| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde replied simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.438 | | leniency | 0.875 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 85.39% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1369 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1369 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "charged" | | 4 | "racing" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "structure" | | 9 | "sentinel" | | 10 | "pounding" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" | | 2 | "seem to" | | 3 | "begin to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1374 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.17% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 1136 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.94 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Earth | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | London | 3 | | Isolde | 10 | | Rory | 22 | | Fae | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.532 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "reds that seemed to vibrate with energy, and yellows that glowed with their own internal light" | | 1 | "sounded like whispers just at the edge of" | | 2 | "fruits that seemed to contain tiny stars floating within their translucent skin" | | 3 | "as if drinking in the ambient magic" | | 4 | "seemed magical and wondrous at first, but now she understood its danger" | | 5 | "rhythm that seemed to echo through the Grove" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1374 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 31.23 | | std | 16.6 | | cv | 0.532 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 60 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 55 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 51 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 32 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 50 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 208 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.074 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors — blues deeper than the ocean, reds that seemed to vibrate with energy, and yellows that glowed with their own internal light." | | 1 | "The air felt different here — thicker somehow, charged with energy that made the hairs on her arms stand on end." | | 2 | "Through the gaps, Rory caught glimpses of a sky that wasn't London's — a deep, velvety purple with stars she didn't recognize, even as the sun still shone through the leaves in dappled patches." | | 3 | "Ahead, the trees thinned to reveal a structure that hadn't been visible before — a stone circle similar to the one they'd passed through, but older, weathered by time that didn't seem to touch the rest of the Grove." | | 4 | "Rory followed her gaze upward to see the distortion hanging in the air above the altar stone — a shimmering in the air like heat haze, but with an iridescent quality that hurt her eyes if she stared too long." | | 5 | "For a moment, Rory caught glimpses of another landscape through the distortion — amber skies, sprawling vineyards, something that might have been distant spires." | | 6 | "As they turned back toward the path they'd come, Rory noticed something new — a small sapling growing near the edge of the stone circle, its leaves the same deep crimson as the Heartstone pendant." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1131 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "growing hot against her" |
| | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03359858532272325 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011494252873563218 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 14.46 | | std | 7.82 | | cv | 0.541 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 60.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4105263157894737 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 46.95% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she heard the rustle" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, reaching out to" | | 1 | "She jumped back, her heart" | | 2 | "She reached beneath her shirt" | | 3 | "She hadn't believed them then." | | 4 | "she breathed, understanding dawning" | | 5 | "she said, the pendant growing" | | 6 | "She stumbled back from the" | | 7 | "She could feel the energy" |
| | ratio | 0.113 | |
| 65.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted as Aurora" | | 1 | "The pendant beneath her shirt" | | 2 | "Isolde moved silently, her silver" | | 3 | "Rory's eyes widened as the" | | 4 | "The clearing stretched impossibly far" | | 5 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors" | | 6 | "The sky above remained London's" | | 7 | "she whispered, reaching out to" | | 8 | "Isolde's lavender eyes followed Rory's" | | 9 | "Nyx drifted closer to a" | | 10 | "Rory stepped deeper into the" | | 11 | "The air felt different here" | | 12 | "Every breath tasted of something" | | 13 | "The trees twisted upward, their" | | 14 | "Isolde warned, though her voice" | | 15 | "Rory looked down to see" | | 16 | "She jumped back, her heart" | | 17 | "Nyx said, their whisper seeming" | | 18 | "The Grove opened into a" | | 19 | "Rory approached cautiously, kneeling at" |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing in this impossible" | | 1 | "As if summoned by her" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 5.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors — blues deeper than the ocean, reds that seemed to vibrate with energy, and yellows that glowed with their own internal…" | | 1 | "Nyx drifted closer to a massive tree at the center of the clearing, their violet eyes studying the bark that swirled with patterns like liquid mercury." | | 2 | "Instead, she heard the rustle of leaves in a wind she couldn't feel, the faint chiming that might have been insects or something else entirely, and occasionally…" | | 3 | "The pendant against her skin had grown warmer, a steady pulse that matched her quickening heartbeat." | | 4 | "In another, vines hung heavy with fruits that seemed to contain tiny stars floating within their translucent skin." | | 5 | "Ahead, the trees thinned to reveal a structure that hadn't been visible before — a stone circle similar to the one they'd passed through, but older, weathered b…" | | 6 | "The dagger felt colder than usual here, as if drinking in the ambient magic." | | 7 | "Rory followed her gaze upward to see the distortion hanging in the air above the altar stone — a shimmering in the air like heat haze, but with an iridescent qu…" | | 8 | "For a moment, Rory caught glimpses of another landscape through the distortion — amber skies, sprawling vineyards, something that might have been distant spires…" | | 9 | "She could feel the energy flowing between the pendant and the sapling, a recognition that went beyond mere magic." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde warned, though her voice held no urgency" | | 1 | "Nyx said, their whisper seeming to come from all directions at once" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her silver hair catching the impossible light" | | 3 | "she breathed, understanding dawning" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx agreed (agree)" | | 4 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" | | 6 | "Isolde warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.406 | | leniency | 0.813 | | rawRatio | 0.538 | | effectiveRatio | 0.438 | |