Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXCC6RVD44PFWG7EC63HX1

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Duration:
39.3s
Cost:
$0.033666
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The pint glass slipped through his fingers. Time stopped in the space between Silas catching it—his reflexes still sharp despite the years—and him setting it carefully on the bar. When he looked up, the woman standing in the doorway wore Aurora's face, but everything else belonged to a stranger. She'd cut her hair. Shorter than he remembered, angled sharply at her jaw. The leather jacket hung off shoulders that seemed narrower somehow, more compact. But it was her eyes that made him pause mid-polish of the glass—those bright blue eyes that once sparked with mischief now held something darker, something that reminded him of men he'd known in Prague. "Christ." The word escaped before he could stop it. Aurora's mouth twisted. Not quite a smile. "That bad?" "Thought you were in Cardiff." He set down the glass, braced both hands on the bar. His knee throbbed—it always did when something surprised him, as if his body kept score of every shock. "Was." She crossed to the bar with measured steps, nothing like the bounce she'd had at nineteen when she'd first wandered into the Nest looking for Eva. "You still make that whisky thing? The one with the honey?" "Hot toddy." He reached for the bottle without thinking, muscle memory taking over. "It's July." "I know what month it is." The edge in her voice made him pause. He poured anyway, measuring out the whisky with the precision his old trainers had drilled into him. The ritual of it bought him time—hot water from the espresso machine, honey from the squeeze bottle, lemon juice, clove. His hands moved while his mind worked. She'd left London three years ago. Maybe four. Time blurred when you ran a bar—days bled together, marked only by regulars and their orders. But he remembered the morning Eva had come in, red-eyed and tight-lipped, saying Rory had gone home. Family emergency. He'd known better than to press. "Eva know you're back?" Aurora's fingers drummed against the bar top. Once, twice, stopped. "No." He slid the toddy across the scarred wood. She wrapped both hands around the glass, and he caught sight of the crescent scar on her left wrist. At least that hadn't changed. Small mercy. "You planning to tell her?" "Haven't decided." She took a long drink, winced. "You made it stronger." "You look like you need it stronger." This time her laugh had an edge that could draw blood. "Silas Blackwood, master of subtlety." "Was never my strong suit." He leaned against the back counter, arms crossed. The bar was empty—too early for the evening crowd, too late for the lunch stragglers. Just them and the ghosts in the photographs on the walls. "What happened to pre-law?" "Finished it." She stared into her glass. "Did a year at the bar association. Quit." "Quit." He let the word hang there. "My father was thrilled." Her voice went flat. "Spent all that money. All those years. His daughter, the barrister. Following in his footsteps." Silas remembered Brendan Carter from the few times Aurora had mentioned him—a man who measured worth in achievements and saw failure as a moral weakness. The kind of man who'd have flourished in the Service, all ambition and no compassion. "What'd you do instead?" She took another drink. Longer this time. When she set the glass down, her knuckles were white against the ceramic. "Worked for a charity. Refugee assistance. Legal aid, mostly. Helping people navigate asylum applications." "That's good work." "Was." The correction came sharp. "Until the funding dried up. Government cuts. We lasted eight months after I started. They kept the Cardiff office, shut down everything else." She picked at the lemon slice floating in her drink. "Thirty-seven people out of work. Hundreds of families with nowhere to turn." The bitterness in her voice reminded him of after-action reports, when the collateral damage exceeded acceptable parameters. He'd written enough of them to recognize the particular way guilt and anger alloyed into something corroding. "Not your fault." "Isn't it?" She met his eyes, and there it was—the thing that made her a stranger. Something broken and badly mended, the repair visible in every line of her face. "I convinced three of them to leave private practice. Told them it mattered. That we were making a difference." "You were." "For eight months." She pushed the glass away. "My father said I should've stayed at the bar association. Said I'd always been too idealistic. Too emotional. Said I'd proven his point." Silas felt his jaw tighten. In his Service days, he'd met men like Brendan Carter. Men who equated empathy with weakness, who saw the world in binaries. They made excellent analysts and terrible fathers. "And your mum?" Aurora's expression shifted. Softened, then hardened again, like she'd caught herself feeling something and locked it away. "She tried. But she agrees with him. She just has the grace not to say so." Outside, a taxi rumbled past. The green neon sign flickered, throwing shadows across Aurora's face. She looked older than twenty-five. She looked like the recruits he'd seen wash out of training—the ones who'd wanted to change the world and found it unchanged by their wanting. "Why'd you come here?" he asked. "To London. To the Nest." She traced the rim of her glass. "Couldn't stay in Cardiff. Couldn't face Eva yet. Didn't know where else to go." "You could've called." "Could've." She picked up the glass, set it down again. "You know what the worst part is? I still believed it. Right up until they locked the doors. Believed that caring enough, working hard enough, would matter. That there was some equation where effort plus intention equaled change." Her laugh scraped against something raw. "You must think I'm naive." Silas turned, pulled a second glass from the shelf. Poured two fingers of whisky—the good stuff, the bottle he kept for himself and the rare few who'd earned it. He slid one across to her, kept one for himself. "I think you're twenty-five and you learned something most people don't figure out until they're fifty. If they're lucky." "What's that?" "That the world breaks your heart." He raised his glass. "Question is what you do after." Aurora stared at him. Then at the whisky. Then back at him. Something shifted in her expression—not quite surrender, but an acknowledgment. She picked up the glass. "I don't know who I am anymore." The admission came quiet. "The Rory who left London wouldn't recognize me. And I can't go back to being her. Don't even know if I want to." Silas thought about Prague. About the man he'd been before the operation went south. About the choices that couldn't be unmade. "Then you figure out who you are now," he said. "One day at a time." She drank. Grimaced. Set down the glass with careful precision. "I got a job. Delivery person for a Chinese restaurant. The Golden Empress. Owner's name is Yu-Fei Cheung. She didn't ask about my law degree." "That's something." "Is it?" Aurora's smile held no warmth. "My father would say I'm wasting my education. Eva would say I'm running away. What would you say?" Silas considered her. This stranger with Aurora's face. This woman who'd learned too young that good intentions weren't armor against the world's indifference. "I'd say you need somewhere to stay," he replied. "Flat upstairs is empty. Been meaning to rent it out." Her eyes widened. "Silas—" "Month-to-month lease. Pay when you can. It's sitting empty anyway." "I can't—" "You can. And you will. Because you need time to figure out what comes next, and you're not going to do that sleeping on someone's couch or in some hostel." Aurora opened her mouth. Closed it. Opened it again. "Why?" He thought about all the ways he could answer. About second chances and old debts. About seeing potential in damaged things. But in the end, he settled for truth. "Because someone did it for me once. When I needed it." She looked away. Her throat worked. When she turned back, her eyes were bright with something that might've been tears if she'd let it be. "Thank you," she whispered. Silas raised his glass. "Welcome back, Rory."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.338
leniency0.677
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1388
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1388
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"measured"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"navigate"
count1
4
word"parameters"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"potential"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"measured"
2"footsteps"
3"navigate"
4"parameters"
5"flickered"
6"traced"
7"warmth"
8"potential"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1366
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount871
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Silas7
Aurora10
Prague2
Nest1
Eva2
London1
Rory1
Brendan2
Carter2
Service2
persons
0"Silas"
1"Aurora"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Brendan"
5"Carter"
places
0"Prague"
1"London"
2"Service"
globalScore0.926
windowScore0.833
20.69% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed narrower somehow, more compact"
1"looked like the recruits he'd seen wash o"
2"not quite surrender, but an acknowledgment"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.732
wordCount1366
matches
0"not quite surrender, but an acknowledgment"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean21.02
std16.21
cv0.771
sampleLengths
07
142
260
39
49
534
638
715
86
952
1049
114
1211
1334
145
1512
167
1716
1843
1915
207
2123
2240
234
2434
253
2650
2734
283
2949
302
3131
3234
333
3433
3545
3611
3721
383
3959
4039
4119
422
4316
4427
4534
4621
4715
4810
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs170
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences142
ratio0.077
matches
0"Time stopped in the space between Silas catching it—his reflexes still sharp despite the years—and him setting it carefully on the bar."
1"But it was her eyes that made him pause mid-polish of the glass—those bright blue eyes that once sparked with mischief now held something darker, something that reminded him of men he'd known in Prague."
2"His knee throbbed—it always did when something surprised him, as if his body kept score of every shock."
3"The ritual of it bought him time—hot water from the espresso machine, honey from the squeeze bottle, lemon juice, clove."
4"Time blurred when you ran a bar—days bled together, marked only by regulars and their orders."
5"The bar was empty—too early for the evening crowd, too late for the lunch stragglers."
6"Silas remembered Brendan Carter from the few times Aurora had mentioned him—a man who measured worth in achievements and saw failure as a moral weakness."
7"\"Isn't it?\" She met his eyes, and there it was—the thing that made her a stranger."
8"She looked like the recruits he'd seen wash out of training—the ones who'd wanted to change the world and found it unchanged by their wanting."
9"Poured two fingers of whisky—the good stuff, the bottle he kept for himself and the rare few who'd earned it."
10"Something shifted in her expression—not quite surrender, but an acknowledgment."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount888
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.038288288288288286
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006756756756756757
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean9.62
std7.6
cv0.79
sampleLengths
07
122
220
34
49
512
635
79
83
94
102
1116
1218
1327
1411
1513
162
176
188
1917
2020
217
226
232
2416
2517
262
276
284
297
303
311
328
3319
345
352
365
378
384
397
4011
415
4213
4315
4411
454
467
478
487
498
74.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4788732394366197
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners68
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences89
matches
0"Once, twice, stopped."
1"At least that hadn't changed."
2"Just them and the ghosts"
3"Then at the whisky."
4"Then back at him."
ratio0.056
67.19% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences89
matches
0"She'd cut her hair."
1"He set down the glass,"
2"His knee throbbed—it always did"
3"She crossed to the bar"
4"He reached for the bottle"
5"He poured anyway, measuring out"
6"His hands moved while his"
7"She'd left London three years"
8"He'd known better than to"
9"He slid the toddy across"
10"She wrapped both hands around"
11"She took a long drink,"
12"He leaned against the back"
13"She stared into her glass"
14"He let the word hang"
15"Her voice went flat"
16"She took another drink."
17"She picked at the lemon"
18"He'd written enough of them"
19"She met his eyes, and"
ratio0.382
94.83% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences89
matches
0"The pint glass slipped through"
1"Time stopped in the space"
2"She'd cut her hair."
3"The leather jacket hung off"
4"The word escaped before he"
5"Aurora's mouth twisted."
6"He set down the glass,"
7"His knee throbbed—it always did"
8"She crossed to the bar"
9"He reached for the bottle"
10"The edge in her voice"
11"He poured anyway, measuring out"
12"The ritual of it bought"
13"His hands moved while his"
14"She'd left London three years"
15"Time blurred when you ran"
16"He'd known better than to"
17"Aurora's fingers drummed against the"
18"He slid the toddy across"
19"She wrapped both hands around"
ratio0.73
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"But it was her eyes that made him pause mid-polish of the glass—those bright blue eyes that once sparked with mischief now held something darker, something that…"
1"His knee throbbed—it always did when something surprised him, as if his body kept score of every shock."
2"Silas remembered Brendan Carter from the few times Aurora had mentioned him—a man who measured worth in achievements and saw failure as a moral weakness."
3"This woman who'd learned too young that good intentions weren't armor against the world's indifference."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.062
leniency0.123
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.031
84.8440%