Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXCTF2YNRMXQGKBPNCCSEK

Run Details

Duration:
4m 13s
Cost:
$0.022378
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory's trainers crunched against frost-rimed gravel. The gates had locked at dusk, but the gap in the wrought iron near Petersham yielded to her shoulder with a complaint of rusted metal that sounded too loud in the suburban silence. She checked her phone. Eleven-forty-three. The screen flickered, digits stuttering like dying neon before stabilizing. She shoved it into her jacket pocket, her breath clouding in the November air. Her left wrist itched beneath her sleeve. She scratched at the crescent scar without thinking, the childhood mark burning in the chill as it always did when weather turned, though tonight the sensation carried an edge of warning. She moved past the perimeter oaks. The standing stones of Isolde's Grove waited in the clearing ahead, three trunks that centuries of wind and weather had tortured into verticality, their bark silvered by moonlight into something resembling bone. Between them, the boundary breathed. She felt it in her teeth, a pressure change that made her sinuses ache. Rory touched the Heartstone Pendant through her shirt. The crimson gem sat against her sternum, ice-cold when she'd fled the flat above Silas' bar three hours ago, now sweating heat through the cotton. It had woken her from a shallow sleep, pulsing in time with a heartbeat that wasn't hers, pulling her south through empty streets and sleeping suburbs with the insistence of a hooked vein. She'd followed it across London on the last Tube, then the bus, then these feet that now ached with the cold and the strangeness of the walk. The wildflowers showed first. They shouldn't exist. Not in November. Not at midnight in Richmond Park. Yet they carpeted the approach to the stones, bluebells and poppies and foxgloves swaying without wind, their colors leached to greyscale by the moon but undeniably blooming, thriving, their petals fat with moisture. Their scent hit her—honey-sweet and rotting, like fruit left too long in the sun, cloying enough to coat the back of her throat. Rory stopped. The silver chain of the pendant grew hot against her collarbone, the metal conducting the gem's pulse. She pulled it free. The crimson stone glowed, faint inner light bleeding into the dark, pointing toward the center stone like a compass needle drawn to magnetic north. "All right," she muttered. Her voice sounded wrong. It died in the air inches from her lips, failing to carry, failing to echo. It simply dropped, consumed by a silence that had weight and texture, pressing against her eardrums. She stepped over the threshold between the first two oaks. The temperature inverted. The winter cold vanished, replaced by a thick, greenhouse humidity that pressed against her face and curled the ends of her straight black hair. Her jacket became a burden, trapping heat against her skin. She unzipped it, the metal tag clicking loud as a gunshot. The sound did not travel. It hung suspended, visible almost as a ripple in the air, before dissolving. Rory counted her heartbeats. One. Two. Three. Her watch ticked along with them, steady, reliable. Then the second hand hesitated, reversed, ticked backwards. She stared at it. The mechanism whirred, confused, then resumed forward motion at double speed, racing around the dial while the minute hand remained stationary. The standing stones weren't oaks anymore. Bark became sinew in her peripheral vision, rough texture smoothing into something resembling skin. Roots became fingers digging into earth that wasn't quite earth, shifting with the slow rhythm of a sleeper's breathing. She snapped her head toward the leftmost stone. It stood motionless, ancient and inert, yet the moss growing at its base had arranged itself into patterns that looked almost like words in an alphabet she couldn't read, wet and black in the moonlight. Her pulse hammered against her throat. Law school had taught her to trust evidence, to build cases from fact. The facts here dissolved under scrutiny. The clearing measured perhaps thirty feet across according to the maps she'd studied in the library yesterday, yet when she looked back, the path she'd taken had stretched into a tunnel of absolute darkness. Richmond Park was gone. The distant London glow of streetlamps, the hum of the A307, the whisper of planes overhead—vanished. Replaced by a starless void that pressed against the treeline with the opacity of ink. The pendant throbbed. One pulse. Two. A rhythm that synced with her own heart, then diverged, slower, heavy as a drum underwater. Something rustled behind her. Not leaves. Fabric. Or the suggestion of fabric, silk dragging across wet grass. Rory spun. The wildflowers parted in a wake that led nowhere, stems bending and rebounding in a serpentine path that terminated at the third standing stone. No body. No shadow cast by the moon. Just the impression of displacement, the bending of starlight around an absence, and the smell of ozone and wet copper that filled her nostrils. She reached for her phone. The screen remained black. Dead. She pressed buttons, shook it, held the power button until her thumb ached. Nothing. The device had become a brick of glass and plastic, inert as the stones pretended to be. "Okay," she said, forcing the word into the heavy air. It came out as a whisper, stolen immediately by the silence. "Okay, just nerves. Just the dark playing tricks." The grove answered. A sound threaded through the bluebells, not words but the approximation of them, the wet click of a tongue against palate, the sound of wind through hollow teeth. It came from everywhere and nowhere, circling her like a shark in deep water, moving from her left to her right without traversing the space between. Rory backed toward the center stone. Her heel struck something soft that gave beneath her weight. She looked down. A foxglove had wrapped its fibrous stem around her ankle, petals opening and closing with peristaltic rhythm, like a mouth gasping for air, revealing stamens that looked too much like teeth. She kicked free. The flower shrieked, a sound like tearing metal and breaking glass, and withered into black slime that smoked against the soil. The standing stones groaned. Not wood creaking in wind. Voices. Old voices. The oaks twisted on their roots, grinding in the earth, inching closer, closing the gap between them like jaws beginning to shut. The clearing shrank. Thirty feet became twenty. Twenty became ten. Rory ran. Three strides toward where the entrance had been, toward Petersham and the real world and the delivery scooter parked outside Yu-Fei's restaurant where her life made linear sense. The space distorted. Each step carried her deeper into the grove, the stones remaining equidistant no matter how fast she moved. Her lungs burned. The humid air refused to fill them properly, too thick, tasting of pollen and grave dirt and the particular copper scent of the pendant heating against her chest. She stopped. Bending double, hands on knees, she forced herself to think. Cool-headed. Quick out-of-the-box thinking. That's what Eva always said after Cardiff, after Evan, after the courtrooms that felt like cages. Panic killed. Observation saved. The pendant. Rory straightened. The crimson gem hung suspended from its chain, no longer pointing forward but sideways, toward the space between the second and third stone. There, where the darkness pooled thickest, something had coagulated. A shape that defied the moonlight, that absorbed it, that bent the visual field around its edges like a gravitational lens, creating a halo of twisted perception. It wasn't walking. It was unfolding. Layers of shadow peeled back to reveal more shadow, depth without dimension. The wildflowers turned to face it, worshipful, their heads bowing in unison, stems creaking like old floorboards. The temperature plummeted. Rory's breath crystallized in the air, hanging as suspended crystals before falling to shatter against the grass. The scar on her wrist flared with sudden white-hot pain, as if the childhood injury had reopened, bleeding memory instead of blood. She clutched the pendant in her fist. The warmth surged, fighting back the cold, creating a sphere of crimson light that pushed against the encroaching dark, illuminating the edges of things that refused to resolve into concrete form. The unfolding shape paused. From within the fold of darkness, eyes opened. Not two. Dozens, arranged in concentric circles that suggested a face but revealed nothing of anatomy or intent. They blinked asynchronously, wet shutters over pits that reflected nothing, not even the glow of the Heartstone. Rory stepped back. Her shoulders struck the rough bark of the center standing stone. The tree shuddered, a vibration that traveled down her spine and into her teeth, and she realized with a clarity that froze her blood that the stone wasn't wood at all, but something watching, waiting, holding her in place for the entity that now detached itself fully from the shadows and began to drift across the wildflowers, which did not bend beneath its weight but rather withered in its wake, smoking and blackening. The grove held its breath. Time stuttered. Her watch ticked backwards, the hands spinning counter-clockwise. The air grew teeth, biting into her exposed wrists, her face, seeking entry. Rory gripped the Heartstone until her knuckles matched the silver chain. She didn't run. Running hadn't worked. The thing had no feet, no legs, yet it closed the distance, the eyes rotating to maintain contact, unblinking now, curious and ancient and hungry. She stared into the multitude of eyes and raised the glowing gem high, casting her own shadow long and trembling across the impossible clearing, and waited for the collision that would either shatter the boundary or shatter her.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:18:32.039Z" 2/19/2026, 12:18:32 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1605
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1605
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count3
4
word"magnetic"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"weight"
count3
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"throbbed"
count1
11
word"silk"
count1
12
word"grave"
count1
13
word"crystallized"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"resolve"
count1
16
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"flickered"
2"chill"
3"pulse"
4"magnetic"
5"echo"
6"weight"
7"racing"
8"measured"
9"whisper"
10"throbbed"
11"silk"
12"grave"
13"crystallized"
14"warmth"
15"resolve"
16"down her spine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences139
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences139
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1594
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1572
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"November"
discoveredNames
Petersham2
November2
Isolde1
Grove1
Heartstone3
Pendant1
London2
Tube1
Richmond2
Park2
Yu-Fei1
Eva1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Rory11
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Grove"
2"Pendant"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Rory"
places
0"Petersham"
1"November"
2"London"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
86.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite earth, shifting with the slow rhythm of a sleeper's breathing"
1"felt like cages"
74.53% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.255
wordCount1594
matches
0"not words but the approximation of them, the wet click of a tongue against"
1"no longer pointing forward but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean49.81
std25.4
cv0.51
sampleLengths
0106
157
293
372
447
539
610
766
848
982
1094
1122
1217
1358
1441
1529
1657
1750
1824
1944
2082
2136
222
2361
2418
2559
2638
2747
2887
2928
3042
3138
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences139
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs279
matches
0"wasn't walking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences140
ratio0.014
matches
0"Their scent hit her—honey-sweet and rotting, like fruit left too long in the sun, cloying enough to coat the back of her throat."
1"The distant London glow of streetlamps, the hum of the A307, the whisper of planes overhead—vanished."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount195
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"against frost-rimed gravel."
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.03076923076923077
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean11.39
std11.04
cv0.969
sampleLengths
06
133
24
31
410
514
67
731
86
932
105
1114
128
1325
1433
1527
164
173
183
196
2033
2123
222
2317
244
2524
264
274
2815
2916
3010
313
3224
3310
3411
355
3613
374
381
391
401
418
428
434
4421
456
4614
4719
488
4935
46.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3357142857142857
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners47
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"Then the second hand hesitated,"
1"Just the impression of displacement,"
ratio0.018
79.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences114
matches
0"She checked her phone."
1"She shoved it into her"
2"Her left wrist itched beneath"
3"She scratched at the crescent"
4"She moved past the perimeter"
5"She felt it in her"
6"It had woken her from"
7"She'd followed it across London"
8"They shouldn't exist."
9"Their scent hit her—honey—sweet and"
10"She pulled it free."
11"Her voice sounded wrong."
12"It died in the air"
13"It simply dropped, consumed by"
14"She stepped over the threshold"
15"Her jacket became a burden,"
16"She unzipped it, the metal"
17"It hung suspended, visible almost"
18"Her watch ticked along with"
19"She stared at it."
ratio0.351
30.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences114
matches
0"Rory's trainers crunched against frost-rimed"
1"The gates had locked at"
2"She checked her phone."
3"The screen flickered, digits stuttering"
4"She shoved it into her"
5"Her left wrist itched beneath"
6"She scratched at the crescent"
7"She moved past the perimeter"
8"The standing stones of Isolde's"
9"She felt it in her"
10"Rory touched the Heartstone Pendant"
11"The crimson gem sat against"
12"It had woken her from"
13"She'd followed it across London"
14"The wildflowers showed first."
15"They shouldn't exist."
16"Their scent hit her—honey—sweet and"
17"The silver chain of the"
18"She pulled it free."
19"The crimson stone glowed, faint"
ratio0.86
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount18
matches
0"The gates had locked at dusk, but the gap in the wrought iron near Petersham yielded to her shoulder with a complaint of rusted metal that sounded too loud in t…"
1"The standing stones of Isolde's Grove waited in the clearing ahead, three trunks that centuries of wind and weather had tortured into verticality, their bark si…"
2"She felt it in her teeth, a pressure change that made her sinuses ache."
3"It had woken her from a shallow sleep, pulsing in time with a heartbeat that wasn't hers, pulling her south through empty streets and sleeping suburbs with the …"
4"It died in the air inches from her lips, failing to carry, failing to echo."
5"Roots became fingers digging into earth that wasn't quite earth, shifting with the slow rhythm of a sleeper's breathing."
6"It stood motionless, ancient and inert, yet the moss growing at its base had arranged itself into patterns that looked almost like words in an alphabet she coul…"
7"The wildflowers parted in a wake that led nowhere, stems bending and rebounding in a serpentine path that terminated at the third standing stone."
8"Just the impression of displacement, the bending of starlight around an absence, and the smell of ozone and wet copper that filled her nostrils."
9"The oaks twisted on their roots, grinding in the earth, inching closer, closing the gap between them like jaws beginning to shut."
10"A shape that defied the moonlight, that absorbed it, that bent the visual field around its edges like a gravitational lens, creating a halo of twisted perceptio…"
11"The wildflowers turned to face it, worshipful, their heads bowing in unison, stems creaking like old floorboards."
12"The scar on her wrist flared with sudden white-hot pain, as if the childhood injury had reopened, bleeding memory instead of blood."
13"The warmth surged, fighting back the cold, creating a sphere of crimson light that pushed against the encroaching dark, illuminating the edges of things that re…"
14"They blinked asynchronously, wet shutters over pits that reflected nothing, not even the glow of the Heartstone."
15"The tree shuddered, a vibration that traveled down her spine and into her teeth, and she realized with a clarity that froze her blood that the stone wasn't wood…"
16"The air grew teeth, biting into her exposed wrists, her face, seeking entry."
17"She stared into the multitude of eyes and raised the glowing gem high, casting her own shadow long and trembling across the impossible clearing, and waited for …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
79.8481%