Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXE72AKCEQ80P1Y46BEWJQ

Run Details

Duration:
41.7s
Cost:
$0.026625

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden reeked of decay and something else—something that made Quinn's skin crawl. Her torch beam cut through the darkness, revealing graffiti-covered walls and rusted rails that hadn't seen a train in decades. The Metropolitan Police had cordoned off the entrance three hours ago, but Quinn still couldn't shake the feeling that this place wanted to remain hidden. "Victim's name is Marcus Webb, forty-three, works in finance." Detective Sergeant Mills flipped through his notepad, his voice echoing off the curved tunnel walls. "Found by urban explorers around midnight. Blunt force trauma to the skull, but here's the odd bit—no blood spatter patterns match the scene." Quinn crouched beside the body, her worn leather watch catching the torchlight as she examined the corpse. Webb's expensive suit was pristine except for the massive head wound, yet the concrete beneath him showed only a few drops of blood. The impact should have painted the walls crimson. "What do you make of that, Mills?" "Could've been moved post-mortem. Someone cleaned up, repositioned the body to throw us off." She stood, brushing dust from her knees. Webb lay sprawled near what appeared to be market stalls—makeshift wooden tables covered in moth-eaten cloth. Candle wax pooled on the surfaces, still soft to the touch. Recent activity. "Urban explorers find bodies in active markets often, do they?" Mills shifted uncomfortably. "Well, no, but—" "And they just happened to stumble across the one abandoned station that's been sealed for forty years?" Quinn's torch swept across the scene again. "Look at these stalls, Mills. Fresh wax. Recent foot traffic in the dust. This wasn't some derelict tunnel." The sergeant's brow furrowed. "You think Webb was here for the market?" Quinn didn't answer immediately. Something glinted near Webb's outstretched hand—a small brass object partially hidden beneath fallen debris. She knelt again, using her pen to nudge it into view. A compass, though unlike any she'd seen. The brass casing bore strange markings etched deep into the metal, and a green patina covered most of the surface. "Bag this." She handed the compass to Mills. "And run it for prints." "Bit fancy for urban exploration." "Webb wasn't exploring." Quinn examined the market stalls more closely. Residue caked the wooden surfaces—powders in colours that had no business existing. One table held what looked like dried herbs, but the smell was all wrong. Acidic. Chemical. "He was shopping." Mills bagged the compass, shaking his head. "Shopping for what? Place has been empty for decades." Quinn's torch beam found something else—boot prints in the grime, far too many for a handful of explorers. The patterns suggested dozens of people had walked these tunnels recently. She followed the prints away from the body, noting how they converged near a section of wall where the brickwork looked newer than the rest. "Mills, when did the Transport Authority seal this station?" "Files say 1982. Structural damage from a gas leak." "Then explain the fresh mortar." She pointed to the wall. "And the fact that someone's been using this as a meeting place." The sergeant joined her, running his fingers along the brickwork. The mortar crumbled at his touch, white dust coating his fingertips. "Could be squatters." "Squatters who sell exotic herbs and carry antique compasses?" Quinn turned back toward the body. "Webb came here for something specific. Question is, did he find it before someone caved his skull in?" She retraced her steps, this time focusing on Webb's positioning. The body faced away from the market stalls, toward the tunnel's deeper recesses. His right hand was clenched, the left splayed open where the compass had fallen. "Check his pockets again." Mills complied, producing Webb's wallet, mobile phone, and a small object wrapped in black cloth. He unwrapped it carefully, revealing what appeared to be a piece of bone carved with symbols. "Christ, what is this?" Quinn took the wrapped bone, studying the intricate carvings. The symbols matched some of the markings on the compass. "Looks like a token of some kind." "Token for what?" She pocketed the bone before Mills could object. "That's what we're going to find out." Her torch found more details now that she knew what to look for—scorch marks on the tunnel walls, the faint outline of chalk circles swept clean, and strangest of all, patches where the dust seemed to have been disturbed by something heavy being dragged. "Mills, I want you to canvas the area above ground. Check with the local businesses, see if anyone noticed unusual foot traffic around the old station entrance." "What about you?" Quinn's beam followed the drag marks deeper into the tunnel. "I'm going to see where our market leads." "Shouldn't we wait for the Scene of Crime Officers?" "SOCO can process what's here. I want to know what's not here." She paused at the tunnel mouth, the darkness beyond swallowing her torchlight. "Webb wasn't killed for his wallet, Mills. Someone wanted him dead because of what he knew or what he'd seen." The sergeant's radio crackled to life—dispatch calling about another case across town. He looked torn between following orders and following Quinn into the tunnel's depths. "Go." Quinn waved him toward the station exit. "I'll catch up." Mills hesitated. "Guv, this doesn't feel right. The whole scene's off." "Everything about this case is off." Quinn checked her own radio, ensuring it worked despite the underground location. "That's why we're going to solve it properly." As Mills' footsteps faded, Quinn ventured deeper into the tunnel. The drag marks led her past rusted maintenance doors and forgotten alcoves, toward what her torch revealed as a junction where three tunnels met. Here, the disturbances in the dust were more pronounced—wheel ruts from something heavy, the remnants of more chalk circles, and burn marks on the walls that seemed too precise to be accidental. Webb's compass hadn't been dropped by accident. The way it lay, partially concealed but still visible, suggested someone wanted it found. The bone token in his pocket told the same story—evidence planted for the investigating team to discover. Quinn pulled out her mobile phone, photographing everything before the crime scene team arrived to trample the details. The images would help her piece together what really happened in the hours before Marcus Webb died, and more importantly, what kind of business he'd been conducting in London's forgotten underground. The tunnel ahead stretched into darkness, but Quinn had seen enough to know that Camden's abandoned Tube station harboured secrets far more dangerous than illegal markets.
total_cost0.026625

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.053
90.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1097
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1097
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"pristine"
count1
2
word"furrowed"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"ensuring"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"pristine"
2"furrowed"
3"etched"
4"intricate"
5"depths"
6"ensuring"
7"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
19.70% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences58
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1083
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
48.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount742
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.02
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube2
Camden2
Quinn15
Metropolitan1
Police1
Sergeant1
Mills7
Webb7
Residue1
Marcus1
London1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Quinn"
2"Police"
3"Sergeant"
4"Mills"
5"Webb"
6"Residue"
7"Marcus"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.489
windowScore0.833
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like dried herbs, but the smell wa"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1083
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"know that Camden's"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean25.79
std18.52
cv0.718
sampleLengths
062
147
248
37
414
536
610
76
842
912
1056
1113
125
1341
1416
1554
169
179
1822
1921
203
2133
2237
234
2431
254
2626
273
2859
2927
303
3118
329
3344
3425
3511
3611
3726
3866
3938
4049
4126
87.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences58
matches
0"was clenched"
1"been disturbed"
2"being dragged"
3"been dropped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences86
ratio0.105
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden reeked of decay and something else—something that made Quinn's skin crawl."
1"Webb lay sprawled near what appeared to be market stalls—makeshift wooden tables covered in moth-eaten cloth."
2"Something glinted near Webb's outstretched hand—a small brass object partially hidden beneath fallen debris."
3"Residue caked the wooden surfaces—powders in colours that had no business existing."
4"Quinn's torch beam found something else—boot prints in the grime, far too many for a handful of explorers."
5"\"That's what we're going to find out.\" Her torch found more details now that she knew what to look for—scorch marks on the tunnel walls, the faint outline of chalk circles swept clean, and strangest of all, patches where the dust seemed to have been disturbed by something heavy being dragged."
6"The sergeant's radio crackled to life—dispatch calling about another case across town."
7"Here, the disturbances in the dust were more pronounced—wheel ruts from something heavy, the remnants of more chalk circles, and burn marks on the walls that seemed too precise to be accidental."
8"The bone token in his pocket told the same story—evidence planted for the investigating team to discover."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount582
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"revealing graffiti-covered walls"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.029209621993127148
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.012027491408934709
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12.59
std8.4
cv0.667
sampleLengths
017
120
225
324
423
517
623
78
87
914
107
1116
1211
132
1410
153
163
1724
1818
194
208
214
2214
2311
247
2520
268
275
285
2910
3012
3114
321
331
343
357
369
3718
3811
3925
409
419
4210
4312
4410
4511
463
4715
4818
4910
81.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5116279069767442
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences53
matches
0"Her torch beam cut through"
1"She stood, brushing dust from"
2"She knelt again, using her"
3"She handed the compass to"
4"She followed the prints away"
5"She pointed to the wall"
6"She retraced her steps, this"
7"His right hand was clenched,"
8"He unwrapped it carefully, revealing"
9"She pocketed the bone before"
10"Her torch found more details"
11"She paused at the tunnel"
12"He looked torn between following"
ratio0.245
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences53
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
1"Her torch beam cut through"
2"The Metropolitan Police had cordoned"
3"Detective Sergeant Mills flipped through"
4"Quinn crouched beside the body,"
5"Webb's expensive suit was pristine"
6"The impact should have painted"
7"She stood, brushing dust from"
8"Webb lay sprawled near what"
9"Candle wax pooled on the"
10"Mills shifted uncomfortably."
11"Quinn's torch swept across the"
12"The sergeant's brow furrowed."
13"Quinn didn't answer immediately."
14"Something glinted near Webb's outstretched"
15"She knelt again, using her"
16"A compass, though unlike any"
17"The brass casing bore strange"
18"She handed the compass to"
19"Quinn examined the market stalls"
ratio0.981
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden reeked of decay and something else—something that made Quinn's skin crawl."
1"Her torch beam cut through the darkness, revealing graffiti-covered walls and rusted rails that hadn't seen a train in decades."
2"Here, the disturbances in the dust were more pronounced—wheel ruts from something heavy, the remnants of more chalk circles, and burn marks on the walls that se…"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Detective Sergeant Mills flipped, his voice echoing off the curved tunnel walls"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.2615%