Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXDHT3PEZK6M3WZJJD10C2

Run Details

Duration:
9.0s
Cost:
$0.000718
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chill morning air did little to cut through Aurora’s apprehension as she stepped out of her battered Fiat 500. The car’s headlights cut through the thick fog clinging to the grounds of Richmond Park, illuminating a path that seemed to lead nowhere. It was well past midnight, the kind of hour when shadows stretched and warped, turning familiar shapes into monstrous silhouettes. She gripped the steering wheel, her knuckles white beneath the thin fabric of her gloves. The Heartstone Pendant, tucked beneath her jumper, offered no comfort. It remained stubbornly cool against her skin, a dead weight where usually a gentle pulse could be felt. She had been certain it would guide her, that its warmth would bloom like a beacon, but here, enveloped in an oppressive stillness, it did nothing. She’d driven for hours, following the vaguest of directions scribbled on a napkin – a crude map of London’s winding arteries, then a hurried exit onto deserted country lanes, the streetlights thinning until they vanished altogether. The Fae Grove. Isolde’s grove. Richmond grove. The names echoed in her mind, each more ethereal than the last. Eva had mentioned it once, in hushed tones, a place of ancient power, a sanctuary of sorts. Now, with Evan’s shadow still long and cold over her life, Rory had latched onto the idea of a sanctuary, a place where she could simply *be*, away from the suffocating familiarity of her life above Silas’s bar. But the closer she got, the less sanctuary and more trap the idea felt. The Fiat’s engine sputtered and died, plunging the immediate vicinity into absolute silence. The fog seemed to press in on the car, a damp, clammy shroud. Rory’s breath hitched. She fumbled with the keys, her fingers clumsy, trying to restart the engine. Nothing. It coughed once, a hollow, defeated gasp, and fell silent again. A shiver, entirely independent of the cold, traced a path up her spine. “Great,” she muttered, the sound swallowed by the mist. She pushed the car door open, its reluctant groan unnervingly loud. The ground beneath her feet was soft, yielding, a thick carpet of unseen leaves and damp earth. In the dim glow of her headlights, she could make out the hulking shapes of trees, their branches skeletal fingers reaching into the swirling grey. This was it, then. The grove. It smelled of wet soil and decay, an earthy perfume that was far from pleasant. She remembered Eva’s description: wildflowers blooming year-round, a pocket between worlds. Rory scanned the impenetrable gloom beyond the car’s dying lights. No wildflowers, no welcoming clearing. Just… trees. And the fog. It moved with a life of its own, swirling and coiling, obscuring and revealing glimpses of the dense woodland. She took a step away from the car, the crunch of her boots unnervingly final. Each sound seemed amplified, distorted. A twig snapped somewhere to her left, sharp and sudden. Rory froze, her heart leaping into her throat. “Hello?” she called out, her voice thin and reedy. Only the relentless whisper of the fog answered. She strained her ears, listening. Silence. That suffocating, watchful silence that was worse than any noise. She walked slowly now, her eyes darting from shadow to shadow. The Pendant, a small cool weight against her sternum, offered no guidance. She reached inside her jumper, her fingers tracing its smooth, cool surface. It was supposed to react, to pulse. But nothing. A wave of disappointment, sharp and bitter, washed over her. Eva had trusted her with this, had insisted Rory take it. “It will keep you safe,” she’d said, her eyes wide and earnest. Safe from Evan, safe from the creeping dread that had settled over Rory’s life like a suffocating blanket. A flicker of movement caught her eye. To her right, just at the edge of her vision, something shifted. A deeper shadow detaching itself from the tapestry of darkness. Rory stopped, holding her breath. She squinted, trying to focus. It vanished. Just her eyes playing tricks, she told herself, the fog and the late hour conjuring phantoms. She forced herself to take another step. Then, a sound. Not a snap of a twig, but something else. A low, guttural hum, like a distant, discordant choir. It seemed to emanate from the very ground beneath her feet, a vibration rather than an audible noise. Rory’s skin prickled. This was it. The wrongness she had felt descending the moment she turned off the main road. It wasn't just the isolation, or the broken-down car. It was a palpable sense of being observed, of a vast, unseen hunger lurking just beyond the veil of fog. She thought about turning back, about forcing the Fiat to start, about driving blind through the encroaching darkness. But there was nowhere *to* go. The road behind had dissolved into the mist, and her car was dead. She was here. And whatever "here" was, it felt profoundly unwelcoming. The humming intensified, a low thrum that vibrated through the soles of her boots, up her legs, into her teeth. It was a sound that burrowed into your bones, a primal thrum that spoke of ancient rituals and things that slept deep beneath the earth. Rory’s breath came in shallow gasps. She wanted to run, to scream, but her legs felt leaden, rooted to the spot. She could feel it now, a subtle pressure against her temples, like a hand pressing gently into her skull. Her vision began to blur at the edges, the fog taking on a pearlescent sheen. And then she saw them. Shapes. Not solid figures, but impressions, outlines against the swirling grey. They moved with an unnatural grace, gliding through the trees, never quite resolving into anything distinct. They were there, and then they weren't. Like smoke, or the memory of something glimpsed in passing. Rory stumbled back, her hand instinctively flying to her mouth to stifle a cry. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drumbeat against the oppressive hum. The Crescent scar on her left wrist, a pale sliver against her skin, felt suddenly hot, a phantom burn. “Isolde?” she whispered, the name a fragile plea. “Is this your grove?” The humming seemed to pause, a fleeting moment of absolute stillness, before it surged again, louder this time, laced with a chilling, inhuman resonance. The shapes at the edge of her vision coalesced, becoming clearer, more defined. Tall, impossibly slender figures, their limbs too long, their movements jerky and unnatural. They were cloaked in shadows, their forms shifting and indistinct, yet Rory felt their gaze, a focused, chilling awareness on her. She fumbled for the Pendant. Her fingers closed around it, and for the first time all night, a faint warmth bloomed against her palm. It was barely perceptible, a spark of heat against the encroaching cold, but it was there. And with that faint warmth, a surge of desperate resolve. She wasn't going to stand here and be consumed. She turned, her eyes fixed on the barely visible outline of her car, the only anchor to the world she knew. She had to get back. She had to escape this… wrongness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"it felt profoundly [profoundly]"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.833
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
83.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1192
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"gently"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1192
totalAiIsms38
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"apprehension"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count3
6
word"beacon"
count1
7
word"oppressive"
count2
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"sanctuary"
count3
10
word"silence"
count3
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"hulking"
count1
13
word"scanned"
count1
14
word"gloom"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"tracing"
count1
17
word"flicker"
count1
18
word"tapestry"
count1
19
word"palpable"
count1
20
word"sense of"
count1
21
word"vibrated"
count1
22
word"could feel"
count1
23
word"resolving"
count1
24
word"fleeting"
count1
25
word"chilling"
count2
26
word"resonance"
count1
27
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"apprehension"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"pulse"
5"warmth"
6"beacon"
7"oppressive"
8"echoed"
9"sanctuary"
10"silence"
11"traced"
12"hulking"
13"scanned"
14"gloom"
15"whisper"
16"tracing"
17"flicker"
18"tapestry"
19"palpable"
20"sense of"
21"vibrated"
22"could feel"
23"resolving"
24"fleeting"
25"chilling"
26"resonance"
27"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1191
ratio0.002
matches
0"be"
1"to"
83.33% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Just her eyes playing tricks, she told herself, the fog and the late hour conjuring phantoms."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1178
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Fiat3
Richmond2
Park1
Heartstone1
Pendant3
London1
Fae1
Grove1
Evan2
Rory11
Silas1
Eva3
Safe1
Crescent1
persons
0"Fiat"
1"Pendant"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
places
0"Aurora"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"London"
4"Fae"
5"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"path that seemed to lead nowhere"
32.07% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.679
wordCount1191
matches
0"Not a snap of a twig, but something else"
1"Not solid figures, but impressions, outlines against the swirling grey"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
66.80% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean74.44
std28.57
cv0.384
sampleLengths
0132
1124
267
383
450
571
695
764
888
948
1066
1183
1246
1312
1471
1591
98.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"was supposed"
1"were cloaked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs191
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences106
ratio0.009
matches
0"She’d driven for hours, following the vaguest of directions scribbled on a napkin – a crude map of London’s winding arteries, then a hurried exit onto deserted country lanes, the streetlights thinning until they vanished altogether."
91.89% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1179
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"bitter, washed over her."
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.04240882103477523
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.013570822731128074
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean11.24
std7.27
cv0.647
sampleLengths
020
123
220
315
410
518
626
736
83
92
102
1112
1217
1338
1414
1513
1613
173
1813
191
2011
2113
229
2311
2417
2525
264
272
2815
2911
3010
315
321
331
343
3519
3615
375
3810
398
409
418
425
431
4410
4511
4612
4712
487
492
44.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.32075471698113206
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences94
matches
0"Only the relentless whisper of"
1"Just her eyes playing tricks,"
2"Then, a sound."
ratio0.032
41.28% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences94
matches
0"It was well past midnight,"
1"She gripped the steering wheel,"
2"It remained stubbornly cool against"
3"She had been certain it"
4"She’d driven for hours, following"
5"She fumbled with the keys,"
6"It coughed once, a hollow,"
7"she muttered, the sound swallowed"
8"She pushed the car door"
9"It smelled of wet soil"
10"She remembered Eva’s description: wildflowers"
11"It moved with a life"
12"She took a step away"
13"she called out, her voice"
14"She strained her ears, listening."
15"She walked slowly now, her"
16"She reached inside her jumper,"
17"It was supposed to react,"
18"she’d said, her eyes wide"
19"She squinted, trying to focus."
ratio0.447
55.74% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences94
matches
0"The chill morning air did"
1"The car’s headlights cut through"
2"It was well past midnight,"
3"She gripped the steering wheel,"
4"The Heartstone Pendant, tucked beneath"
5"It remained stubbornly cool against"
6"She had been certain it"
7"She’d driven for hours, following"
8"The Fae Grove."
9"The names echoed in her"
10"Eva had mentioned it once,"
11"The Fiat’s engine sputtered and"
12"The fog seemed to press"
13"Rory’s breath hitched."
14"She fumbled with the keys,"
15"It coughed once, a hollow,"
16"A shiver, entirely independent of"
17"she muttered, the sound swallowed"
18"She pushed the car door"
19"The ground beneath her feet"
ratio0.809
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"Now, with Evan’s shadow still"
1"To her right, just at"
ratio0.021
96.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The car’s headlights cut through the thick fog clinging to the grounds of Richmond Park, illuminating a path that seemed to lead nowhere."
1"It smelled of wet soil and decay, an earthy perfume that was far from pleasant."
2"That suffocating, watchful silence that was worse than any noise."
3"Safe from Evan, safe from the creeping dread that had settled over Rory’s life like a suffocating blanket."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she called out, her voice thin and reedy"
1"she’d, her eyes wide and earnest"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"she’d (would)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
75.5933%