Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXEKACFCB9AF513WBJ96C0

Run Details

Duration:
38.8s
Cost:
$0.036630
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sharp knock echoed the frantic thumping in her own chest. Three distinct raps, patient yet insistent. Rory’s hand froze above a page of yellowed parchment detailing demonic sigils. Eva never knocked. Nobody ever knocked. A tabby cat, Ptolemy, uncurled from a pile of books and stretched, his claws snagging on a threadbare Persian rug. The scent of chicken vindaloo and garlic naan crept up through the floorboards from the curry house below, a constant, comforting aroma that now felt cloying. She slid the chain across the door, her fingers fumbling with the deadbolts. One. Two. Three solid, metallic clunks that peeled back the flat’s defences. She pulled the door open a crack, peering into the dim hallway. The single bare bulb overhead cast a jaundiced glow on the man who stood there. Lucien Moreau. He was a slash of charcoal and silver in the grimy corridor, perfectly out of place. His platinum hair was slicked back from his forehead, untouched by the city’s humidity. The tailored suit fit his frame without a single wrinkle, a stark contrast to her own worn jumper and paint-stained trousers. One hand rested on the ivory head of his cane, a casual pose that did nothing to soften the predator’s stillness about him. His eyes found hers. The right, a warm, liquid amber. The left, a flat, depthless black. They swept over her, a slow inventory that made the skin on her arms prickle. “Rory.” He did not smile, but the corner of his mouth ticked upwards. His voice was a low velvet rasp, the French accent curling around her name. She kept her hand firm on the door. “What are you doing here, Lucien?” “Business, as it happens. With your friend.” He gestured vaguely with his cane towards the chaotic interior of the flat. “Is she in?” “Eva’s not here.” The words came out clipped, final. She made to close the door. His cane shot out, the ivory handle pressing gently but immovably against the wood. “Then my business is with you.” Her breath hitched. The air between them crackled, thick with everything left unsaid since that night by the Thames. His nearness was a physical weight, pressing in on her. She could smell the crisp, clean scent of his cologne, sandalwood and something sharp, like gin. It was a world away from the dust and spice of her life. “I’m busy.” “I can see that.” His gaze flickered past her to the stacks of books and scrolls that threatened to swallow the small living room whole. “But this won’t wait.” She held his stare, her bright blue eyes challenging the strange dualism of his. For a long moment, the only sounds were the distant wail of a siren on Brick Lane and the frantic beat of her own heart. He didn't blink, didn't waver. He simply waited, a study in patience she knew she could never match. With a quiet curse, she pulled the door wider, stepping back into the clutter. Lucien entered, his polished leather shoes navigating the obstacle course of books with an unnerving grace. He moved like a dancer, his presence shrinking the already cramped room by half. Ptolemy, the traitor, wound around his ankles, purring like a tiny engine. Lucien paused to stroke the cat’s head once with a long finger before his eyes began to roam the flat, taking in the arcane charts pinned to the walls, the half-empty mugs of tea, the organised chaos of Eva's research. “Charming,” he murmured, his tone unreadable. He tapped a stack of leather-bound tomes with his cane. “Anything interesting?” Rory slammed the door, the sound echoing in the sudden quiet. The deadbolts went home with three sharp reports. Armour back in place. “I doubt it’s your kind of reading material. Not enough profit margins and leveraged buyouts.” A flicker of something—amusement, perhaps—crossed his face. He turned from the books, his mismatched eyes locking on hers again. “You wound me, Aurora. I have a great many literary interests.” He used her full name. He only ever did that when he wanted to get under her skin. She crossed her arms over her chest, a barricade against the pull he still exerted. “Get to it, Lucien. Why are you here?” He took a step towards her, and she fought the instinct to take one back. The flat was too small for retreat. He stopped barely an arm’s length away, his height forcing her to tilt her head up. “I have information. About the disappearances in Nine Elms.” Her posture tightened. “What information?” “The kind people pay a great deal of money for.” His amber eye glinted in the low light. “The kind I am prepared to offer you as a gesture of… goodwill.” “I don’t want your goodwill.” The lie tasted bitter on her tongue. “No?” He took another slow, deliberate step. Now she could see the fine silver threads in the charcoal wool of his suit, the perfect knot of his tie. He was close enough that his body heat washed over her. “What is it you want, then?” The question hung in the air between them, heavy and dangerous. He wasn’t just talking about the case. He was talking about the wreckage of their past, the smouldering embers he’d just casually stirred. She remembered leaning against a cold stone embankment, the river a black ribbon at their feet, his voice a low promise in her ear. She remembered the screech of tyres and the flash of black eyes that were not his own, and then… nothing. He was gone. Her own voice was a low tremor. “I want you to leave my friend’s flat.” “I don’t believe you.” He reached out, not to touch her, but to trace the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist with the tip of his finger. His touch was feather-light, but it seared her skin like a brand. She flinched, pulling her hand back as if burned. “Don’t,” she whispered, the single word frayed with a history he knew all too well. His hand dropped, but he didn’t move away. His gaze was intense, stripping away the years of anger and hurt she had so carefully constructed. “You are in danger, Rory. More than you know. Your investigation, Eva’s research… you are treading in waters far deeper than you can imagine.” “And you’re here to save me? The noble fixer with a heart of gold?” Sarcasm was her only shield. His expression hardened, the warmth in his amber eye extinguished. “I am here because you have stumbled into my world. Your ex-boyfriend Evan was not merely abusive. He was a collector for a very powerful, very old entity. An entity that does not like its possessions being stolen.” The world tilted. Evan. His name from Lucien’s lips was a violation. “You know nothing about that.” “I know everything.” His voice was quiet, deadly serious. He had cornered her now, his body blocking the slim path between a towering bookshelf and the wall. Her back was pressed against the unyielding spines of ancient histories. “I know why you fled Cardiff. I know why Eva brought you to London. And I know what Evan took from you is a key he was meant to deliver. A key his master now wants back. And they believe you have it.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.067
79.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1228
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"gently"
2"carefully"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1228
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"predator"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"navigating"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"constructed"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"comforting"
2"stark"
3"predator"
4"velvet"
5"chaotic"
6"weight"
7"flickered"
8"navigating"
9"unreadable"
10"echoing"
11"flicker"
12"perfect"
13"constructed"
14"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1221
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount962
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.42
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
Persian1
Moreau1
French1
Thames1
Brick1
Lane1
Eva2
Lucien4
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Thames"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.819
wordCount1221
matches
0"not to touch her, but to trace the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist with the"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean34.89
std23.74
cv0.68
sampleLengths
035
171
227
32
474
531
627
714
823
915
1020
1158
122
1329
1471
1582
1618
1738
1830
1941
2047
215
2231
2312
2445
2581
2615
2748
2815
2949
3019
3148
3212
335
3481
97.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs141
matches
0"was talking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences103
ratio0.01
matches
0"A flicker of something—amusement, perhaps—crossed his face."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount969
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.0392156862745098
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01238390092879257
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean11.85
std8.01
cv0.676
sampleLengths
011
16
212
33
43
520
626
713
81
91
1010
1112
1215
132
1416
1514
1621
1723
184
196
206
2115
2213
2314
248
256
2620
273
289
296
3014
316
323
3316
3410
3516
3613
372
3825
394
4014
4125
425
4313
4414
4516
4614
4712
4840
496
47.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.33980582524271846
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences80
matches
0"She slid the chain across"
1"She pulled the door open"
2"He was a slash of"
3"His platinum hair was slicked"
4"His eyes found hers."
5"They swept over her, a"
6"He did not smile, but"
7"His voice was a low"
8"She kept her hand firm"
9"He gestured vaguely with his"
10"She made to close the"
11"His cane shot out, the"
12"Her breath hitched."
13"His nearness was a physical"
14"She could smell the crisp,"
15"It was a world away"
16"His gaze flickered past her"
17"She held his stare, her"
18"He didn't blink, didn't waver."
19"He simply waited, a study"
ratio0.625
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences80
matches
0"The sharp knock echoed the"
1"Rory’s hand froze above a"
2"Eva never knocked."
3"Nobody ever knocked."
4"A tabby cat, Ptolemy, uncurled"
5"The scent of chicken vindaloo"
6"She slid the chain across"
7"She pulled the door open"
8"The single bare bulb overhead"
9"He was a slash of"
10"His platinum hair was slicked"
11"The tailored suit fit his"
12"His eyes found hers."
13"The right, a warm, liquid"
14"The left, a flat, depthless"
15"They swept over her, a"
16"He did not smile, but"
17"His voice was a low"
18"She kept her hand firm"
19"He gestured vaguely with his"
ratio0.925
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Now she could see the"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"One hand rested on the ivory head of his cane, a casual pose that did nothing to soften the predator’s stillness about him."
1"They swept over her, a slow inventory that made the skin on her arms prickle."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"The words came out, final"
1"he murmured, his tone unreadable"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.133
81.1435%