Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXCTJM4CDG2Z4ZN0M08KW5

Run Details

Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.000434
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass knocker hammered a staccato rhythm against the wood, sharp and demanding. Aurora Carter, half-asleep on the threadbare sofa, jerked upright, the scent of stale coffee and old paper filling her nostrils. She’d been expecting the landlord’s rent reminder, not this. The flat above Silas’s bar was a cramped sanctuary—bookshelves groaning under the weight of occult texts and legal tomes, the air thick with the tang of copper and something else, something ancient. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, flattened himself against the worn rug, eyes wide as the door swung inward. Lucien Moreau stood framed in the doorway, his platinum blond hair slicked back like polished obsidian, the ivory-handled cane resting against his tailored charcoal suit. His heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one black—scanned the room with unsettling precision. Aurora’s breath hitched. The scar on her left wrist, a crescent moon of pale flesh, pulsed faintly beneath her sleeve. She’d fled here, to this cluttered nest, after Evan. After the bruises faded and the whispers died down. Now, the past had returned, draped in silk and menace. “Aurora,” he said, his voice a low rumble that vibrated through the floorboards. No “Rory,” no “Laila.” Just her full name, sharp as a blade. “I’ve been looking for you.” She didn’t move, didn’t speak. The silence stretched, thick and heavy, punctuated only by Ptolemy’s soft purr. The flat felt smaller, the walls closing in. She remembered the nights they’d spent here, tangled in sheets, the scent of his cologne mingling with the dust. The promises he’d made, the lies he’d spun. The scar on her wrist was a constant reminder—a souvenir from a childhood accident, yes, but also a symbol of the cage he’d tried to build around her. “You’re working late again,” he continued, stepping further into the cramped space. His polished shoes clicked on the worn floorboards. “At the restaurant. Delivering takeout. Isn’t that a step down from barrister?” Aurora’s fingers tightened on the arm of the sofa. “I’m not here to discuss my career choices, Lucien.” Her voice was cool, controlled, but her heart hammered against her ribs. The memory of his touch, the heat of his body, still lingered like a ghost. “What do you want?” He leaned against the doorframe, the ivory cane tapping a slow, deliberate rhythm against the wood. “I need something. Something you have.” His eyes, the amber one fixed on her, held a dangerous glint. “Or someone.” The words hung in the air, thick and poisonous. Aurora’s mind raced. Eva was out, probably buried in some arcane text at the library. Silas was downstairs, likely nursing a whiskey. No one else was here. “I don’t know what you’re talking about,” she lied, her gaze flicking to the window, to the narrow alley outside. Escape was a door away, but the streets were dark and unfamiliar. “Don’t play innocent,” he murmured, stepping closer. The scent of sandalwood and something darker, something primal, washed over her. “You know exactly what I mean. The artifact. The one you found in the Thames.” The Thames. The river that had swallowed secrets for centuries. Aurora’s breath caught. The artifact. She’d found it, buried in silt, its surface etched with symbols that made her blood run cold. She’d hidden it in the flat, buried beneath a stack of legal briefs. Lucien had always been obsessed with power, with control. He’d never understood that some things couldn’t be bought or bargained for. “You think I’d leave something like that lying around?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper. “It’s dangerous.” “Dangerous is relative,” he replied, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial murmur. “To the wrong people, it’s a weapon. To the right ones... it’s an opportunity.” He reached into his tailored suit pocket, pulling out a small, velvet-lined box. “I’m offering you a choice, Aurora. Hand it over, and I’ll make sure your past stays buried. Walk away, and I’ll ensure your future is... complicated.” The box rested on the coffee table, a dark promise. Aurora stared at it, her mind racing. Lucien’s eyes held hers, the amber one burning with an intensity that made her skin flush. The scar on her wrist itched, a reminder of the cage he’d tried to build. But this... this was different. This was power. This was a chance to rewrite the rules. “What if I refuse?” she asked, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. He smiled, a slow, chilling curve of his lips. “Then we play a different game. One where the stakes are higher. And the winner takes everything.” The door to the flat creaked open behind him, a sudden intrusion. Silas stood there, wiping his hands on a towel, his brow furrowed. “Aurora? You got a visitor?” Lucien’s gaze flicked to the door, then back to Aurora, a flicker of annoyance crossing his face. “Just a business associate,” he said, his voice smooth as silk. “Nothing to worry about.” Aurora met his eyes, the amber one holding hers. “Tell him to go away, Silas,” she murmured, her voice low and dangerous. “Or I’ll tell him about the time you tried to sell me to the highest bidder.” Lucien’s smile widened, a predator’s grin. “Careful, Aurora,” he whispered, his breath warm against her ear. “Some secrets are better left buried. Especially yours.” He turned, his tailored suit a dark silhouette against the dim light of the flat. As he walked towards the door, the ivory-handled cane tapping a final, ominous rhythm, Aurora knew the game had truly begun. The past wasn’t buried. It was waking, hungry, and Lucien Moreau was the key.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount939
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount939
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"reminder"
count3
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"silk"
count2
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"glint"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"ensure"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"intensity"
count1
16
word"chilling"
count1
17
word"furrowed"
count1
18
word"flicked"
count1
19
word"flicker"
count1
20
word"predator"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"sanctuary"
2"weight"
3"scanned"
4"pulsed"
5"silk"
6"vibrated"
7"silence"
8"glint"
9"raced"
10"etched"
11"whisper"
12"velvet"
13"ensure"
14"racing"
15"intensity"
16"chilling"
17"furrowed"
18"flicked"
19"flicker"
20"predator"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords931
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount741
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Silas3
Moreau2
Evan1
Ptolemy2
Escape1
Thames1
Aurora9
Lucien6
persons
0"Carter"
1"Silas"
2"Moreau"
3"Evan"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Aurora"
6"Lucien"
places
0"Escape"
1"Thames"
globalScore0.893
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount931
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"understood that some"
94.98% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean46.55
std22.46
cv0.482
sampleLengths
091
184
230
380
432
549
636
768
834
966
1018
1165
1264
1315
1426
1529
1632
1738
1824
1950
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"been obsessed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs113
matches
0"was waking"
37.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences81
ratio0.037
matches
0"The flat above Silas’s bar was a cramped sanctuary—bookshelves groaning under the weight of occult texts and legal tomes, the air thick with the tang of copper and something else, something ancient."
1"His heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one black—scanned the room with unsettling precision."
2"The scar on her wrist was a constant reminder—a souvenir from a childhood accident, yes, but also a symbol of the cage he’d tried to build around her."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount749
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"primal, washed over her."
1"small, velvet-lined box."
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.020026702269692925
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00801068090787717
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean11.49
std6.51
cv0.566
sampleLengths
013
120
29
332
417
525
611
73
817
99
109
1110
1213
1312
145
155
1612
178
1819
198
2028
2112
228
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249
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2615
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2918
302
319
323
3312
347
355
3620
3712
387
3912
4015
412
428
433
442
4517
4613
479
4812
4916
56.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.38271604938271603
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
62.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences66
matches
0"She’d been expecting the landlord’s"
1"His heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one"
2"She’d fled here, to this"
3"he said, his voice a"
4"She didn’t move, didn’t speak."
5"She remembered the nights they’d"
6"he continued, stepping further into"
7"His polished shoes clicked on"
8"Her voice was cool, controlled,"
9"He leaned against the doorframe,"
10"His eyes, the amber one"
11"she lied, her gaze flicking"
12"he murmured, stepping closer"
13"She’d found it, buried in"
14"She’d hidden it in the"
15"He’d never understood that some"
16"she asked, her voice barely"
17"he replied, his voice dropping"
18"He reached into his tailored"
19"she asked, her voice steady"
ratio0.394
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences66
matches
0"The brass knocker hammered a"
1"Aurora Carter, half-asleep on the"
2"She’d been expecting the landlord’s"
3"The flat above Silas’s bar"
4"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, flattened"
5"Lucien Moreau stood framed in"
6"His heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one"
7"Aurora’s breath hitched."
8"The scar on her left"
9"She’d fled here, to this"
10"he said, his voice a"
11"She didn’t move, didn’t speak."
12"The silence stretched, thick and"
13"The flat felt smaller, the"
14"She remembered the nights they’d"
15"The promises he’d made, the"
16"The scar on her wrist"
17"he continued, stepping further into"
18"His polished shoes clicked on"
19"Aurora’s fingers tightened on the"
ratio0.924
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Now, the past had returned,"
ratio0.015
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She’d found it, buried in silt, its surface etched with symbols that made her blood run cold."
1"Lucien’s eyes held hers, the amber one burning with an intensity that made her skin flush."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"he said, his voice a low rumble that vibrated through the floorboards"
1"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
2"he replied, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial murmur"
3"she asked, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
4"he said, his voice smooth as silk"
5"she murmured, her voice low and dangerous"
6"he whispered, his breath warm against her ear"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he continued (continue)"
1"she lied (lie)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"she murmured (murmur)"
4"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.385
76.3455%