Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXD8DBE1BJS8ACHS7JN27J

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Duration:
32.2s
Cost:
$0.003677
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest cast an eerie glow across the wet pavement. Aurora Carter pulled her jacket tighter against the London drizzle, the weight of the delivery bag still heavy on her shoulder even after her shift had ended. She needed a drink, or maybe just the familiar comfort of Silas' quiet presence. The door creaked open, releasing a wave of warmth and the low murmur of conversation into the night. Rory stepped inside, shaking rain from her black hair. The bar was half-full, a typical Tuesday crowd. Maps and black-and-white photographs covered the walls, watching over the patrons like silent guardians. Silas stood behind the polished mahogany bar, drying a glass with methodical precision. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low light as he looked up, a hint of recognition in his hazel eyes. "You're late tonight." "Delivery to Camden took forever. Traffic's a nightmare." Rory slid onto a stool, setting the delivery bag on the floor. "Usual?" Silas nodded, reaching for a bottle. The silver signet ring on his right hand glinted as he poured. "Eva called earlier. Looking for you." "Everything alright?" "Fine, I think. Just wanted to catch up." He pushed the glass toward her. "You look tired, Aurora." Rory took a sip, the whiskey burning a familiar path down her throat. "Long day. That's all." She traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist with her thumb. "Any interesting characters come through today?" "The usual suspects." Silas leaned against the back counter, his slight limp barely noticeable as he shifted his weight. "Though someone was asking about you earlier." Rory straightened. "Who?" "Didn't give his name. Said he was an old friend." Silas paused. "Said you knew him from university." The bar door opened again, letting in a rush of cold air and laughter. Rory turned, her glass halfway to her lips. A group of three people entered, shaking off rain and talking loudly. And then she saw him. Time stopped. Evan. Her ex stood near the entrance, shaking water from his expensive coat. He looked different—older, certainly, but there was something else. A confidence that hadn't been there before, a success that showed in his tailored suit and the way he carried himself. His eyes scanned the room, and when they landed on Rory, widened in recognition. "Aurora? Is that really you?" The voice was the same, yet different. Calmer. Measured. No trace of the anger that had once haunted it. Rory's fingers tightened around her glass. Her mind raced, calculating exits, scenarios. Silas moved subtly closer to the phone beneath the counter, his protective instincts kicking in. "Evan." Her voice came out steadier than she expected. "What are you doing here?" "I could ask you the same." He approached the bar, not taking a seat but standing a few feet away. Respectful distance. "Silas, right? Mind if I join?" Silas nodded slowly, his eyes never leaving Rory's face. "The bar's open to anyone who can pay." Evan signaled to Silas for a drink before turning back to Rory. "You look good, Aurora. Really good." The compliment hung in the air between them, loaded with memories neither dared to voice. Three years. Three years since she'd fled Cardiff, since Eva had helped her disappear into London's sprawling anonymity. "You've changed," Rory said finally. "We all have." Evan accepted his drink from Silas, his movements precise. "I heard about your father. I'm sorry." Rory flinched. The mention of her father's death last year still caught her off guard. "How would you know about that?" "I keep tabs. On people who mattered." Evan swirled the amber liquid in his glass. "I wanted to reach out when it happened, but I figured... well, I figured you wouldn't want to hear from me." "You figured right." "Fair enough." Evan took a sip. "I'm in London for business. Consulting now. Security systems. Funny, isn't it? The boy who couldn't control his temper now teaches others how to protect themselves." Rory studied him, searching for traces of the man who had once thrown a vase against the wall because she'd come home ten minutes late. The man who had blamed her for his failures, who had made her feel small and insignificant until she'd barely recognized herself. "Why are you really here, Evan?" The question hung between them, sharp and immediate. Evan set his glass down with deliberate care. "I saw your name on a client list. One of the restaurants you deliver for. They've upgraded their security system." "So you tracked me down." "No." He shook his head. "I came to the area hoping I might run into you. Pathetic, maybe. But I needed to see you." Silas moved quietly down the bar, giving them space but remaining within earshot. His presence was a silent reassurance. "Three years, Evan." Rory's voice was low. "Three years without a word. And now you just happen to be in the neighborhood?" "I know how it sounds." Evan ran a hand through his hair, a gesture so familiar it made Rory's chest ache. "I've been getting help. Therapy. Anger management. It took me a long time to understand what I did—to you, to myself." "People don't change." "Some do." Evan met her eyes, and for the first time, Rory saw something genuine in his gaze. "Not completely, maybe. But enough. Enough to regret. Enough to want to make amends." Rory finished her drink in one swallow, the burn matching the fire in her throat. "You can't fix the past, Evan." "I know that." His voice softened. "But maybe we can build a different future. Not together—not like that. But maybe as people who can exist in the same city without fear." The weight of time pressed down on them—years of hurt, of healing, of becoming different people than they had been. The girl who had stayed too long, believing love meant fixing someone. The boy who had thought control meant strength. "I'm different now," Evan said quietly, as if reading her thoughts. "But I see you're different too. Stronger." "I had to be." Silas approached quietly, refilling Rory's glass without asking. His movements were measured, giving her space to decide. "I should go," Evan said suddenly, standing. "I didn't mean to ruin your evening." Rory looked at him—at the familiar stranger standing before her. The man who had both broken her and shaped her into who she had become. "One drink," she heard herself say. "For old times' sake. But not here." Evan nodded slowly, understanding. "There's a café around the corner. Open late." "Tomorrow," Rory specified. "Noon." A small smile touched Evan's lips. "I'll be there." He left money on the bar and walked away, leaving Rory alone with her thoughts and Silas' quiet presence. "You don't have to go tomorrow," Silas said, his voice low. "I know." Rory stared into her fresh glass. "But I think I need to." Silas nodded, his hazel eyes understanding. "People surprise you sometimes. But be careful, Aurora. The past has a way of catching up when you least expect it." Rory touched the crescent scar on her wrist, a reminder of another time, another pain she had survived. She had run once. Now she needed to face what had chased her, not because she wanted to go back, but to prove she had truly moved forward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Rory said finally [finally]"
1"Evan said quietly [quietly]"
2"Evan said suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.383
leniency0.767
rawRatio0.13
effectiveRatio0.1
67.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1235
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"really"
count3
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"completely"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"completely"
3"suddenly"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1235
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"familiar"
count4
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"measured"
count2
7
word"raced"
count1
8
word"calculating"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"warmth"
3"methodical"
4"traced"
5"scanned"
6"measured"
7"raced"
8"calculating"
9"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences81
matches
0"a wave of warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1225
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount807
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
London2
Tuesday1
Silas12
Rory22
Respectful1
Cardiff1
Eva1
Evan12
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Eva"
6"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.137
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if reading her thoughts"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.816
wordCount1225
matches
0"not taking a seat but standing a few feet away"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean21.12
std14.26
cv0.675
sampleLengths
057
149
233
33
421
524
62
718
835
926
103
1118
1239
132
141
1556
165
1719
1827
1914
2028
2117
2218
2333
245
2519
2621
2736
283
2932
3047
316
328
3328
345
3524
3619
3722
3842
393
4032
4121
4231
4340
4418
454
4617
4714
4825
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"were measured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs143
matches(empty)
70.83% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences119
ratio0.025
matches
0"He looked different—older, certainly, but there was something else."
1"The weight of time pressed down on them—years of hurt, of healing, of becoming different people than they had been."
2"Rory looked at him—at the familiar stranger standing before her."
90.19% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount371
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.05121293800539083
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.013477088948787063
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean10.29
std6.54
cv0.636
sampleLengths
016
127
214
318
49
58
614
713
820
93
1020
111
126
1312
146
152
1614
174
1813
1916
206
2119
227
232
241
2512
266
2714
288
2912
305
312
321
3312
349
3521
3614
375
387
391
401
4110
426
436
4415
459
465
4720
482
496
59.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3949579831932773
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences71
matches
0"She needed a drink, or"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
2"He pushed the glass toward"
3"She traced the crescent-shaped scar"
4"Her ex stood near the"
5"He looked different—older, certainly, but"
6"His eyes scanned the room,"
7"Her mind raced, calculating exits,"
8"Her voice came out steadier"
9"He approached the bar, not"
10"He shook his head"
11"His presence was a silent"
12"His voice softened"
13"His movements were measured, giving"
14"she heard herself say"
15"He left money on the"
16"She had run once."
ratio0.239
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences71
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora Carter pulled her jacket"
2"She needed a drink, or"
3"The door creaked open, releasing"
4"Rory stepped inside, shaking rain"
5"The bar was half-full, a"
6"Maps and black-and-white photographs covered"
7"Silas stood behind the polished"
8"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
9"Rory slid onto a stool,"
10"Silas nodded, reaching for a"
11"The silver signet ring on"
12"He pushed the glass toward"
13"Rory took a sip, the"
14"She traced the crescent-shaped scar"
15"Silas leaned against the back"
16"The bar door opened again,"
17"Rory turned, her glass halfway"
18"A group of three people"
19"Her ex stood near the"
ratio0.944
70.42% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Now she needed to face"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The man who had blamed her for his failures, who had made her feel small and insignificant until she'd barely recognized herself."
16.30% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He approached, not taking a seat but standing a few feet away"
1"Evan accepted, his movements precise"
2"Evan ran, a gesture so familiar it made Rory's chest ache"
3"Evan said quietly, as if reading her thoughts"
4"Silas said, his voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.3227%