| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 72.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1096 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "deliberately" | | 4 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 4.20% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1096 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "quickened" | | 12 | "echo" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "racing" | | 15 | "dance" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1090 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.88% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1076 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.02 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 6 | | Silas | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Aurora | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.989 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed absolute" | | 1 | "felt like carved stone—smooth, delibera" | | 2 | "appeared empty shadows shifting only in response to her own movement" | | 3 | "shadows that seemed to drink the light rather than dispel under its touch" | | 4 | "seemed denser now, more purposeful" | | 5 | "appeared more distinct almost readable" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.917 | | wordCount | 1090 | | matches | | 0 | "not words, exactly, but something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 37.59 | | std | 19.32 | | cv | 0.514 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 68 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 39 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 48 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 179 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't focusing" | | 1 | "was circling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 81 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson gem pulsed with its usual faint warmth, but something about its rhythm felt different tonight—irregular, almost anxious." | | 1 | "Even London's most secluded parks hummed with ambient noise—distant traffic, night birds, the rustle of small creatures in the underbrush." | | 2 | "Aurora crouched, fingers exploring what felt like carved stone—smooth, deliberate shapes that definitely hadn't been there during daylight visits." | | 3 | "Someone—or something—had deliberately placed weight on the ground, crushing dried vegetation underfoot." | | 4 | "A whisper reached her ears—not words, exactly, but something that bypassed language entirely and spoke directly to the primitive parts of her brain that understood predators and prey." |
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| 75.92% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1082 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 67 | | adverbRatio | 0.06192236598890943 | | lyAdverbCount | 28 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.025878003696857672 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 81 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 81 | | mean | 13.46 | | std | 6.5 | | cv | 0.483 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 60.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.38271604938271603 | | totalSentences | 81 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Definitely carved stone, covered in" | | 1 | "Just that sense of presence," | | 2 | "Perhaps she'd found them, though" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come here searching for" | | 1 | "Her trainers crunched softly on" | | 2 | "She pulled out her mobile," | | 3 | "Her eyes had adjusted enough" | | 4 | "She moved toward what she" | | 5 | "Her foot struck something solid." | | 6 | "She counted the standing stone" | | 7 | "she muttered, her voice sounding" | | 8 | "She fumbled for her delivery" | | 9 | "Its LED beam cut through" | | 10 | "They seemed to shift when" | | 11 | "She backed toward one of" | | 12 | "Her fingers explored the trunk's" | | 13 | "She swept the torch in" | | 14 | "Its pulse matched her racing" | | 15 | "She spun again, nearly dropping" | | 16 | "They pulsed in rhythm with" | | 17 | "She'd come seeking answers about" |
| | ratio | 0.234 | |
| 63.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks loomed against" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped through the boundary," | | 2 | "The crimson gem pulsed with" | | 3 | "She'd come here searching for" | | 4 | "The grove had always felt" | | 5 | "Her trainers crunched softly on" | | 6 | "The sound carried too far" | | 7 | "Aurora paused, listening." | | 8 | "That was the first thing" | | 9 | "Here, silence pressed against her" | | 10 | "She pulled out her mobile," | | 11 | "The screen flickered, displaying impossible" | | 12 | "The battery indicator jumped from" | | 13 | "Aurora shoved the phone into" | | 14 | "The Heartstone's pulse quickened against" | | 15 | "Moonlight should have filtered through" | | 16 | "Her eyes had adjusted enough" | | 17 | "She moved toward what she" | | 18 | "Her foot struck something solid." | | 19 | "Aurora crouched, fingers exploring what" |
| | ratio | 0.792 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, in the dead of" | | 1 | "Even London's most secluded parks" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 50.26% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come here searching for answers about the pendant's origins, following whispered hints from Silas about old magic that lingered in Richmond Park after dar…" | | 1 | "The sound carried too far in the still air, echoing back from directions that made no geographical sense." | | 2 | "The screen flickered, displaying impossible timestamps that scrolled backward and forward simultaneously." | | 3 | "But the spaces between them seemed to yawn wider now, darkness flowing like water into gaps that should have been manageable." | | 4 | "The crimson gem blazed with inner fire, its glow casting red shadows that moved independently of her torch beam." | | 5 | "The beam revealed nothing that shouldn't belong, but wrongness pressed against her from every direction now." | | 6 | "A whisper reached her ears—not words, exactly, but something that bypassed language entirely and spoke directly to the primitive parts of her brain that underst…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her voice sounding thin and strange" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |