Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXBVD25DZC5Z78DN5G9W5F

Run Details

Duration:
45.8s
Cost:
$0.001605
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt on Eva’s front door gave a heavy, grinding release. Aurora pulled the steel bar back, the chain clicking with a sharp metallic snap. She cracked the wood-paneled door open just enough to reveal the hallway. Lucien Moreau stood there, a pillar of tailored charcoal against the dingy yellow paint of the building. He didn't look like he lived on Brick Lane. He looked like he was standing in a boardroom in Mayfair. "Rory." His voice wasn't a whisper, but it didn't require shouting either. It slid through the crack and settled heavily in the stagnant air of the flat. Aurora’s hand tightened on the frame. She knew that voice. She knew the way it dipped at the vowels, the way the syllables rolled off a tongue trained in four different languages before it learned English. She also knew the scent that accompanied it—cedar, leather, and something faintly metallic that smelled like rain on burnt iron. She unlocked the deadbolt fully and shoved the door inward. Lucien didn't step aside to let her see the chaos within. He simply stepped past her. The movement was too fluid, predatory. He adjusted his umbrella, tapping the handle against the threshold with a deliberate, rhythmic *clack-clack*. "You're not supposed to be here," Aurora said, pushing the door shut. "Security system at the flat downstairs is malfunctioning," Lucien replied, his gaze sweeping the cramped entrance. He took in the shoe rack overflowing with mismatched boots and the coat rack groaning under the weight of damp trench coats. He didn't even flinch at the pile of delivery flyers stuck to the side of the fridge. "Besides, I haven't been back in London in three years. Couldn't you give the poor woman a moment to miss me?" "You've been in London," Aurora corrected, turning the three heavy deadbolts. The sliding metal echoed through the corridor. "I watched you get out of a cab on Greyhound Road two weeks ago." Lucien’s one black eye narrowed, the other amber eye widening slightly as he processed the accusation. He rested his ivory-handled cane against the wall, the tip digging into the worn linoleum. "I was observing." "In the pouring rain?" "Exactly." Aurora moved into the living room, leaving him standing near the entrance like a dark cloud in a grey sky. She didn't offer him a seat. There wasn't one. The only furniture was the lumpy sofa and a coffee table littered with half-eaten sandwiches and loose A4 papers. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, was sleeping on the armchair. It didn't wake up. The animal knew better than to disturb a predator of Lucien's caliber. Lucien turned and followed her, his gaze lingering on the open blinds where rain streaked down the glass. "You look tired." It wasn't a question. He walked over to the small kitchenette, ignoring the takeaway menus plastered to the cupboards. He inspected the red stain on the ceramic counter—the remains of a takeaway curry spilled two days ago that she hadn't had the heart to scrub off. "I’m working," she said, turning to face him. She crossed her arms over her chest, the fabric of her oversized hoodie pulling tight across her shoulder. The scar on her left wrist, a thin crescent from a glass door she’d tried to jump through in Cardiff, ached, a dull throb reminding her of the cost of that night. "I have deliveries in twenty minutes." "Yu-Fei Cheung's?" "How did you know?" "The van is painted gold. The logo is obvious." Lucien reached into his pocket and pulled out a slim black device. He tapped it, the screen lighting up with a map. He swiped his thumb across it, then slid the phone into his breast pocket. "I know everything, Rory." That was the truth. That was the terrifying part. A half-demon fixer who smelled like rain and burnt iron had found her address from the vague movements of a golden delivery van. "Don't say my name like that." "Why not? It's what you do." He stepped closer, closing the distance between them. The air pressure in the room seemed to drop. The smell of his cologne overpowered the lingering spices from Eva’s cooking downstairs. Aurora’s heart hammered against her ribs. She hated that it did. She had spent three years forging a new life, one where she was just a quiet delivery girl and not the girl who had burned down the bridge between her and the supernatural world. "That part of my life is finished," she said, her voice steadier than she felt. "I left because I didn't fit in. You were a ghost story. A legend. Now you're standing in my kitchen." "And now you're talking to me." He tilted his head, the platinum hair slicked back falling slightly over his forehead. The heterochromia caught the dim light from the window—amber and obsidian. "You didn't answer your phone when I called after I got your number from the barista at the coffee place down the street." "I don't know what you're talking about." "Liar." He took another step. Now he was close enough that she could feel the heat radiating off him. It was a heat that didn't belong in a damp, curry-scented flat on Brick Lane. "It's unlisted." "Phones are never truly unlisted, just hard to find." He raised a hand, his long fingers hovering near her cheek. He stopped inches away. "Your pulse is racing, Aurora. You think I'm a monster, so you run. But you always come back." Aurora jerked her head back, breaking the proximity. "That's not true." "It is." He lowered his hand, gesturing vaguely around the room. "Look at this. Books. Chaos. You're running from something, but you're also running to something. You're staying in East London where it's messy and cheap. You're afraid to go back to the life you thought you wanted." "I have a life here." "Do you?" He stepped past her and walked toward the window. He looked out at the street, where a bus roared by, splashing water onto the sidewalk. "Or are you just surviving? Because you look like you're starving." "I have a shift in ten minutes." "Then go. I won't stop you." He turned back to face her, his expression unreadable, a mask of polished indifference that she knew was paper-thin. "But you should know, I didn't come all this way just to watch you hand out plastic containers of curry sauce." "What do you want?" Lucien smiled. It didn't reach his eyes. "A drink. With you. In a place that doesn't smell of garlic and old shoes." "I can't. I'm working." "Fine. Wait." He reached into his jacket again, this time pulling out a card. He placed it on the coffee table, right on top of the sandwich wrapper. "Call me. Or don't. But I’ll be back tomorrow." Aurora stared at the card. It was made of heavy stock, black with gold embossing. On it, there was no name, only a number and a symbol—a jagged sigil that looked uncomfortably like a closed eye. "Leave," she said. Lucien picked up his cane and gave a small, fluid bow. It was theatrical, mocking the tension in the air. "Goodnight, Rory." The door clicked shut behind him. The lock engaged with three distinct clicks. Aurora stood frozen for a long moment, listening to the hum of the refrigerator and the distant sound of traffic on the street below. The silence in the room felt different now. Heavy. Invasive. She walked over to the window and pressed her forehead against the cold glass. The card was still there, lying in the grease of a leftover samosa. She looked down at her reflection in the glass—dark hair, tired eyes, the scar on her wrist catching the light. She picked up the card and placed it in her pocket, next to her phone. Then she checked the time. She was late.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.349
leniency0.698
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.047
88.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1327
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1327
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"processed"
count1
5
word"predator"
count1
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"rhythmic"
2"weight"
3"echoed"
4"processed"
5"predator"
6"throb"
7"could feel"
8"pulse"
9"racing"
10"unreadable"
11"tension"
12"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
93.02% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1315
ratio0.001
matches
0"clack-clack"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount987
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Moreau1
Brick2
Lane2
Mayfair1
English1
Lucien9
Cardiff1
Aurora9
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Mayfair"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
39.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like he was standing in a boardroo"
1"smelled like rain on burnt iron"
2"smelled like rain and burnt iron had found"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1315
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"knew that voice"
1"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean25.29
std19.65
cv0.777
sampleLengths
025
149
21
326
456
510
637
712
876
932
1031
113
124
131
1448
1525
1618
173
1846
1964
202
214
2249
2332
246
2536
2645
2735
2854
297
3034
312
3242
338
343
3548
365
3738
387
3946
404
4122
424
4337
4436
453
4620
472
4813
4948
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was standing"
1"was sleeping"
17.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences114
ratio0.044
matches
0"She also knew the scent that accompanied it—cedar, leather, and something faintly metallic that smelled like rain on burnt iron."
1"He inspected the red stain on the ceramic counter—the remains of a takeaway curry spilled two days ago that she hadn't had the heart to scrub off."
2"The heterochromia caught the dim light from the window—amber and obsidian."
3"On it, there was no name, only a number and a symbol—a jagged sigil that looked uncomfortably like a closed eye."
4"She looked down at her reflection in the glass—dark hair, tired eyes, the scar on her wrist catching the light."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount998
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.026052104208416832
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01002004008016032
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean11.54
std7.55
cv0.655
sampleLengths
011
114
212
317
49
511
61
711
815
96
104
1126
1220
1310
1411
155
166
1715
1812
1916
2022
2117
2221
2311
247
2514
2616
2715
283
294
301
3120
326
333
3419
359
364
3712
3818
393
404
4115
4227
438
4418
4532
466
472
484
4921
47.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3508771929824561
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners40
40.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Then she checked the time."
ratio0.012
0.49% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences82
matches
0"She cracked the wood-paneled door"
1"He didn't look like he"
2"He looked like he was"
3"His voice wasn't a whisper,"
4"It slid through the crack"
5"She knew that voice."
6"She knew the way it"
7"She also knew the scent"
8"She unlocked the deadbolt fully"
9"He simply stepped past her."
10"He adjusted his umbrella, tapping"
11"He took in the shoe"
12"He didn't even flinch at"
13"He rested his ivory-handled cane"
14"She didn't offer him a"
15"It didn't wake up."
16"It wasn't a question."
17"He walked over to the"
18"He inspected the red stain"
19"she said, turning to face"
ratio0.549
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences82
matches
0"The deadbolt on Eva’s front"
1"Aurora pulled the steel bar"
2"She cracked the wood-paneled door"
3"Lucien Moreau stood there, a"
4"He didn't look like he"
5"He looked like he was"
6"His voice wasn't a whisper,"
7"It slid through the crack"
8"Aurora’s hand tightened on the"
9"She knew that voice."
10"She knew the way it"
11"She also knew the scent"
12"She unlocked the deadbolt fully"
13"Lucien didn't step aside to"
14"He simply stepped past her."
15"The movement was too fluid,"
16"He adjusted his umbrella, tapping"
17"Aurora said, pushing the door"
18"Lucien replied, his gaze sweeping"
19"He took in the shoe"
ratio0.951
60.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Now he was close enough"
ratio0.012
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A half-demon fixer who smelled like rain and burnt iron had found her address from the vague movements of a golden delivery van."
1"She had spent three years forging a new life, one where she was just a quiet delivery girl and not the girl who had burned down the bridge between her and the s…"
2"It was a heat that didn't belong in a damp, curry-scented flat on Brick Lane."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Lucien replied, his gaze sweeping the cramped entrance"
1"she said, turning to face him"
2"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
3"He raised, his long fingers hovering near her cheek"
4"He reached, this time pulling out a card"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.14
leniency0.279
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.047
77.7004%