Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXA339VHQJPTB9ZNQWF8RJ

Run Details

Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora slipped the silver chain over her head, the deep crimson of the Heartstone pulsing against her throat. The pendant’s faint glow seemed to drink the darkness, a thin line of warmth that throbbed when she stepped over the stone path that wound between the ancient oaks. Their bark twisted into grotesque silhouettes, each trunk a watchful sentinel. The night air smelled of damp earth and wildflowers that refused to close, their petals glowing faintly under the moon’s pale eye. Aurora’s breath formed clouds that vanished as soon as they left her lips. She tightened the strap on her delivery bag, feeling the weight of the day’s orders shift to a different kind of cargo—an invitation written in a hurried, ink‑stained note that had arrived at her flat three nights ago. “Find the heart,” it had read, “where time forgets itself.” She’d followed the map scribbled in the margins of the note, a sketch of standing stones that matched the ancient oak circle she now stood before. The stones rose like jagged teeth, each one etched with strange runes that seemed to shift when she glanced away. Aurora pressed her palm against the nearest stone, feeling the coolness of the bark, the subtle vibration that resonated through the pendant. A rustle whispered through the grass, a sound that was not wind nor animal. It brushed the edge of her hearing, a soft sigh that seemed to come from the ground itself. Aurora’s eyes flicked to the darkness beyond the circle, where shadows pooled like ink. The forest beyond held a darkness deeper than night, as if the very light refused to penetrate. “Who’s there?” she asked, voice low, the words hanging in the air like a thrown stone. No answer came, only the faint echo of her own voice returning from the stones. The pendant’s glow intensified, a thin line of heat crawling up her throat. Aurora felt the scar on her left wrist, the crescent‑shaped reminder of a childhood accident, tighten as if the skin remembered the pressure of the past. She pressed her fingers to it, feeling the faint sting of old scar tissue. A figure moved at the periphery of her vision, a blur of silver and green that dissolved when she tried to focus. Aurora’s heart hammered, but she kept her breath steady. She stepped forward, the grass parting under her boots as if the earth itself protested her intrusion. “You can’t be here,” she whispered, more to the pendant than to any unseen presence. “The portal’s closed.” The Heartstone pulsed again, a low thrum that seemed to sync with the beating of her own heart. A faint whisper brushed her ear, a voice that sounded like wind rustling through leaves, yet carried words she could almost grasp. “Leave… stay…” Aurora turned sharply, eyes scanning the darkness. The ancient oaks shivered, their leaves trembling without wind. A low hum rose from the stones, a resonance that vibrated through the soles of her shoes. She felt the time slip, an hour inside the circle stretching into minutes, minutes into days, if she could count them at all. She lifted the pendant, holding it up to the moon. The crimson gem flared, a sudden burst of light that seemed to carve a slit in the night. Through that slit she saw a ripple—a distortion in the air like heat rising from a fire, but no fire existed. The ripple pulsed, expanding, then recoiling as if something inside tried to break free. “Aurora,” a voice called, not her own, but an echo that seemed to come from within the stone itself. The name was spoken with a tenderness that belied the coldness of the surroundings. She swallowed, feeling the scar on her wrist ache as if the skin remembered a fresh cut. “Who are you?” she asked, voice barely above a whisper. The words felt heavy, as though they might crack the thin veil that held the night together. The reply came not in words but in a movement. A branch snapped somewhere behind her, a sharp crack that cut through the silence. Aurora spun, her eyes catching a flash of movement: a figure cloaked in moss and bark, its eyes two hollows of pale light. The creature stepped forward, each footfall leaving a faint imprint that glowed briefly before fading. Aurora’s breath caught. She raised the pendant, the crimson glow now bright enough to illuminate the creature’s face—if it could be called a face. Its features were a collage of bark, leaf, and something else, something that seemed to shift like a reflection in water. “Your time is short,” the creature said, its voice a blend of rustling leaves and distant water. No mouth moved; the words formed in the air, shimmering like dew. Aurora clenched her fists, the scar on her wrist tingling. “I’m not leaving. I need to—” The creature lifted a hand, a branch sprouting from its wrist, and brushed the stone circle. The ancient oaks shuddered, their bark cracking in places, revealing a faint inner light that pulsed in sync with the pendant. “Heartstone,” the creature whispered, the word reverberating through the ground. “It calls. You are the key.” Aurora felt the pull, a magnetic tug that resonated through the silver chain, through the stone, through the very marrow of her bones. She could hear the distant hum of a Hel portal, a low, mournful note that seemed to vibrate within her chest. “Why?” she asked, voice hoarse. “Why me?” The creature stepped back, its form dissolving into a swirl of leaves and ash that drifted toward the stones. The air grew colder, and the wildflowers that had bloomed year‑round now shivered, their petals closing as if in prayer. A low chuckle rose from the darkness, not a laugh but a vibration that seemed to emanate from the very ground. It grew louder, a chorus of unseen voices that layered over each other, each one a fragment of a forgotten language. Aurora’s eyes darted to the pendant, its glow now a steady, throbbing pulse. She felt the time stretch, the minutes inside the circle elongating, the night outside ticking away. The stars above seemed to dim, as if the night itself was holding its breath. “Enough,” a voice called, this one sharp, metallic, like a blade scraping stone. It seemed to come from the other side of the circle, from the space between the standing stones where the air was thicker. Aurora turned, seeing a silhouette of a woman in a ragged dress, hair tangled with vines, eyes hidden beneath a veil of night. The woman raised a hand, and the earth beneath her cracked, a fissure opening that glowed with a cold blue light. The Heartstone’s pulse matched the fissure’s glow, a sync that made Aurora’s skin crawl. She felt the scar on her wrist bleed, a thin line of blood forming despite the chill. “Will you go back?” the woman asked, not with words but with a gesture, a palm turned toward the fissure, inviting Aurora to step into the void. Aurora stared at the opening, at the darkness beyond that seemed to swallow light whole. She felt the weight of the pendant, the promise of the unknown, the pull of something ancient and hungry. She tightened her grip on the chain, the silver biting into her skin. “I’m not afraid,” she said, voice steadier than she felt. The words reverberated off the stones, echoing into the night. A gust of wind surged, carrying with it a chorus of whispers—voices of those who had walked the grove before, their words half‑heard, their sighs tangled with the rustle of leaves. Aurora’s eyes widened as she saw shapes moving at the edge of her vision: silhouettes of people, fleeting, their faces blurred, their hands reaching out. She turned back to the woman, but the figure had vanished, leaving only a faint imprint of a footstep in the moss. The fissure pulsed, a heartbeat of cold light that seemed to draw the night toward it. Aurora felt the pull of the Heartstone, a tug that made her stomach twist. She knew the note had led her here for a reason, that the the had been a beacon for something waiting in the grove, something that would not let her leave without a price. She stepped forward, each footfall echoing on the stone path. The grass whispered beneath her, the old oaks creaked, and the pendant’s glow flared brighter, as if warning her of what lay ahead. A soft voice rose from the darkness, a lullaby sung by a wind that smelled of moss and decay. “Stay,” it whispered, “and remember the night you came.” Aurora froze, her breath caught in her throat. She looked to the fissure, feeling the cool air brush against her skin. The Heartstone burned hot against her chest, a fire that threatened to consume her. She raised her hand, palm open, as if to catch the light of the fissure. The air rippled, and for a heartbeat the darkness seemed to part, revealing a glimmer of something beyond—an endless sea of stars, an abyss that reflected her own fears. A sudden crack split the silence, the sound of a branch snapping under a weight too great for the forest. Aurora turned, heart pounding, to see a shape emerge from the shadows—a figure cloaked in darkness, its eyes two hollow pits that reflected the pendant’s glow. The figure spoke, its voice a mixture of wind and stone. “You should not have come.” Aurora’s scar on her wrist throbbed, a reminder of a past accident that had taught her to survive. She pressed the pendant tighter, feeling its warmth spread through her fingers. “I’m here for the truth,” she replied, voice firm, though her hands trembled. The figure lifted a hand, and the ancient oaks shivered, their branches twisting into grotesque shapes that seemed to reach for her. The ground beneath the stones quivered, a low rumble that grew louder, as if the earth itself were waking. A sudden, sharp howl cut through the night, a sound that seemed to come from the depth of the earth, echoing through the grove, rattling the stones. The howl was followed by a chorus of whispers, a chorus that rose and fell like a tide. Aurora’s eyes darted from the figure to the fissure, to the pendant, to the darkness that seemed to pulse with unseen life. The heartbeat of the Heartstone matched the rhythm of the grove, a sync that made the air feel thick, like water. She took a step toward the fissure, feeling the cold light brush her skin. The figure lunged, its form expanding, twisting into a vortex of shadow that threatened to swallow her whole. Aurora raised the pendant, the crimson gem flaring, a burst of heat that cut through the darkness like a blade. The vortex recoiled, a scream of wind and stone echoing through the grove. The ground trembled, the ancient oaks groaned, and the Heartstone’s glow steadied, a steady pulse that seemed to say: hold on. Aurora stood at the edge of the fissure, the night pressing in on all sides, the whispers growing louder, the shadows moving just beyond the edge of sight. She felt the weight of the unknown pressing against her, the promise of something ancient waiting to be revealed, the dread that she might never leave. She breathed in the cold night air, feeling the faint taste of iron on her tongue. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a reminder that she had survived before, that she could survive again. “Tell me what you want,” she said, voice low, the words slipping into the night like a stone thrown into a still pond. The figure’s outline blurred, dissolving into a swirl of leaves and ash that drifted toward the stones. The night held its breath, the world seemed to pause, and the Heartstone pulsed one last time, a heartbeat that echoed through the grove.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:17:02.575Z" 2/19/2026, 12:17:02 PM
model"openrouter/aurora-alpha"
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tokens_prompt1038
tokens_completion3000
native_tokens_prompt876
native_tokens_completion2399
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native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
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router(null)
provider_responses(null)
api_type"completions"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.7
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2006
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"sharply"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2006
totalAiIsms53
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"throbbed"
count3
2
word"sentinel"
count1
3
word"weight"
count4
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"resonated"
count2
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"echo"
count2
8
word"reminder"
count3
9
word"pulsed"
count5
10
word"whisper"
count2
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"resonance"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"tenderness"
count1
15
word"silence"
count2
16
word"footfall"
count2
17
word"magnetic"
count1
18
word"pulse"
count4
19
word"chill"
count1
20
word"reverberated"
count1
21
word"echoing"
count4
22
word"fleeting"
count1
23
word"stomach"
count1
24
word"beacon"
count1
25
word"pounding"
count1
26
word"trembled"
count2
27
word"quivered"
count1
28
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"throbbed"
2"sentinel"
3"weight"
4"etched"
5"resonated"
6"flicked"
7"echo"
8"reminder"
9"pulsed"
10"whisper"
11"scanning"
12"resonance"
13"vibrated"
14"tenderness"
15"silence"
16"footfall"
17"magnetic"
18"pulse"
19"chill"
20"reverberated"
21"echoing"
22"fleeting"
23"stomach"
24"beacon"
25"pounding"
26"trembled"
27"quivered"
28"echoed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount21
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2000
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1928
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.24
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone8
Aurora24
Hel1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.878
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount14
matches
0"sigh that seemed to come from the ground itself"
1"thrum that seemed to sync with the beating of her own heart"
2"sounded like wind rustling through leaves"
3"light that seemed to carve a slit in the night"
4"echo that seemed to come from within the stone itself"
5"something that seemed to shift like a reflection in water"
6"note that seemed to vibrate within her chest"
7"vibration that seemed to emanate from the very ground"
8"light that seemed to draw the night toward it"
9"as if warning her of what lay ahead"
10"shapes that seemed to reach for her"
11"sound that seemed to come from the depth of the earth, echoing through the grove, rattling the stones"
12"darkness that seemed to pulse with unseen life"
13"pulse that seemed to say: hold on"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2
wordCount2000
matches
0"not her own, but an echo"
1"not in words but in a movement"
2"not a laugh but a vibration"
3"not with words but with a gesture, a palm turned toward the fissure, inviting A"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
69.09% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean39.22
std15.37
cv0.392
sampleLengths
058
183
268
363
431
553
648
718
840
92
1056
1163
1233
1344
1462
1545
1629
1716
1837
1916
2044
217
2239
2342
2444
2536
2644
2731
2827
2934
3033
3156
3238
3348
3433
3528
3635
3744
3846
3916
4043
4141
4245
4343
4432
4533
4621
4754
4834
4923
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences112
matches
0"was spoken"
1"was followed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs316
matches
0"was holding"
1"were waking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences118
ratio0.059
matches
0"She tightened the strap on her delivery bag, feeling the weight of the day’s orders shift to a different kind of cargo—an invitation written in a hurried, ink‑stained note that had arrived at her flat three nights ago."
1"Through that slit she saw a ripple—a distortion in the air like heat rising from a fire, but no fire existed."
2"She raised the pendant, the crimson glow now bright enough to illuminate the creature’s face—if it could be called a face."
3"No mouth moved; the words formed in the air, shimmering like dew."
4"A gust of wind surged, carrying with it a chorus of whispers—voices of those who had walked the grove before, their words half‑heard, their sighs tangled with the rustle of leaves."
5"The air rippled, and for a heartbeat the darkness seemed to part, revealing a glimmer of something beyond—an endless sea of stars, an abyss that reflected her own fears."
6"Aurora turned, heart pounding, to see a shape emerge from the shadows—a figure cloaked in darkness, its eyes two hollow pits that reflected the pendant’s glow."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1934
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"unknown pressing against her,"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.015511892450879007
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0036194415718717684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
96.33% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean16.95
std6.62
cv0.391
sampleLengths
018
129
211
322
413
538
610
726
820
922
1014
1118
1214
1317
1416
1515
1613
1726
1814
1922
209
2117
2215
233
2418
2522
262
277
289
2917
3023
3110
3218
3321
3414
3519
3614
3717
3810
3917
4010
4114
4223
4315
443
4521
4621
4717
4812
4910
38.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.17796610169491525
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences111
matches
0"Their bark twisted into grotesque"
1"She tightened the strap on"
2"it had read"
3"She’d followed the map scribbled"
4"It brushed the edge of"
5"she asked, voice low, the"
6"She pressed her fingers to"
7"She stepped forward, the grass"
8"she whispered, more to the"
9"She felt the time slip,"
10"She lifted the pendant, holding"
11"She swallowed, feeling the scar"
12"she asked, voice barely above"
13"She raised the pendant, the"
14"Its features were a collage"
15"She could hear the distant"
16"she asked, voice hoarse"
17"It grew louder, a chorus"
18"She felt the time stretch,"
19"It seemed to come from"
ratio0.315
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences111
matches
0"Aurora slipped the silver chain"
1"The pendant’s faint glow seemed"
2"Their bark twisted into grotesque"
3"The night air smelled of"
4"Aurora’s breath formed clouds that"
5"She tightened the strap on"
6"it had read"
7"She’d followed the map scribbled"
8"The stones rose like jagged"
9"Aurora pressed her palm against"
10"A rustle whispered through the"
11"It brushed the edge of"
12"Aurora’s eyes flicked to the"
13"The forest beyond held a"
14"she asked, voice low, the"
15"The pendant’s glow intensified, a"
16"Aurora felt the scar on"
17"She pressed her fingers to"
18"A figure moved at the"
19"Aurora’s heart hammered, but she"
ratio0.973
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences93
technicalSentenceCount26
matches
0"The pendant’s faint glow seemed to drink the darkness, a thin line of warmth that throbbed when she stepped over the stone path that wound between the ancient o…"
1"The night air smelled of damp earth and wildflowers that refused to close, their petals glowing faintly under the moon’s pale eye."
2"Aurora’s breath formed clouds that vanished as soon as they left her lips."
3"She tightened the strap on her delivery bag, feeling the weight of the day’s orders shift to a different kind of cargo—an invitation written in a hurried, ink‑s…"
4"Aurora pressed her palm against the nearest stone, feeling the coolness of the bark, the subtle vibration that resonated through the pendant."
5"The forest beyond held a darkness deeper than night, as if the very light refused to penetrate."
6"She stepped forward, the grass parting under her boots as if the earth itself protested her intrusion."
7"The ripple pulsed, expanding, then recoiling as if something inside tried to break free."
8"She swallowed, feeling the scar on her wrist ache as if the skin remembered a fresh cut."
9"Its features were a collage of bark, leaf, and something else, something that seemed to shift like a reflection in water."
10"The ancient oaks shuddered, their bark cracking in places, revealing a faint inner light that pulsed in sync with the pendant."
11"Aurora felt the pull, a magnetic tug that resonated through the silver chain, through the stone, through the very marrow of her bones."
12"The air grew colder, and the wildflowers that had bloomed year‑round now shivered, their petals closing as if in prayer."
13"It grew louder, a chorus of unseen voices that layered over each other, each one a fragment of a forgotten language."
14"The Heartstone’s pulse matched the fissure’s glow, a sync that made Aurora’s skin crawl."
15"Aurora’s eyes widened as she saw shapes moving at the edge of her vision: silhouettes of people, fleeting, their faces blurred, their hands reaching out."
16"Aurora felt the pull of the Heartstone, a tug that made her stomach twist."
17"The grass whispered beneath her, the old oaks creaked, and the pendant’s glow flared brighter, as if warning her of what lay ahead."
18"The Heartstone burned hot against her chest, a fire that threatened to consume her."
19"The air rippled, and for a heartbeat the darkness seemed to part, revealing a glimmer of something beyond—an endless sea of stars, an abyss that reflected her o…"
20"Aurora turned, heart pounding, to see a shape emerge from the shadows—a figure cloaked in darkness, its eyes two hollow pits that reflected the pendant’s glow."
21"Aurora’s scar on her wrist throbbed, a reminder of a past accident that had taught her to survive."
22"The figure lifted a hand, and the ancient oaks shivered, their branches twisting into grotesque shapes that seemed to reach for her."
23"The ground beneath the stones quivered, a low rumble that grew louder, as if the earth itself were waking."
24"A sudden, sharp howl cut through the night, a sound that seemed to come from the depth of the earth, echoing through the grove, rattling the stones."
25"The figure lunged, its form expanding, twisting into a vortex of shadow that threatened to swallow her whole."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she asked, voice barely above a whisper"
1"the creature said, its voice a blend of rustling leaves and distant water"
2"the creature whispered, the word reverberating through the ground"
3"she said, voice steadier than she felt"
34.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"the creature whispered (whisper)"
2"it whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.65
leniency1
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.231
58.7809%