| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She turned back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |
| 88.74% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1332 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.19% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1332 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "wavering" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "uncanny" | | 4 | "dances" | | 5 | "crystalline" | | 6 | "complex" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "pang" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "resonance" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "potential" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "almost alive" | | 15 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1311 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 37.53% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 66 | | wordCount | 978 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 2.25 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Ancient | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Hel | 2 | | True | 1 | | Aurora | 22 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 11 | | English | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Irish | 1 | | London | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Hel" | | 5 | "London" | | 6 | "Fae-Forged" |
| | globalScore | 0.375 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 36.36% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "light that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere" | | 1 | "felt like walking on water that had for" | | 2 | "something like concern" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.051 | | wordCount | 1311 | | matches | | 0 | "not metaphorically, but in actual crystalline notes" | | 1 | "neither alive nor" | | 2 | "Not the warmth of Hel portals, but a different frequency entirely" | | 3 | "not into darkness but into light" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.87% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 33.62 | | std | 14.79 | | cv | 0.44 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 61 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 60 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 58 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 49 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 179 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "First came the scent—wild honeysuckle threaded with something sharper, like crushed mint left too long in summer rain." | | 1 | "The air itself tasted different—cleaner, older, as if they'd stepped into the first breath of creation." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in a riot of colours that Aurora had no names for—blues that hurt to look at, reds that sang, yellows that tasted of lemon on the back of her tongue." | | 3 | "The flowers did sing—not metaphorically, but in actual crystalline notes that formed harmonies too complex for human music." | | 4 | "The path—if it could be called that—shifted beneath their feet." | | 5 | "The mist formed shapes—deer that weren't deer, children that were never children, dancers performing steps from forgotten rituals." | | 6 | "A pool of water—if it was water—stretched before them, its surface mirror-smooth and reflecting a sky that didn't match the one above." | | 7 | "Cold shot up her arm, but not painful—clarifying." | | 8 | "The standing stones Isolde had mentioned—the boundary markers—must be behind them now, but distance here meant nothing." | | 9 | "\"Then you'll learn anyway.\" Isolde stepped through the archway and disappeared, not into darkness but into light—pure, blinding, impossible light that shouldn't exist in a grove of trees." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 998 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "pure, blinding, impossible light" |
| | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.031062124248496994 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011022044088176353 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 12.14 | | std | 7.15 | | cv | 0.589 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 79.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.49074074074074076 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the light shifted." | | 1 | "Only Isolde's footsteps rang out," | | 2 | "Only the ghost of cold" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned back, but the" | | 1 | "They pooled beneath the trees" | | 2 | "They weren't near a Hel" | | 3 | "She stopped, head tilted." | | 4 | "They moved deeper." | | 5 | "Her eyes ached." | | 6 | "They emerged into a clearing" | | 7 | "Their reflection didn't appear." | | 8 | "She approached slowly." | | 9 | "Her fingers broke the surface." | | 10 | "They glowed pale silver against" | | 11 | "She rubbed at her hand," | | 12 | "They could walk for minutes" | | 13 | "They could be gone from" | | 14 | "Their violet eyes, usually so" |
| | ratio | 0.176 | |
| 42.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove revealed itself" | | 1 | "Aurora blinked against the sudden" | | 2 | "She turned back, but the" | | 3 | "Nyx's form rippled at the" | | 4 | "The shadows here didn't behave." | | 5 | "They pooled beneath the trees" | | 6 | "Aurora's fingers found the Heartstone" | | 7 | "They weren't near a Hel" | | 8 | "The air itself tasted different—cleaner," | | 9 | "Isolde moved ahead with that" | | 10 | "The Grove opened before them" | | 11 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 12 | "She stopped, head tilted." | | 13 | "Nyx crouched, their shadowy fingers" | | 14 | "Aurora knelt beside them." | | 15 | "The flowers did sing—not metaphorically," | | 16 | "Isolde glanced back" | | 17 | "Nyx stood, brushing shadow-hands against" | | 18 | "The gesture was so human," | | 19 | "They moved deeper." |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora blinked against the sudden amber-gold that filtered through leaves she hadn't seen a moment before." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in a riot of colours that Aurora had no names for—blues that hurt to look at, reds that sang, yellows that tasted of lemon on th…" | | 2 | "The flowers did sing—not metaphorically, but in actual crystalline notes that formed harmonies too complex for human music." | | 3 | "Moss one moment, smooth stone the next, then something that felt like walking on water that had forgotten how to be wet." | | 4 | "The mist formed shapes—deer that weren't deer, children that were never children, dancers performing steps from forgotten rituals." | | 5 | "A pool of water—if it was water—stretched before them, its surface mirror-smooth and reflecting a sky that didn't match the one above." | | 6 | "The water called to something in her chest, a resonance that made the Heartstone Pendant thrum against her skin." | | 7 | "Wildflowers grew thicker here, pressing against an archway formed by two oaks grown together, their trunks fused in an embrace that had taken centuries or secon…" | | 8 | "Together, they stepped through the archway into light that tasted of starlight and smelled of rain that had never touched earth." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx's form rippled, their usual solidity wavering" | | 1 | "Isolde's face remained, unreadable" |
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| 98.72% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde laughed (laugh)" | | 1 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.051 | | leniency | 0.103 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.103 | |