Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXCN2759T21KSVBPGJMQ73

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Duration:
41.9s
Cost:
$0.025128

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks loomed against the starless sky like gnarled fingers, their standing stones arrangement casting twisted shadows across the grove floor. Aurora stepped through the boundary, her delivery bag slung over one shoulder, the familiar weight of the Heartstone pendant resting against her collarbone. The crimson gem pulsed with its usual faint warmth, but something about its rhythm felt different tonight—irregular, almost anxious. She'd come here searching for answers about the pendant's origins, following whispered hints from Silas about old magic that lingered in Richmond Park after dark. The grove had always felt otherworldly during her previous visits, but those had been in daylight, when wildflowers bloomed impossibly bright and time seemed to stretch like honey. Now, in the dead of night, the clearing held an entirely different character. Her trainers crunched softly on fallen leaves that shouldn't exist in eternal spring. The sound carried too far in the still air, echoing back from directions that made no geographical sense. Aurora paused, listening. Nothing moved. Not even a whisper of wind stirred the branches overhead. That was the first thing that felt wrong. Even London's most secluded parks hummed with ambient noise—distant traffic, night birds, the rustle of small creatures in the underbrush. Here, silence pressed against her eardrums like cotton wool. She pulled out her mobile, thumb hovering over Eva's contact. The screen flickered, displaying impossible timestamps that scrolled backward and forward simultaneously. The battery indicator jumped from seventy percent to twelve, then back to full. Aurora shoved the phone into her jacket pocket and pressed deeper into the grove. The Heartstone's pulse quickened against her chest. Moonlight should have filtered through the canopy, but the darkness above seemed absolute. Her eyes had adjusted enough to make out the massive oak trunks and the rough circle they formed, but details remained frustratingly unclear. She moved toward what she remembered as the grove's centre, where wildflowers typically carpeted the ground in impossible profusion. Her foot struck something solid. Aurora crouched, fingers exploring what felt like carved stone—smooth, deliberate shapes that definitely hadn't been there during daylight visits. A low altar, perhaps, or marker of some kind. The surface radiated cold that bit through her fingertips. A branch snapped somewhere behind her. Aurora spun, heart hammering. The grove appeared empty, shadows shifting only in response to her own movement. She counted the standing stone oaks slowly, reassuring herself of their positions. Seven trees in a rough circle, just as always. But the spaces between them seemed to yawn wider now, darkness flowing like water into gaps that should have been manageable. "Right, well done, Rory," she muttered, her voice sounding thin and strange. "Brilliant idea, wandering about haunted groves at half past midnight." The echo that came back carried the wrong cadence, as if someone else had spoken the words with slightly different timing. She fumbled for her delivery bag's front pocket, extracting the small torch she kept for dim hallways and dodgy addresses. Its LED beam cut through the darkness, revealing the altar more clearly. Definitely carved stone, covered in symbols that hurt to look at directly. They seemed to shift when she wasn't focusing on them, rearranging themselves into patterns that almost made sense before dissolving back into meaningless curves. The pendant burned against her skin now, hot enough to be uncomfortable. Aurora lifted the chain over her head, holding the Heartstone up to catch the torchlight. The crimson gem blazed with inner fire, its glow casting red shadows that moved independently of her torch beam. Something rustled in the canopy overhead. Aurora aimed the torch upward, its beam disappearing into branches that stretched impossibly high. No birds. No leaves moving. Just that sense of presence, of being observed by something that understood patience far better than any human ever could. She backed toward one of the standing stone oaks, keeping the carved altar in sight. The tree's bark felt rough and reassuring against her shoulders until she noticed how warm it was. Oak shouldn't radiate heat like living flesh. Her fingers explored the trunk's surface, finding ridges that could have been bark or could have been something else entirely. A footstep crunched in the leaves to her left. Aurora froze, not even breathing. The sound hadn't been an animal's careful tread or the random settling of forest debris. Someone—or something—had deliberately placed weight on the ground, crushing dried vegetation underfoot. She swept the torch in a wide arc. Empty spaces between trees, shadows that seemed to drink the light rather than dispel under its touch. The beam revealed nothing that shouldn't belong, but wrongness pressed against her from every direction now. The Heartstone pendant swung gently from her raised hand, painting everything in shifting red light. Its pulse matched her racing heartbeat, growing faster as whatever shared the grove with her grew bolder. Aurora had the distinct impression that something was circling, staying just beyond her torch's reach while evaluating her presence. Another footstep, this time behind her. She spun again, nearly dropping the pendant. Nothing. But the darkness between the trees seemed denser now, more purposeful. Aurora pressed her back against the oak trunk, trying to keep the entire grove in sight simultaneously. Impossible, of course. Seven standing stones formed too large a circle for one person to monitor effectively. The carved altar drew her attention again. In the Heartstone's crimson glow, the symbols appeared more distinct, almost readable. They pulsed in rhythm with the pendant, suggesting some connection between the gem and whatever ancient purpose this place served. She'd come seeking answers about the artifact's origins. Perhaps she'd found them, though not in any form she'd hoped for. A whisper reached her ears—not words, exactly, but something that bypassed language entirely and spoke directly to the primitive parts of her brain that understood predators and prey. The sound came from everywhere and nowhere, rising from the grove's stones and soil rather than from any visible source. Aurora's rational mind insisted she should leave. Walk back through the boundary stones, return to familiar London streets where the worst threats wore human faces and operated by comprehensible rules. But the Heartstone's burning presence against her palm suggested she was already too deep in something to simply retreat. The pendant's glow intensified, casting her shadow in multiple directions simultaneously. Each shadow moved slightly out of sync with the others, creating a disorienting dance of dark shapes that seemed to reach toward something she couldn't see. In the spaces between the standing stone oaks, other shadows began to gather.
total_cost0.025128

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1096
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"deliberately"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"deliberately"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1096
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"otherworldly"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count2
11
word"quickened"
count1
12
word"echo"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"familiar"
2"weight"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"otherworldly"
6"echoing"
7"whisper"
8"silence"
9"flickered"
10"pulse"
11"quickened"
12"echo"
13"sense of"
14"racing"
15"dance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
35.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1090
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.88% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1076
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone6
Silas1
Richmond1
Park1
London2
Eva1
Aurora11
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.989
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"seemed absolute"
1"felt like carved stone—smooth, delibera"
2"appeared empty shadows shifting only in response to her own movement"
3"shadows that seemed to drink the light rather than dispel under its touch"
4"seemed denser now, more purposeful"
5"appeared more distinct almost readable"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.917
wordCount1090
matches
0"not words, exactly, but something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean37.59
std19.32
cv0.514
sampleLengths
064
166
246
337
449
57
655
742
86
959
1022
1121
1268
1346
146
1539
1659
179
1832
1941
2051
216
2253
2339
2420
2548
2649
2737
2813
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"being observed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs179
matches
0"wasn't focusing"
1"was circling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences81
ratio0.062
matches
0"The crimson gem pulsed with its usual faint warmth, but something about its rhythm felt different tonight—irregular, almost anxious."
1"Even London's most secluded parks hummed with ambient noise—distant traffic, night birds, the rustle of small creatures in the underbrush."
2"Aurora crouched, fingers exploring what felt like carved stone—smooth, deliberate shapes that definitely hadn't been there during daylight visits."
3"Someone—or something—had deliberately placed weight on the ground, crushing dried vegetation underfoot."
4"A whisper reached her ears—not words, exactly, but something that bypassed language entirely and spoke directly to the primitive parts of her brain that understood predators and prey."
75.92% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1082
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount67
adverbRatio0.06192236598890943
lyAdverbCount28
lyAdverbRatio0.025878003696857672
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean13.46
std6.5
cv0.483
sampleLengths
022
123
219
325
428
513
613
718
83
92
1010
118
1220
139
1410
1512
1613
1714
187
1913
2023
2119
225
2319
249
259
266
274
2813
2912
309
3121
3212
3310
3421
3520
3612
3712
3824
3912
4015
4119
426
4314
442
453
4620
4715
4817
497
60.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.38271604938271603
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"Definitely carved stone, covered in"
1"Just that sense of presence,"
2"Perhaps she'd found them, though"
ratio0.039
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences77
matches
0"She'd come here searching for"
1"Her trainers crunched softly on"
2"She pulled out her mobile,"
3"Her eyes had adjusted enough"
4"She moved toward what she"
5"Her foot struck something solid."
6"She counted the standing stone"
7"she muttered, her voice sounding"
8"She fumbled for her delivery"
9"Its LED beam cut through"
10"They seemed to shift when"
11"She backed toward one of"
12"Her fingers explored the trunk's"
13"She swept the torch in"
14"Its pulse matched her racing"
15"She spun again, nearly dropping"
16"They pulsed in rhythm with"
17"She'd come seeking answers about"
ratio0.234
63.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences77
matches
0"The ancient oaks loomed against"
1"Aurora stepped through the boundary,"
2"The crimson gem pulsed with"
3"She'd come here searching for"
4"The grove had always felt"
5"Her trainers crunched softly on"
6"The sound carried too far"
7"Aurora paused, listening."
8"That was the first thing"
9"Here, silence pressed against her"
10"She pulled out her mobile,"
11"The screen flickered, displaying impossible"
12"The battery indicator jumped from"
13"Aurora shoved the phone into"
14"The Heartstone's pulse quickened against"
15"Moonlight should have filtered through"
16"Her eyes had adjusted enough"
17"She moved toward what she"
18"Her foot struck something solid."
19"Aurora crouched, fingers exploring what"
ratio0.792
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Now, in the dead of"
1"Even London's most secluded parks"
ratio0.026
50.26% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She'd come here searching for answers about the pendant's origins, following whispered hints from Silas about old magic that lingered in Richmond Park after dar…"
1"The sound carried too far in the still air, echoing back from directions that made no geographical sense."
2"The screen flickered, displaying impossible timestamps that scrolled backward and forward simultaneously."
3"But the spaces between them seemed to yawn wider now, darkness flowing like water into gaps that should have been manageable."
4"The crimson gem blazed with inner fire, its glow casting red shadows that moved independently of her torch beam."
5"The beam revealed nothing that shouldn't belong, but wrongness pressed against her from every direction now."
6"A whisper reached her ears—not words, exactly, but something that bypassed language entirely and spoke directly to the primitive parts of her brain that underst…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she muttered, her voice sounding thin and strange"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
75.3862%