| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory's hand closed around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 92.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1365 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.72% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1365 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 180 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 180 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 184 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 16 | | totalWords | 1353 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde's grove. Midnight. Come alone." | | 1 | "Don't go in." | | 2 | "NOT the grove. Wrong grove. Get out NOW." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.45% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1294 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.39 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | October | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 8 | | Rory | 18 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Hammersmith | 1 | | Wildflowers | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 1 | | One | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Wildflowers" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "One" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Fae-touched" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.804 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 96.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed muffled as if the air refused to carry sound" | | 1 | "not quite right" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.739 | | wordCount | 1353 | | matches | | 0 | "not like broken wood but like a curtain parting" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 67 | | mean | 20.19 | | std | 16.01 | | cv | 0.793 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 61 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 45 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 41 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 34 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 180 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 223 | | matches | | |
| 34.16% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 184 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "Shouldn't bloom at all in this light—no, wait." | | 1 | "The grove felt empty in that particular way that raised neck hairs—the emptiness that was too perfect, too complete." | | 2 | "But time moved differently here—Eva had warned her about that too." | | 3 | "Just—" | | 4 | "A clicking sound emerged from where its mouth might be—or its chest, or its throat, impossible to pinpoint." | | 5 | "One of the figures—the tall one—extended an arm." | | 6 | "Behind her, the clicking turned to shrieks—thin, high sounds that shredded the silent air." |
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| 95.89% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 358 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.0446927374301676 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008379888268156424 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 184 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 184 | | mean | 7.35 | | std | 5.69 | | cv | 0.774 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 59.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.41304347826086957 | | totalSentences | 184 | | uniqueOpeners | 76 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "Just her imagination running wild" | | 1 | "Even her breathing seemed muffled," | | 2 | "Still warm, but the pulsing" | | 3 | "More shadows now, at least" | | 4 | "Too-long limbs that bent at" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been pulsing since" | | 1 | "Her voice fell flat, absorbed" | | 2 | "She checked her phone." | | 3 | "She killed it." | | 4 | "She blinked hard." | | 5 | "She might be early." | | 6 | "Her voice cracked" | | 7 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 8 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 9 | "She was in a liminal" | | 10 | "They hadn't attacked." | | 11 | "They were circling." | | 12 | "It wore a shape like" | | 13 | "It took another step." | | 14 | "They formed a loose circle" | | 15 | "Her voice came steadier than" | | 16 | "Its hand, if it could" | | 17 | "She fumbled for it, not" | | 18 | "She caught a glimpse of" | | 19 | "She bolted for the gap" |
| | ratio | 0.16 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "The cab ride had taken" | | 1 | "Rory paid and watched the" | | 2 | "Richmond Park after hours." | | 3 | "Rory's fingers found the Heartstone" | | 4 | "It had been pulsing since" | | 5 | "The ancient oaks loomed ahead," | | 6 | "Trees grown in a perfect" | | 7 | "Rory ducked through the gap" | | 8 | "The air changed." | | 9 | "The traffic sounds from the" | | 10 | "The Heartstone flared hot enough" | | 11 | "Her voice fell flat, absorbed" | | 12 | "Wildflowers carpeted the grove floor," | | 13 | "She checked her phone." | | 14 | "The screen's backlight looked wrong" | | 15 | "She killed it." | | 16 | "Something rustled in the flowers" | | 17 | "Nothing but blooms swaying, though" | | 18 | "The grove felt empty in" | | 19 | "The trees groaned." |
| | ratio | 0.679 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been pulsing since Hammersmith, that faint rhythmic heat that meant a portal was nearby." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the grove floor, luminous whites and purples that shouldn't bloom in autumn." | | 2 | "The grove felt empty in that particular way that raised neck hairs—the emptiness that was too perfect, too complete." | | 3 | "Just her imagination running wild because she was alone in a Fae-touched space at midnight, which was approximately the worst decision she'd made since Evan." | | 4 | "Behind her, the clicking turned to shrieks—thin, high sounds that shredded the silent air." | | 5 | "Rory sprawled in wet grass, gasping, her phone's light cutting through ordinary October darkness." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |