Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXA79RG0QSTXB8F2FWSEFA

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.000922
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park after midnight held a damp chill that seeped through Rory’s jacket. The city’s orange glow was a distant smudge beyond the treeline. She stood before the boundary of the Fae Grove, the ancient oak standing stones like silent sentinels in the moonlight. The Heartstone pendant against her chest was a cold, inert weight. It hadn’t pulsed once since she’d entered the park. That was the problem. She’d come because the silence was wrong. For three nights, the pendant had slept. No gentle warmth, no faint crimson pulse. It was just a piece of jewelry. In her world, a quiet artifact was a comfort. In this one, it was a alarm bell with a dead battery. She needed to know if the gate was closed, or if something was… blocking the signal. Rory stepped between the stones. The shift was instantaneous. The city sounds vanished, replaced by a dense, velvet quiet. The temperature rose a few degrees, carrying the cloying scent of night-blooming jasmine and damp earth. Moonlight, brighter here, dappled the clearing. Wildflowers—foxgloves and wolfsbane, things that shouldn’t bloom in October—glowed with a soft, internal light. It was beautiful. It was utterly still. She took a few cautious steps inward, her trainers whispering through the dewy grass. The Grove was never truly silent. There was always the hum of insects, the rustle of something small in the underbrush, the sigh of the wind through leaves that didn’t exist in Richmond Park. Tonight, there was nothing. The air felt thick, resistant. A soft crunch came from her left. Rory froze, her head snapping toward the sound. Just shadows between the broad trunks of the oaks. A shape, maybe. The afterimage of a branch shifting in a nonexistent breeze. She held her breath, counting heartbeats. Ten. Twenty. Nothing moved. “Getting jumpy,” she muttered to herself, the sound swallowed by the oppressive quiet. She forced her shoulders to relax. *Cool-headed, Carter. Think.* She walked toward the center of the clearing, where the veil was thinnest. The grass here was trampled flat in a perfect circle. She knelt, placing a palm on the ground. The earth was warm, almost feverish. But the pendant remained cold. That’s when she heard the breathing. It wasn’t hers. It was a low, wet sound, like air being pulled through a waterlogged pipe. It came from behind her, somewhere near the standing stones she’d just passed through. Rory didn’t turn. Every instinct screamed to bolt, but movement would trigger a chase. She stayed on her knees, hand still pressed to the warm earth, and slowly, so slowly, turned her head just enough to see from the corner of her eye. The stones stood as they were. No figure. But the space between the two central oaks seemed… darker. A pool of absolute black that drank the moonlight. The wet breathing stopped. Silence rushed back in, heavier than before. She stood up, her joints protesting with a stiffness that felt imposed. The wrongness wasn’t just a feeling now; it was a physical pressure, a cork being pushed into the neck of the world. The Grove’s eternal springtime felt fake, a painted backdrop. The glowing flowers looked like watchful eyes. A twig snapped, directly ahead this time. Her gaze locked on the treeline opposite. The shadows there were wrong. They didn’t match the shape of the trees. One shadow was too tall, too thin, a vertical streak of darkness that tapered to a point near the ground. As she watched, it slid sideways, merging with the trunk of an oak. Not an animal. Nothing that solid moved like that. The Heartstone gave a single, convulsive throb against her sternum. Icy cold, not warm. A spike of pain, then nothing. “Okay,” Rory whispered. “Not alone.” The thing in the trees mirrored her voice. A dry, rasping parody of her words leaked from the darkness. *“O… kay.”* Blood turned to ice in her veins. She took a step back, toward the stone circle exit. The tall, thin shadow detached itself from the oak and took a step forward. It didn’t walk. It unfolded, gaining height, its form a blur of stretched darkness. It had no face, but she felt its attention like a physical touch, a cold spot on her skin. Another wet breath echoed from behind her—from the original spot near the entrance. They weren’t just in here with her. They were between her and the way out. *Think. Out-of-the-box. Now.* The Grove’s time dilation was a trap. An hour here could be minutes outside. Or days. She had no frame of reference. Running blind was a gamble with her own lifespan. The tall shadow unfolded another step, closing the distance. The air around it grew colder. The glowing flowers near its base withered, petals curling to black ash in seconds. Rory’s hand closed around the pendant. The silver chain bit into her fingers. It was just a stone. A conduit. The power, the connection, came from the realm it was tied to. Dymas. Or Hel. The pendant was a key, a sensor. What if the silence wasn’t an absence, but a suppression? Something was jamming the signal, something that fed on silence and stillness and fear. She didn’t have magic. She didn’t have a weapon. She had a theory. She dropped the pendant. It landed on the warm, trodden earth of the ritual circle with a soft *clink*. For a heartbeat, nothing happened. Then the tall shadow froze. The wet breathing behind her hitched. The deep crimson gem of the Heartstone began to glow. Not the friendly pulse of a portal nearby. This was a fierce, angry light, a coal fanned to life. It threw sharp, dancing shadows across the clearing, banishing the unnatural darkness around the thin figure. The creature recoiled, a soundless shriek twisting its form. The ground under the pendant trembled. The warm earth cracked, thin lines radiating from the stone like a web. From the cracks seeped not darkness, but a faint, opposite light—the gold-and-silver haze of the true Fae realm. It wasn’t a portal. It was a breach. A pinprick. The Grove reacted violently. The false stillness shattered. The air filled with a sound like tearing silk and a thousand discordant wind chimes. The wildflowers blazed with light, their glow now defensive, aggressive. The tall shadow fractured, pulling back into the deeper woods. The wet breathing retreated, fading into a gurgle and then silence. Rory didn’t wait. She snatched the pendant from the ground—it was searing hot now, almost too painful to hold—and sprinted for the standing stones. The world around her was a riot of sensation, the Grove purging the infection she’d provoked. Light and shadow warred. The scent of jasmine was overwhelmed by ozone and burnt hair. She burst between the stones, stumbling back into the ordinary chill of Richmond Park. The city sounds rushed back—distant traffic, a siren, the wind in normal trees. She collapsed to her knees on the damp grass, gulping the clean, cold air. Her hand shook as she opened her fist. The Heartstone pendant lay in her palm, its crimson glow fading back to a dormant, dark red. It was warm again. Not the welcoming warmth of a nearby portal, but the residual heat of a fired gun. She looked back at the standing stones. They were just stones. The Grove beyond was invisible, silent. Sealed. But it hadn’t been empty. Something had been waiting in the quiet. Something that knew how to mimic, to hide, to swallow light and sound. And she had just pissed it off.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1274
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"utterly"
1"truly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1274
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count5
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"oppressive"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"throb"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"dancing"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"shattered"
count1
15
word"silk"
count1
16
word"fractured"
count1
17
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"sentinels"
2"weight"
3"pulsed"
4"silence"
5"warmth"
6"pulse"
7"velvet"
8"oppressive"
9"perfect"
10"throb"
11"echoed"
12"dancing"
13"trembled"
14"shattered"
15"silk"
16"fractured"
17"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences152
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords9
totalWords1264
ratio0.007
matches
0"Cool-headed, Carter. Think."
1"“O… kay.”"
2"Think. Out-of-the-box. Now."
3"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1257
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Park3
Rory7
Fae2
Grove7
Heartstone4
October1
Carter1
Hel1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like watchful eyes"
41.77% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.582
wordCount1264
matches
0"not darkness, but a faint, opposite light"
1"Not the welcoming warmth of a nearby portal, but the residual heat of a fired gun"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences154
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean32.41
std20.84
cv0.643
sampleLengths
071
165
25
357
457
57
640
722
842
96
1031
1143
1231
137
1450
157
1662
1720
185
1921
2064
2128
223
2331
2429
2566
2613
2719
285
2911
3054
3137
3210
3354
3455
3541
3645
3718
3832
93.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences152
matches
0"was trampled"
1"being pulled"
2"being pushed"
3"was tied"
4"was overwhelmed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs199
matches
0"was jamming"
1"was searing"
31.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences154
ratio0.039
matches
0"Wildflowers—foxgloves and wolfsbane, things that shouldn’t bloom in October—glowed with a soft, internal light."
1"The wrongness wasn’t just a feeling now; it was a physical pressure, a cork being pushed into the neck of the world."
2"Another wet breath echoed from behind her—from the original spot near the entrance."
3"From the cracks seeped not darkness, but a faint, opposite light—the gold-and-silver haze of the true Fae realm."
4"She snatched the pendant from the ground—it was searing hot now, almost too painful to hold—and sprinted for the standing stones."
5"The city sounds rushed back—distant traffic, a siren, the wind in normal trees."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1270
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cold spot on her"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.029133858267716535
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005511811023622047
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean8.21
std5.28
cv0.644
sampleLengths
016
111
220
311
49
54
67
77
87
97
109
1112
1213
133
145
154
1610
1716
186
1914
203
214
2214
236
2428
254
265
277
288
299
303
3110
326
331
341
352
3613
376
382
391
4013
4110
428
436
445
456
463
4714
4814
493
35.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats27
diversityRatio0.3181818181818182
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners49
49.38% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences135
matches
0"Just shadows between the broad"
1"Then the tall shadow froze."
ratio0.015
92.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences135
matches
0"She stood before the boundary"
1"It hadn’t pulsed once since"
2"She’d come because the silence"
3"It was just a piece"
4"She needed to know if"
5"It was beautiful."
6"It was utterly still."
7"She took a few cautious"
8"She held her breath, counting"
9"she muttered to herself, the"
10"She forced her shoulders to"
11"She walked toward the center"
12"She knelt, placing a palm"
13"It wasn’t hers."
14"It was a low, wet"
15"It came from behind her,"
16"She stayed on her knees,"
17"She stood up, her joints"
18"Her gaze locked on the"
19"They didn’t match the shape"
ratio0.319
45.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount112
totalSentences135
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"The city’s orange glow was"
2"She stood before the boundary"
3"The Heartstone pendant against her"
4"It hadn’t pulsed once since"
5"That was the problem."
6"She’d come because the silence"
7"It was just a piece"
8"She needed to know if"
9"Rory stepped between the stones."
10"The shift was instantaneous."
11"The city sounds vanished, replaced"
12"The temperature rose a few"
13"Moonlight, brighter here, dappled the"
14"Wildflowers—foxgloves and wolfsbane, things that"
15"It was beautiful."
16"It was utterly still."
17"She took a few cautious"
18"The Grove was never truly"
19"Tonight, there was nothing."
ratio0.83
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park after midnight held a damp chill that seeped through Rory’s jacket."
1"Wildflowers—foxgloves and wolfsbane, things that shouldn’t bloom in October—glowed with a soft, internal light."
2"She stood up, her joints protesting with a stiffness that felt imposed."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
78.9959%