| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She smiled again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.568 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.048 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |
| 95.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2389 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2389 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "shattered" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "flicked" | | 11 | "perfect" | | 12 | "crystalline" | | 13 | "velvet" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 178 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 178 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 193 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2370 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.92% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 26 | | unquotedAttributions | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "You walked the wrong way round the world, she said as if reciting a recipe." | | 1 | "Taste the sky, they said." | | 2 | "Welcome, it said, voice riffling through leaves like paper folded wrong." | | 3 | "Because the sin here takes form, Isolde said, and her voice folded into a riddle." | | 4 | "She looked at the masked guest and said, simply and plainly, You asked for company when you set your table." |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 77 | | wordCount | 2100 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.14 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 19 | | Richmond | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Blade | 3 | | Aurora | 24 | | Nyx | 12 | | English | 1 | | Dymas | 3 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Veil | 1 | | Room | 1 | | You | 2 | | Plates | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "You" | | 6 | "Plates" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Fae-Forged" | | 2 | "English" | | 3 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 0.929 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 143 | | glossingSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "as if anchoring herself and let the warmth steady her" | | 1 | "as if reciting a recipe" | | 2 | "sounded like a current in a dark room" | | 3 | "as if keeping a window open" | | 4 | "felt like a promise of safety" | | 5 | "as if reading its lines" | | 6 | "smelled like old promises" | | 7 | "felt like a needle pointing north in an" | | 8 | "as if waiting on the edge of a mouth" | | 9 | "as if tasting the words" |
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| 31.22% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 1.688 | | wordCount | 2370 | | matches | | 0 | "not for food but for more, pulling on some internal seam" | | 1 | "not their face but a memory" | | 2 | "not for coin but for small keepsakes" | | 3 | "not rough but insistence itself" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 193 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 70 | | mean | 33.86 | | std | 18.79 | | cv | 0.555 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 65 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 88 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 63 | | 32 | 71 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 46 | | 36 | 55 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 73 | | 40 | 39 | | 41 | 53 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 36 | | 46 | 38 | | 47 | 33 | | 48 | 53 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 97.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "being robed" | | 1 | "being wanted" | | 2 | "was stitched" | | 3 | "being slammed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 383 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 193 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "A smell hit them first—rich, ripe, and wrong." | | 1 | "She slid the Fae-Forged Blade free; moonsilver kissed her palm and sent a clean, hollow cool through her bones." | | 2 | "The ground underfoot felt wrong—soft as pastry and springy like a belly." | | 3 | "A bird—if it had been a bird—made of folded sugar and burnt citrus dropped from a branch and shattered into a hundred tiny wings that sang as they fell." | | 4 | "Servants moved behind the tables, but their movements were wrong—too eager, too smooth." | | 5 | "The liquid steamed and remembered other places—old kitchens, cellars that had eaten men, parties that never stopped." | | 6 | "They balanced it on a fingertip and watched as the spoon reflected not their face but a memory—someone laughing at a cake and not noticing the teeth falling from their mouth." | | 7 | "The food on those platters was perfect—gloss like lacquer, steam that sang." | | 8 | "Instead each lantern showed a scene: a laughing child at a feast now grown to a hollow-eyed elder; a city street lined with people who kept sinking into the cobbles; a kitchen where someone stirred a pot and the spoon kept returning with a different face." | | 9 | "A shadow moved along the base of a distant tree—the size of a man but made of nothing a man could be." | | 10 | "A figure stepped out of the nearest shadow—a being robed in velvet that sucked in the light around it, its face hidden beneath a mask shaped like an upturned spoon." | | 11 | "Offers began to stack themselves on the bench—cakes that breathed, pies that hummed." | | 12 | "A hand found her shoulder then—not rough but insistence itself." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2118 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.025967894239848913 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0056657223796034 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 193 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 193 | | mean | 12.28 | | std | 7.04 | | cv | 0.573 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 44.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.29015544041450775 | | totalSentences | 193 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 42.19% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead each lantern showed a" | | 1 | "Instead they found appetites, tables" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "They stepped through the ring" | | 1 | "She curled her fingers around" | | 2 | "Her silver hair hung like" | | 3 | "She tilted her head and" | | 4 | "You walked the wrong way" | | 5 | "They listened with a whisper" | | 6 | "She slid the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 7 | "They pointed with a grin" | | 8 | "Their hands bore marks like" | | 9 | "Their whisper slid across Aurora’s" | | 10 | "It spoke in a language" | | 11 | "She cupped the surface with" | | 12 | "She did not blink, as" | | 13 | "They shrank into a smear" | | 14 | "They balanced it on a" | | 15 | "She had come for answers" | | 16 | "She walked the tables, fingers" | | 17 | "They moved away from the" | | 18 | "It sets out many tables" | | 19 | "They came away with crumbs" |
| | ratio | 0.259 | |
| 7.47% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 143 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "They stepped through the ring" | | 1 | "Isolde pressed her palm to" | | 2 | "The standing stones hummed under" | | 3 | "Aurora’s pendant grew warm against" | | 4 | "She curled her fingers around" | | 5 | "Isolde lowered her hand." | | 6 | "Her silver hair hung like" | | 7 | "She tilted her head and" | | 8 | "You walked the wrong way" | | 9 | "The doors preferred soft knocks." | | 10 | "Nyx moved ahead like a" | | 11 | "They listened with a whisper" | | 12 | "A smell hit them first—rich," | | 13 | "Fruit that glowed faintly from" | | 14 | "The sky above them smelled" | | 15 | "The grove’s grasses gave way" | | 16 | "Aurora’s blade was cold in" | | 17 | "She slid the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 18 | "Every small hair along her" | | 19 | "The knife made no sound," |
| | ratio | 0.905 | |
| 63.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "Because the sin here takes" | | 1 | "Now she saw it as" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 93.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She curled her fingers around the silver chain as if anchoring herself and let the warmth steady her." | | 1 | "The heartstone pulsed under her touch, sending a little throb through the breeze as if the world inhaled." | | 2 | "Isolde traced the scar on her palm as if reading its lines." | | 3 | "Instead each lantern showed a scene: a laughing child at a feast now grown to a hollow-eyed elder; a city street lined with people who kept sinking into the cob…" | | 4 | "The applause arrived, low and insistent, as if a crowd had gathered beyond a hill." | | 5 | "She imagined cutting a surface that remembered other surfaces and watching the memory spool out." | | 6 | "A chorus answered from the orchards, a sound like hands rubbing together, and from somewhere beyond the pastries a bell tolled once as if to mark the beginning …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, eyes going far away" |
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| 75.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 20 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 1 | "they observed (observe)" | | 2 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.541 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.15 | | effectiveRatio | 0.15 | |