Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXEMBW09M7E9F4KDTC49WJ

Run Details

Duration:
10.9s
Cost:
$0.005203
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The top deadbolt slid back with a thud. Another click, then the final rasp of the lock as the door opened an inch. A sliver of bright blue appeared in the gap, then the rest of Aurora’s face. Wet black hair, plastered to her forehead, dripped onto the collar of a man’s oversized white shirt. The fabric clung to her frame, soaked through. Lucien’s gaze remained fixed on her. The rain plastered his platinum-blond hair to his skull. A dark, tailored suit jacket, sodden and heavy, hung from his wide shoulders. Water streamed from the expensive fabric, gathering in an inky puddle at his feet. A silver-tipped cane, clutched in a white-knuckled grip, supported his weight. “You’re dripping,” Aurora said, her voice flat, devoid of warmth. Her eyes, the colour of a stormy sea, refused to meet his. She stepped back, the door swinging open to reveal the cramped hallway behind her. “I prefer a dramatic entrance,” Lucien replied, his lips curving into a humourless smile. He swept his hand out, gesturing to his drenched form. Aurora rolled her eyes, a small huff escaping her lips. He took a step over the threshold, his polished leather shoes squeaking on the linoleum. The scent of rain, damp wool, and something distinctly masculine filled the air. She remained rooted to the spot, a statuesque figure, her arms crossed tight across her chest. “I’m not in the mood, Lucien,” she said, her voice low and gravelly. “Whatever it is, it can wait.” “Can it?” he asked, his one amber eye glittering with an unreadable emotion. “Or is that simply what you wish?” He moved further into the living room, his gaze sweeping over the stacks of books, scrolls, and haphazardly arranged notes. A tabby cat, disturbed from its perch on a precarious tower of tomes, blinked at him with sleepy indifference before curling back into a furry ball. Aurora shut the door with a soft click, the sound final. The rain outside continued its relentless drumming against the windowpanes. The single light in the hallway cast long, dancing shadows across the room, making the familiar space feel alien. “You’re full of it, you know,” she said, her voice rising in volume. “Always showing up when it suits you. Never when it actually matters.” Lucien turned, his expression unreadable. “And when did it not matter, Aurora?” “Don’t play dumb,” she snapped. “You know exactly what I’m talking about.” Her chest heaved with each breath, a tempest brewing beneath the surface. Her tight grip released from her arms, her hands clenched into fists at her sides. “Enlighten me,” he said, his voice a low thrum. He took another step towards her, encroaching into her personal space. The air crackled between them, thick with unaddressed history. “You left,” she said, her voice barely a whisper, the fight draining from her. “When I needed you most, you disappeared.” His jaw tightened, a muscle jumping in his cheek. He averted his gaze, his eyes darting to the rain-streaked window. “I had… matters to attend to.” “Always matters,” she scoffed, a bitter laugh escaping her lips. “Always something more important than me.” He turned back to her, his gaze intense. “That’s not fair, Rory.” The informal address, a name he rarely used, struck a chord. Her shoulders slumped. The anger that had momentarily flared subsided, replaced by a hollow ache. “Isn’t it?” she asked, her voice laced with pain. “You were supposed to stay. You promised.” “Circumstances change.” “They always do with you,” she said, shaking her head. “One minute you’re here, the next you’re gone. A phantom. That’s what you are.” He winced, the word striking a nerve. He reached out a hand, his fingers hovering inches from her arm. She flinched, pulling back as if burned. “Don’t,” she said, her voice sharp. His hand dropped to his side. The silence stretched between them, heavy and suffocating. The only sound was the distant rumble of the underground and the relentless patter of rain. “I came here because I need your help,” he finally said, his voice quiet, devoid of its usual suave charm. “It’s important.” “It always is,” she responded, her tone still guarded. “But why me? You have a network. Contacts. People who actually enjoy your presence.” He let out a dry, mirthless chuckle. “My contacts are… compromised. And as for enjoying my presence,” he quirked a brow, a hint of his old self returning. “I seem to recall a time when you did.” Her cheeks flushed, a faint rosiness spreading across her pale skin. She turned away, walking over to the overflowing bookshelf, her fingers tracing the worn spines of the books. “That was a long time ago,” she muttered, her voice muffled. “Was it?” he asked, moving closer, his voice a silken whisper. He stopped behind her, close enough that she could feel the heat radiating from his body, even through their clothes. The scent of rain, his cologne, and something else – something uniquely him – filled her senses. It was a smell she had both yearned for and loathed. “Things change, Lucien,” she said, her back still to him. “People change.” “Do they?” he asked, his voice now directly next to her ear, sending shivers down her spine. “Or do they simply hide who they truly are?” She spun around, her eyes blazing. “What’s that supposed to mean?” He leaned in closer, his heterochromatic eyes searching hers, a depth of emotion swirling within them that she couldn’t quite decipher. “It means, Rory, that I know you. Better than anyone.” “You don’t know anything about me anymore,” she retorted, though her voice wavered slightly. His lips twitched upwards, a genuine smile this time, small but significant. “Humour me. What do you remember of us?” Her gaze locked with his, falling into the depths of that amber and that black eye. A jolt, electric and raw, shot through her. The past rushed back, a torrent of stolen glances, hushed conversations, and desperate touches. The way his hand felt in hers, the warmth of his body against hers, the lingering taste of him on her lips. “I remember… a lot of things,” she finally said, her voice barely above a whisper. He nodded, his gaze unwavering. “And do you regret them?” She hesitated, her breath catching in her throat. The question hung in the air, a fragile thing, loaded with unspoken sentiment. The rain outside seemed to intensify, matching the storm brewing within her. She wanted to deny it, to push him away, to scream at him for daring to ask. But the words wouldn’t come. The truth, a bitter pill, lodged itself in her throat. “I… I don’t know,” she stammered, finally breaking their intense stare. He reached out slowly, his fingers brushing against her cheek, sending a searing heat through her. She leaned into his touch, an involuntary reaction, a deep-seated longing she had tried to bury. His thumb caressed her skin, a feather-light touch that promised so much. “Rory,” he whispered, his voice thick with emotion, his eyes still fixed on hers. “Look at me.” She finally met his gaze again, her heart hammering against her ribs. The anger, the hurt, the resentment, it all faded, replaced by a devastating vulnerability. “What do you want, Lucien?” she asked, her voice trembling. “I want you to listen,” he said, his voice low, a husky plea. “Please. This is important.” She stepped back, breaking the contact, the warmth of his hand still lingering on her skin. She needed distance, space to breathe, to think. To rebuild the walls he so effortlessly seemed to crumble. “Fine,” she said, her voice regaining some of its earlier bite. “Talk. But don’t think for a second that this changes anything between us.” He simply nodded, his eyes never leaving hers, a silent understanding passing between them. He pulled out the chair from the small dining table, the scrape of metal on linoleum a jarring sound in the quiet room. He sat, his wet suit jacket creating a dark stain on the wooden seat. He gestured to the chair opposite him. “Sit,” he said. “It’s a long story.” She hesitated for a moment, then, with a sigh of resignation, pulled out the chair and sat. The cat, Ptolemy, jumped onto the table, eyeing Lucien with a suspicious gaze before settling onto a pile of research notes. “Start from the beginning,” she said, her voice firm. “And don’t leave anything out this time.” He nodded, then began, his voice a low rumble.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:19:31.329Z" 2/19/2026, 12:19:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he finally said [finally]"
1"she finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.537
leniency1
rawRatio0.069
effectiveRatio0.069
85.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1425
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"slightly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1425
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"unreadable"
count2
3
word"dancing"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count3
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"charm"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"wavered"
count1
12
word"depths"
count1
13
word"electric"
count1
14
word"unwavering"
count1
15
word"unspoken"
count1
16
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"warmth"
2"unreadable"
3"dancing"
4"familiar"
5"whisper"
6"silence"
7"charm"
8"tracing"
9"could feel"
10"down her spine"
11"wavered"
12"depths"
13"electric"
14"unwavering"
15"unspoken"
16"searing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"clenched into fists"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
86.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences102
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1421
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount1135
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity0.35
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora4
Lucien4
Ptolemy1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite decipher"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1421
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean26.81
std15.98
cv0.596
sampleLengths
063
153
236
324
454
519
620
746
840
925
1012
1139
1229
1321
1426
1516
1612
1726
1816
192
2024
2126
226
2330
2422
2523
2637
2729
2811
2959
3012
3126
3211
3331
3414
3520
3660
3715
3810
3965
4011
4144
4217
4326
4410
4517
4634
4724
4858
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs193
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences127
ratio0.008
matches
0"The scent of rain, his cologne, and something else – something uniquely him – filled her senses."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1139
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03950834064969271
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.015803336259877086
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean11.19
std4.86
cv0.435
sampleLengths
08
115
215
317
48
56
69
713
814
911
1010
1112
1214
1314
1410
1510
1615
1713
1816
1913
206
2113
227
2320
2426
2511
2610
2719
2813
2912
305
317
325
3319
3415
359
3611
379
3814
397
409
4111
426
4310
446
458
464
4711
483
4912
47.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.33858267716535434
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount65
totalSentences100
matches
0"Her eyes, the colour of"
1"She stepped back, the door"
2"He swept his hand out,"
3"He took a step over"
4"She remained rooted to the"
5"she said, her voice low"
6"he asked, his one amber"
7"He moved further into the"
8"she said, her voice rising"
9"Her chest heaved with each"
10"Her tight grip released from"
11"he said, his voice a"
12"He took another step towards"
13"she said, her voice barely"
14"His jaw tightened, a muscle"
15"He averted his gaze, his"
16"she scoffed, a bitter laugh"
17"He turned back to her,"
18"Her shoulders slumped."
19"she asked, her voice laced"
ratio0.65
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences100
matches
0"The top deadbolt slid back"
1"Another click, then the final"
2"A sliver of bright blue"
3"The fabric clung to her"
4"Lucien’s gaze remained fixed on"
5"The rain plastered his platinum-blond"
6"A dark, tailored suit jacket,"
7"Water streamed from the expensive"
8"A silver-tipped cane, clutched in"
9"Aurora said, her voice flat,"
10"Her eyes, the colour of"
11"She stepped back, the door"
12"Lucien replied, his lips curving"
13"He swept his hand out,"
14"Aurora rolled her eyes, a"
15"He took a step over"
16"The scent of rain, damp"
17"She remained rooted to the"
18"she said, her voice low"
19"he asked, his one amber"
ratio0.97
50.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"To rebuild the walls he"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She turned away, walking over to the overflowing bookshelf, her fingers tracing the worn spines of the books."
1"He reached out slowly, his fingers brushing against her cheek, sending a searing heat through her."
2"His thumb caressed her skin, a feather-light touch that promised so much."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount20
matches
0"Aurora said, her voice flat, devoid of warmth"
1"Lucien replied, his lips curving into a humourless smile"
2"she said, her voice low and gravelly"
3"she said, her voice rising in volume"
4"Her chest heaved, a tempest brewing beneath the surface"
5"he said, his voice a low thrum"
6"she said, her voice barely a whisper, the fight draining from her"
7"she scoffed, a bitter laugh escaping her lips"
8"she said, her voice sharp"
9"he finally said, his voice quiet, devoid of its usual suave charm"
10"she responded, her tone still guarded"
11"he quirked, a hint of his old self returning"
12"she muttered, her voice muffled"
13"she said, her back still to him"
14"she retorted, though her voice wavered slightly"
15"she finally said, her voice barely above a whisper"
16"she asked, her voice trembling"
17"he said, his voice low, a husky plea"
18"she said, her voice regaining some of its earlier bite"
19"she said, her voice firm"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags26
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"she responded (respond)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"she retorted (retort)"
4"she stammered (stammer)"
5"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.963
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.222
76.6310%