Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXCRQY7E3A6VQVWA3MAE55

Run Details

Duration:
39.6s
Cost:
$0.035355
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Fae Grove revealed itself in fragments. First came the scent—wild honeysuckle threaded with something sharper, like crushed mint left too long in summer rain. Then the light shifted. Aurora blinked against the sudden amber-gold that filtered through leaves she hadn't seen a moment before. "Did we just—" She turned back, but the path they'd followed through Richmond Park had vanished. Ancient oaks ringed them now, their trunks twisted into shapes that suggested faces, reaching hands, creatures caught mid-transformation. "Welcome to places that shouldn't exist." Nyx's form rippled at the edges, their usual solidity wavering. The shadows here didn't behave. They pooled beneath the trees like spilled ink, defying the direction of light. "The boundary stones are behind us. We're between now." Aurora's fingers found the Heartstone Pendant beneath her jacket. No warmth. They weren't near a Hel portal, but the pulse of magic saturated everything. The air itself tasted different—cleaner, older, as if they'd stepped into the first breath of creation. "Watch your step." Isolde moved ahead with that uncanny grace, her silver hair catching light that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere. True to the stories Aurora had heard, the half-Fae woman left no trace in the moss. "Time dances to its own music here. Minutes may be hours. Hours may be heartbeats." The Grove opened before them in defiance of natural law. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in a riot of colours that Aurora had no names for—blues that hurt to look at, reds that sang, yellows that tasted of lemon on the back of her tongue. She stopped, head tilted. "Do you hear that?" "The flowers." Nyx crouched, their shadowy fingers hovering above a cluster of silver blooms that chimed like glass bells. "They're singing. Christ, I'd forgotten how mad this place is." Aurora knelt beside them. The flowers did sing—not metaphorically, but in actual crystalline notes that formed harmonies too complex for human music. When Nyx reached closer, the blooms leaned away, petals folding shut. "They remember you're dead." Isolde glanced back. "The living and the in-between. Nature knows the difference." "Comforting." Nyx stood, brushing shadow-hands against their coat. The gesture was so human, so habitual, that Aurora felt a pang. Four centuries of being neither alive nor gone, and still they clung to mannerisms from breathing days. They moved deeper. The path—if it could be called that—shifted beneath their feet. Moss one moment, smooth stone the next, then something that felt like walking on water that had forgotten how to be wet. Aurora's boots made no sound. Neither did Nyx's, but then they rarely did. Only Isolde's footsteps rang out, clear and deliberate, like a countdown in reverse. The trees grew stranger. One had branches that grew downward into the earth while roots reached toward the sky, leaves sprouting from subterranean wood. Another bled golden sap that pooled at its base before evaporating into mist. The mist formed shapes—deer that weren't deer, children that were never children, dancers performing steps from forgotten rituals. "Don't stare too long." Isolde's warning came soft. "The memories here are hungry. They'll pull you in if you let them." Aurora dragged her gaze away from a particularly mesmerizing spiral of light and shadow. Her eyes ached. "What is this place, really? You said it's between Earth and the Fae realm, but it feels like—" "A wound? A scar? A seam?" Isolde laughed, the sound like wind chimes in a storm. "All of those. None of those. The Grove exists because two worlds couldn't quite agree on where one ended and the other began. So this formed. A compromise written in wild magic and older rules." They emerged into a clearing that stole Aurora's breath. A pool of water—if it was water—stretched before them, its surface mirror-smooth and reflecting a sky that didn't match the one above. The real sky, what she could see through the canopy, remained that warm amber-gold. The reflection showed twilight stars, constellations she'd never seen, and three moons in different phases. "Bloody hell," Aurora breathed. Nyx moved to the water's edge. Their reflection didn't appear. Where they should have been, the pool showed only the alien sky, as if they were a window rather than a presence. "I hate Fae places." "And yet you came." Isolde knelt by the pool, her lavender eyes distant. "Touch the water, Aurora Carter. Not you, Nightwhisper. Your essence would poison it." "Brilliant. Stand aside, then, the dead thing might contaminate the magic pond." Nyx retreated, but Aurora caught the hurt beneath the sarcasm. She approached slowly. The water called to something in her chest, a resonance that made the Heartstone Pendant thrum against her skin. Not the warmth of Hel portals, but a different frequency entirely. Her fingers broke the surface. Cold shot up her arm, but not painful—clarifying. The water clung to her hand like mercury, forming patterns across her skin. Symbols. Words in a language that predated English, Welsh, Irish, predated human tongues entirely. They glowed pale silver against her flesh before sinking in, vanishing beneath. "What the—" Aurora yanked her hand back. The symbols remained visible for three more heartbeats before fading completely. "What did it just do?" "Marked you." Isolde's face remained serene, unreadable. "The Grove recognizes potential. You've been seen, Aurora Carter. The Fae Courts will know a mortal walked here and the land itself deemed her worthy of marking." "Worthy of what?" Aurora's voice pitched higher than she intended. She rubbed at her hand, but the skin showed nothing now. Only the ghost of cold remained. "That's the question, isn't it?" Isolde rose, turning toward a path Aurora could have sworn wasn't there before. "The land doesn't mark many. Myself, centuries ago. A handful of others throughout history. Each marking different. Each meaning unique." Nyx moved closer to Aurora, their presence a familiar shadow. "What did the symbols say?" "I don't know. I couldn't read them. They felt like—" Aurora struggled for words. "Like remembering something I never learned. Like déjà vu made solid." The deeper path called. Aurora felt it pulling at her sternum, a fishhook certainty that they hadn't reached the Grove's heart yet. The standing stones Isolde had mentioned—the boundary markers—must be behind them now, but distance here meant nothing. They could walk for minutes or days. They could be gone from London for a breath or a lifetime. Overhead, something that might have been a bird sang three notes in descending fifths. The trees answered in harmonics. The wind carried whispers in dead languages and ones not yet born. Isolde paused at the path's mouth. Wildflowers grew thicker here, pressing against an archway formed by two oaks grown together, their trunks fused in an embrace that had taken centuries or seconds. "Beyond this point, the Grove shows you what you need to see. Not what you want. Not what you expect. What you need." Those pale lavender eyes fixed on Aurora. "You asked to come here. You sought the Seer's counsel. The land will counsel you in its own way." Aurora's hand drifted to the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. The moonsilver dagger felt warmer here, almost alive. "And if I don't like what I see?" "Then you'll learn anyway." Isolde stepped through the archway and disappeared, not into darkness but into light—pure, blinding, impossible light that shouldn't exist in a grove of trees. Nyx looked at Aurora. Their violet eyes, usually so steady, showed something like concern. "You don't have to go further." "Yes, I do." Aurora straightened her shoulders, felt the weight of her delivery bag's strap though she'd left it back in London. Some habits ran deeper than presence. "Stay close?" "Always." Together, they stepped through the archway into light that tasted of starlight and smelled of rain that had never touched earth. The Grove's true heart awaited, and Aurora walked forward into wonder and terror intertwined.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.051
88.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"wavering"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"uncanny"
count1
4
word"dances"
count1
5
word"crystalline"
count1
6
word"complex"
count1
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"pang"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"resonance"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"potential"
count1
13
word"familiar"
count1
14
word"almost alive"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"wavering"
1"warmth"
2"pulse"
3"uncanny"
4"dances"
5"crystalline"
6"complex"
7"comforting"
8"pang"
9"footsteps"
10"resonance"
11"unreadable"
12"potential"
13"familiar"
14"almost alive"
15"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1311
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
37.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount978
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity2.25
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae3
Grove4
Richmond1
Park1
Ancient1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Hel2
True1
Aurora22
Nyx9
Isolde11
English1
Welsh1
Irish1
London2
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Hel"
5"London"
6"Fae-Forged"
globalScore0.375
windowScore0.5
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"light that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere"
1"felt like walking on water that had for"
2"something like concern"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.051
wordCount1311
matches
0"not metaphorically, but in actual crystalline notes"
1"neither alive nor"
2"Not the warmth of Hel portals, but a different frequency entirely"
3"not into darkness but into light"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
82.87% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean33.62
std14.79
cv0.44
sampleLengths
045
134
243
340
454
548
64
729
833
916
1037
1161
1255
1321
1435
1551
1660
174
1836
1926
2022
2138
2247
2323
2434
2527
2638
2715
2825
2958
3031
3132
3249
3326
3428
3520
3630
371
3835
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs179
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences108
ratio0.093
matches
0"First came the scent—wild honeysuckle threaded with something sharper, like crushed mint left too long in summer rain."
1"The air itself tasted different—cleaner, older, as if they'd stepped into the first breath of creation."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in a riot of colours that Aurora had no names for—blues that hurt to look at, reds that sang, yellows that tasted of lemon on the back of her tongue."
3"The flowers did sing—not metaphorically, but in actual crystalline notes that formed harmonies too complex for human music."
4"The path—if it could be called that—shifted beneath their feet."
5"The mist formed shapes—deer that weren't deer, children that were never children, dancers performing steps from forgotten rituals."
6"A pool of water—if it was water—stretched before them, its surface mirror-smooth and reflecting a sky that didn't match the one above."
7"Cold shot up her arm, but not painful—clarifying."
8"The standing stones Isolde had mentioned—the boundary markers—must be behind them now, but distance here meant nothing."
9"\"Then you'll learn anyway.\" Isolde stepped through the archway and disappeared, not into darkness but into light—pure, blinding, impossible light that shouldn't exist in a grove of trees."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount998
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"pure, blinding, impossible light"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.031062124248496994
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011022044088176353
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean12.14
std7.15
cv0.589
sampleLengths
07
118
24
316
416
518
616
75
813
99
109
112
1213
1316
1423
1516
1615
1710
1834
194
204
2119
2210
234
2418
2511
267
279
288
2912
3017
313
3210
3322
345
358
3613
374
3820
3913
4018
418
4213
4314
443
4518
4616
4735
489
4922
79.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.49074074074074076
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners53
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then the light shifted."
1"Only Isolde's footsteps rang out,"
2"Only the ghost of cold"
ratio0.035
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences85
matches
0"She turned back, but the"
1"They pooled beneath the trees"
2"They weren't near a Hel"
3"She stopped, head tilted."
4"They moved deeper."
5"Her eyes ached."
6"They emerged into a clearing"
7"Their reflection didn't appear."
8"She approached slowly."
9"Her fingers broke the surface."
10"They glowed pale silver against"
11"She rubbed at her hand,"
12"They could walk for minutes"
13"They could be gone from"
14"Their violet eyes, usually so"
ratio0.176
42.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences85
matches
0"The Fae Grove revealed itself"
1"Aurora blinked against the sudden"
2"She turned back, but the"
3"Nyx's form rippled at the"
4"The shadows here didn't behave."
5"They pooled beneath the trees"
6"Aurora's fingers found the Heartstone"
7"They weren't near a Hel"
8"The air itself tasted different—cleaner,"
9"Isolde moved ahead with that"
10"The Grove opened before them"
11"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
12"She stopped, head tilted."
13"Nyx crouched, their shadowy fingers"
14"Aurora knelt beside them."
15"The flowers did sing—not metaphorically,"
16"Isolde glanced back"
17"Nyx stood, brushing shadow-hands against"
18"The gesture was so human,"
19"They moved deeper."
ratio0.835
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Aurora blinked against the sudden amber-gold that filtered through leaves she hadn't seen a moment before."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in a riot of colours that Aurora had no names for—blues that hurt to look at, reds that sang, yellows that tasted of lemon on th…"
2"The flowers did sing—not metaphorically, but in actual crystalline notes that formed harmonies too complex for human music."
3"Moss one moment, smooth stone the next, then something that felt like walking on water that had forgotten how to be wet."
4"The mist formed shapes—deer that weren't deer, children that were never children, dancers performing steps from forgotten rituals."
5"A pool of water—if it was water—stretched before them, its surface mirror-smooth and reflecting a sky that didn't match the one above."
6"The water called to something in her chest, a resonance that made the Heartstone Pendant thrum against her skin."
7"Wildflowers grew thicker here, pressing against an archway formed by two oaks grown together, their trunks fused in an embrace that had taken centuries or secon…"
8"Together, they stepped through the archway into light that tasted of starlight and smelled of rain that had never touched earth."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx's form rippled, their usual solidity wavering"
1"Isolde's face remained, unreadable"
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde laughed (laugh)"
1"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.051
leniency0.103
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.103
75.5070%