Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXA1ASDTYFCE4G7KREJBA0

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Duration:
40.4s
Cost:
$0.027831

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with its usual evening crowd when the door chimed, letting in a gust of October air that carried the scent of rain and exhaust fumes. Rory glanced up from wiping down glasses behind the bar, filling in for Silas while he dealt with a supplier in the back room. The woman who entered moved with deliberate precision, scanning the dimly lit interior with practised eyes before her gaze locked onto Rory's face. Time collapsed. "Christ. Rory Carter." The voice hit like a physical blow. Rory's hand froze on the glass, water droplets catching the amber light from the overhead fixtures. She knew that voice, though it carried weight it hadn't possessed fifteen years ago. "Eva." Eva Thornfield stood framed against the green neon glow of the entrance, her once-wild copper curls now tamed into a severe chignon. The bohemian scarves and vintage band t-shirts had been replaced by a charcoal wool coat that probably cost more than Rory's monthly rent. But it was the eyes that struck her most—the same green that used to sparkle with mischief now held a crystalline hardness. "Mind if I sit?" "Your funeral." Eva slid onto a barstool, her movements controlled in a way that made Rory's skin crawl. The Eva she remembered moved like quicksilver, all spontaneous energy and barely contained chaos. "Whiskey. Something expensive." Rory reached for the Macallan 18, pouring two fingers without measuring. Eva's manicured hand—when had Eva ever had a manicure?—wrapped around the glass. "So. London." "So. A barrister's suit." Eva's laugh held no warmth. "Solicitor, actually. Family law." She sipped the whiskey, her face revealing nothing. "Specialising in domestic violence cases." The words hung between them like a blade. Rory's left wrist throbbed where the small crescent scar caught against her sleeve. "How very noble of you." "Someone has to fight the good fight." "Right. Because that's what you've always been about. Fighting the good fight." Eva's grip tightened on her glass. "People change, Rory." "Do they?" A group of bankers at the corner table erupted in laughter, breaking the tension for a heartbeat. Rory continued polishing glasses, each movement mechanical. The old photographs on the walls seemed to watch them—strangers frozen in moments of joy that felt impossible now. "You disappeared." "I left Cardiff. There's a difference." "Without a word. Not even a goodbye." Rory set down her cloth, meeting Eva's stare. "What was I supposed to say? Thanks for the memories, sorry your boyfriend tried to put me through a wall?" "He wasn't my—" Eva stopped, her composure cracking just enough to reveal something raw underneath. "It was complicated." "Complicated." Rory tasted the word like poison. "That's what we're calling it?" The rain outside intensified, drumming against the windows. Eva finished her whiskey in one smooth motion, the kind of practised gesture that spoke of too many client dinners and networking events. "I came to find you, actually. When I heard you were in London." "Lucky me." "I have a client. Young woman, early twenties. Sounds familiar, doesn't it?" Eva's voice carried an edge sharp enough to cut glass. "Boyfriend with anger management issues. Family that thinks she should work it out, make it work, because he's such a nice boy otherwise." Rory's blood turned to ice water. "Why are you telling me this?" "Because I know what it looks like when someone runs. The way you pack everything into two bags and leave at three in the morning. The way you change your phone number and delete your social media accounts." "Eva—" "The way you disappear so completely that your best friend spends two years thinking you might be dead in a ditch somewhere." The accusation landed like a physical blow. Rory gripped the edge of the bar, her knuckles white against the dark wood. "You knew where I was." "I knew you were alive. Eventually. That's not the same thing." Silas emerged from the back room, his slight limp more pronounced than usual. He took one look at the tension crackling between them and retreated to the far end of the bar, suddenly very interested in inventory. "I couldn't stay." "You could have trusted me." "Could I?" The question exploded out of Rory before she could stop it. "Really, Eva? Could I have trusted you?" Eva's perfectly composed mask slipped, revealing something desperate underneath. "What's that supposed to mean?" "You know exactly what it means." They stared at each other across the scarred wooden bar, fifteen years of hurt and betrayal crystallising into this single moment. The pub's ambient noise faded to white static. "I loved you." The words fell between them like stones into still water, creating ripples that spread outward, disturbing everything. "I know." "Do you? Because you have a funny way of showing it." Eva's hand trembled as she reached for her purse, the first crack in her armour that felt genuine. "He used to hit you. I knew that. I saw the bruises you tried to hide, heard the way you flinched when doors slammed too loud." "Eva, don't." "And I did nothing. Nothing, Rory. Because I was twenty-two and stupid and so bloody in love with you that I thought if I just waited long enough, you'd leave him on your own." The confession hung in the air like smoke. Rory felt something break loose in her chest, a knot of pain she'd carried for so long it had become part of her skeleton. "I waited too long, and you disappeared. Just like that. Gone." "I had to." "I know." Eva's voice cracked. "I know you did. And I've spent fifteen years becoming the person who could have saved you then. Who could have given you somewhere safe to run to." She stood, leaving a twenty-pound note on the bar. The movement was sharp, final. "The client I mentioned? Her name is Sarah. She reminds me of you at that age—smart, brave, absolutely terrified. I'm going to save her, Rory. Because I couldn't save you." Eva turned toward the door, then paused. "I'm glad you survived. I'm glad you found somewhere to land." The door closed behind her with a soft chime, leaving Rory alone with the ghost of what they'd been and the weight of what they'd never become. She picked up Eva's glass, still warm from her touch, and began to wash it in slow, deliberate circles. Outside, London hummed on, indifferent to the small tragedy that had just played out in a dimly lit Soho bar, where old maps marked territories that no longer existed and photographs captured smiles that time had long since erased.
total_cost0.027831

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.24
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1109
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"completely"
2"suddenly"
3"really"
4"perfectly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Sarah"
80.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Thornfield"
45.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1109
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"crystalline"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"tension"
count2
6
word"mechanical"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"absolutely"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"weight"
2"crystalline"
3"warmth"
4"throbbed"
5"tension"
6"mechanical"
7"familiar"
8"trembled"
9"absolutely"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences48
matches(empty)
83.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1102
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount674
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.37
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
October1
Silas2
Rory15
Thornfield1
Eva16
Macallan1
London1
Soho1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Thornfield"
5"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
globalScore0.313
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1102
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean18.07
std16.77
cv0.928
sampleLengths
076
12
23
337
41
567
64
72
830
93
1023
112
124
1322
1421
155
167
1712
189
192
2043
212
226
237
2428
2518
2612
2731
2813
292
3045
3112
3238
331
3422
3521
365
3711
3837
393
405
4120
4214
436
4429
453
4617
472
4811
4944
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs123
matches(empty)
49.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences92
ratio0.033
matches
0"But it was the eyes that struck her most—the same green that used to sparkle with mischief now held a crystalline hardness."
1"Eva's manicured hand—when had Eva ever had a manicure?—wrapped around the glass."
2"The old photographs on the walls seemed to watch them—strangers frozen in moments of joy that felt impossible now."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount679
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.035346097201767304
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010309278350515464
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean11.98
std9.05
cv0.756
sampleLengths
029
124
223
32
43
57
616
714
81
922
1023
1122
124
132
1416
1514
163
1711
1812
192
204
215
2212
235
248
2513
265
277
2812
296
303
312
3217
337
3419
352
366
377
388
3920
4015
413
427
435
448
4523
4613
472
4822
4923
59.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.40217391304347827
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences47
matches
0"She knew that voice, though"
1"She sipped the whiskey, her"
2"He took one look at"
3"They stared at each other"
4"She stood, leaving a twenty-pound"
5"She picked up Eva's glass,"
ratio0.128
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences47
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"Rory glanced up from wiping"
2"The woman who entered moved"
3"The voice hit like a"
4"Rory's hand froze on the"
5"She knew that voice, though"
6"Eva Thornfield stood framed against"
7"The bohemian scarves and vintage"
8"Eva slid onto a barstool,"
9"The Eva she remembered moved"
10"Rory reached for the Macallan"
11"Eva's manicured hand—when had Eva"
12"Eva's laugh held no warmth."
13"She sipped the whiskey, her"
14"The words hung between them"
15"Rory's left wrist throbbed where"
16"Eva's grip tightened on her"
17"A group of bankers at"
18"Rory continued polishing glasses, each"
19"The old photographs on the"
ratio0.957
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with its usual evening crowd when the door chimed, letting in a gust of October air that carried the scent of rain and exhaust fumes."
1"The woman who entered moved with deliberate precision, scanning the dimly lit interior with practised eyes before her gaze locked onto Rory's face."
2"But it was the eyes that struck her most—the same green that used to sparkle with mischief now held a crystalline hardness."
3"Eva slid onto a barstool, her movements controlled in a way that made Rory's skin crawl."
4"The old photographs on the walls seemed to watch them—strangers frozen in moments of joy that felt impossible now."
5"Eva finished her whiskey in one smooth motion, the kind of practised gesture that spoke of too many client dinners and networking events."
6"The words fell between them like stones into still water, creating ripples that spread outward, disturbing everything."
7"Eva's hand trembled as she reached for her purse, the first crack in her armour that felt genuine."
8"Outside, London hummed on, indifferent to the small tragedy that had just played out in a dimly lit Soho bar, where old maps marked territories that no longer e…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She sipped, her face revealing nothing"
1"Eva stopped, her composure cracking just enough to reveal something raw underneath"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
72.3081%