| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 70.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1029 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1029 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "oppressive" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "gloom" | | 6 | "solace" | | 7 | "scanned" | | 8 | "fleeting" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "charged" | | 11 | "stark" | | 12 | "glistening" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "palpable" | | 15 | "cacophony" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1028 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "wrong" | | 1 | "Think, Rory. Think." |
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| 62.50% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, surrounded by the unnatural stillness, she questioned her sanity." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1009 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.4 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 4 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Rory | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a whispered warning" | | 1 | "twilight that seemed to emanate from the very soil" | | 2 | "thrum that seemed to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 3 | "whispers that seemed to slither around her, just at the edge of comprehension" | | 4 | "appeared faded wilting, their petals dropping like tears onto the dark earth" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.918 | | wordCount | 1028 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the chill, but from a nameless dread" | | 1 | "not in any language she knew, but they carried a malevolent intent, too sharp" | | 2 | "no longer mere sounds but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 3.52% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 12 | | mean | 85.67 | | std | 13.91 | | cv | 0.162 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 108 | | 1 | 88 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 72 | | 4 | 85 | | 5 | 83 | | 6 | 98 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 77 | | 9 | 75 | | 10 | 107 | | 11 | 98 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | |
| 80.24% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t imagining" | | 1 | "were watching" | | 2 | "wasn’t finding" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence here wasn’t natural; it was the silence of something holding its breath." |
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| 96.01% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1010 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.04455445544554455 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00891089108910891 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 11.95 | | std | 7.2 | | cv | 0.602 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 53.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.38372093023255816 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 85.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the name felt like" | | 1 | "Just the dense, ancient trees" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 50.77% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She hugged her arms, not" | | 1 | "She’d come here on a" | | 2 | "Her hand instinctively went to" | | 3 | "Its faint warmth was a" | | 4 | "They were too vibrant, too" | | 5 | "She whipped around, her heart" | | 6 | "She took a breath, trying" | | 7 | "Her eyes scanned the canopy," | | 8 | "she muttered, her voice a" | | 9 | "She froze, straining to hear" | | 10 | "She took a tentative step" | | 11 | "It vanished before she could" | | 12 | "She wasn’t imagining it." | | 13 | "She felt a prickling sensation" | | 14 | "She forced herself to take" | | 15 | "She picked a direction, aiming" | | 16 | "It wasn't a sound she" | | 17 | "It amplified the feeling of" | | 18 | "She remembered the stories Silas" | | 19 | "She’d always dismissed them as" |
| | ratio | 0.423 | |
| 81.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The gravel crunched under Aurora’s" | | 1 | "She hugged her arms, not" | | 2 | "She’d come here on a" | | 3 | "Her hand instinctively went to" | | 4 | "Its faint warmth was a" | | 5 | "They were too vibrant, too" | | 6 | "A twig snapped behind her," | | 7 | "She whipped around, her heart" | | 8 | "She took a breath, trying" | | 9 | "Her eyes scanned the canopy," | | 10 | "she muttered, her voice a" | | 11 | "A rustling in the undergrowth," | | 12 | "A fleeting movement at the" | | 13 | "She froze, straining to hear" | | 14 | "A fox, perhaps, or a" | | 15 | "She took a tentative step" | | 16 | "A flicker of movement." | | 17 | "It vanished before she could" | | 18 | "Aurora’s muscles tensed." | | 19 | "She wasn’t imagining it." |
| | ratio | 0.756 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, surrounded by the unnatural" | | 1 | "If there was a path," | | 2 | "Now, the hairs on the" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 2.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "She hugged her arms, not from the chill, but from a nameless dread that had settled deep in her bones the moment she’d stepped through the ancient oak standing …" | | 1 | "She’d come here on a hunch, a flicker of intuition born from a cryptic note left by her benefactor, a note that spoke of a hidden passage, a place where the vei…" | | 2 | "There was no moonlight here, only a pervasive twilight that seemed to emanate from the very soil." | | 3 | "She felt a prickling sensation on her skin, as if a thousand tiny eyes were watching her, their gazes cold and ancient." | | 4 | "She picked a direction, aiming for the perceived centre of the clearing, her boots sinking slightly into the mossy ground." | | 5 | "She remembered the stories Silas spun after a few pints, tales of the Fae, of creatures that danced in moonlit glades and lured mortals to their doom." | | 6 | "The humming intensified, coalescing into a series of low, guttural whispers that seemed to slither around her, just at the edge of comprehension." | | 7 | "A faint luminescence, emanating from behind a curtain of ivy that clung to a particularly ancient-looking oak." | | 8 | "As her fingers brushed the shimmering surface, a sound ripped through the air, a high, keening shriek that turned her blood to ice." | | 9 | "It was followed by a thunderous roar, a noise of raw, primal fury that shook the very ground beneath her feet." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |