.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1484
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
2"slowly"
3"very"
4"softly"
5"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1484
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"spectral"
count1
3
word"dancing"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"lilt"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"gloom"
2"spectral"
3"dancing"
4"scanned"
5"echoed"
6"lilt"
7"flickered"
8"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences130
matches
0"looked terrified"
1"felt a chill"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences130
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords6
totalWords1467
ratio0.004
matches
0"Entry requirement,"
1"clack"
2"The Veil Market."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1177
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
London2
Harlow15
Quinn1
Camden1
Morris4
Tube2
Veil1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera15
Spanish1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Tube"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Herrera"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
globalScore0.863
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"knife that seemed to absorb the light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.682
wordCount1467
matches
0"not out of respect, but out of confusion"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean23.66
std14.67
cv0.62
sampleLengths
055
118
23
358
464
536
64
726
825
914
1024
1110
1260
136
1416
1537
1622
1732
1812
194
2021
2131
2238
234
2441
2527
2611
2723
2832
2919
3045
311
329
3342
3417
3518
3635
3729
3811
3934
4023
4132
4230
4311
4420
4520
4612
474
4829
497
97.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences130
matches
0"been stalled"
1"was gone"
2"been colonized"
45.68% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs216
matches
0"wasn't running"
1"was heading"
2"was flexing"
3"was rubbing"
4"was surfacing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences150
ratio0.067
matches
0"He—if it was a ‘he’—moved with a fluid, impossible grace that made Harlow’s stomach turn."
1"The suspect had veered off the main thoroughfare, heading toward the skeletal remains of the huge construction project near Camden—the one that had been stalled in litigation for three years."
2"The wood didn't move; it rippled like a disturb pool of water, turning translucent, then gaseous."
3"A smell hit her—ozone, frankincense, and the copper tang of old blood."
4"Above her was London—rules, paperwork, the slow but logical grind of the justice system."
5"The crowd parted around her—not out of respect, but out of confusion."
6"They smelled the law on her; the scent of cheap precinct coffee and rigid morality."
7"A low, raspy chuckle came from the vendor behind Herrera—a creature whose face was entirely wrapped in bandages."
8"The memory of Morris hit her again—the emptiness in his eyes."
9"The paramedic in him was surfacing—triage."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount310
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.03225806451612903
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.016129032258064516
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean9.78
std6.79
cv0.695
sampleLengths
026
124
25
318
43
511
68
715
824
97
105
1121
1216
1315
146
1530
164
179
1817
197
208
2110
2214
236
2411
251
263
273
2810
292
304
315
3211
337
3431
356
365
3711
389
3916
4012
414
4218
435
444
4514
462
472
485
4910
48.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.37333333333333335
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners56
87.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences114
matches
0"Then, the beam caught something"
1"Instead of commuters, figures in"
2"Dark curly hair."
ratio0.026
48.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences114
matches
0"She didn’t feel the water"
1"She only felt the hunt."
2"Her boots slammed against the"
3"He—if it was a"
4"He wasn't running so much"
5"She didn't have his grace."
6"She scrambled, metal biting into"
7"She was forty-one, and nights"
8"She wiped mud from her"
9"He was heading underground."
10"She saw him slip through"
11"she whispered, the steam of"
12"She clicked on her heavy-duty"
13"It was a token."
14"It felt warm to the"
15"It triggered the same primitive"
16"She looked at the blockade."
17"She checked the worn leather"
18"She drew her baton, flicking"
19"She stepped onto the stairs."
ratio0.43
30.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences114
matches
0"The rain had turned London"
1"She didn’t feel the water"
2"She only felt the hunt."
3"Her boots slammed against the"
4"The command was a reflex,"
5"The figure ahead of her"
6"He—if it was a"
7"He wasn't running so much"
8"Harlow hit the fence a"
9"She didn't have his grace."
10"She scrambled, metal biting into"
11"She was forty-one, and nights"
12"She wiped mud from her"
13"The suspect had veered off"
14"He was heading underground."
15"Harlow pushed harder, her breath"
16"She saw him slip through"
17"The boards were thick, rotted"
18"she whispered, the steam of"
19"She clicked on her heavy-duty"
ratio0.86
43.86% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"By the time she reached"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"It triggered the same primitive alarm bells that had rung the night she found DS Morris in that warehouse, twisted and broken by things that didn't belong in a …"
1"Harlow saw a jar on a nearby table containing a human hand that was flexing its fingers."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she whispered, the steam of her breath clouding her vision"
1"he said, his voice carrying a soft Spanish lilt"
2"Harlow snapped, not taking her eyes off Herrera"
3"Harlow said, though her knuckles were white around the baton handle"
4"she said, her voice low and dangerous"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"it wheezed (wheeze)"
3"Harlow snapped (snap)"
4"Herrera hissed (hiss)"
5"Herrera whispered (whisper)"
6"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.467
effectiveRatio0.389
74.8994%