Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXBR38NVBM2DRVC9Y4JR8Y

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Duration:
33.1s
Cost:
$0.004620
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shifted as Aurora stepped past the ancient oak standing stones, the temperature dropping several degrees. The pendant beneath her shirt pulsed once, a faint warmth spreading across her chest. Behind her, Nyx flowed from shadow to shadow, their form coalescing as they entered the space. Isolde moved silently, her silver hair unmoving despite the sudden breeze that carried the scent of flowers unknown to Earth. Rory's eyes widened as the Grove revealed itself. The clearing stretched impossibly far beyond what the park's boundaries should allow. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors — blues deeper than the ocean, reds that seemed to vibrate with energy, and yellows that glowed with their own internal light. The sky above remained London's grey, yet within this space, sunlight filtered through leaves that hadn't existed moments before. "How is this possible?" she whispered, reaching out to touch a flower that shimmered between silver and gold. Isolde's lavender eyes followed Rory's movement. "The Grove exists where it chooses. Time and space bend to its will, not the other way around." Nyx drifted closer to a massive tree at the center of the clearing, their violet eyes studying the bark that swirled with patterns like liquid mercury. "This place hums with old magic. Older than me." Rory stepped deeper into the Grove, her boots making no sound on the springy moss beneath her feet. The air felt different here — thicker somehow, charged with energy that made the hairs on her arms stand on end. Every breath tasted of something sweet and ancient, like honey and herbs she couldn't name. The trees twisted upward, their trunks impossibly wide, branches weaving together to form a natural cathedral ceiling. Through the gaps, Rory caught glimpses of a sky that wasn't London's — a deep, velvety purple with stars she didn't recognize, even as the sun still shone through the leaves in dappled patches. "Watch where you step," Isolde warned, though her voice held no urgency. "The ground here is as alive as the rest." Rory looked down to see the moss shifting beneath her feet, tiny tendrils curling around the edges of her boots before retreating. She jumped back, her heart racing. "It won't harm you," Nyx said, their whisper seeming to come from all directions at once. "It's merely curious. Few mortals tread here anymore." As they moved deeper, Rory noticed the sounds of the city had vanished completely. No traffic, no sirens, no distant chatter of people. Instead, she heard the rustle of leaves in a wind she couldn't feel, the faint chiming that might have been insects or something else entirely, and occasionally, what sounded like whispers just at the edge of hearing. The Grove opened into a wider space where a small pool reflected the impossible sky. Rory approached cautiously, kneeling at the edge. The water was crystal clear, yet she couldn't see the bottom, no matter how deep it should have been. "What's down there?" "Answers," Isolde replied simply. "And questions. The water shows what it wishes to show." Rory's fingers twitched with the urge to touch it, but something held her back. A primal instinct warning her that some waters weren't meant for mortal hands. Nyx drifted to the opposite side of the pool, their form becoming more solid in the strange light. "There are passages here. Doorways to other places, if you know how to look." As they spoke, Rory noticed what appeared to be pathways leading away from the clearing in several directions. Each seemed to shift and change when she looked directly at them, only to stabilize when she focused elsewhere. "Where do they lead?" "Everywhere and nowhere," Isolde said, her silver hair catching the impossible light. "Some lead deeper into Fae territory. Others to places between worlds. One might even take you home, should you choose to follow it." Rory stood, brushing dirt from her knees. The pendant against her skin had grown warmer, a steady pulse that matched her quickening heartbeat. She reached beneath her shirt to grasp it, the crimson stone cool despite the warmth it radiated. "It likes this place," she murmured. "It recognizes kinship," Nyx agreed. "Both exist between worlds, in a manner of speaking." As they continued their exploration, Rory noticed the flora changing subtly as they moved through different sections of the Grove. In one area, mushrooms grew as tall as her waist, their caps glowing with soft blue light. In another, vines hung heavy with fruits that seemed to contain tiny stars floating within their translucent skin. "Can I...?" Rory reached toward one of the star-fruits. "I wouldn't," Isolde said, though she made no move to stop her. "Fae food binds. One taste, and you might never want to leave." Rory pulled her hand back, remembering the old stories her grandmother used to tell about the dangers of accepting anything from the Fae. She hadn't believed them then. Now, standing in this impossible place, she wasn't so sure. The ground sloped downward as they moved further in, the air growing cooler still. Rory wrapped her arms around herself, wishing she'd brought a jacket despite the mild London weather they'd left behind. Ahead, the trees thinned to reveal a structure that hadn't been visible before — a stone circle similar to the one they'd passed through, but older, weathered by time that didn't seem to touch the rest of the Grove. Massive stones stood sentinel around a flat altar-like stone in the center. Rory approached slowly, her fingers finding the Fae-forged blade at her belt. The dagger felt colder than usual here, as if drinking in the ambient magic. The stones hummed with energy, a low vibration she felt in her bones rather than heard with her ears. Nyx flowed around the circle, their form becoming more defined in the presence of the ancient magic. "This is a place of power. Old as the hills, older than some kingdoms." Isolde stepped to the center of the circle, her feet leaving no impression in the moss that grew thick between the stones. "This is where the Veil grows thin. Where worlds touch." Rory followed her gaze upward to see the distortion hanging in the air above the altar stone — a shimmering in the air like heat haze, but with an iridescent quality that hurt her eyes if she stared too long. "The Veil," she breathed, understanding dawning. "Part of it," Isolde agreed. "A weak point where the boundaries between worlds grow thin. The Wardens monitor such places, though they can't always find them all." As if summoned by her words, a ripple passed through the air. The space around the stone circle seemed to waver, reality bending like water. For a moment, Rory caught glimpses of another landscape through the distortion — amber skies, sprawling vineyards, something that might have been distant spires. "Dymas," she said, the pendant growing hot against her palm. "I can see it." Nyx moved closer to the distortion, their form stretching. "The Prince's realm hungers. Always hungers." The vision faded as quickly as it had appeared, leaving Rory breathless and dizzy. She stumbled back from the circle, clutching the stone in her hand as if it were an anchor. "Careful," Isolde warned. "Gazing too long into other worlds risks letting them gaze back into you." Rory nodded, her heart pounding. The Grove had seemed magical and wondrous at first, but now she understood its danger. This was a place of power, ancient and wild, and it followed rules she couldn't begin to comprehend. As they turned back toward the path they'd come, Rory noticed something new — a small sapling growing near the edge of the stone circle, its leaves the same deep crimson as the Heartstone pendant. The pendant pulsed in response, a steady rhythm that seemed to echo through the Grove. "Some connections run deeper than others," Isolde said, noticing Rory's attention on the sapling. "Some are written in the fabric of the worlds themselves." Rory reached out, her fingers hovering just above the tiny leaves. She could feel the energy flowing between the pendant and the sapling, a recognition that went beyond mere magic. Something older. Something fundamental. The Grove seemed to hold its breath around them, waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde replied simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.063
85.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1369
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"cautiously"
2"slowly"
3"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1369
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"structure"
count1
9
word"sentinel"
count1
10
word"pounding"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"shimmered"
3"charged"
4"racing"
5"whisper"
6"crystal"
7"pulse"
8"structure"
9"sentinel"
10"pounding"
11"echo"
12"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
2"seem to"
3"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1374
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
53.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1136
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Nyx7
Earth1
Grove8
London3
Isolde10
Rory22
Fae2
Fae-forged1
Heartstone1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Grove"
3"Isolde"
4"Rory"
places
0"Earth"
1"London"
2"Fae"
globalScore0.532
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"reds that seemed to vibrate with energy, and yellows that glowed with their own internal light"
1"sounded like whispers just at the edge of"
2"fruits that seemed to contain tiny stars floating within their translucent skin"
3"as if drinking in the ambient magic"
4"seemed magical and wondrous at first, but now she understood its danger"
5"rhythm that seemed to echo through the Grove"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1374
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean31.23
std16.6
cv0.532
sampleLengths
067
166
218
324
435
554
651
721
828
924
1060
1141
123
1314
1427
1532
1637
174
1835
1940
206
2114
2255
239
2424
2538
2633
2751
2845
2931
3032
3140
326
3327
3449
3514
3615
3732
3816
3938
4050
4124
4234
4310
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs208
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences95
ratio0.074
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors — blues deeper than the ocean, reds that seemed to vibrate with energy, and yellows that glowed with their own internal light."
1"The air felt different here — thicker somehow, charged with energy that made the hairs on her arms stand on end."
2"Through the gaps, Rory caught glimpses of a sky that wasn't London's — a deep, velvety purple with stars she didn't recognize, even as the sun still shone through the leaves in dappled patches."
3"Ahead, the trees thinned to reveal a structure that hadn't been visible before — a stone circle similar to the one they'd passed through, but older, weathered by time that didn't seem to touch the rest of the Grove."
4"Rory followed her gaze upward to see the distortion hanging in the air above the altar stone — a shimmering in the air like heat haze, but with an iridescent quality that hurt her eyes if she stared too long."
5"For a moment, Rory caught glimpses of another landscape through the distortion — amber skies, sprawling vineyards, something that might have been distant spires."
6"As they turned back toward the path they'd come, Rory noticed something new — a small sapling growing near the edge of the stone circle, its leaves the same deep crimson as the Heartstone pendant."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1131
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"growing hot against her"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03359858532272325
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.011494252873563218
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean14.46
std7.82
cv0.541
sampleLengths
017
114
216
320
48
512
627
719
818
96
1018
1126
129
1318
1421
1515
1617
1734
1812
199
2022
216
2216
238
2414
259
2637
2715
287
2919
303
314
3210
3314
3413
3518
3614
3718
3819
394
4012
4123
427
4316
4417
456
465
479
4820
4917
60.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4105263157894737
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners39
46.95% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Instead, she heard the rustle"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences71
matches
0"she whispered, reaching out to"
1"She jumped back, her heart"
2"She reached beneath her shirt"
3"She hadn't believed them then."
4"she breathed, understanding dawning"
5"she said, the pendant growing"
6"She stumbled back from the"
7"She could feel the energy"
ratio0.113
65.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences71
matches
0"The air shifted as Aurora"
1"The pendant beneath her shirt"
2"Isolde moved silently, her silver"
3"Rory's eyes widened as the"
4"The clearing stretched impossibly far"
5"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors"
6"The sky above remained London's"
7"she whispered, reaching out to"
8"Isolde's lavender eyes followed Rory's"
9"Nyx drifted closer to a"
10"Rory stepped deeper into the"
11"The air felt different here"
12"Every breath tasted of something"
13"The trees twisted upward, their"
14"Isolde warned, though her voice"
15"Rory looked down to see"
16"She jumped back, her heart"
17"Nyx said, their whisper seeming"
18"The Grove opened into a"
19"Rory approached cautiously, kneeling at"
ratio0.789
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Now, standing in this impossible"
1"As if summoned by her"
ratio0.028
5.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors — blues deeper than the ocean, reds that seemed to vibrate with energy, and yellows that glowed with their own internal…"
1"Nyx drifted closer to a massive tree at the center of the clearing, their violet eyes studying the bark that swirled with patterns like liquid mercury."
2"Instead, she heard the rustle of leaves in a wind she couldn't feel, the faint chiming that might have been insects or something else entirely, and occasionally…"
3"The pendant against her skin had grown warmer, a steady pulse that matched her quickening heartbeat."
4"In another, vines hung heavy with fruits that seemed to contain tiny stars floating within their translucent skin."
5"Ahead, the trees thinned to reveal a structure that hadn't been visible before — a stone circle similar to the one they'd passed through, but older, weathered b…"
6"The dagger felt colder than usual here, as if drinking in the ambient magic."
7"Rory followed her gaze upward to see the distortion hanging in the air above the altar stone — a shimmering in the air like heat haze, but with an iridescent qu…"
8"For a moment, Rory caught glimpses of another landscape through the distortion — amber skies, sprawling vineyards, something that might have been distant spires…"
9"She could feel the energy flowing between the pendant and the sapling, a recognition that went beyond mere magic."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Isolde warned, though her voice held no urgency"
1"Nyx said, their whisper seeming to come from all directions at once"
2"Isolde said, her silver hair catching the impossible light"
3"she breathed, understanding dawning"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde warned (warn)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"Nyx agreed (agree)"
4"she breathed (breathe)"
5"Isolde agreed (agree)"
6"Isolde warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.406
leniency0.813
rawRatio0.538
effectiveRatio0.438
71.8617%