| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2095 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 85.68% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2095 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "could feel" | | 2 | "remarkable" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "A flash of recognition" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 209 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.17% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 6 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 209 | | filterMatches | | 0 | "watch" | | 1 | "think" | | 2 | "decide" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 209 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2077 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 2076 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.77 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 2 | | Quinn | 2 | | Tube | 2 | | Camden | 1 | | Platform | 1 | | Closed | 1 | | Harlow | 16 | | Morris | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | January | 1 | | You | 10 | | Two | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Market" | | 4 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Tube" | | 2 | "January" | | 3 | "Two" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 158 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something like this" | | 1 | "felt like a soldier on a bridge who had" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2077 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 209 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 64 | | mean | 32.45 | | std | 26.83 | | cv | 0.827 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 65 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 82 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 81 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 68 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 84 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 94 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 91 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 81 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 56 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 50 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 36 | | 45 | 42 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 84 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 58 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 209 | | matches | | 0 | "were traded" | | 1 | "been ordered" | | 2 | "was permitted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 372 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 209 | | ratio | 0.057 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow kept her collar up and moved like a blade—short, precise steps that ate distance." | | 1 | "A flash of recognition—too quick to be sympathy, too long to be indifference." | | 2 | "The smell hit Harlow—damp paper, metal, an undercurrent she recognised the second it slid across her tongue: ozone and something sharp, like iron and lime." | | 3 | "He dug at his coat and produced something small—pale, mottled." | | 4 | "A child with a sleeve too short for its arm squared at her and spat—wet and bright as the rain—then giggled and darted behind a curtain." | | 5 | "She had read the reports—old whispers, informants with the edges of their tongues missing bits of truth." | | 6 | "He existed in both halves of the city—sanctioned and underground." | | 7 | "The market swallowed him; nothing remarkable, just shadows and a space folded away." | | 8 | "Quinn—put the radio down and wait." | | 9 | "This—this is a crime scene." | | 10 | "She felt something press against the inside of her wrist—the leather strap of her watch—steady and familiar." | | 11 | "His face had folded into the hush of the market; he did not raise his voice." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2094 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.024832855778414518 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002387774594078319 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 209 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 209 | | mean | 9.94 | | std | 5.84 | | cv | 0.587 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 27.99% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 46 | | diversityRatio | 0.23923444976076555 | | totalSentences | 209 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 193 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 27.25% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 193 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her left hand" | | 1 | "He ducked past a shuttered" | | 2 | "He knew the way." | | 3 | "He moved like someone who" | | 4 | "He looked back once." | | 5 | "You shouldn't have come back" | | 6 | "He went under." | | 7 | "She dove after him, hands" | | 8 | "He slipped into a corridor" | | 9 | "He moved quick, a small," | | 10 | "You can stop this." | | 11 | "He dug at his coat" | | 12 | "He slid it into a" | | 13 | "He moved through." | | 14 | "Her hand tightened on the" | | 15 | "Her watch registered the seconds" | | 16 | "She had options." | | 17 | "She could wait for backup." | | 18 | "She could call it in." | | 19 | "She could go home and" |
| | ratio | 0.482 | |
| 4.04% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 176 | | totalSentences | 193 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain stitched the night into" | | 1 | "Harlow kept her collar up" | | 2 | "She kept her left hand" | | 3 | "He ducked past a shuttered" | | 4 | "He knew the way." | | 5 | "He moved like someone who" | | 6 | "He looked back once." | | 7 | "A flash of recognition—too quick" | | 8 | "You shouldn't have come back" | | 9 | "Harlow closed the gap." | | 10 | "Water exploded under her boots." | | 11 | "The man flung himself through" | | 12 | "The stairway mouth yawned like" | | 13 | "He went under." | | 14 | "Harlow never wasted breath." | | 15 | "She dove after him, hands" | | 16 | "The world contracted to the" | | 17 | "Someone halfway down the stair" | | 18 | "Harlow kept moving." | | 19 | "A taxi splashed past and" |
| | ratio | 0.912 | |
| 25.91% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 193 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.005 | |
| 85.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her left hand near her watch as if it anchored her to reason." | | 1 | "Voices layered: bargains, warnings, laughter that had no happiness in it." | | 2 | "He slid it into a slot in a post that looked wrong beside the turnstile, a neat solution wedged into decay." | | 3 | "Mess, he called it as if the market were a child's room and not the place some people exchanged their names for favours." | | 4 | "He glanced at a vendor who leaned out from behind curtains of beads and whispered something that snapped the crowd's attention like a bell." | | 5 | "He kept his space as if afraid of the market's shadow." | | 6 | "It came out with a soft, reluctant sound as if the market disliked losing something." | | 7 | "A faint carving tracked the edge, a sigil that looked less like design and more like a word half-forgotten." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |