Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXABZB68MFMBQHZF5M6XAW

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Duration:
1m 28s
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$0.002632
Provider:
AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ambulance lights painted the tunnel walls in alternating red and white, but Detective Harlow Quinn ignored them. She crouched beside the body, her eyes tracing the ground without moving her head. Eighteen years on the force had taught her that the first minutes at a scene were sacred—before the forensic team trampled everything, before the crowd gathered, before the narrative solidified into something that blocked out doubt. The young man lay face-down at the foot of the escalators, arms splayed as if he'd fallen from a great height. Except these escalators hadn't moved in decades. Quinn checked her watch—worn leather, same one she'd worn for fifteen years—and noted the time. Half two in the morning. In an abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. "Detective?" A constable appeared at her elbow, flashlight trembling slightly in his grip. "We're not sure how he got down here. The entrance on the surface was sealed in the seventies." Quinn stood slowly, her knees protesting. She was forty-one and the night shifts had started to leave their mark. "Who found him?" "Couple of kids, said they were exploring. They ran straight to the police station on Camden High Street." The constable swallowed. "They're waiting in the van outside. They're... shaken." "Get me their statements before they reconstruct this into something from a horror film." Quinn moved toward the body, stepping carefully around a scatter of coins that had caught the forensic lights. Old coins. She crouched again, pulling a evidence bag from her coat pocket. The coins bore no queen's head. No date she could read. The metal was dark, almost copper, and stamped with symbols that didn't match any currency she'd encountered in three decades of police work. "DI Quinn?" A woman appeared at the top of the escalator bank, helmet slightly askew. DC Patels, her backup for the night. "Control said you'd want eyes on this personally. Said something about the location?" "The location's wrong." Quinn didn't look up. "This station was closed in 1974. Boarded up, filled in on the surface level. There's no access." Patels descended the static stairs, her boots loud in the silence. "Maybe they snuck in through the old maintenance tunnels? Squatters get everywhere." "Squatters don't leave these." Quinn held up the bag of coins. Patels took it, frowning. "Where did these come from?" "Scattered around the body. Three of them, just... placed there. Not dropped. Placed." Quinn stood, brushing dust from her knees. "And look at his hands." The young man had been in his early twenties, dark hair matted with blood from the wound at his temple. His hands were clenched, fingers digging into the concrete. "Looks like he was trying to pull himself somewhere," Patels offered. "No." Quinn circled the body, her shadow crossing the dead man's face. "His nails are worn down to the quick. He was clawing at the ground, not trying to rise. He was trying to get away from something." "Or someone." Quinn said nothing. She was studying the wall behind the escalators, where someone had painted a symbol in what looked like white chalk. A circle intersected by a line, with smaller markings she couldn't decipher. It looked almost like— "Have you seen anything like this before?" she asked. Patels shook her head. "Some kind of gang sign? Could be tagging." "It's not tagging." Quinn moved closer, not touching the wall. "The lines are too precise. This was drawn with intention. With practice." "Detective, what are you thinking?" Quinn turned back to the body. "I'm thinking about Morris." Patels went still. Everyone in the Met knew about DS Morris—Quinn's partner, found dead three years ago in a similarly anomalous location. An alley that locals swore hadn't existed the day before. Injuries that didn't match any weapon in their database. A case that had been quietly closed as unresolved, though Quinn had fought it for months. "Quinn." Patels lowered her voice. "This isn't like that. This is just—" "What?" Quinn grabbed her arm, perhaps too roughly. "What is it, Patels? What am I supposed to see here? A dead kid in an impossible location, ancient coins, symbols we can't identify, wounds that don't make sense?" She released the younger woman's arm. "Morris died in an alley that appeared from nowhere. This man died in a station that should have been inaccessible for fifty years. You tell me what connects those things." "The locations don't make sense," Patels admitted. "But that doesn't mean—" "It means someone went to considerable trouble to bring a body here. Or—" Quinn stopped. She walked back to the body, crouching again. "Or he came here himself." "What makes you say that?" Quinn pointed to the dead man's right hand. In his clenched fist, wedged between his fingers, was a small object. She pulled on gloves before extracting it. A compass. Brass, green with age, its face etched with symbols she almost recognized. The needle spun wildly for a moment before settling, pointing toward the far wall of the station. "It points at the wall," Patels observed. "That's not normal." "No." Quinn turned the compass slowly. The needle followed, always finding the same spot. "It's not normal at all." She stood, moving toward the wall the compass indicated. The brickwork was older here, different from the rest of the station. Set into it was a door frame with no door—just darkness beyond. "That's not on any of our schematics," Patels said, catching up to her. "How did you know to look there?" "I didn't." Quinn held up the compass. "The dead man did. He came here because he had this. He was trying to get somewhere, and he followed that needle straight into—" She gestured at the darkness beyond the frame. "Into what?" Quinn stared at the darkness. She thought about Morris, about the case files that had been sealed, about the three years of quiet questions that had gotten her nowhere. She thought about the way the evidence never quite fit, the way the impossible kept appearing at the edges of her investigations like a pattern she couldn't quite see. "Into something," she said finally. "Something that's been here the whole time, right under our noses, and we've been too busy with rational explanations to notice." She turned to Patels. "I need everyone out of this station. Seal it off. Tell Control we need the specialist unit—not forensics. The unit that handles the files they don't talk about." "Quinn, you can't be serious. You'll have the commissioner on your back—" "Let him come." Quinn tucked the compass into her coat pocket. "I've spent three years chasing shadows. Waiting for someone to tell me what really killed Morris. I think it's time I stopped waiting." The darkness beyond the door frame seemed to pulse, just slightly, in the corner of her vision. When she looked directly at it, there was nothing—just an absence of light. But the compass needle was trembling now, spinning faster than before, and Quinn knew with a certainty that had nothing to do with evidence or logic that she was standing at the edge of something far bigger than a single dead body in an impossible location. The question was whether she was ready to step through. "Get everyone out," she repeated. "Now."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.038
71.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"carefully"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"database"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"silence"
2"database"
3"etched"
4"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
84.94% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1209
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount747
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.81
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn21
Tube1
Camden1
Old1
Patels11
Met1
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Old"
3"Patels"
4"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.094
windowScore0
51.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like white chalk"
1"quite see"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1209
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean26.28
std17.19
cv0.654
sampleLengths
068
155
231
322
429
545
634
735
824
923
1011
119
1225
1329
1411
1538
162
1739
189
1912
2022
215
2210
2357
2412
2573
2611
2728
285
2927
3031
3110
3219
3333
3420
3539
362
3758
3826
3932
4012
4134
4230
4346
4410
456
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"were clenched"
1"been sealed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was studying"
1"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences102
ratio0.059
matches
0"Eighteen years on the force had taught her that the first minutes at a scene were sacred—before the forensic team trampled everything, before the crowd gathered, before the narrative solidified into something that blocked out doubt."
1"Quinn checked her watch—worn leather, same one she'd worn for fifteen years—and noted the time."
2"It looked almost like—"
3"Everyone in the Met knew about DS Morris—Quinn's partner, found dead three years ago in a similarly anomalous location."
4"Set into it was a door frame with no door—just darkness beyond."
5"When she looked directly at it, there was nothing—just an absence of light."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount755
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.038410596026490065
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.017218543046357615
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean11.85
std8.61
cv0.726
sampleLengths
018
114
236
321
47
515
65
77
813
918
106
1113
123
1321
148
1532
162
1711
186
195
2023
2115
227
2313
247
2517
2611
2712
2811
294
305
3120
325
3320
349
3511
3612
3726
382
393
4020
4112
424
439
444
458
4610
4712
485
496
76.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.47058823529411764
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences66
matches
0"She crouched beside the body,"
1"She was forty-one and the"
2"She crouched again, pulling a"
3"His hands were clenched, fingers"
4"She was studying the wall"
5"It looked almost like—"
6"She released the younger woman's"
7"She walked back to the"
8"She pulled on gloves before"
9"She stood, moving toward the"
10"She gestured at the darkness"
11"She thought about Morris, about"
12"She thought about the way"
13"she said finally"
14"She turned to Patels."
ratio0.227
20.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences66
matches
0"The ambulance lights painted the"
1"She crouched beside the body,"
2"The young man lay face-down"
3"Quinn checked her watch—worn leather,"
4"Half two in the morning."
5"A constable appeared at her"
6"Quinn stood slowly, her knees"
7"She was forty-one and the"
8"The constable swallowed"
9"Quinn moved toward the body,"
10"She crouched again, pulling a"
11"The coins bore no queen's"
12"The metal was dark, almost"
13"A woman appeared at the"
14"DC Patels, her backup for"
15"Quinn didn't look up"
16"Patels descended the static stairs,"
17"Quinn held up the bag"
18"Patels took it, frowning."
19"Quinn stood, brushing dust from"
ratio0.879
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She crouched beside the body, her eyes tracing the ground without moving her head."
1"The young man lay face-down at the foot of the escalators, arms splayed as if he'd fallen from a great height."
2"But the compass needle was trembling now, spinning faster than before, and Quinn knew with a certainty that had nothing to do with evidence or logic that she wa…"
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"A constable appeared, flashlight trembling slightly in his grip"
1"Quinn circled, her shadow crossing the dead man's face"
2"Quinn moved, not touching the wall"
92.31% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Patels admitted (admit)"
1"Patels observed (observe)"
2"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.115
76.5249%