Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXDX9RG58V9ARHR8YNCNG8

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Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.000921
Provider:
AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the slick pavement, turning the sodium glow of streetlights into shimmering halos. Harlow Quinn’s boots hammered a steady, punishing rhythm against the ground, her breath coming in sharp clouds that vanished into the downpour. Twenty meters ahead, a dark figure—Tomás Herrera—ducked around the corner of a newsagent’s, his silhouette briefly caught in the flash of a passing cab. “Met Police! Stop!” He didn’t even glance back. Three weeks of surveillance on the so-called social club meeting at The Raven’s Nest, three weeks of watching the odd comings and goings, and tonight it had finally cracked open. Herrera had left the bar with a silver case, moving with a purpose that screamed guilty knowledge. When Quinn had stepped from the shadows of a doorway to intercept him, he’d bolted. Now they were in a deadly game of chess through the backstreets of Camden, the rain washing away any trace of them. He led her away from the main roads, into a maze of service alleys choked with overflowing bins and the ghosts of old graffiti. The air smelled of wet brick and decay. Quinn’s hand went to the radio on her belt, her fingers slick with rain. Static crackled, useless this far under the railway arches. She was on her own. She rounded a corner and skidded to a halt. The alley ended in a high brick wall topped with rusted barbed wire. No Herrera. Her eyes scanned the shadows. A single, heavy steel door, painted a grimy black, stood slightly ajar in the wall to her left. A thin sliver of unnatural, greenish light spilled from the gap, cutting across the wet asphalt. Quinn approached, her movements silent, military-precise. The door bore no marking, no number. She placed a palm against the cold steel and pushed it open just enough to see. A set of narrow, winding concrete stairs descended into darkness, lit at intervals by weak, buzzing bulbs encased in wire cages. The air that drifted up was warm, thick with the smell of damp earth, ozone, and something else—incense and hot metal. From below came a low murmur, the echo of many voices in a confined space. This wasn’t on any schematic. It wasn’t a basement or a maintenance tunnel. This was something else. She heard a scuff of a shoe on concrete, several flights down. Herrera. Quinn hesitated, one foot on the threshold. Procedure screamed at her to hold, to call for backup, to secure the perimeter. But backup was a static-filled radio call away, and the perimeter was a rain-swept dead end. Herrera, and whatever he was carrying in that case, was slipping away into the city’s underbelly. Morris’s face flashed in her mind—the confusion in his eyes in those final moments before the warehouse went dark, the official report that blamed faulty wiring and panic. She’d never believed it. The things she’d seen since, the edges of cases that didn’t add up, they all pointed to a world just out of sight. She went down. The stairs seemed to descend forever, coiling deep beneath the city. The murmur resolved into a cacophony—bartering, arguing, the clink of glass and metal. The greenish light grew stronger, emanating from flickering gas lamps that lined the walls of a vast, vaulted space. She emerged onto a balcony overlooking a scene that stole her breath. It was an abandoned Tube station, but transformed. The old platforms were lined with makeshift stalls fashioned from wood, silk, and rusted iron. Vendors haggled with customers whose shapes seemed to shift at the corner of her eye. A woman with skin the colour of polished jet sold vials of swirling liquid that pulsed with their own light. A hunched figure in a heavy cloak offered what looked like carved bones from a velvet cushion. The air vibrated with a low, sub-audible hum that made her teeth ache. The Veil Market. She’d heard whispers, always dismissed as junkie ramblings or ghost stories traded in late-night canteens. And there, moving with purpose through the throng on the main platform below, was Tomás Herrera. He held the silver case close to his chest, nodding to a vendor as he passed, familiar in this place of strangeness. Quinn edged along the balcony, keeping to the shadows. The watch on her wrist felt heavy. Going down there was madness. It was a violation of every protocol, a plunge into a jurisdiction that didn’t exist. She was a detective, not a folklorist. Her weapon was her warrant card and the weight of the law, but what law governed this? A figure detached itself from the shadows near the stairwell—tall, thin, wearing a long coat that seemed to drink the light. It turned a featureless porcelain mask towards her. “Token for entry,” it intoned, the voice a dry rustle. “Metropolitan Police.” Quinn flashed her badge, the gesture feeling absurd. The mask tilted. “Irrelevant. Token. Or departure.” Her eyes tracked Herrera again. He was approaching a stall at the far end, where an old man with fingers like gnarled roots was laying out what looked like dried, unfamiliar flowers. He was going to make the exchange. Whatever was in that case would vanish into this subterranean economy, and with it, perhaps another piece of the puzzle Morris had died trying to solve. The masked figure took a step closer, the air around it growing colder. Quinn made her decision. She didn’t have a token. She had eighteen years of service, a sharp jaw set in determination, and a debt to a dead partner. She moved past the figure, not running, but walking with the deliberate, authoritative stride she used to clear a crowded street. She descended a short set of metal steps onto the main platform, the sea of unnatural commerce parting slightly before her. Eyes, of too many colours and shapes, followed her. The hum in the air spiked. Herrera had reached the stall. He placed the silver case on the counter. The old vendor reached for it. “Herrera!” Quinn’s voice cut through the market din, sharp and commanding. It echoed off the tiled arches. He froze, his hand still on the case. He turned, and for the first time she saw his face clearly in the greenish light—the olive skin taut with surprise, the warm brown eyes wide. The Saint Christopher medallion glinted at his throat. “You don’t want to do this, Tomás. Step away from the case.” The market had gone quiet. All other conversations died. Every vendor, every customer, was now watching them, a ring of silent, eerie spectators. Herrera’s gaze darted from her to the vendor, then to the shadowed exits. He swallowed. “Detective Quinn. You shouldn’t be here.” “I go where the evidence leads. That case is evidence. Hand it over.” The old vendor slowly closed his gnarled hand over the case. “Transaction is complete,” he hissed, his voice like sand on stone. “It is not.” Quinn took another step forward. The crowd didn’t part this time; it seemed to solidify around her. She could feel the pressure of their stares, a physical weight. “Tomás, whatever he’s paying you, it’s not worth it. Come with me. Now.” He looked at her, and she saw the conflict in his face—not the fear of a common criminal, but the desperate calculation of a man in an impossible situation. His thumb rubbed over the scar on his forearm. “You don’t understand what this is,” he said, his voice low, urgent. “You need to leave.” “Not without you. Not without that case.” The vendor pulled the case off the counter and into the shadows of his stall. Herrera flinched, as if the movement severed a connection. From the periphery, Quinn saw the tall, masked figure from the balcony now standing at the foot of the metal stairs, blocking her retreat. Other shapes were moving through the crowd, converging slowly. She was in their territory now. And she’d just interrupted their business.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"resolved"
count1
3
word"cacophony"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"porcelain"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"echo"
2"resolved"
3"cacophony"
4"silk"
5"pulsed"
6"velvet"
7"vibrated"
8"familiar"
9"weight"
10"porcelain"
11"echoed"
12"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences102
matches
0"t in determination"
1"t with surprise"
86.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1323
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1243
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn11
Tomás2
Herrera10
Raven1
Nest1
Camden1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Morris2
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
places
0"Raven"
globalScore1
windowScore1
58.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like carved bones from a velvet cu"
1"coat that seemed to drink the light"
2"looked like dried, unfamiliar flowers"
48.83% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.512
wordCount1323
matches
0"not running, but walking with the deliberate, authoritative stride she used t"
1"not the fear of a common criminal, but the desperate calculation of a man in an impossible situatio"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean33.08
std25.3
cv0.765
sampleLengths
060
13
25
384
460
563
629
757
817
913
10108
113
1243
1312
1488
1518
1638
1760
1839
1910
207
2165
2213
2328
2457
2519
2617
2742
2812
2923
3021
3113
3222
3344
3438
3516
367
3724
3833
3912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"were lined"
31.65% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs198
matches
0"was carrying was slipping"
1"was approaching was laying"
2"were moving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences110
ratio0.073
matches
0"Twenty meters ahead, a dark figure—Tomás Herrera—ducked around the corner of a newsagent’s, his silhouette briefly caught in the flash of a passing cab."
1"The air that drifted up was warm, thick with the smell of damp earth, ozone, and something else—incense and hot metal."
2"Morris’s face flashed in her mind—the confusion in his eyes in those final moments before the warehouse went dark, the official report that blamed faulty wiring and panic."
3"The murmur resolved into a cacophony—bartering, arguing, the clink of glass and metal."
4"A figure detached itself from the shadows near the stairwell—tall, thin, wearing a long coat that seemed to drink the light."
5"He turned, and for the first time she saw his face clearly in the greenish light—the olive skin taut with surprise, the warm brown eyes wide."
6"The crowd didn’t part this time; it seemed to solidify around her."
7"He looked at her, and she saw the conflict in his face—not the fear of a common criminal, but the desperate calculation of a man in an impossible situation."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1256
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"so-called social club"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.019904458598726114
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007165605095541401
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean12.03
std6.91
cv0.575
sampleLengths
014
122
224
33
45
530
617
715
822
924
108
1114
129
135
149
1513
162
175
1818
1916
206
217
2216
2321
2421
2515
265
278
284
2912
301
317
3214
3316
3416
3528
364
3723
383
3911
4013
4119
4212
438
4415
4515
4620
4717
4813
493
49.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners40
33.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"All other conversations died."
ratio0.01
74.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences99
matches
0"He didn’t even glance back."
1"He led her away from"
2"She was on her own."
3"She rounded a corner and"
4"Her eyes scanned the shadows."
5"She placed a palm against"
6"It wasn’t a basement or"
7"She heard a scuff of"
8"She’d never believed it."
9"She went down."
10"She emerged onto a balcony"
11"It was an abandoned Tube"
12"She’d heard whispers, always dismissed"
13"He held the silver case"
14"It was a violation of"
15"She was a detective, not"
16"Her weapon was her warrant"
17"It turned a featureless porcelain"
18"it intoned, the voice a"
19"Her eyes tracked Herrera again."
ratio0.364
25.66% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences99
matches
0"Rain lashed the slick pavement,"
1"Harlow Quinn’s boots hammered a"
2"He didn’t even glance back."
3"Herrera had left the bar"
4"He led her away from"
5"The air smelled of wet"
6"Quinn’s hand went to the"
7"Static crackled, useless this far"
8"She was on her own."
9"She rounded a corner and"
10"The alley ended in a"
11"Her eyes scanned the shadows."
12"A single, heavy steel door,"
13"A thin sliver of unnatural,"
14"Quinn approached, her movements silent,"
15"The door bore no marking,"
16"She placed a palm against"
17"A set of narrow, winding"
18"The air that drifted up"
19"This wasn’t on any schematic."
ratio0.869
50.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Now they were in a"
ratio0.01
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Harlow Quinn’s boots hammered a steady, punishing rhythm against the ground, her breath coming in sharp clouds that vanished into the downpour."
1"Herrera had left the bar with a silver case, moving with a purpose that screamed guilty knowledge."
2"The air that drifted up was warm, thick with the smell of damp earth, ozone, and something else—incense and hot metal."
3"Morris’s face flashed in her mind—the confusion in his eyes in those final moments before the warehouse went dark, the official report that blamed faulty wiring…"
4"The greenish light grew stronger, emanating from flickering gas lamps that lined the walls of a vast, vaulted space."
5"A figure detached itself from the shadows near the stairwell—tall, thin, wearing a long coat that seemed to drink the light."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn flashed, the gesture feeling absurd"
1"he said, his voice low, urgent"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.143
74.1856%