Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXATTA99G2CEN4TSPPCBJD

Run Details

Duration:
10.3s
Cost:
$0.004504
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow ducked under the yellow tape, the plastic scraping a thin line across her salt-and-pepper hair. The air in the abandoned Tube station, thick with the scent of damp earth and something acrid, clung to her coat. Above, the city hummed, oblivious to the secrets buried beneath. This particular tunnel, a forgotten artery of London's subterranean network, reeked of stale air and something else, something metallic and sharp. Her boots crunched on loose gravel as she made her way into the cavernous space. The Metropolitan Line, the blue and red roundels faded on the grimy tiles, felt like a tomb. Detective Sergeant Miller, all gangly limbs and nervous energy, stood near a pool of shadow that swallowed most of the light from his tactical torch. He looked up as Quinn approached, his face a pale oval in the gloom. “Quinn. Took you long enough.” Harlow ignored the jab. “What have we got?” “Another body,” Miller replied, his voice echoing a little too loudly in the confined space. “Looks like a ritual killing. Same MO as the others.” He swept his torch beam across the scene. A body lay sprawled on the grimy platform, a woman in her late twenties. Her eyes, wide and glassy, stared up at the decaying ceiling. A rough, star-shaped symbol was carved into her chest, dried blood a dark stain against her pale skin. Around her, a precise circle of burnt offerings – feathers, dried herbs, and what looked like a fragment of bone – marked the concrete. “Ritual killing?” Harlow’s voice was flat. “You sure about that, Miller?” She crouched, careful not to disturb the scene. The smell, she realized, was raw iron mixed with something else, something sweet. “See for yourself,” Miller indicated the symbols carved into the concrete beside the body. “Pentagram, Quincunx, Triskelion. All the usual bollocks. She wasn't just murdered, Quinn. She was sacrificed.” Harlow studied the symbols. They were crudely drawn, etched with something sharp and unpracticed. Not a professional hand. DS Morris, three years gone, would have noted the same detail. “Sacrificed,” she repeated, a bitter taste in her mouth. “And you’re sticking with the ‘occult cult’ theory?” Miller shrugged. “What else could it be? Look at this. The bloody victim has a pentagram carved into her chest, surrounded by all that other nonsense. It’s pretty open and shut.” He swung his torch beam around, illuminating the rusty tracks, the damp walls, the decaying posters. Harlow didn't respond, her gaze fixed on the body. A dark, viscous liquid, too thick to be just blood, pooled around the victim’s head. Some of it had splattered onto the rough concrete, forming a distinct, almost perfectly circular pattern. “The blood,” she murmured, more to herself than to Miller. “What about it?” Miller asked, stepping closer to peer over her shoulder. “It's not just blood,” Harlow said, her brow furrowed. She dipped a gloved finger into the sticky substance. It was indeed far too thick, almost gelatinous. The smell, she now identified, was not just iron, but also something metallic and cloying, like old pennies left in stagnant water. “Forensics will confirm. Probably some kind of animal blood mixed in, as part of their ritual,” Miller dismissed her observation with a wave of his hand. Harlow ignored him, her eyes tracing the outline of the victim’s hands. They were splayed out, palms up, fingers curled slightly. One hand, the left, clutched a small, tarnished brass compass. Its casing had a patina of verdigris. The face was etched with protective sigils, ancient symbols that looked strangely out of place in the grimy Tube station. This was no ordinary compass. “And this?” Harlow picked up the compass, turning it over in her gloved hand. The needle, a thin sliver of black, quivered, pointing vaguely towards the decaying brick wall behind the platform. Miller squinted. “Souvenir? Maybe her lucky charm? Or part of their ritualistic garb.” “A compass,” Harlow mused. "Pointing to a wall?" “Maybe it’s broken,” Miller offered, shrugging again. “Old thing like that.” Harlow ran a thumb over the compass’s smooth, cool surface. It felt alive, humming with a faint, almost imperceptible vibration. She’d seen things like this before, in photographs, in old case files. Things that shouldn’t exist. Things that DS Morris, for all his skepticism, had started to believe in at the end. “It’s not broken,” Harlow said, her voice dropping a notch. “Look closer, Miller.” She gestured to the symbols on the compass face. “These aren't just decorative. They're protective sigils.” Miller peered at the compass. “Runes, then. More occult nonsense.” Harlow shook her head. “No. These are older. Pre-date any of the cult symbols you found.” Her gaze shifted back to the patterns on the concrete. The star, the circle, the burnt offerings. They looked amateur, almost rushed. A poor imitation. “The cult leader, whoever they are, is getting sloppy,” Miller opined. Harlow ignored him, her attention caught by a faint shimmer on the grimy wall towards which the compass needle pointed. It was almost invisible in the dim light, a distortion in the air, like heat haze on a summer road. But there was no heat, just the chill dampness of the underground. “What is that?” she asked, rising to her feet and moving closer to the wall. Miller peered at the spot. “What? I don’t see anything.” “Exactly,” Harlow said, her voice tight with a sudden surge of adrenaline. “That’s the problem.” She carefully placed a gloved hand on the rough brick. It felt cold, oddly insubstantial, as though a thin layer of reality had peeled away. She checked the compass in her other hand. The needle pulsed, pointing directly at the shimmering spot. “It’s a reflection, maybe,” Miller posited. “Residual light from one of the other torches.” “No,” Harlow said, focusing on the subtle distortion. “It’s a rift. Or a portal. And whoever did this, they weren't sacrificing her *to* a cult. They were sacrificing her *for* something.” She looked back at the messy symbols on the platform, the crudely carved star on the victim’s chest. “A diversion.” “A diversion from what?” Miller’s voice held a trace of concern now, a ripple in his usual practiced indifference. Harlow’s mind raced. The thick, viscous liquid, the compass, the shimmering wall. The victim’s eyes, staring not at the ceiling, but through it. And the symbols, so obviously fake, so deliberately placed to mislead. “From the real ritual,” Harlow concluded, her gaze sweeping over the entire scene, now seeing it with fresh eyes. “This isn’t about worship. It’s about power. And the body... the body is just bait.” She looked down at the compass again. The faint thrum grew stronger in her hand, the thin black needle quivering with focused intensity. It was pointing somewhere beyond the wall, beyond the abandoned station, somewhere far more dangerous. “Someone wanted us to find this,” Harlow said, looking at Miller, her brown eyes snapping with sudden clarity. “They wanted us to think it was a cult. But they made a mistake.” She gestured to the compass, then to the swirling distortion. “They left behind a map, and a key.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her gaze shifted back [back]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.619
leniency1
rawRatio0.038
effectiveRatio0.038
83.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1187
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
3"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1187
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"furrowed"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"quivered"
count1
6
word"charm"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"echoing"
2"etched"
3"furrowed"
4"tracing"
5"quivered"
6"charm"
7"chill"
8"pulsed"
9"raced"
10"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1186
ratio0.002
matches
0"to"
1"for"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount911
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.98
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tube2
London1
Metropolitan1
Line1
Sergeant1
Miller15
Quinn1
Harlow18
Morris2
persons
0"Sergeant"
1"Miller"
2"Quinn"
3"Harlow"
4"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.512
windowScore0.667
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a tomb"
1"looked like a fragment of bone – marked t"
2"he symbols, so obviously fake, so deliberate"
31.37% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.686
wordCount1186
matches
0"not just iron, but also something metallic"
1"not at the ceiling, but through it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean31.21
std17.55
cv0.562
sampleLengths
047
153
239
35
48
533
667
732
829
929
1017
1147
1240
1310
1412
1548
1626
1763
1832
1913
208
2111
2252
2329
2410
2541
2611
2752
2815
2910
3057
3114
3251
3319
3434
3534
3638
3750
92.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences85
matches
0"was carved"
1"were splayed"
2"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs137
matches
0"was pointing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences99
ratio0.01
matches
0"Around her, a precise circle of burnt offerings – feathers, dried herbs, and what looked like a fragment of bone – marked the concrete."
90.62% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount912
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"rough, star-shaped symbol"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.043859649122807015
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01425438596491228
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean11.98
std7.34
cv0.612
sampleLengths
016
121
210
321
415
517
625
714
85
94
104
1115
1218
1314
1411
1518
1624
176
1813
1913
2014
2115
224
2310
244
2511
269
278
282
2945
309
3115
3216
3310
3412
359
369
378
3822
3926
4012
419
4210
437
4420
455
4614
4718
482
4911
70.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4444444444444444
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences80
matches
0"Her boots crunched on loose"
1"He looked up as Quinn"
2"He swept his torch beam"
3"Her eyes, wide and glassy,"
4"She crouched, careful not to"
5"They were crudely drawn, etched"
6"she repeated, a bitter taste"
7"He swung his torch beam"
8"she murmured, more to herself"
9"She dipped a gloved finger"
10"It was indeed far too"
11"They were splayed out, palms"
12"Its casing had a patina"
13"It felt alive, humming with"
14"She’d seen things like this"
15"She gestured to the symbols"
16"Her gaze shifted back to"
17"They looked amateur, almost rushed."
18"It was almost invisible in"
19"she asked, rising to her"
ratio0.338
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences80
matches
0"Harlow ducked under the yellow"
1"The air in the abandoned"
2"This particular tunnel, a forgotten"
3"Her boots crunched on loose"
4"The Metropolitan Line, the blue"
5"Detective Sergeant Miller, all gangly"
6"He looked up as Quinn"
7"Harlow ignored the jab."
8"Miller replied, his voice echoing"
9"He swept his torch beam"
10"A body lay sprawled on"
11"Her eyes, wide and glassy,"
12"A rough, star-shaped symbol was"
13"Harlow’s voice was flat"
14"She crouched, careful not to"
15"The smell, she realized, was"
16"Miller indicated the symbols carved"
17"Harlow studied the symbols."
18"They were crudely drawn, etched"
19"DS Morris, three years gone,"
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Detective Sergeant Miller, all gangly limbs and nervous energy, stood near a pool of shadow that swallowed most of the light from his tactical torch."
1"The face was etched with protective sigils, ancient symbols that looked strangely out of place in the grimy Tube station."
2"It felt cold, oddly insubstantial, as though a thin layer of reality had peeled away."
48.08% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she murmured, more to herself than to Miller"
1"Harlow said, her brow furrowed"
2"Harlow said, her voice dropping a notch"
3"Harlow said, her voice tight with a sudden surge of adrenaline"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Harlow concluded (conclude)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.262
leniency0.524
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.143
76.5519%