Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXE1CTTHPTR2FY3NEV7CDE

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Duration:
23.2s
Cost:
$0.010907
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest cast an eerie glow across the wet pavement outside. Rory pushed through the heavy wooden door, shaking rain from her jacket. Her delivery shift had run late, and all she wanted was a drink and maybe some quiet conversation with Silas before heading upstairs to her flat. The bar smelled of aged wood and spilled bourbon, the same way it always did. She'd grown accustomed to it over the past three years—the way the scent wrapped around you like an old coat. Low lamplight pooled across worn leather booths. A handful of patrons occupied the corners, their faces anonymous in shadow. Rory moved toward the bar. Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with deliberate, practiced motions. He glanced up, his hazel eyes catching hers with that particular knowing look he'd perfected over decades of reading people. "Rough night?" he asked. "Chicken lo mein doesn't deliver itself," she said, sliding onto a stool. She was reaching for a menu when the figure in the corner booth shifted. Someone stood. A silhouette emerged from the darkness, moving between tables with a careful, measured stride that triggered something in her chest before her mind could catch up. The face that appeared in the better light made her go still. "Rory?" Five years had passed since she'd heard that voice. Seven since she'd actually seen him in person, though there was a time when she'd seen him every single day. The Jamie she'd known had been lanky, perpetually exhausted from second-year exams, with a habit of pushing his dark hair back from his forehead when he was thinking. That Jamie had worn cheap trainers and charity shop jumpers. This Jamie wore a tailored charcoal suit that fit him like it had been sewn into place. His hair was styled with precision. His jaw had acquired a sharper angle, and there was something in his bearing—a controlled straightness in his spine—that hadn't existed before. "Jamie?" She hadn't meant for it to come out as a question. He closed the distance between them, and she caught the scent of expensive cologne mixing with the bar's ambient smell. His smile arrived carefully, like something he'd had to think about. "I can't believe it's actually you," he said. Silas had discreetly vanished into the back, leaving them alone in the way that suggested he'd learned long ago when to make himself scarce. She appreciated that about him. "What are you doing here?" Rory asked. Jamie gestured back toward the booth. "Meeting a client. Well, I was. They cancelled last minute." He laughed—a smooth, professional sound that bore only a distant resemblance to the raw, unguarded laugh she remembered from university. "The universe apparently thought I needed to run into you instead." She didn't respond immediately. He filled the silence by sitting on the stool beside her, angling his body toward hers in a way that felt rehearsed. Everything about him felt rehearsed now. The slight tilt of his head. The way his fingers flexed against the bar counter. Even the casual nature of his posture seemed calculated. "You look well," he offered when she still hadn't spoken. "Really well, actually. London suits you." "You look different," Rory said, because it was true and because saying so felt safer than reciprocating the pleasantry. Jamie's smile held. "Different good or different—" "Just different." He nodded slowly, as if processing this. His fingers drummed once against the counter, then stopped. "I'm in corporate law now. Senior associate at Harrington & Webb. You probably wouldn't know them. City firm. Quite competitive." Rory picked up the menu Silas had left, though she already knew every item on it. "You were doing environmental law at Cardiff. You were going to change the world, remember?" The smile shifted. Tightened. "That was a long time ago." "Not that long." "Long enough." He straightened slightly, and she watched the shift happen—like watching someone deliberately brace themselves. "Life doesn't often work out the way you plan it when you're twenty-two and convinced you've got all the answers. You chase the practical stuff. The stable stuff. You grow up." There was something accusatory in that statement, though his tone remained pleasant. As if he were suggesting that she, by remaining in London in a small flat above a bar, by delivering food for a living, had failed to meet some unspoken expectation of adulthood. "I wasn't accusing you," Rory said quietly. "I didn't say you were." But he was defensive. She could feel it in the way his jaw tightened, in the way his eyes had gone somewhere else for a moment. The Jamie of five years ago would have argued this through. He would have said something like, "No, come on, tell me what you actually think," and meant it. They would have talked until three in the morning in some grotty student kitchen, dissecting every assumption and fear until they arrived at something resembling truth. This Jamie seemed intent on avoiding any genuine excavation. "When did you move to London?" she asked. "About four years ago. Just after—" He paused. Didn't finish the sentence. "Right after university, basically." Four years. She'd been here for three. Their timelines had nearly overlapped, and she'd never once run into him. She'd wondered about him occasionally, in that distant way you wonder about people who've gone through significant portions of your life. But she hadn't wondered enough to look him up. Silas returned with two glasses of whisky, setting them down with quiet efficiency. He'd known what she'd order without asking. Jamie picked up one of the glasses. "Still drink whisky neat?" "Still do," she confirmed. They drank in silence for a moment. The bar hummed around them—the low murmur of other conversations, the clink of bottles, the exhale of the rain hitting the window outside. Rory found herself studying him in her peripheral vision, trying to locate the boy she'd known under the man he'd become. There were echoes of him there. In the shape of his hands. In the specific way his shoulders angled. But the essential substance had changed. "I got engaged," Jamie said abruptly. "About six months ago." Rory set her glass down carefully. She'd known he would say something like this. Not known exactly, but anticipated it, the way you anticipate which direction a conversation will turn even when you haven't heard the words yet. "Congratulations," she said. "Her name's Catherine. She works in marketing. Very successful. Her family's quite well-connected in the City." He said this as if these facts comprised the essential nature of Catherine. As if how successful and connected she was had anything to do with who she actually was. The crescent scar on Rory's left wrist caught the light as she moved her glass. She'd gotten it at twelve when she'd fallen out of a tree in their back garden, trying to impress Jamie, of all people, who'd been visiting her parents with his own mother. She'd scraped her way down the rough trunk. He'd been the one who'd helped her to the bathroom and helped her clean the blood away. "When's the wedding?" she asked. "Spring. Nothing too grand. Just family and close friends, really." He paused. "You'll probably get an invitation actually. I'm sure your parents would have our address." This was a lie, and they both knew it. He wouldn't have invited her. He was saying he would have invited her because that's what the version of himself he was presenting would do—maintain the appearance of connection to the past while keeping it safely compartmentalized. "That's nice," Rory said. Jamie finished his whisky. The glass made a hollow sound against the wood when he set it down. He stood, and she recognized the gesture as dismissal, as the end of whatever this was. "I should get going. Catherine's expecting me." He extended his hand—a formal gesture, handshake territory. "It was good to see you, Rory. Really good. We should stay in touch." She took his hand. His grip was firm and professional and entirely without warmth. When he released her, she felt the absence of him immediately, as if the space he'd occupied had somehow been erased. "Take care of yourself," he said. She watched him collect his coat from the booth, watched him nod politely to Silas as he passed, watched him walk out into the rain without looking back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
63.64% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He straightened slightly [slightly]"
1"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
2"Jamie said abruptly [abruptly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.579
leniency1
rawRatio0.136
effectiveRatio0.136
68.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1413
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count3
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
4"deliberately"
5"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1413
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"calculated"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"echoes"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"silence"
2"calculated"
3"unspoken"
4"could feel"
5"echoes"
6"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences101
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1403
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1148
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Jamie"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Jamie"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas6
Jamie11
Rory10
London1
Didn1
Catherine1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Jamie"
4"Rory"
5"Catherine"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
14.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"seemed calculated"
1"as if processing this"
2"something like, and meant it"
3"something like this"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.713
wordCount1403
matches
0"Not known exactly, but anticipated it, the way you anticipate"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences117
matches
0"heard that voice"
1"suggesting that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean26.47
std21.31
cv0.805
sampleLengths
055
154
237
34
412
542
612
71
867
945
1012
1131
128
1329
147
1547
1656
1716
1819
197
202
2136
2231
2310
243
2547
2645
277
285
2981
309
318
3216
3349
3420
3511
364
3770
386
3910
4038
413
4246
4372
445
4526
4646
474
4834
4929
91.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences101
matches
0"been sewn"
1"was styled"
2"was had"
3"been erased"
78.23% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs219
matches
0"was reaching"
1"was thinking"
2"were suggesting"
3"was saying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences117
ratio0.06
matches
0"She'd grown accustomed to it over the past three years—the way the scent wrapped around you like an old coat."
1"His jaw had acquired a sharper angle, and there was something in his bearing—a controlled straightness in his spine—that hadn't existed before."
2"\"Meeting a client. Well, I was. They cancelled last minute.\" He laughed—a smooth, professional sound that bore only a distant resemblance to the raw, unguarded laugh she remembered from university."
3"\"Long enough.\" He straightened slightly, and she watched the shift happen—like watching someone deliberately brace themselves."
4"The bar hummed around them—the low murmur of other conversations, the clink of bottles, the exhale of the rain hitting the window outside."
5"He was saying he would have invited her because that's what the version of himself he was presenting would do—maintain the appearance of connection to the past while keeping it safely compartmentalized."
6"\"I should get going. Catherine's expecting me.\" He extended his hand—a formal gesture, handshake territory."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1156
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.03373702422145329
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.01730103806228374
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean11.99
std8.05
cv0.672
sampleLengths
017
112
226
315
420
57
612
75
812
920
104
1112
1214
132
1426
1512
161
179
1820
1928
2010
2117
226
2322
2412
2520
2611
278
2824
295
307
316
3230
3311
344
3522
366
376
389
399
4010
416
4219
433
444
452
467
479
4820
4916
59.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.39316239316239315
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners46
38.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Even the casual nature of"
ratio0.011
45.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences87
matches
0"Her delivery shift had run"
1"She'd grown accustomed to it"
2"He glanced up, his hazel"
3"she said, sliding onto a"
4"She was reaching for a"
5"His hair was styled with"
6"His jaw had acquired a"
7"She hadn't meant for it"
8"He closed the distance between"
9"His smile arrived carefully, like"
10"She appreciated that about him."
11"He laughed—a smooth, professional sound"
12"She didn't respond immediately."
13"He filled the silence by"
14"he offered when she still"
15"He nodded slowly, as if"
16"His fingers drummed once against"
17"He straightened slightly, and she"
18"She could feel it in"
19"He would have said something"
ratio0.437
51.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences87
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory pushed through the heavy"
2"Her delivery shift had run"
3"The bar smelled of aged"
4"She'd grown accustomed to it"
5"A handful of patrons occupied"
6"Rory moved toward the bar."
7"Silas stood behind the counter,"
8"He glanced up, his hazel"
9"she said, sliding onto a"
10"She was reaching for a"
11"A silhouette emerged from the"
12"The face that appeared in"
13"The Jamie she'd known had"
14"That Jamie had worn cheap"
15"This Jamie wore a tailored"
16"His hair was styled with"
17"His jaw had acquired a"
18"She hadn't meant for it"
19"He closed the distance between"
ratio0.816
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"As if he were suggesting"
1"As if how successful and"
ratio0.023
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"A silhouette emerged from the darkness, moving between tables with a careful, measured stride that triggered something in her chest before her mind could catch …"
1"His jaw had acquired a sharper angle, and there was something in his bearing—a controlled straightness in his spine—that hadn't existed before."
2"Silas had discreetly vanished into the back, leaving them alone in the way that suggested he'd learned long ago when to make himself scarce."
3"He filled the silence by sitting on the stool beside her, angling his body toward hers in a way that felt rehearsed."
4"As if he were suggesting that she, by remaining in London in a small flat above a bar, by delivering food for a living, had failed to meet some unspoken expecta…"
5"She'd wondered about him occasionally, in that distant way you wonder about people who've gone through significant portions of your life."
6"She'd gotten it at twelve when she'd fallen out of a tree in their back garden, trying to impress Jamie, of all people, who'd been visiting her parents with his…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
71.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"He laughed— (laugh)"
1"He would (would)"
2"she confirmed (confirm)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0.188
effectiveRatio0.158
79.2636%