Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXE18GM7VWYZ0NJTRVVG6W

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.008887
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door hummed, a low, electric vibration that synced with the throbbing in Rory’s temples. She leaned against the polished mahogany of the bar, the wood cool against her forearms. The Raven's Nest was quiet, save for the clinking of glass and the low murmur of a couple in the corner booth. Silas stood opposite her, drying a tumbler with a dishcloth. His movements were precise, practiced. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light as he set the glass down. "You look like you’ve been run over by a lorry. Repeatedly." Rory scoffed, turning her coaster in slow circles. "Just the usual. Soho traffic on a Friday. A BMW almost took off my wing mirror on Wardour Street." "Road rage. The modern equivalent of dueling pistols." "Less fatal, more tedious." She signaled for another drink. Silas grabbed a bottle of whisky, the amber liquid splashing against the ice. The heavy oak door creaked open. A gust of wind whipped the rain inside, scattering the damp silence of the room. Rory didn't look up immediately, too focused on the condensation on her glass. Silas paused, his eyes narrowing slightly toward the entrance before he resumed his work. A man stepped to the bar, shaking out an umbrella. He wore a trench coat, belted tight, and underneath, a suit that screamed expense and caution. He smelled of stale rain and expensive cologne. "Double scotch. Neat." The voice hit Rory like a physical blow. It was deeper than she remembered, roughened by time or cigarettes, but the cadence—the specific way he rounded his vowels—was unmistakable. She froze, her hand tightening around her glass. Silas poured the drink, sliding it across the surface. The man reached for it, his fingers brushing the wood. As he turned, his gaze swept past Rory, then snapped back. The blood drained from his face. "Rory?" She forced herself to breathe, to unclench her jaw. She hadn't heard that name in years. Not like that. Not with that inflection. "Hello, Callum." Callum stared at her, his glass hovering halfway to his lips. He looked older. The baby fat of their university days had been shaved away, leaving cheekbones that looked sharp enough to cut. His hair was shorter, styled with a severity that bordered on military, and there were lines etched around his eyes that hadn't been there when they were drunk on cheap wine in Cardiff student halls. "I... I heard you moved to London." He blinked, as if expecting her to vanish. "Evan said you just took off." "I did." Silas moved silently down the bar, removing a dirty ashtray, giving them space but keeping his ears open. Callum took a drink, the liquid disappearing in one gulp. He set the glass down with a heavy thud. "That was three years ago." "Time flies." "Does it?" He shifted his weight, looking her up and down. She knew what he saw. The black hair tied back severely, the heavy boots, the jacket that had seen better days. The small crescent scar on her left wrist was visible as she adjusted her grip on the bar. He noticed it. His eyes lingered on the pale mark. "You look different." "So do you. The suit looks expensive. Corporate law finally swallowed you whole?" "Corporate litigation." He corrected her automatically, a habit from their debate team days. "It pays the bills." "It looks like it pays for a lot more than bills." Callum signaled Silas for a refill. Silas poured, his face impassive. "I'm getting married next month," Callum said. The words hung in the air between them, heavier than the smoke. Rory nodded once. "Congratulations. Who’s the lucky victim?" "Her name is Elena. She’s a surgeon." "Clean. Respectable. Everything we swore we’d never become." He laughed, a short, dry sound. "Yeah. Turns out stability isn't the enemy I thought it was when I was twenty-two." "And I suppose sleeping in a king-sized bed beats a futon in a rented flat." "Rory, come on. You don't have to do this." "Do what?" "Act like you’re some kind of... outlaw." He gestured at her clothes. "I saw you outside, unloading boxes from that scooter. The Golden Empress, right? You’re a delivery driver." "It’s honest work." "You were top of our cohort in Con Law. You were supposed to take Silk. We were going to change the system, remember? Not drop off noodles." "The system didn't want changing, Callum. It wanted grinding." She picked up her glass, the ice clinking softly. "I got tired of being the meat in the grinder." He looked down at his hands. "Evan told me you had a breakdown." Rory’s grip on the glass tightened. "Evan wouldn't know a breakdown if it smashed him in the face." "He said you got erratic. Paranoid." "I got clear." They fell into a silence that stretched thin and taut. The jazz track playing overhead ended, seguing into something slower, sadder. Silas polished the counter near Rory’s elbow, his presence a grounding anchor. "I looked for you," Callum said quietly. "After you left. I called your mum." "That must have been a fun conversation." "She wouldn't tell me where you were. Just that you were safe and I shouldn't go looking for ghosts." "Smart woman." "She told me you weren't the same person who left Cardiff." Callum turned to face her fully, his searching. "She was right. You’re harder. Sharp around the edges." "Survival does that." "It’s not just survival, is it?" He reached out, then stopped, his hand hovering over the bar. "You’re carrying a gun, aren't you?" Silas stopped polishing. The air in the room dropped five degrees. Rory didn't flinch. She met Callum’s gaze, her blue eyes cool and unreadable. "You’ve been watching too many spy films, Callum. I carry mace. And a heavy maglight." "Your hand was on your hip when I walked in. Old reflex." "Reflexes are good. Keeps you from getting hit by cars on Wardour Street." He didn't look convinced. He looked sad. "We used to talk about everything. Philosophy, justice, what kind of parents we’d be. Now I can’t even tell if you’re lying to me." "I’m not lying." "You’re just not telling me the truth." He finished his second drink and stood up, digging a wallet from his coat. He tossed a twenty-pound note on the counter, far more than the cost of the drinks. "I have a dinner reservation. Elena is waiting." "Go. Enjoy your stability." Callum buttoned his coat. He hesitated, looking at the exit, then back at her. "If you ever... if things get too hard. You don't have to stay in the dark, Rory." "I like the dark. It’s quieter." He let out a breath, shaking his head. "Goodbye, Rory." "Bye, Callum." He walked out, the bell chiming again as the door swung shut. The wind didn't blow in this time. The seal held. Rory stared at the empty space where he had stood. The twenty-pound note sat on the wood, crisp and clean. Silas reached out and slid the note back toward her. "He didn't recognize me," Silas said, his voice low and gravelly. "He wasn't looking for you. He was looking for a ghost." "And did he find her?" Rory picked up the note, crumpling it in her fist. "No. He found a barmaid who rides a scooter." She downed the rest of her drink, the burn doing little to numb the hollow ache in her chest. The taste of the past was bitter, like old copper. Silas poured her another, no questions asked. "Good riddance to bad memories, then." Rory swirled the amber liquid. "Yeah. To the past." She drank, the silence of the bar rushing back in to fill the void left by the living.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Callum said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.203
leniency0.406
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.031
92.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1305
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elena"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1305
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"silence"
2"etched"
3"weight"
4"silk"
5"unreadable"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences82
matches
0"looked sad"
1"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1299
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount801
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Callum"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Raven1
Nest1
Silas12
Cardiff1
Callum8
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Callum"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.751
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if expecting her to vanish"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1299
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences133
matches
0"heard that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean17.79
std14.36
cv0.807
sampleLengths
057
132
211
327
48
522
648
734
83
937
1030
116
121
1323
142
1568
1621
172
1818
1924
202
2160
223
2313
2417
2511
2611
277
2820
297
308
3121
3215
339
342
3529
363
3727
3828
3913
4018
416
423
4333
4414
457
4619
472
4828
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"been shaved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences133
ratio0.008
matches
0"It was deeper than she remembered, roughened by time or cigarettes, but the cadence—the specific way he rounded his vowels—was unmistakable."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount805
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02732919254658385
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.011180124223602485
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean9.77
std5.98
cv0.612
sampleLengths
020
115
222
310
45
517
611
78
819
98
109
1113
126
1315
1413
1514
1610
1716
188
193
208
2121
228
239
2410
2511
266
271
289
297
303
314
322
3311
343
3519
3635
3715
386
392
4018
4110
429
435
442
4511
465
4716
4818
493
48.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3308270676691729
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
52.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences81
matches
0"She leaned against the polished"
1"His movements were precise, practiced."
2"She signaled for another drink"
3"He wore a trench coat,"
4"He smelled of stale rain"
5"It was deeper than she"
6"She froze, her hand tightening"
7"She forced herself to breathe,"
8"She hadn't heard that name"
9"He looked older."
10"His hair was shorter, styled"
11"He blinked, as if expecting"
12"He set the glass down"
13"He shifted his weight, looking"
14"She knew what he saw."
15"He noticed it."
16"His eyes lingered on the"
17"He corrected her automatically, a"
18"He laughed, a short, dry"
19"He gestured at her clothes"
ratio0.42
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences81
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"She leaned against the polished"
2"The Raven's Nest was quiet,"
3"Silas stood opposite her, drying"
4"His movements were precise, practiced."
5"The silver signet ring on"
6"Rory scoffed, turning her coaster"
7"She signaled for another drink"
8"Silas grabbed a bottle of"
9"The heavy oak door creaked"
10"A gust of wind whipped"
11"Rory didn't look up immediately,"
12"Silas paused, his eyes narrowing"
13"A man stepped to the"
14"He wore a trench coat,"
15"He smelled of stale rain"
16"The voice hit Rory like"
17"It was deeper than she"
18"She froze, her hand tightening"
19"Silas poured the drink, sliding"
ratio0.963
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He blinked, as if expecting her to vanish"
1"She picked up, the ice clinking softly"
2"Callum turned, his searching"
3"Silas said, his voice low and gravelly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.031
79.1830%