Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXBFX60PH44KSVGPYX2RY0

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Duration:
3m 21s
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$0.005348
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AtlasCloud

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora polished the same tumbler for the third time. The cloth caught on a smudge near the rim. She pressed harder. "You always hated sticky glasses." The voice came from the shadows of the booth in the corner. Aurora did not look up. She placed the tumbler on the rack and reached for the next one. The green neon sign from the street outside buzzed through the frosted window, casting a sickly pallor over the mahogany bar top. "Closed for private function," Aurora said. "Since when do you work the bar?" "Since I needed the cash." Eva slid out of the booth. She wore a crisp trench coat that cost more than Aurora's monthly rent. Her heels clicked on the worn floorboards. She stopped two feet from the bar. The scent of rain and expensive perfume cut through the smell of stale ale and lemon polish. "Cardiff misses you." "Cardiff forgot me." "Your father calls." Aurora picked up a bottle of whiskey. She poured a measure into a fresh glass. She slid it across the wood. It stopped inches from Eva's manicured fingers. "Tell him I'm dead." "He knows you're not." Eva wrapped both hands around the glass. She did not drink. "He knows you're in London. He knows you're working for a Chinese takeaway." "Restaurant." "Semantics." Eva lifted the glass. Her hand shook. Just once. "You look different." "Lighting." "It's the hair. You cut it." Aurora touched the straight black strands resting on her shoulders. She remembered the length it used to be. Down to her waist. Evan used to wrap it around his fist. She let her hand drop to the counter. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the neon light. "Better for delivery cycling." "You were going to be a barrister." "Plans change." "Because of him." Aurora turned to the back shelf. She needed to organise the gin bottles. They were out of alignment. Vodka next to gin. Rum next to tequila. Order mattered. Order kept things safe. "Because of me." "Don't do that." Eva's voice tightened. "Don't pretend you chose this life. You're hiding." "I'm living." "You're surviving." Eva set the glass down. The liquid remained untouched. "He's looking for you, Rory." Aurora stopped moving. Her fingers hovered over a bottle of Bombay Sapphire. The cold glass seeped into her skin. "Who?" "Don't play stupid. It doesn't suit you." "Evan is in Cardiff." "He was." Eva leaned forward. The leather of her coat creaked. "He moved. Three weeks ago. Nobody knows where. Except he asked about you. Asked your father. Asked me." Aurora turned around. She leaned her hips against the bar. She crossed her arms. The position hid her left wrist. "What did you tell him?" "Nothing." "Good." "I told him you were in Australia." Aurora uncrossed her arms. She stepped forward. The space between them shrunk to nothing. She could see the fine lines around Eva's eyes. Fear lived there. "You told him I was in Australia." "I had to give him something. He was... agitated." "Agitated." Aurora laughed. It sounded dry. Like paper tearing. "He broke a plate over my head when I burnt the toast. Agitated is a strong word for a man who enjoys pain." "He has contacts here." Eva lowered her voice. "People in the city. Private investigators. Security firms." "Silas knows everyone in this city." "Silas?" Eva looked around the dim room. Her eyes traced the old maps on the walls. The black-and-white photographs of men in suits who looked like they buried secrets for a living. "The owner?" "My landlord." "He looks like he kills people for fun." "He used to." Eva stiffened. She looked at Aurora again. Really looked. She saw the tension in Aurora's jaw. The way her eyes scanned the door every few seconds. The lack of jewellery. No rings. No necklace. Nothing to grab. "You're serious." "Deadly." "Rory, you need to leave. Again." "I'm not running anymore." "You don't have a choice." Eva reached into her coat pocket. She pulled out a folded piece of paper. She slid it across the bar. "He sent this to my house. Yesterday." Aurora did not touch the paper. She looked at it. White A4. Folded in thirds. No stamp. Hand-delivered. "Open it." Aurora picked it up. The paper felt heavy. She unfolded it. A single photograph fell out. It showed the Golden Empress restaurant. Taken from across the street. Through the lens, the yellow awning looked bruised. On the back, written in blue ink, was an address. The flat above the bar. "He knows where you sleep." Eva's whisper barely carried over the hum of the fridge. "He knows you're here." Aurora crumpled the paper. She tossed it into the bin under the counter. "Did you follow him?" "What?" "Did anyone follow you here?" "No. I checked. I took the tube. Changed at Leicester Square." "Too obvious." "I was careful." "Careful isn't enough." Aurora moved around the bar. She walked to the door. She locked it. She turned the sign to Closed. The green neon flickered and died. The room plunged into semi-darkness. Only the emergency lights over the exits remained. "Rory?" "Stay down." Aurora moved to the window. She peered through the slat of the blind. The street outside was empty. A black car idled at the corner. The engine vibrated through the floorboards. "That's not a taxi," Eva said. "Get in the back." "What?" "The room. Behind the bookshelf." Aurora pointed to the far wall. "Silas keeps it for meetings." "I'm not hiding in a closet." "Do you want to see him?" Eva stood still. The click of the car door opening outside echoed through the glass. Heavy boots hit the pavement. Two sets. "Too late," Aurora said. She reached under the counter. Her fingers closed around the cold steel of the baseball bat Silas kept for unruly drunks. She pulled it out. The weight felt familiar. Comforting. "Lock yourself in," Aurora said. "Do not come out until I say." "Rory, there are two of them." "Then I'll break two bats." The handle of the front door turned. Slowly. The lock clicked. Someone had a key. Eva scrambled for the back room. She vanished behind the row of encyclopedias. The bookshelf swung shut with a soft thud. Aurora stood behind the bar. She gripped the bat with both hands. Her knuckles turned white. The door creaked open. The bell above the frame jingled. A cheerful sound for a violent entrance. A man stepped inside. He wore a dark suit. No tie. He held a umbrella in his right hand. The tip was metal. Sharp. "Evening," the man said. His voice was smooth. Posher than Evan. "We're looking for a Miss Carter." Aurora tightened her grip. The wood dug into her palm. "Wrong bar." The man smiled. He did not reach the doorframe. He stayed in the light of the streetlamp outside. "Silas sends his regards." Aurora froze. The bat lowered an inch. "Silas?" "He said you might be difficult." The man stepped fully into the room. The light caught the silver ring on his right hand. A signet. Familiar. "He asked us to bring you in." "Where is he?" "Busy." The man tapped the umbrella against his leg. "You have something of his. Or rather, you know something you shouldn't." "I know nothing." "Your friend Eva seems to think otherwise." The man tilted his head toward the bookshelf. "She talks in her sleep. Or she did. Before we woke her up." Aurora's blood went cold. Eva was behind the bookshelf. If they knew she was there, the room wasn't secret. "Let her go." "Come with us. She walks." "And if I don't?" The man raised the umbrella. He pointed the tip at Aurora's chest. "Then we test how well that bat works against a bullet." Aurora glanced at the bookshelf. A shadow moved behind the slats. Eva was watching. "Last chance," the man said. Aurora swung the bat.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Eva looked around [around]"
1"Aurora moved around [around]"
2"The man stepped fully [fully]"
dialogueSentences94
tagDensity0.213
leniency0.426
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.064
92.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1329
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1329
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count2
9
word"comforting"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"tension"
2"scanned"
3"whisper"
4"flickered"
5"vibrated"
6"echoed"
7"weight"
8"familiar"
9"comforting"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"blood went cold"
1"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences159
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences232
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1325
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount890
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity3.15
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva18
Aurora28
Bombay1
Sapphire1
Golden1
Empress1
Closed1
Silas1
Evan2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
places
0"Closed"
globalScore0
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like they buried secrets for a liv"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1325
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences232
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs106
mean12.5
std12.52
cv1.002
sampleLengths
021
15
252
36
47
55
650
73
83
93
1028
114
1228
131
1413
151
166
1749
184
197
202
213
2232
233
2414
252
2616
2719
281
297
304
3129
3220
335
341
351
367
3726
387
399
4032
4116
426
4334
442
458
463
4737
482
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs160
matches
0"was watching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences232
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount894
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.01901565995525727
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008948545861297539
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences232
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences232
mean5.71
std3.62
cv0.634
sampleLengths
09
19
23
35
412
55
613
722
86
97
105
116
1213
137
147
1517
163
173
183
197
208
216
227
234
2411
254
2613
271
285
293
302
313
321
336
3410
358
364
378
388
3911
404
417
422
433
446
457
465
474
484
492
48.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.34051724137931033
totalSentences232
uniqueOpeners79
24.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences137
matches
0"Only the emergency lights over"
ratio0.007
88.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences137
matches
0"She pressed harder."
1"She placed the tumbler on"
2"She wore a crisp trench"
3"Her heels clicked on the"
4"She stopped two feet from"
5"She poured a measure into"
6"She slid it across the"
7"It stopped inches from Eva's"
8"She did not drink."
9"Her hand shook."
10"She remembered the length it"
11"She let her hand drop"
12"She needed to organise the"
13"They were out of alignment."
14"Her fingers hovered over a"
15"She leaned her hips against"
16"She crossed her arms."
17"She stepped forward."
18"She could see the fine"
19"It sounded dry."
ratio0.328
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount128
totalSentences137
matches
0"Aurora polished the same tumbler"
1"The cloth caught on a"
2"She pressed harder."
3"The voice came from the"
4"Aurora did not look up."
5"She placed the tumbler on"
6"The green neon sign from"
7"Eva slid out of the"
8"She wore a crisp trench"
9"Her heels clicked on the"
10"She stopped two feet from"
11"The scent of rain and"
12"Aurora picked up a bottle"
13"She poured a measure into"
14"She slid it across the"
15"It stopped inches from Eva's"
16"Eva wrapped both hands around"
17"She did not drink."
18"Eva lifted the glass"
19"Her hand shook."
ratio0.934
36.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences137
matches
0"If they knew she was"
ratio0.007
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The black-and-white photographs of men in suits who looked like they buried secrets for a living."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences94
tagDensity0.074
leniency0.149
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.021
83.5722%