| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 74.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1170 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "deliberately" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "gently" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1170 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "racing" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | matches | | |
| 86.61% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 30 | | totalWords | 1157 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "You're tired" | | 1 | "You've been working double shifts. The delivery route through Richmond takes it out of you." | | 2 | "Are you afraid?" | | 3 | "It's not a Hel portal" | | 4 | "It's something else. Something older." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1149 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.26 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | October | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "October" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 14.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "root that seemed to have grown specifically to trip her" | | 1 | "something like one" | | 2 | "air that seemed to resist them" | | 3 | "seemed brighter now, the crimson deeper, more urgent" |
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| 27.14% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.729 | | wordCount | 1157 | | matches | | 0 | "not running but taking long strides" | | 1 | "Not swaying in a non-existent wind, but pressing inward, closing the circle, leaving less space betw" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 22.69 | | std | 16.81 | | cv | 0.741 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 48 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 52 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 41 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 43 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 36 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 99.74% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 207 | | matches | | 0 | "weren't shaking" | | 1 | "was gripping" | | 2 | "was beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 127 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones—eight of them, gnarled and massive—marked the boundary like sentinels from a forgotten age." | | 1 | "Wildflowers she didn't recognise carpeted the ground, colours shifting in the darkness—blues that leaned toward purple, reds that whispered of deeper crimsons." | | 2 | "That was the thing about panic—she'd learned to recognise its absence." | | 3 | "Another sound—from behind her this time." | | 4 | "Then, from somewhere far above, a sound like wings—but wrong, too large, too slow, beating against air that seemed to resist them." | | 5 | "The crimson gem glowed faintly, pulsing in time with the heartbeat she could hear now—her own, finally racing." | | 6 | "She could hear breathing with them—not human breathing, something with more lungs, or different lungs, or no lungs at all." | | 7 | "The darkness between the trees solidified into something with eyes—dozens of eyes, thousands, all of them watching, all of them waiting." |
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| 93.58% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1162 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.047332185886402756 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012048192771084338 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 127 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 127 | | mean | 9.11 | | std | 6.79 | | cv | 0.745 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 52.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.4015748031496063 | | totalSentences | 127 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Carefully, deliberately beautiful, like a" | | 1 | "Then, from somewhere far above," | | 2 | "Slowly, carefully, she turned around." | | 3 | "So many more." |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd followed that warmth through" | | 1 | "She checked her phone." | | 2 | "She stepped between two of" | | 3 | "She turned, fast, but saw" | | 4 | "*You're tired*, she told herself." | | 5 | "*You've been working double shifts." | | 6 | "She walked toward the centre" | | 7 | "She didn't stop to brush" | | 8 | "she said aloud, just to" | | 9 | "Her voice didn't echo." | | 10 | "She didn't turn around." | | 11 | "She asked herself the question" | | 12 | "She was alert." | | 13 | "She looked up." | | 14 | "She grabbed it, pulled it" | | 15 | "She needed to get to" | | 16 | "She moved, fast, not running" | | 17 | "She could hear breathing with" | | 18 | "she said, and this time" | | 19 | "It had weight." |
| | ratio | 0.245 | |
| 73.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak whispered her name." | | 1 | "Aurora stopped mid-step, one foot" | | 2 | "The pendant pulsed against her" | | 3 | "She'd followed that warmth through" | | 4 | "The ancient oaks formed a" | | 5 | "The standing stones—eight of them," | | 6 | "People talked about it in" | | 7 | "The pendant had led her" | | 8 | "She checked her phone." | | 9 | "The battery icon showed forty-three" | | 10 | "Aurora wasn't sure she believed" | | 11 | "The small kitchen knife she" | | 12 | "She stepped between two of" | | 13 | "The air changed first." | | 14 | "Wildflowers she didn't recognise carpeted" | | 15 | "The pendant burned against her" | | 16 | "Something moved in her peripheral" | | 17 | "She turned, fast, but saw" | | 18 | "The same trees she'd been" | | 19 | "The same ancient bark, the" |
| | ratio | 0.774 | |
| 94.34% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she stood at the" | | 1 | "If something was behind her," |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 14.29% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stopped mid-step, one foot hovering over a root that seemed to have grown specifically to trip her." | | 1 | "Thicker, sweeter, heavy with the scent of flowers that shouldn't bloom in October." | | 2 | "Wildflowers she didn't recognise carpeted the ground, colours shifting in the darkness—blues that leaned toward purple, reds that whispered of deeper crimsons." | | 3 | "The same ancient bark, the same twisted branches reaching toward a sky that had become somehow darker than it should be." | | 4 | "Then, from somewhere far above, a sound like wings—but wrong, too large, too slow, beating against air that seemed to resist them." | | 5 | "The symbols seemed to shift as she looked at them, rearranging themselves into patterns that made her eyes water if she stared too long." | | 6 | "She could feel something behind her now, a presence that blocked out the warmth of the grove, that made the air around her feel like winter." | | 7 | "They crept up her jeans, pricking at the fabric, searching for skin." | | 8 | "The first flower to touch her hand withered at the contact, blackening, crumbling to ash that scattered in a wind she still couldn't feel." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |