Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXA7Y2JVCJZPZSR4JY42AC

Run Details

Duration:
21.0s
Cost:
$0.010883
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest exhaled the scent of aged oak and clove smoke into the damp Soho night. Rain slicked the cobbles outside, reflecting the green neon pulse of the sign above the door like a dying heartbeat. Inside, the usual hush clung to the corners—low jazz from a vinyl player, the clink of ice in a glass, the murmur of men who spoke little and listened too much. Rory Carter stood just inside the doorway, shaking water from her black leather jacket. Her shoulder-length hair clung to her neck in damp strands, and the small crescent scar on her left wrist caught the lamplight as she pushed the door shut behind her. She scanned the room: three patrons at the bar, backs turned, silhouettes haloed in amber. No one looked up. She let out a slow breath and made her way to the far end, the heel of her boot stuttering faintly on the warped floorboard near the fireplace. She hadn’t planned on stopping in. The shift had ended an hour ago, her bike was still out back chained to the rail, but she’d needed somewhere to sit before climbing the narrow stairs to her flat, where silence gathered like dust. The Raven’s Nest was never silent. It was alive with secrets, with old men nursing cheap whiskey and unspoken histories. And with him. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a tumbler with the same deliberate rhythm he’d had for the past eight years. His auburn hair, streaked with grey like iron rust, was cut short at the sides. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the low light each time he moved, a subtle gleam like a code. He didn’t look up, but his voice came soft, steady. “You’re late.” “I had a delivery in Camden,” she said, sliding onto her usual stool. “Traffic was a nightmare.” “You’re not on the schedule tonight.” He poured her a glass of ginger ale without asking. She used to drink gin with him—two fingers, splash of tonic—but that was before Prague. Before the blood. Before the silence that had stretched between them like a fault line. “Yu-Fei let me finish early. Said I looked like I’d seen a ghost.” Silas’s mouth twitched, just at the corner. He set the glass down. “He’s perceptive.” She wrapped her fingers around the cool glass, let the fizz sting her skin. “So are you.” Footsteps creaked behind her. Light, measured. She turned. The man at the entrance hesitated, hand on the doorframe, water pooling around his polished Oxford shoes. He wore a charcoal overcoat, tailored, open at the front to reveal a navy suit beneath. His face was different—thinner, harder, shadowed under the eyes. But the eyes themselves—dark, searching—still held the same restless hunger. Rory’s breath caught in her throat. Evan Reed. He didn’t look like the man who had thrown a lamp across her flat in Cardiff. Didn’t look like the one who’d whispered prayers into her ear the night he broke her wrist. This man was polished. Controlled. A corporate ghost in a Savile Row skin. And yet. His gaze landed on her like a bullet. Silas tensed. Rory felt it—the tightening in the air, the way the music seemed to lower its voice. Silas reached slowly for a rag, folding it once, twice, his limp more pronounced as he stepped back from the bar top. Evan didn’t move toward them. Not yet. He took off his coat, hung it with care on a hook, then walked forward like he owned the silence. “Well,” he said, voice smoother than Rory remembered. “I thought I smelled regret.” She didn’t answer. Her fingers curled around the glass. The scar on her wrist pulsed. “You look well,” he went on. “London suits you.” “You found me.” “Not hard. Your name still shows up on Yu-Fei’s delivery logs. Public-facing app. Basic geo-tagging.” Silas cleared his throat. “You’re not welcome here, Evan.” Evan smiled—an absence of warmth. “Still protecting her, Silas? After everything?” “Everything,” Rory said, finally, “was on you.” Evan turned to her fully. He studied her face as if reading a map he’d once memorized but no longer trusted. “You changed your hair.” “It was six years ago.” “Still. I’d have known you anywhere. That look—you always had it. Like the world wronged you personally.” “It did.” Silas set a glass of water in front of Evan. Didn’t ask. Just placed it there like a challenge. Evan sipped. “You still don’t serve anything worth drinking.” “I remember the last time you walked in here,” Rory said. “You slapped me in front of half the bar. Silas broke your nose.” Evan touched the bridge of his nose, almost thoughtfully. “I was young. In pain.” “You were violent.” “I loved you.” “That’s not love.” “Maybe not the way you saw it.” He looked at Silas. “You taught her to parrot that, didn’t you? That love isn’t possession? That respect isn’t loyalty? She used to believe the opposite.” Rory stood. “I believed what I survived.” The room held its breath. The jazz crackled at the end of a track, then silence. “You think I don’t think about it?” Evan said, quieter now. “Every day. The way I looked at you. The things I said. I—” He stopped. Shook his head. “I went to therapy. Real therapy. Not the kind where you sit and cry while someone nods. I faced it. All of it.” “And now you wear three-thousand-pound suits and say *I faced it* like it absolves you?” Rory’s voice didn’t rise. It carved. “You don’t get absolution, Evan. Not from me.” “I don’t want absolution.” He looked down, then back up. “I wanted to see you. To say I’m sorry. Not for forgiveness. For me. So I could walk away without carrying it.” Silas moved then, stepping around the bar. His limp heavier, deliberate. He placed a hand on Rory’s shoulder. Not gripping. Anchoring. “You were never the problem,” Evan said. “I was. But you running—leaving—I took that as betrayal. Like you ruined us.” “We were already ruined,” she said. “The night you pinned me to the kitchen wall and told me not to speak to Eva again. That was the end.” He flinched. Silas’s hand pressed gently. Evan exhaled. “I remember. I remember everything. And it sickens me.” No one spoke. Rain tapped the windows like fingertips. Finally, Evan reached into his coat, pulled out a slim envelope. White. Thick paper. He set it on the bar. “What’s that?” Rory asked. “Tickets. To that Almodóvar retrospective. The one we talked about. Before… before everything. I thought—” He stopped. “I don’t know what I thought. Maybe that you still liked art films. Maybe that some version of us could’ve gone.” Rory stared at the envelope. Didn’t touch it. “You don’t get to rewrite us,” she said. “We weren’t romantic. We were toxic.” Evan nodded slowly. “Yeah. We were.” He picked up his coat. Didn’t look at Silas. Didn’t ask for permission. At the door, he paused. “You look happy, Rory.” She didn’t answer. The door closed behind him. Silence flooded in. Rory picked up the envelope, turned it over in her hands. Then dropped it into the trash behind the bar. She picked up her glass, finished the ginger ale in one swallow. “You okay?” Silas asked. She didn’t reply. Instead, she stared at the spot where Evan had stood, where the water from his shoes had already begun to dry. Time didn’t heal. It layered. And some layers never settled.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.68
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1271
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1271
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"silence"
count5
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"scanned"
2"silence"
3"unspoken"
4"footsteps"
5"measured"
6"pulsed"
7"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences111
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1254
ratio0.002
matches
0"I faced it"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount864
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Carter1
Prague1
Oxford1
Reed1
Cardiff1
Savile1
Row1
Rory12
Silas11
Evan13
Shook1
Didn5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Reed"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Oxford"
3"Cardiff"
4"Savile"
globalScore0.748
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if reading a map he’d once memorized but no longer trusted"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1254
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean18.17
std18.56
cv1.021
sampleLengths
068
191
265
367
42
517
646
713
814
917
108
1152
126
132
1446
152
168
1740
1827
1913
2015
219
223
2315
249
2511
267
2725
285
2917
302
3119
329
3324
3414
353
363
373
3833
397
4016
4152
4229
4332
4421
4520
4628
472
484
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences144
ratio0.042
matches
0"Inside, the usual hush clung to the corners—low jazz from a vinyl player, the clink of ice in a glass, the murmur of men who spoke little and listened too much."
1"She used to drink gin with him—two fingers, splash of tonic—but that was before Prague."
2"His face was different—thinner, harder, shadowed under the eyes."
3"But the eyes themselves—dark, searching—still held the same restless hunger."
4"Rory felt it—the tightening in the air, the way the music seemed to lower its voice."
5"Evan smiled—an absence of warmth."
96.91% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount873
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.043528064146620846
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010309278350515464
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean8.71
std7.04
cv0.809
sampleLengths
017
120
231
314
430
515
64
728
86
936
106
1114
123
1320
1415
1522
1610
172
1813
194
2016
2115
223
2312
2413
257
265
272
2814
293
304
312
322
3317
3416
359
3610
376
382
3916
4017
414
421
438
442
458
462
4716
4822
495
51.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3402777777777778
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners49
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences85
matches
0"Just placed it there like"
1"Finally, Evan reached into his"
2"Then dropped it into the"
3"Instead, she stared at the"
ratio0.047
74.12% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences85
matches
0"Her shoulder-length hair clung to"
1"She scanned the room: three"
2"She let out a slow"
3"She hadn’t planned on stopping"
4"It was alive with secrets,"
5"His auburn hair, streaked with"
6"He didn’t look up, but"
7"she said, sliding onto her"
8"He poured her a glass"
9"She used to drink gin"
10"He set the glass down."
11"She wrapped her fingers around"
12"He wore a charcoal overcoat,"
13"His face was different—thinner, harder,"
14"He didn’t look like the"
15"His gaze landed on her"
16"He took off his coat,"
17"he said, voice smoother than"
18"She didn’t answer."
19"Her fingers curled around the"
ratio0.365
65.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences85
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest exhaled the"
1"Rain slicked the cobbles outside,"
2"Rory Carter stood just inside"
3"Her shoulder-length hair clung to"
4"She scanned the room: three"
5"She let out a slow"
6"She hadn’t planned on stopping"
7"The shift had ended an"
8"The Raven’s Nest was never"
9"It was alive with secrets,"
10"Silas stood behind the bar,"
11"His auburn hair, streaked with"
12"The silver signet ring on"
13"He didn’t look up, but"
14"she said, sliding onto her"
15"He poured her a glass"
16"She used to drink gin"
17"Silas’s mouth twitched, just at"
18"He set the glass down."
19"She wrapped her fingers around"
ratio0.788
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Before the blood."
1"Before the silence that had"
ratio0.024
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Inside, the usual hush clung to the corners—low jazz from a vinyl player, the clink of ice in a glass, the murmur of men who spoke little and listened too much."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, voice smoother than Rory remembered"
1"Rory said, finally,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.3247%