Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXE3NSY92ZCYA1WZVMY63V

Run Details

Duration:
57.4s
Cost:
$0.052990
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air specifically tasted of rust and ozone, a flavor Harlow Quinn hadn't experienced since the mess with Morris three years ago. She ducked under the yellow tape strung across the rusted iron gates of the service entrance, her boots crunching on grit that shouldn't exist in a municipal maintenance shaft. "Mind the step, Guv. It's a proper death trap down here." Detective Sergeant Miller waited at the bottom of the concrete spiral, his torch cutting a violent swathe through the gloom. The humidity clung to Quinn’s skin, dampening her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair. She ignored his hand, descending with the military precision that had defined the last eighteen years of her life. "Talk to me, Miller. Why are we under Camden instead of in a warm interrogation room?" Miller swept his light over the curved, tile-lined walls of the abandoned station. "Council workers found him an hour ago. Burst a pipe, came down to fix it, found a body instead. Looks like a squatter dispute gone wrong. Drugs, probably. Place stinks of chemicals." Quinn reached the platform level. The smell wasn't chemicals. It was sulfur and something sweet, like rotting orchids. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist, a habitual tick when her instincts flared. The darkness here felt heavy, pressing against her temples. "Squatter dispute," she repeated, her voice flat. "With no sleeping bags, no trash, and no needles?" "They clear out fast when the heat comes." Miller led the way toward the edge of the platform. "Victim is a John Doe. Throat slit. Nasty business." The body lay sprawled near the tunnel mouth, half-draped in shadow. Quinn crouched, her knees popping slightly. The victim was male, thirties, dressed in a long coat that looked more like period costume than streetwear. The fabric was heavy wool, stained dark around the neck, but the cut was immaculate. "Forensics is on the way," Miller said, hovering. "But it's open and shut. Knife wound, robbery. Pockets are turned out." Quinn peered closer. The blood pool was too small. A throat slit that deep should have painted the tiled walls red. Instead, the liquid on the floor was viscous, shimmering with an oily sheen that refracted Miller's torchlight into bruised purples and greens. "Robbery," Quinn murmured. She reached out, gloved fingers brushing the floor near the victim's hand. "Miller, shine the light here. The dust." "Just grime, Guv." "Look at the pattern." The dust hadn't been disturbed by a scuffle. It had been swept away in perfect concentric circles around the body. Char marks scored the concrete at the cardinal points. "Weirdos," Miller scoffed, shifting his weight. "Probably some junkie cult. We see it all the time. Kids playing witch." Quinn stood, her sharp jaw setting hard. "Kids don't clean a crime scene to this standard, Miller. And junkies don't leave behind..." She trailed off, spotting a glint of metal underneath the victim’s coat lining, which had been overlooked. She knelt again, using a pen to leverage the object out. It was a small brass compass, cased in metal that had turned green with age. Verdigris crusted the hinge. "Broken compass," Miller dismissed. "Like I said, junkies collecting trash." Quinn flipped the casing open. The face wasn't marked with North or South. Protective sigils, etched deep and filled with black enamel, swirled around the rim. The needle didn't settle. It spun wildly, vibrating against the glass, before snapping rigidly to point directly at the tunnel's pitch-black maw. "That's not trash," a voice wavered from the darkness behind Miller. Quinn snapped her head around. "Who is that?" Miller sighed, shining his light toward a rusted bench near the stairs. "Civilian. Found her hiding in the ticket booth. claims she was doing 'historical research'. I was about to cut her loose, didn't seem involved." Eva Kowalski sat on the bench, clutching a worn leather satchel to her chest as if it contained the crown jewels. Her round glasses were fogged, and strands of curly red hair had escaped her messy bun. She looked entirely out of place, a librarian dropped into a war zone. Quinn stalked over, the brass compass heavy in her gloved hand. She recognized the fragility in the girl’s posture—the way she tucked a loose curl behind her left ear with a trembling finger. But Quinn also saw the intelligence in those green eyes, sharp and assessing despite the fear. "Eva Kowalski," Quinn said, dredging the name from a file she’d reviewed two days ago regarding the clique she was monitoring. "British Museum. Ancient History." Eva blinked, hugging the satchel tighter. "Detective Quinn. I didn't realize this was your case." "It is now. Explain the compass, Miss Kowalski. And don't tell me it's for hiking." "It's a navigational aid," Eva said, her voice barely rising above the drip of water from the ceiling. "For... specific electromagnetic fields." "Miller calls this a drug deal." Quinn held up the brass object. The needle was still straining toward the tunnel. "I say this victim isn't dressed for a drug deal, and this 'compass' is pointing at nothing." "It's not pointing at nothing," Eva blurted out, then clamped her mouth shut. Quinn leaned in, looming over the younger woman. "Miller, give us a minute. Go check the perimeter at the street level. Make sure no one else 'wanders' into this maintenance shaft." Miller looked relieved to leave the creepy basement. "Right you are, Guv. Shout if you need me." As the heavy footsteps receded up the metal stairs, Quinn turned her full attention to Eva. The silence of the station amplified the strange humming noise Quinn had felt in her teeth since arriving. "The needle," Quinn said, lowering her voice. "It's tracking energy. Like a Geiger counter." Eva uncurled slightly, adjusting her glasses. "You could say that. It points to rifts. Thin spots." "Rifts in what?" "Reality." Quinn didn't flinch. She had stood over Morris's body while the coroner listed causes of death that defied physics. She was done flinching. "The body. He's not a junkie." Eva stood up, legs shaking, and walked tentatively toward the corpse. She kept a wide berth from the charcoal circles. "He’s a courier. A runner for the Veil Market." "The Veil Market," Quinn repeated, testing the words. "Underground trade?" "Very. They move locations every full moon. This station... it hasn't been on the Maps for fifty years. It’s a perfect anchor point." Eva crouched, but unlike Miller, she didn't look at the pockets. She looked at the victim's hands. "Look at his fingertips. The burnt skin." Quinn shone her own torch. The pads of the victim's fingers were blackened, cauterized. "He was holding something," Quinn deduced. "Something hot." "Something volatile," Eva corrected. She opened her satchel, revealing rows of old, leather-bound books and a few glass vials. She pulled out a small loupe. "May I?" Quinn nodded. Eva leaned over the body. "The Police see a robbery. But nothing of monetary value was taken. His boots are high quality leather, his coat is tailored. If this was a mugging, they would have stripped him." "So, a hit." "A interception." Eva pointed to the chest. "There's a residue here. Faint, silvery dust." Quinn shined the light at an oblique angle. The dust glittered. "I saw it on the floor. Miller thought it was grime." "It's crushed moonstone mixed with salt," Eva whispered, the academic in her taking over the fear. "It’s used to break containment seals. He was carrying a package, Detective. Someone used an alchemical explosive to breach the courier's warding." Quinn stood, pacing the small space of the platform. The pieces clicked into place, but the picture they formed was impossible. "Explosives that don't scorch clothes. Wards. You're telling me this man was killed for a delivery." "A very dangerous one." Eva stood up, dusting off her knees. "And whoever took it went that way." She pointed toward the tunnel, exactly where the compass needle was fixated. Quinn looked down the tracks. The darkness seemed to ripple, breathless and expectant. "Miller thinks the killer ran to the street." "Miller sees a dead addict," Eva said softly. "The killer didn't go up, Detective. They went deeper. Into the Market's old territory." Quinn looked at the compass in her hand. The patina of verdigris felt rough against her thumb. "This thing. It was in his lining. Why didn't they take it?" "Because only a Shade artisan can calibrate it," Eva said. "It's useless to a thief. But to you..." "To me, it's a bloodhound." Quinn walked to the edge of the platform again. The "crime scene" was a farce. The concentric circles weren't trash; they were a failed protection circle. The lack of blood wasn't because of a clean cut; the weapon had likely cauterized the wound instantly or the blade itself wasn't steel. She turned to Eva. "You're coming with me." Eva’s eyes widened behind her lenses. "Into the tunnel? I—I really think I should wait for the uniformed officers." "You know what this dust is. You know what this compass does. And you know what the Veil Market is." Quinn offered a smile that didn't reach her eyes; it was a predator's bating grin. "Unless you want to explain to Sergeant Miller why you're trespassing on a murder scene with a bag full of occult contraband?" Eva swallowed hard, her hand going to her ear again. "The tunnel... it's not just a tunnel. It requires a token to pass safely." "Then we find one." Quinn shone her light back on the body. "If he was a courier, he had a pass." Quinn knelt by the corpse, ignoring the standard procedure prohibiting interaction before forensics arrived. She needed answers that forensics couldn't give. She patted down the inside of the wool coat again, going deeper than Miller had dared. Her fingers brushed against a small, hard lump sewn into the collar. She ripped the stitching. A small piece of polished bone fell into her palm. It was carved with a symbol that made her eyes water if she stared at it too long. "A bone token," Eva breathed, stepping closer despite herself. "That grants entry." Quinn stood up, clutching the bone in one hand and the compass in the other. The needle on the compass steadied, locking onto the darkness ahead with renewed intensity. "Miller sees a dead end," Quinn said, her voice dropping to a register of cold command. "I see a door." She stepped off the platform, lowering herself onto the tracks. The air down here was colder, vibrating with that ozone taste, sharp and electric. "Coming, Miss Kowalski?" Eva hesitated on the edge of the platform, looking back toward the stairs where safety lay, then down at the detective standing in the forbidden dark. She gripped her satchel strap until her knuckles turned white, then hopped down onto the sleepers. "The Market moves," Eva warned, her voice trembling. "If we go too deep, we might not come out in Camden." Quinn checked her watch. The second hand was ticking backward. "I'm counting on it." Quinn strode into the tunnel, the brass compass leading the way, leaving the safe, comprehensible world of Sergeant Miller far behind.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.036
effectiveRatio0.025
83.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1869
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"softly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1869
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"swept away"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"standard"
count2
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"maw"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"looming"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"predator"
count1
13
word"intensity"
count1
14
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"swept away"
2"perfect"
3"weight"
4"standard"
5"glint"
6"etched"
7"maw"
8"wavered"
9"looming"
10"footsteps"
11"silence"
12"predator"
13"intensity"
14"electric"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences118
matches
0"looked relieved"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences118
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences169
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1862
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions76
wordCount1200
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.83
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn34
Morris2
Sergeant2
Miller13
North1
South1
Kowalski1
Eva21
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Sergeant"
4"Miller"
5"Kowalski"
6"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.083
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1862
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences169
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean23.87
std14.58
cv0.611
sampleLengths
051
111
251
316
445
544
616
727
850
920
1043
1122
123
134
1429
1519
1639
1711
1819
1910
2048
2111
228
2336
2450
2549
2625
2715
2815
2922
3037
3113
3231
3317
3434
3514
3616
373
381
3929
4029
4110
4247
4314
448
4527
462
4737
483
4914
84.45% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences118
matches
0"been disturbed"
1"been swept"
2"been overlooked"
3"were fogged"
4"were blackened"
5"was fixated"
6"was carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs222
matches
0"was monitoring"
1"was ticking"
75.23% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences169
ratio0.024
matches
0"She recognized the fragility in the girl’s posture—the way she tucked a loose curl behind her left ear with a trembling finger."
1"The concentric circles weren't trash; they were a failed protection circle."
2"The lack of blood wasn't because of a clean cut; the weapon had likely cauterized the wound instantly or the blade itself wasn't steel."
3"\"You know what this dust is. You know what this compass does. And you know what the Veil Market is.\" Quinn offered a smile that didn't reach her eyes; it was a predator's bating grin."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1207
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"heavy, pressing against her"
1"old, leather-bound books"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.024855012427506214
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.013256006628003313
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences169
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences169
mean11.02
std6.91
cv0.627
sampleLengths
022
129
211
320
412
519
616
713
832
95
104
119
1217
139
147
159
1618
179
1811
196
2018
2115
228
2312
243
256
2612
2722
283
2912
307
313
324
338
3412
359
366
3713
387
3932
4011
4115
424
434
446
455
468
4713
484
4918
50.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3431952662721893
totalSentences169
uniqueOpeners58
29.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"Instead, the liquid on the"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences112
matches
0"She ducked under the yellow"
1"She ignored his hand, descending"
2"It was sulfur and something"
3"She adjusted the worn leather"
4"she repeated, her voice flat"
5"She reached out, gloved fingers"
6"It had been swept away"
7"She trailed off, spotting a"
8"She knelt again, using a"
9"It was a small brass"
10"It spun wildly, vibrating against"
11"Her round glasses were fogged,"
12"She looked entirely out of"
13"She recognized the fragility in"
14"She had stood over Morris's"
15"She was done flinching."
16"She kept a wide berth"
17"She looked at the victim's"
18"She opened her satchel, revealing"
19"She pulled out a small"
ratio0.259
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences112
matches
0"The air specifically tasted of"
1"She ducked under the yellow"
2"Detective Sergeant Miller waited at"
3"The humidity clung to Quinn’s"
4"She ignored his hand, descending"
5"Miller swept his light over"
6"Quinn reached the platform level."
7"The smell wasn't chemicals."
8"It was sulfur and something"
9"She adjusted the worn leather"
10"The darkness here felt heavy,"
11"she repeated, her voice flat"
12"Miller led the way toward"
13"The body lay sprawled near"
14"Quinn crouched, her knees popping"
15"The victim was male, thirties,"
16"The fabric was heavy wool,"
17"Miller said, hovering"
18"Quinn peered closer."
19"The blood pool was too"
ratio0.964
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She ducked under the yellow tape strung across the rusted iron gates of the service entrance, her boots crunching on grit that shouldn't exist in a municipal ma…"
1"She ignored his hand, descending with the military precision that had defined the last eighteen years of her life."
2"Instead, the liquid on the floor was viscous, shimmering with an oily sheen that refracted Miller's torchlight into bruised purples and greens."
3"Eva Kowalski sat on the bench, clutching a worn leather satchel to her chest as if it contained the crown jewels."
4"She had stood over Morris's body while the coroner listed causes of death that defied physics."
71.43% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she repeated, her voice flat"
1"Quinn said, her voice dropping to a register of cold command"
2"Eva warned, her voice trembling"
37.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
2"Eva blurted out (blurt out)"
3"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
4"Quinn deduced (deduce)"
5"Eva corrected (correct)"
6"Eva whispered (whisper)"
7"Eva breathed (breathe)"
8"Eva warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.563
effectiveRatio0.225
76.8941%