Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXA1ES0MR6RRJ8ZW1D4P2S

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Duration:
17.4s
Cost:
$0.009122
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rainwater dripped through a collapsed tile in the ceiling, splashing into a stagnant puddle near the tracks. The air reeked of mildew and something sharper—ozone, maybe, or burnt metal. Fluorescent strips flickered overhead, casting a sickly glow over the tiled walls of what used to be Camden Town station’s disused branch line. Now, it was cordoned off with yellow tape marked MET POLICE, fluttering like a trapped bird in the draft that slithered through the tunnels. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped carefully over a warped rail sleeper, her boots crunching something brittle—glass, or maybe bone. She didn’t look down. Her eyes were already scanning: the smear of soot along the wall, the way the puddle wasn’t reflecting the light right, the absence of footprints in the grime despite the CSU team having been here for over an hour. “Quinn,” came a voice thick with impatience. DS Liam Graves stood near the body, hands shoved into the pockets of his ill-fitting trench. “Took you long enough. We’ve got time of death between 0200 and 0430. Male, early thirties. No wallet. No ID. Cause of death looks like blunt force trauma—see those fractures?” He gestured toward the victim’s skull, caved in just above the left temple. “One clean hit. Professional.” Quinn didn’t answer. She circled the body, crouched low, and squinted. The man wore leather gloves, one torn at the fingertip. On his belt, a small pouch dangled—empty, its drawstring neatly severed. His jacket was high-collared, lined with something that shimmered faintly when the light shifted. “Graves,” she said, voice flat, “did anyone touch this?” She pointed at the gloves. “No. We bagged the hands. Why?” She didn’t answer. Instead, she reached into her coat and pulled out a pair of tweezers, delicately plucking a thread from the torn glove. It wasn’t cotton. It wasn’t synthetic. Thin, iridescent, almost liquid. She held it up. It caught the light like a spider’s web spun from mercury. “That’s not standard,” she said. “Could be tactical gear,” Graves offered. “Black ops? Private contractors? You know how it is—blokes with no oversight, shadier than a basement in November.” Quinn straightened, her sharp jaw clenched. She tapped her worn leather watch. 06:47. Sunrise had come and gone. The city above was waking. But down here, the air still tasted like night. “No blood,” she said. “What?” “No blood,” she repeated, stepping back, sweeping her gaze over the scene. “Blunt force trauma to the head. Skull fracture. Brain trauma. And yet—” She gestured at the ground. “There’s no pooling. No spatter. Just damp. That isn’t right.” Graves snorted. “Forensics already took samples. They said trace blood was absorbed by the substrate. Porous tile. Old station.” “Then where’s the impact pattern?” she shot back. “You hit someone that hard, force travels. Blood flies. Skull fragments. Brain matter. Not a neat little dent like he was molded that way.” “You’re splitting hairs, Quinn.” She ignored him, walking to the wall. She ran her fingers along the soot smear. It wasn’t soot. It flaked off like ash, but underneath, the tiles were etched—thin, deliberate lines forming a sigil. She’d seen something like it before. Three years ago. In the file they sealed. The one marked *Unresolved – DS Morris Case 214-X*. Her breath caught. She stepped back, scanning the platform again. No footprints. No drag marks. No tire tracks from a body being moved. And yet the body was here. Placed. Not dropped. Her eyes caught on something near the third rail—something small, brass, half-buried in the grit. She knelt, brushed it clear. A compass. But not a normal one. Small. Brass casing, verdigris creeping along the edges like mold. The glass face cracked, but the needle spun—erratically, wildly—before settling, pointing not north, but directly at the wall behind her. At the sigil. Quinn’s pulse quickened. “This wasn’t a murder,” she murmured. Graves laughed. “You kidding? Guy’s got a hole in his head!” “This was a delivery,” she said, standing slowly. “He wasn’t killed here. He was brought here. After.” “After what? Death? That’s bollocks, Quinn. You’ve been working doubles again, haven’t you? Morris would’ve said the same damn thing—” She turned on him, eyes dark. “Don’t.” Graves held up his hands. “Sorry. But come on. You’re seeing ghosts again.” She wasn’t. She was seeing patterns. She turned to the compass, held it in her palm. The needle twitched. Then spun. Then pointed to the ceiling. Above them, a shadow passed. Not a rat. Too large. Too silent. The flickering light stuttered. Then went out. For three seconds, the platform was pitch. When the lights returned, Quinn was on her feet, hand on her sidearm. Graves was pale. “Electrical fault.” “No,” she said. “Interference.” She looked around. The CSU team was gone. The tape still hung, but their gear—the kits, the lights—vanishes. “Where is everyone?” she asked, voice low. Graves checked his radio. “No signal. Nothing.” Quinn stepped toward the wall, the compass in one hand, her torch in the other. She shone it on the sigil. Now she saw it. The lines weren’t random. They formed a circle, broken at one point—the entrance. And at the center, a single word, etched in Latin. *Transitus.* Her breath fogged in the sudden cold. “This isn’t a crime scene,” she said. “It’s a doorway.” Graves scoffed. “Now you’re quoting Latin?” She turned to him. “He wasn’t carrying drugs. Or weapons. He was carrying information. Or a key. That pouch—torn from the inside. Something got out.” “Like what?” “Something that didn’t want to be found.” She looked back at the compass. The needle was steady now. Pointing at the wall. Then, faintly, a sound. Like footsteps on stone. But not from the tunnel. From the wall.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.371
leniency0.743
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount966
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount966
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count2
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"synthetic"
count1
4
word"standard"
count1
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"etched"
count2
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"quickened"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanning"
2"shimmered"
3"synthetic"
4"standard"
5"jaw clenched"
6"etched"
7"pulse"
8"quickened"
9"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords7
totalWords951
ratio0.007
matches
0"Unresolved – DS Morris Case 214-X"
1"Transitus."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount696
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Graves"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Graves"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Town1
Harlow1
Quinn6
Liam1
Graves8
Morris1
Case1
Latin1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Liam"
3"Graves"
4"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"Latin"
globalScore0.925
windowScore0.833
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like night"
1"something like it before"
94.85% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.052
wordCount951
matches
0"not north, but directly at the wall behind her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean16.98
std17.79
cv1.048
sampleLengths
076
161
270
346
414
56
649
75
824
932
104
111
1239
1319
1432
154
1657
173
1829
1915
205
212
225
2330
243
253
266
2711
2817
2920
307
3113
322
334
3420
3516
363
377
3813
395
404
4118
427
437
4421
4527
461
477
4810
496
91.90% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences105
matches
0"was cordoned"
1"were etched"
2"being moved"
3"was gone"
61.11% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs144
matches
0"wasn’t reflecting"
1"was waking"
2"was seeing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences126
ratio0.071
matches
0"The air reeked of mildew and something sharper—ozone, maybe, or burnt metal."
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped carefully over a warped rail sleeper, her boots crunching something brittle—glass, or maybe bone."
2"On his belt, a small pouch dangled—empty, its drawstring neatly severed."
3"It flaked off like ash, but underneath, the tiles were etched—thin, deliberate lines forming a sigil."
4"The one marked *Unresolved – DS Morris Case 214-X*."
5"Her eyes caught on something near the third rail—something small, brass, half-buried in the grit."
6"The glass face cracked, but the needle spun—erratically, wildly—before settling, pointing not north, but directly at the wall behind her."
7"The tape still hung, but their gear—the kits, the lights—vanishes."
8"They formed a circle, broken at one point—the entrance."
99.16% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount708
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.04096045197740113
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.014124293785310734
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean7.55
std6.92
cv0.916
sampleLengths
017
112
223
324
418
54
639
77
816
943
104
113
128
1310
1411
1514
1614
176
183
1921
203
213
224
234
2411
255
266
2718
286
296
301
315
325
339
344
351
3612
3717
3810
392
4017
418
4224
434
447
458
463
4716
486
493
65.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.448
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners56
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences85
matches
0"Instead, she reached into her"
1"Then pointed to the ceiling."
2"Then went out."
3"Then, faintly, a sound."
ratio0.047
55.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences85
matches
0"She didn’t look down."
1"Her eyes were already scanning:"
2"He gestured toward the victim’s"
3"She circled the body, crouched"
4"His jacket was high-collared, lined"
5"she said, voice flat, She"
6"She didn’t answer."
7"It wasn’t cotton."
8"It wasn’t synthetic."
9"She held it up."
10"It caught the light like"
11"She tapped her worn leather"
12"she repeated, stepping back, sweeping"
13"She gestured at the ground"
14"she shot back"
15"She ignored him, walking to"
16"She ran her fingers along"
17"It wasn’t soot."
18"It flaked off like ash,"
19"She’d seen something like it"
ratio0.412
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences85
matches
0"Rainwater dripped through a collapsed"
1"The air reeked of mildew"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped carefully"
3"She didn’t look down."
4"Her eyes were already scanning:"
5"DS Liam Graves stood near"
6"He gestured toward the victim’s"
7"Quinn didn’t answer."
8"She circled the body, crouched"
9"The man wore leather gloves,"
10"His jacket was high-collared, lined"
11"she said, voice flat, She"
12"She didn’t answer."
13"It wasn’t cotton."
14"It wasn’t synthetic."
15"She held it up."
16"It caught the light like"
17"Quinn straightened, her sharp jaw"
18"She tapped her worn leather"
19"Sunrise had come and gone."
ratio0.682
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Now, it was cordoned off"
1"Now she saw it."
ratio0.024
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Now, it was cordoned off with yellow tape marked MET POLICE, fluttering like a trapped bird in the draft that slithered through the tunnels."
1"His jacket was high-collared, lined with something that shimmered faintly when the light shifted."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, voice flat,"
1"she asked, voice low"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.257
leniency0.514
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.114
84.1920%