Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXE78XWMDGAPF58EGP0ENR

Run Details

Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.053588
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Techno music engaged in a violent war with the thunder rolling over Soho, the bass vibrating through the soles of Harlow’s boots. Rain sheeted down in aggressive curtains, turning the neon lights of the district into smeared oil paintings reflecting on the asphalt. Note to self: get better boots. Harlow Quinn rounded the corner of Old Compton Street, her breath tearing out of her lungs in ragged, burning bursts. The suspect was fifty yards ahead, a silhouette carved out of shadow and speed, cutting through the late-night throngs of tourists and revelers with liquified grace. He didn't shove people aside; he seemingly passed through the gaps in their attention, a ghost in a tracksuit. She didn't have that luxury. Harlow slammed her shoulder into a intoxicated patron stumbling out of a pub, sending him reeling into a lamppost. "Police! Move!" The command ripped from her throat, raw and stripped of patience. She didn't stop to check the man’s balance. Her eyes locked on the white distinct stripe of the suspect's jacket. He vaulted a parked taxi, feet barely touching the wet metal roof, landing on the other side with the silence of a falling leaf. Harlow planted her hand on the taxi’s hood and swung her legs over, the leather of her watch scraping against the yellow paint. She landed heavy, water splashing up to her shins. Forty-one years old. The knees complained, a sharp, grinding protest that shot up her thighs, but the adrenaline flooded the pain receptors. She forced her body back into the sprint. Military precision. One foot in front of the other. Do not let the target break the line of sight. The chase bled into the darker arteries of the city. The suspect hooked a sharp left, diving into an alleyway that stank of urine and refuse. Harlow followed, her hand instinctively drifting to the holster beneath her soaked blazer. The alley was a dead end—or should have been. A ten-foot brick wall loomed at the terminus, slick with moss and rain. The figure didn't slow down. He hit the vertical surface, one foot driving into a crack in the masonry, propelling him upward. fingers curled over the rusted iron railing of a fire escape two feet above his head. With a heave that defied standard physiology, he swung up and over the wall, disappearing into the gloom of the adjacent construction site. Harlow skidded to a halt, the grit grinding beneath her soles. She stared up at the wall. Impossible. The vertical leap required was Olympic standard, yet the man had done it with the casual effort of stepping onto a curb. A memory flashed—flashbulb bright and searing hot. DS Morris, eyes wide, blood pooling black in the moonlight, screaming about things that moved too fast to be human. Harlow shook the ghost away. She scanned the alley. A dumpster sat overflowed with cardboard boxes against the adjacent building. She scrambled up the side, boots finding purchase on the plastic lid, and hauled herself onto the lower rungs of the fire escape. The metal groaned under her weight. She climbed, vaulting the railing to the roof logic dictated the suspect had crossed. Below, the skeletal remains of a demolished block sprawled towards Camden, a maze of I-beams and concrete pits. The rain fell harder here, unimpeded by the tunnel of buildings. She spotted movement. A flicker of white near the center of the site, heading toward the ground level where the excavators had dug deep into the bedrock. "Metropolitan Police! Stay where you are!" Harlow leveled her weapon, the cold steel steady despite the heaving of her chest. The figure paused. Just for a heartbeat. He turned his head. Even at this distance, through the deluge, the darkness of his hood seemed impenetrable, but Harlow felt the weight of his gaze. It felt like static electricity brushing against her skin. He dropped. He didn't climb down; he stepped off the edge of a concrete precipice and plummeted into the darkness of the excavation pit. Harlow holstered her weapon and sprinted to the edge. A makeshift ramp of plywood and scaffolding led down into the earth, spiraling toward what looked like an exposed section of the old Tube network—tunnels abandoned decades ago, sealed off from the public. She navigated the treacherous descent, salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull, water dripping into her eyes. The noise of the city above—the sirens, the traffic, the shouting—faded, replaced by the rhythmic *drip-drip-drip* of water echoing through subterranean chambers. Her boots hit the floor of the pit. The air here was cooler, carrying the scent of wet clay and something metallic, like ozone before a storm. Before her lay a jagged hole in a brick wall, revealing the curved architecture of a train tunnel. Harlow clicked on her flashlight. The beam cut a cone of stark white through the dusty dark. She entered the tunnel. The tracks were gone, leaving only the rotting wooden sleepers embedded in the mud. Rats scattered at the intrusion of light, their eyes reflecting red in the beam. Fifty meters in, the tunnel widened into a station platform that didn't appear on any modern map. Faded tiles clung to the walls, covered in graffiti that twisted the eyes—shapes that looked like letters but refused to resolve into words. The suspect stood at the far end of the platform, in front of what looked like a ticket booth reforged from scrap metal and bone. A heavy iron gate blocked the passage beyond, welding scars knitting the bars together in ugly, bulbous ridges. Harlow killed the light and moved into the cover of a tiled pillar. She drew her weapon again, breathing through her nose to quiet the gasp of exertion. The suspect reached into his pocket. The sound of ceramic clinking against metal echoed in the quiet. He produced a small, flat object. In the gloom, it looked pale. Like ivory. Or bone. He stepped up to the gate. There was no keyhole, no electronic keypad, no card reader. Instead, a skeletal hand—human, by the look of the carpals—was mounted to the center of the iron bars, palm open, waiting. The man placed the token into the skeletal palm. Harlow watched, her jaw setting into a rigid line. The skeletal fingers snapped shut. A sound resonated through the platform, a low hum that vibrated in Harlow's teeth. The iron gate didn't swing open on hinges; it seemed to dissolve, the metal twisting and folding in on itself like burning paper, revealing a corridor bathed in a sickly, pulsating violet light. Smells wafted out—spices she couldn't name, roasting meat that smelled too sweet, and underneath it all, the copper tang of magic. The suspect stepped through. As he crossed the threshold, the iron began to reform, knitting itself back together from the edges inward. Harlow broke cover. She sprinted across the cracked tiles, boots hammering the ground. "Hold it!" The gate was sealing fast. The suspect was already ten feet down the violet corridor, walking with a leisurely gait. He didn't look back. He knew she couldn't follow. Harlow reached the barrier just as the last of the iron bars fused shut. She slammed her hand against the cold metal, rattling the gate. It held fast, solid as a bank vault. The violet light from the other side cast long, warped shadows through the bars. She could see the tunnel opening up into a massive cavern further down. Noise drifted back to her—a chaotic bazaar, shouts, bartering, the hiss of steam. The Veil Market. She had heard the whispers in the intake rooms, the rumors the older alcoholics on the force laughed about. A place that moved with the moon. A place where the laws of physics were suggestions rather than rules. Harlow looked at the skeletal hand mounted on her side of the gate. It was open again, waiting. *Entry requirement: bone token.* She stared at the hand. The palm was empty. "Damn it." She holstered her gun and grabbed the bars, shaking them again. Futile. She was locked out. Then she saw it. In the mud near the suspect's previous position, half-buried in the silt accumulated from the ceiling leaks, a small white chip gleamed. The suspect must have fumbled when he pulled the token from his pocket. A spare? Or maybe dropped by a previous traveler. Harlow knelt. She dug her fingers into the cold slime and retrieved it. It felt heavy for its size. Carved from a knucklebone, etched with a single, burning symbol that made her eyes water if she focused on it too long. She stood up, the token burning cold against her palm. Rationality screamed at her. Call backup. Set a perimeter. Wait for specialized units that didn't exist. This was insane. This was how Morris ended up in a closed casket. She looked through the bars. The suspect was disappearing into the crowd of the market. If she let him go, the lead died here. The connection to the clique, the reason for the bodies piling up in the morgue with unexplained tox screens—it all walked away. But walking in there meant leaving behind the world she understood. It meant stepping onto a chessboard where she didn't know how the pieces moved. Harlow looked at the skeletal hand. She looked at her watch. 02:14 AM. "Morris would have kicked down the door," she whispered to the empty station. Harlow Quinn reached out and placed the bone into the waiting dead hand. The fingers snapped shut around her offering, cold and sharp enough to pinch her skin. The hum returned, louder this time, shaking dust from the ceiling. The iron bars in front of her began to twist and scream, metal turning to liquid smoke. The violet light washed over her face, turning the hard lines of her expression into something ghostly. She drew her weapon, checked the chamber, and stepped into the light.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:19:17.924Z" 2/19/2026, 12:19:17 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1671
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1671
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"standard"
count2
3
word"gloom"
count2
4
word"searing"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"navigated"
count1
9
word"treacherous"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"resolve"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"resonated"
count1
16
word"vibrated"
count1
17
word"chaotic"
count1
18
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"loomed"
2"standard"
3"gloom"
4"searing"
5"scanned"
6"weight"
7"flicker"
8"navigated"
9"treacherous"
10"rhythmic"
11"echoing"
12"stark"
13"resolve"
14"echoed"
15"resonated"
16"vibrated"
17"chaotic"
18"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences144
matches(empty)
93.25% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences144
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1655
ratio0.003
matches
0"drip-drip-drip"
1"Entry requirement: bone token."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.88% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1636
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow20
Quinn2
Old1
Compton1
Street1
Olympic1
Morris2
Camden1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Old"
2"Compton"
3"Street"
4"Camden"
globalScore0.889
windowScore1
7.14% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences105
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"ople aside; he seemingly passed through the"
1"seemed impenetrable but Harlow felt the weight of his gaze"
2"felt like static electricity brushing a"
3"looked like an exposed section of the old"
4"looked like letters but refused to resolv"
5"looked like a ticket booth reforged from"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1655
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences147
matches
0"have that luxury"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean28.53
std18.85
cv0.661
sampleLengths
043
16
265
324
42
555
681
761
861
940
1027
1163
1229
1327
1420
1542
162
1722
1842
1938
2045
2117
2232
2340
2443
2528
2633
2737
289
2961
3021
3122
3213
332
3429
3533
3640
373
3838
3918
404
419
422
4316
444
4544
4613
4728
4810
4929
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences144
matches
0"were gone"
1"was mounted"
2"was locked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs270
matches
0"was sealing"
1"was disappearing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences147
ratio0.082
matches
0"He didn't shove people aside; he seemingly passed through the gaps in their attention, a ghost in a tracksuit."
1"The alley was a dead end—or should have been."
2"A memory flashed—flashbulb bright and searing hot."
3"He didn't climb down; he stepped off the edge of a concrete precipice and plummeted into the darkness of the excavation pit."
4"A makeshift ramp of plywood and scaffolding led down into the earth, spiraling toward what looked like an exposed section of the old Tube network—tunnels abandoned decades ago, sealed off from the public."
5"The noise of the city above—the sirens, the traffic, the shouting—faded, replaced by the rhythmic *drip-drip-drip* of water echoing through subterranean chambers."
6"Faded tiles clung to the walls, covered in graffiti that twisted the eyes—shapes that looked like letters but refused to resolve into words."
7"Instead, a skeletal hand—human, by the look of the carpals—was mounted to the center of the iron bars, palm open, waiting."
8"The iron gate didn't swing open on hinges; it seemed to dissolve, the metal twisting and folding in on itself like burning paper, revealing a corridor bathed in a sickly, pulsating violet light."
9"Smells wafted out—spices she couldn't name, roasting meat that smelled too sweet, and underneath it all, the copper tang of magic."
10"Noise drifted back to her—a chaotic bazaar, shouts, bartering, the hiss of steam."
11"The connection to the clique, the reason for the bodies piling up in the morgue with unexplained tox screens—it all walked away."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1652
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.01937046004842615
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.004842615012106538
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean11.26
std7.16
cv0.636
sampleLengths
022
121
26
320
426
519
65
719
82
911
108
1112
1224
1323
149
153
1619
178
182
197
2010
2110
2216
2313
249
2513
265
2717
2816
2923
3011
316
321
3322
347
3520
365
374
3811
3923
406
4114
4218
4311
443
4524
4620
473
484
494
49.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3401360544217687
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners50
74.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences134
matches
0"Just for a heartbeat."
1"Instead, a skeletal hand—human, by"
2"Then she saw it."
ratio0.022
97.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences134
matches
0"He didn't shove people aside;"
1"She didn't have that luxury."
2"She didn't stop to check"
3"Her eyes locked on the"
4"He vaulted a parked taxi,"
5"She landed heavy, water splashing"
6"She forced her body back"
7"He hit the vertical surface,"
8"She stared up at the"
9"She scanned the alley."
10"She scrambled up the side,"
11"She climbed, vaulting the railing"
12"She spotted movement."
13"He turned his head."
14"It felt like static electricity"
15"He didn't climb down; he"
16"She navigated the treacherous descent,"
17"Her boots hit the floor"
18"She entered the tunnel."
19"She drew her weapon again,"
ratio0.306
45.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences134
matches
0"Techno music engaged in a"
1"Rain sheeted down in aggressive"
2"Harlow Quinn rounded the corner"
3"The suspect was fifty yards"
4"He didn't shove people aside;"
5"She didn't have that luxury."
6"Harlow slammed her shoulder into"
7"The command ripped from her"
8"She didn't stop to check"
9"Her eyes locked on the"
10"He vaulted a parked taxi,"
11"Harlow planted her hand on"
12"She landed heavy, water splashing"
13"The knees complained, a sharp,"
14"She forced her body back"
15"The chase bled into the"
16"The suspect hooked a sharp"
17"Harlow followed, her hand instinctively"
18"The alley was a dead"
19"A ten-foot brick wall loomed"
ratio0.828
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences134
matches
0"Even at this distance, through"
1"Before her lay a jagged"
2"If she let him go,"
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences79
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The knees complained, a sharp, grinding protest that shot up her thighs, but the adrenaline flooded the pain receptors."
1"With a heave that defied standard physiology, he swung up and over the wall, disappearing into the gloom of the adjacent construction site."
2"DS Morris, eyes wide, blood pooling black in the moonlight, screaming about things that moved too fast to be human."
3"Smells wafted out—spices she couldn't name, roasting meat that smelled too sweet, and underneath it all, the copper tang of magic."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow leveled, the cold steel steady despite the heaving of her chest"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.4
79.6448%