Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXE3M81NN2MEF877C8MMSR

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5.0s
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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak whispered her name. Aurora stopped mid-step, one foot hovering over a root that seemed to have grown specifically to trip her. The pendant pulsed against her chest, warmer than blood, warmer than it had ever felt before. She'd followed that warmth through Richmond Park's northern gate, past the herds of indifferent deer, through undergrowth that parted too easily beneath her trainers. Now she stood at the edge of a clearing she'd never seen before, despite living in London for three years. The ancient oaks formed a perfect circle around a space that shouldn't exist. The standing stones—eight of them, gnarled and massive—marked the boundary like sentinels from a forgotten age. The grove. People talked about it in Silas's bar sometimes, dismissed it as urban legend, the kind of story drunks told to frighten newcomers. But the pendant knew better. The pendant had led her here. She checked her phone. No signal, of course. The battery icon showed forty-three percent, but the screen had taken on a faint greenish tint she couldn't explain. One hour inside, Eva had told her once, could be minutes outside. Could be days. Aurora wasn't sure she believed that, but she'd come prepared anyway. Water bottle. Torch. The small kitchen knife she kept in her delivery bag. Enough to wait out any temporal anomaly. She stepped between two of the standing stones. The air changed first. Thicker, sweeter, heavy with the scent of flowers that shouldn't bloom in October. Wildflowers she didn't recognise carpeted the ground, colours shifting in the darkness—blues that leaned toward purple, reds that whispered of deeper crimsons. Beautiful. Carefully, deliberately beautiful, like a painting of a meadow rather than the thing itself. The pendant burned against her skin. Something moved in her peripheral vision. She turned, fast, but saw only trees. The same trees she'd been looking at moments before. The same ancient bark, the same twisted branches reaching toward a sky that had become somehow darker than it should be. *You're tired*, she told herself. *You've been working double shifts. The delivery route through Richmond takes it out of you.* But her hands weren't shaking, and her heart rate stayed steady. That was the thing about panic—she'd learned to recognise its absence. Years with Evan had taught her to stay calm when her body screamed at her to run. She walked toward the centre of the clearing. The ground was softer than it should have been, giving slightly with each step like walking on moss that grew nowhere else. The flowers brush against her ankles, leaving faint traces of pollen on her black jeans. She didn't stop to brush them off. At the centre stood a stone altar, or something like one. Flat-topped, covered in symbols she couldn't read, ancient enough to make the standing stones look like newcomers. The pendant pulsed again, harder, and she realised she was gripping it through her shirt. "This is it?" she said aloud, just to hear something other than the silence. Her voice didn't echo. The words fell into the air and disappeared, absorbed by the grove before they could return. A sound, then. Like footsteps, but not quite. Slower. Heavier. The rhythm of something that didn't walk on two legs. Aurora spun around. Nothing. The trees stood motionless. The flowers swayed gently, though there was no wind. The standing stones remained where they were, where they'd remained for centuries. But the darkness between them had grown deeper. Thicker. More substantial. Another sound—from behind her this time. A wet sound, like something being dragged across stone. Then nothing. She didn't turn around. Every instinct screamed at her to turn around, but she stayed still, her hand closing around the knife in her bag. If something was behind her, turning would only show it that she'd noticed. That she was afraid. *Are you afraid?* She asked herself the question honestly. The answer came back complicated. She was alert. Wired. But afraid? Not yet. The fear would come later, if the situation called for it. Fear was a tool, not a reaction. Evan had taught her that too, in his own twisted way. "I know you're here," she said. The words came out steadier than she felt. Good. Silence answered her. Then, from somewhere far above, a sound like wings—but wrong, too large, too slow, beating against air that seemed to resist them. She looked up. The canopy of oaks blocked most of the sky, but through gaps in the branches she could see shapes moving. Not birds. Not bats. Something with too many limbs, something that folded and unfolded as it passed between the leaves. The pendant screamed against her chest now, burning hot enough to hurt. She grabbed it, pulled it out from under her shirt. The crimson gem glowed faintly, pulsing in time with the heartbeat she could hear now—her own, finally racing. The altar. She needed to get to the altar. She moved, fast, not running but taking long strides that ate up the distance. The flowers tangled at her feet, stems wrapping around her ankles, and she stumbled, catching herself on the edge of the stone. The surface was cold. Colder than the night air, colder than anything had a right to be. The symbols seemed to shift as she looked at them, rearranging themselves into patterns that made her eyes water if she stared too long. Behind her, the footsteps came again. Closer now. She could hear breathing with them—not human breathing, something with more lungs, or different lungs, or no lungs at all. "Don't," she said, and this time her voice cracked. The breathing stopped. The silence that followed was worse. It had weight. It pressed against her ears like deep water. She could feel something behind her now, a presence that blocked out the warmth of the grove, that made the air around her feel like winter. Slowly, carefully, she turned around. Nothing there. But the flowers were moving. Not swaying in a non-existent wind, but pressing inward, closing the circle, leaving less space between the outer ring of oaks and the altar where she stood. The pendant pulsed. The gem seemed brighter now, the crimson deeper, more urgent. *It's not a Hel portal*, she thought, the realization arriving like ice water. *It's something else. Something older.* The flowers reached her feet. The stems were thicker now, woody, thorned. They crept up her jeans, pricking at the fabric, searching for skin. She raised the knife. The first flower to touch her hand withered at the contact, blackening, crumbling to ash that scattered in a wind she still couldn't feel. The pendant's warmth flooded through her, down her arm, into the blade. But there were more. So many more. The darkness between the trees solidified into something with eyes—dozens of eyes, thousands, all of them watching, all of them waiting. The grove had caught her. And she was beginning to suspect she'd never left.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
74.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"deliberately"
2"slightly"
3"gently"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"sentinels"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count2
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"perfect"
3"sentinels"
4"silence"
5"echo"
6"footsteps"
7"racing"
8"weight"
9"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences127
matches
0"was afraid"
86.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences127
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords30
totalWords1157
ratio0.026
matches
0"You're tired"
1"You've been working double shifts. The delivery route through Richmond takes it out of you."
2"Are you afraid?"
3"It's not a Hel portal"
4"It's something else. Something older."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1149
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.26
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
London1
Silas1
Eva1
October1
Evan2
Hel1
Aurora3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Eva"
2"Evan"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"October"
globalScore1
windowScore1
14.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"root that seemed to have grown specifically to trip her"
1"something like one"
2"air that seemed to resist them"
3"seemed brighter now, the crimson deeper, more urgent"
27.14% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.729
wordCount1157
matches
0"not running but taking long strides"
1"Not swaying in a non-existent wind, but pressing inward, closing the circle, leaving less space betw"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences127
matches
0"followed that warmth"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean22.69
std16.81
cv0.741
sampleLengths
05
158
249
335
427
546
68
754
86
943
1020
1139
128
1344
1443
1514
1620
1720
183
191
2025
2111
2217
2342
243
2548
266
279
2825
293
3052
3128
329
3336
3441
3528
369
373
3843
395
402
4132
4213
4318
4424
454
4636
477
4821
495
99.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences127
matches
0"tired"
1"being dragged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs207
matches
0"weren't shaking"
1"was gripping"
2"was beginning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences127
ratio0.063
matches
0"The standing stones—eight of them, gnarled and massive—marked the boundary like sentinels from a forgotten age."
1"Wildflowers she didn't recognise carpeted the ground, colours shifting in the darkness—blues that leaned toward purple, reds that whispered of deeper crimsons."
2"That was the thing about panic—she'd learned to recognise its absence."
3"Another sound—from behind her this time."
4"Then, from somewhere far above, a sound like wings—but wrong, too large, too slow, beating against air that seemed to resist them."
5"The crimson gem glowed faintly, pulsing in time with the heartbeat she could hear now—her own, finally racing."
6"She could hear breathing with them—not human breathing, something with more lungs, or different lungs, or no lungs at all."
7"The darkness between the trees solidified into something with eyes—dozens of eyes, thousands, all of them watching, all of them waiting."
93.58% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1162
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.047332185886402756
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.012048192771084338
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean9.11
std6.79
cv0.745
sampleLengths
05
118
216
324
420
513
616
72
822
95
106
114
124
1319
1412
153
1611
172
181
1910
207
218
224
2313
2422
251
2614
276
286
297
309
3121
325
335
3410
3511
3611
3717
388
3922
4015
417
4211
4317
4415
4514
464
4716
483
495
52.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.4015748031496063
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences106
matches
0"Carefully, deliberately beautiful, like a"
1"Then, from somewhere far above,"
2"Slowly, carefully, she turned around."
3"So many more."
ratio0.038
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences106
matches
0"She'd followed that warmth through"
1"She checked her phone."
2"She stepped between two of"
3"She turned, fast, but saw"
4"*You're tired*, she told herself."
5"*You've been working double shifts."
6"She walked toward the centre"
7"She didn't stop to brush"
8"she said aloud, just to"
9"Her voice didn't echo."
10"She didn't turn around."
11"She asked herself the question"
12"She was alert."
13"She looked up."
14"She grabbed it, pulled it"
15"She needed to get to"
16"She moved, fast, not running"
17"She could hear breathing with"
18"she said, and this time"
19"It had weight."
ratio0.245
73.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences106
matches
0"The oak whispered her name."
1"Aurora stopped mid-step, one foot"
2"The pendant pulsed against her"
3"She'd followed that warmth through"
4"The ancient oaks formed a"
5"The standing stones—eight of them,"
6"People talked about it in"
7"The pendant had led her"
8"She checked her phone."
9"The battery icon showed forty-three"
10"Aurora wasn't sure she believed"
11"The small kitchen knife she"
12"She stepped between two of"
13"The air changed first."
14"Wildflowers she didn't recognise carpeted"
15"The pendant burned against her"
16"Something moved in her peripheral"
17"She turned, fast, but saw"
18"The same trees she'd been"
19"The same ancient bark, the"
ratio0.774
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"Now she stood at the"
1"If something was behind her,"
ratio0.019
14.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Aurora stopped mid-step, one foot hovering over a root that seemed to have grown specifically to trip her."
1"Thicker, sweeter, heavy with the scent of flowers that shouldn't bloom in October."
2"Wildflowers she didn't recognise carpeted the ground, colours shifting in the darkness—blues that leaned toward purple, reds that whispered of deeper crimsons."
3"The same ancient bark, the same twisted branches reaching toward a sky that had become somehow darker than it should be."
4"Then, from somewhere far above, a sound like wings—but wrong, too large, too slow, beating against air that seemed to resist them."
5"The symbols seemed to shift as she looked at them, rearranging themselves into patterns that made her eyes water if she stared too long."
6"She could feel something behind her now, a presence that blocked out the warmth of the grove, that made the air around her feel like winter."
7"They crept up her jeans, pricking at the fabric, searching for skin."
8"The first flower to touch her hand withered at the contact, blackening, crumbling to ash that scattered in a wind she still couldn't feel."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.6079%