Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXANQPS6DFDN6K5GJFERV8

Run Details

Duration:
30.9s
Cost:
$0.003620
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest cast a sickly glow over the wet pavement. Rory pulled her delivery scooter to a stop, the engine's rumble dying into silence. She yanked the helmet from her head, her black hair sticking to her forehead with sweat. Another late shift done. Another stack of tips in her pocket, barely enough to cover rent and her father's occasional calls asking when she'd return to Cardiff. The door to the bar swung open, releasing a wave of warmth and the low murmur of conversation. The familiar scent of aged wood, polished brass, and something else—something like old paper and secrets—wrapped around her. This was her second home now, more than the tiny flat above ever had been. She slid onto her usual stool at the end of the bar, the leather cool against her tired legs. Silas moved toward her without a word, his slight limp barely noticeable as he navigated the narrow space behind the bar. He placed a glass of water in front of her, ice cubes clinking against the sides. "Rough night?" "The usual. Drunken students in Kensington who can't find their own front door." She ran a hand through her hair. "How's business?" "Quiet. Just the way I like it." His hazel eyes scanned the room, a habit she'd noticed early on. The man never truly relaxed, not completely. "There's someone asking about you." Rory stiffened. "Who?" "Wouldn't give his name. Said you'd know him. Sitting in the corner booth." Silas gestured with his chin toward the darkest part of the bar, where the shadows pooled thick between the old maps and black-and-white photographs covering the walls. Rory turned, squinting. A figure sat alone, half-hidden in the gloom. As her eyes adjusted, recognition hit her like a physical blow. No. It couldn't be. She slid off the stool, her heart hammering against her ribs. With each step, the figure became clearer. The messy dark hair, the sharp line of his jaw, the way he held himself—slightly hunched, as if bracing for impact. Evan. Her ex. The man she'd fled Cardiff to escape. The man whose fists had taught her that love and pain could wear the same face. He looked up as she approached, his eyes widening in recognition. They were still the same deep brown she remembered, but now they were shadowed with something new. Exhaustion? Regret? "Rory." His voice was rough, as if he hadn't used it much lately. "I wasn't sure you'd come." "What are you doing here, Evan?" Her voice was steady, belying the tremor in her hands. She clenched them into fists at her sides. "I needed to see you." He gestured to the seat opposite him. "Please?" Rory hesitated, then slid into the booth, the worn vinyl cool against her thighs. She kept her distance, pressing herself against the back of the seat. "Five years," Evan said, staring at his hands on the table. "Has it really been five years?" "Feels longer." Rory's eyes darted around the bar, landing on Silas, who was pointedly not watching them while simultaneously watching everything. "How did you find me?" "Your friend Eva." Evan winced. "She didn't want to tell me, but I was persistent. And persuasive." Rory's jaw tightened. Eva had promised not to give Evan her new contact information. Some promises apparently didn't mean as much as others. "You look different," Evan said, his gaze traveling over her face, her body. "Your hair..." "I cut it." She'd chopped it off the week after she'd left him, severing the connection along with any remaining vulnerability. "Life changes people." "You always were stronger than me." His fingers traced patterns on the wooden table. "I wanted to apologize. Properly this time." Rory snorted. "The flowers and cards you sent to my parents' house weren't enough?" "I was ashamed. And stupid. I thought if I could just say the right words..." He trailed off, shaking his head. "Therapy helps you understand these things. Helps you understand why you become someone you hate." Rory studied him, really looked at him this time. The lines around his eyes were deeper than she remembered. There was a gauntness to his cheeks that hadn't been there before. He'd lost weight, and not in a healthy way. "You're not here just to apologize," she said, her voice flat. "No." He met her eyes then, and the raw vulnerability in them caught her off guard. "I'm dying. Cancer. Stage four." The words hung between them, heavy and undeniable. Rory should have felt satisfaction, justice, some vindication that life had dealt him the blow she never could. Instead, she felt nothing but a hollow ache in her chest. "I don't know what you want me to say," she finally managed. "Nothing. I don't want anything from you." Evan reached into his jacket pocket and pulled out a small, wrapped box. "I just wanted you to have this. To know that even when I was at my worst, some part of me remembered who you were. Who you are." He slid the box across the table. Rory stared at it, then back at him. "I'm not the same person you knew, Evan. And you're not the same person I left." "I know." A sad smile touched his lips. "But time doesn't erase everything, does it? Sometimes it just weighs heavier." Rory's fingers brushed against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a reminder of a different time, a different accident from long before Evan. A reminder that some marks stay with you, regardless of how much time passes. She took the box but didn't open it. "I should go." "Of course." Evan stood as she did, towering over her as he always had, yet seeming somehow smaller now. "It was good to see you, Rory. Even if it was just this once." She nodded, not trusting her voice. As she walked away, she could feel his eyes on her back, the weight of five years and all the unspoken words between them pressing down on her shoulders. Silas met her at the bar as she reclaimed her stool. His gaze flickered between her and the corner where Evan still stood, watching. "Everything alright?" he asked, placing a small glass of amber liquid in front of her. Rory stared at the drink, then at the box in her hand. "No. But it will be." She downed the whiskey in one gulp, the burn a welcome distraction from the ache in her chest. Outside, the London rain began to fall, washing the streets clean as the green neon sign continued its silent vigil over The Raven's Nest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory's eyes darted around [around]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.439
leniency0.878
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.049
77.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1116
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"truly"
1"completely"
2"slightly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1116
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"reminder"
count2
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"warmth"
2"familiar"
3"navigated"
4"scanned"
5"gloom"
6"traced"
7"weight"
8"reminder"
9"could feel"
10"unspoken"
11"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences75
matches
0"a wave of warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1108
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount839
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Cardiff2
Rory12
Silas4
Evan9
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.785
windowScore0.667
27.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like old paper and secrets—wrapped"
1"as if bracing for impact"
2"Some promises apparently didn't mean as much"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1108
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean25.18
std14.79
cv0.587
sampleLengths
073
151
256
32
422
531
63
740
822
94
1039
111
1225
1330
1418
1524
1613
1726
1817
1926
2017
2123
2215
2324
2421
2514
2636
2740
2811
2921
3037
3112
3248
3315
3416
3520
3638
3711
3833
3935
4024
4115
4217
4342
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"were shadowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs130
matches(empty)
53.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences96
ratio0.031
matches
0"The familiar scent of aged wood, polished brass, and something else—something like old paper and secrets—wrapped around her."
1"The messy dark hair, the sharp line of his jaw, the way he held himself—slightly hunched, as if bracing for impact."
2"Rory's fingers brushed against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a reminder of a different time, a different accident from long before Evan."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount847
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"same deep brown she"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02833530106257379
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.015348288075560802
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean11.54
std7.32
cv0.635
sampleLengths
016
114
216
34
423
518
618
715
819
921
1016
112
1220
132
1419
157
165
172
181
1940
203
218
2211
231
243
2511
267
2721
281
292
307
3116
3211
3317
341
351
3613
375
3816
398
4012
411
4214
4312
4411
456
4621
475
485
4912
68.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4375
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners42
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Instead, she felt nothing but"
ratio0.015
58.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences67
matches
0"She yanked the helmet from"
1"She slid onto her usual"
2"He placed a glass of"
3"She ran a hand through"
4"His hazel eyes scanned the"
5"It couldn't be."
6"She slid off the stool,"
7"He looked up as she"
8"They were still the same"
9"His voice was rough, as"
10"Her voice was steady, belying"
11"She clenched them into fists"
12"He gestured to the seat"
13"She kept her distance, pressing"
14"She'd chopped it off the"
15"His fingers traced patterns on"
16"He trailed off, shaking his"
17"He'd lost weight, and not"
18"she said, her voice flat"
19"He met her eyes then,"
ratio0.403
4.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences67
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory pulled her delivery scooter"
2"She yanked the helmet from"
3"Another late shift done."
4"Another stack of tips in"
5"The door to the bar"
6"The familiar scent of aged"
7"This was her second home"
8"She slid onto her usual"
9"Silas moved toward her without"
10"He placed a glass of"
11"She ran a hand through"
12"His hazel eyes scanned the"
13"The man never truly relaxed,"
14"Silas gestured with his chin"
15"Rory turned, squinting."
16"A figure sat alone, half-hidden"
17"It couldn't be."
18"She slid off the stool,"
19"The messy dark hair, the"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The messy dark hair, the sharp line of his jaw, the way he held himself—slightly hunched, as if bracing for impact."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Evan said, his gaze traveling over her face, her body"
1"she said, her voice flat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.098
leniency0.195
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.0563%