Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXDE770DXD7KZ2RVX9TXGK

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Duration:
36.1s
Cost:
$0.024720

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered London's streets like bullets from above, turning every surface into a treacherous mirror. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped against the wet pavement as she pursued the figure darting between the lampposts ahead. Her worn leather watch caught a streetlight's glare as she pumped her arms, muscles moving with military precision despite the chaos of the chase. "Stop! Police!" The suspect—a wiry man with dark clothing that seemed to absorb the night—glanced back once before vaulting over a low barrier. Quinn cursed under her breath and followed, her sharp jaw set with determination. Eighteen years on the force had taught her that the ones who ran always had something to hide. The chase wound through Soho's narrow streets, past the green neon glow of The Raven's Nest where a few stragglers huddled under the bar's awning. Quinn recognised the establishment but had no time to wonder what business brought people out on a night like this. Her quarry had already disappeared around the corner onto Camden High Street. Quinn rounded the corner and nearly lost her footing on the slick cobblestones. The suspect was nowhere to be seen. She stood under a flickering streetlight, rain streaming down her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair, brown eyes scanning the empty street. Nothing but closed shopfronts and the distant rumble of late-night traffic. A metallic clang echoed from somewhere nearby. Quinn spun towards the sound and spotted an open manhole cover beside a row of bins. Steam rose from the opening like breath from some underground beast. She approached cautiously, one hand resting on her radio, the other on her torch. The ladder descended into absolute darkness. Quinn clicked on her torch and aimed the beam downward. The light revealed rough brick walls slick with moisture and what looked like an abandoned Tube platform far below. This wasn't on any map she knew. Her radio crackled with static when she tried to call for backup. Dead zone. Quinn had spent three years wondering what really happened to DS Morris. Three years of sleepless nights and unanswered questions. Three years of following leads that went nowhere and witnesses who claimed they'd seen things that couldn't exist. Every instinct screamed that this case was connected to Morris's disappearance, connected to that same wrongness she'd felt that night when they'd lost him. She holstered her radio and gripped the ladder's wet rungs. The descent felt endless. Quinn's torch beam swept across crumbling Victorian brickwork and rusted iron fixtures that predated the modern Underground. The air grew warmer as she climbed down, thick with unfamiliar scents—incense, ozone, something metallic that made her teeth ache. Her boots touched solid ground. The platform stretched away into darkness on both sides, but ahead, a faint amber glow beckoned from what should have been a tunnel mouth. Quinn moved towards it, her torch creating dancing shadows on the walls. The tunnel opened into a vast circular chamber that defied the laws of London's geography. Dozens of stalls lined the walls, their canvas awnings creating a maze of shadows and flickering candlelight. People moved between them—but Quinn's trained eye caught details that made her grip her torch tighter. A woman whose skin seemed to shimmer like oil on water. A man whose shadow fell in the wrong direction. A vendor whose wares included bottles filled with what looked like liquid starlight. "First time at the Veil Market?" Quinn spun towards the voice. A man approached from her left—olive skin, warm brown eyes, short curly hair dark with moisture. A Saint Christopher medallion caught the amber light at his throat, and Quinn noticed the scar running along his left forearm when he gestured towards the market. "Tomás Herrera. Most people call me Tommy." His accent carried traces of Spain beneath London inflections. "You're looking for someone." "Detective Quinn, Metropolitan Police." She kept her torch trained on him but didn't draw her weapon. Not yet. "I'm pursuing a suspect." Tommy's expression shifted, becoming more guarded. "Police don't usually make it down here. Takes a bone token to enter, and those aren't easy to come by." Quinn frowned and patted her jacket pocket. Something small and hard pressed against her fingers—something that definitely hadn't been there before the chase began. She pulled it out and stared at a piece of yellowed bone carved with symbols that hurt to look at directly. "Interesting." Tommy stepped closer, and Quinn caught the scent of antiseptic beneath his cologne. "Someone wanted you to find this place. Question is, why?" A scream echoed from deeper in the market, sharp and terrified. Quinn's head snapped towards the sound, every instinct telling her to respond, to help. But Tommy caught her arm. "Detective, you need to understand something. The Market moves every full moon. Tonight's the night. If you go deeper and don't know the rules, you might not find your way back to London. Ever." Quinn looked at the bone token in her palm, then at the maze of stalls where shadows moved wrong and bottles held impossible things. The suspect was somewhere in there, along with answers to questions that had haunted her for three years. "The person I'm chasing—he's connected to my partner's death." Tommy's grip tightened on her arm. "DS Morris?" The name hit Quinn like a physical blow. She stared at Tommy, mind racing. "How do you know that name?" "Because I was there that night three years ago. I tried to save him." Tommy's voice dropped to barely above a whisper. "But some wounds go deeper than flesh and bone." Another scream cut through the market's ambient murmur, closer this time. Quinn pulled free from Tommy's grip and took a step towards the stalls. "Detective, please. Let me help you navigate this. The Market has its own justice, its own law. Go in unprepared and you'll end up like—" "Like Morris?" Tommy nodded grimly. "Or worse." Quinn weighed the torch in her hand, studying the impossible marketplace spread before her. Eighteen years of police work battled against three years of unanswered questions. The suspect was in there somewhere, carrying secrets that might finally explain what happened to her partner. The bone token grew warm against her palm.
total_cost0.02472

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1042
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"really"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1042
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"treacherous"
count1
1
word"streaming"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count2
4
word"dancing"
count1
5
word"racing"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"treacherous"
1"streaming"
2"scanning"
3"echoed"
4"dancing"
5"racing"
6"whisper"
7"navigate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences67
matches
0"t with determination"
14.93% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1032
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount871
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity2.18
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Tommy"
discoveredNames
London3
Harlow1
Quinn19
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Camden1
High1
Street1
Tube1
Morris2
Victorian1
Underground1
Saint1
Christopher1
Spain1
Tommy8
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tommy"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Camden"
3"High"
4"Street"
5"Spain"
globalScore0.409
windowScore0.333
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like an abandoned Tube platform fa"
1"looked like liquid starlight"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1032
matches(empty)
84.36% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"screamed that this felt that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean30.35
std19.73
cv0.65
sampleLengths
059
12
252
357
451
57
641
742
814
962
1010
1141
1241
1381
146
1548
1620
1722
1826
1945
2024
2130
2234
2342
249
258
2620
2731
2824
2925
302
315
3243
338
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"was connected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences81
ratio0.062
matches
0"The suspect—a wiry man with dark clothing that seemed to absorb the night—glanced back once before vaulting over a low barrier."
1"The air grew warmer as she climbed down, thick with unfamiliar scents—incense, ozone, something metallic that made her teeth ache."
2"People moved between them—but Quinn's trained eye caught details that made her grip her torch tighter."
3"A man approached from her left—olive skin, warm brown eyes, short curly hair dark with moisture."
4"Something small and hard pressed against her fingers—something that definitely hadn't been there before the chase began."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount880
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"hard pressed against her"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.028409090909090908
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011363636363636364
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean12.74
std6.99
cv0.548
sampleLengths
016
119
224
32
421
513
618
725
820
912
1013
117
1220
1311
147
1516
1611
1714
186
1910
2019
217
2212
232
2412
258
2618
2724
2810
294
3017
3120
325
3324
3412
3515
3617
3716
3811
399
4013
416
425
4316
4427
4516
464
4716
482
494
60.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4074074074074074
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences65
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught"
1"Her quarry had already disappeared"
2"She stood under a flickering"
3"She approached cautiously, one hand"
4"Her radio crackled with static"
5"She holstered her radio and"
6"Her boots touched solid ground."
7"His accent carried traces of"
8"She kept her torch trained"
9"She pulled it out and"
10"She stared at Tommy, mind"
ratio0.169
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences65
matches
0"The rain hammered London's streets"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped"
2"Her worn leather watch caught"
3"The suspect—a wiry man with"
4"Quinn cursed under her breath"
5"The chase wound through Soho's"
6"Quinn recognised the establishment but"
7"Her quarry had already disappeared"
8"Quinn rounded the corner and"
9"The suspect was nowhere to"
10"She stood under a flickering"
11"Nothing but closed shopfronts and"
12"A metallic clang echoed from"
13"Quinn spun towards the sound"
14"Steam rose from the opening"
15"She approached cautiously, one hand"
16"The ladder descended into absolute"
17"Quinn clicked on her torch"
18"The light revealed rough brick"
19"This wasn't on any map"
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"People moved between them—but Quinn's trained eye caught details that made her grip her torch tighter."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.5400%