Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXF0FX1FR262NJABTRRPD4

Run Details

Duration:
46.4s
Cost:
$0.110550

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered down on Camden High Street, turning the pavement into a river of reflected neon. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through puddles as she pursued the figure ahead—a blur of dark clothing weaving between late-night pedestrians. "Metropolitan Police! Stop!" The suspect glanced back, face obscured by a hood, then vaulted over a construction barrier. Quinn followed, her worn leather watch catching on the metal fence. She yanked it free and dropped into the work site beyond. Mud sucked at her shoes. The suspect was already scrambling up the opposite side, heading for the mouth of an alley. Quinn's lungs burned, but eighteen years on the force had taught her to push through worse. She hauled herself over scaffolding and emerged onto a narrow side street. There—movement near a boarded-up shop entrance. The suspect pried at loose planking, creating a gap just wide enough to squeeze through. Quinn sprinted forward, but they'd already vanished inside. She pressed her back against the wet brick wall beside the opening. Rain dripped from her salt-and-pepper hair, running cold trails down her neck. Through the gap came the echo of footsteps descending stairs. Quinn clicked her radio. "Control, this is DI Quinn. In pursuit of suspect, entering abandoned building off Camden High Street. Request backup." Static crackled. "Copy that, Detective. Units en route. ETA five minutes." Five minutes. Too long. The suspect would be gone by then, along with any chance of answers about DS Morris and what really happened three years ago. Quinn ducked through the gap. The darkness inside was absolute. She pulled out her torch, its beam cutting through dust motes and revealing a staircase leading down. Construction equipment littered the space—this had been part of the Tube expansion project, abandoned when funding dried up. The stairs groaned under her weight. At the bottom, a service tunnel stretched in both directions. Fresh mud tracks led left. Quinn followed, her torchlight dancing across pipes and electrical conduits. The air grew thick, tinged with an odd metallic taste. Voices drifted from ahead. Multiple people, their words indistinct. Quinn killed her torch and crept forward, one hand on the tunnel wall for guidance. A faint glow appeared around a bend—candlelight flickering through a doorway. She peered around the corner. The doorway opened onto a platform, and beyond that... Quinn's breath caught. Where there should have been abandoned tracks lay a sprawling underground market. Dozens of stalls filled the station, their wares illuminated by floating orbs of light that defied explanation. Vendors in strange clothing haggled with customers whose shadows moved independently of their bodies. The suspect stood at the platform edge, pulling something from their pocket—a small white object. A token made of bone. Quinn's mind raced. Whatever this place was, it wasn't on any Metropolitan Police map. The suspect started down steps she hadn't noticed before, descending toward the market floor. "Looking for someone?" Quinn spun. A man stood behind her, olive skin pale in the strange light. A scar ran along his left forearm, and a medallion glinted at his throat. "Metropolitan Police." She reached for her warrant card. "I'm pursuing a suspect who—" "Into the Veil Market?" The man's accent carried traces of Spain. "That's not wise, Detective. Not without understanding what you're walking into." "Are you threatening an officer?" "Warning one." He gestured at the market below. "Your badge means nothing down there. Different rules, different... residents." Quinn studied him. Medical bag at his feet, steady hands despite finding a cop in this bizarre place. "You're a doctor." "Was. Tomás Herrera. And you're Detective Quinn. Heard about you—the cop who won't let go of her partner's case." Her jaw tightened. "You know about Morris?" "I know chasing ghosts through the Veil Market won't bring him back." Tomás stepped past her to the platform edge. "But if you insist on going down there, at least know what you're risking. See those symbols on the stall banners? Stay clear of the red ones—they trade in memories. The vendors with silver masks? They'll know you're police before you open your mouth." "Why are you helping me?" "Because someone helped me once, when I first stumbled into this world." His hand went to the medallion. "Saint Christopher. Patron of travelers. Figure you could use some guidance." Below, the suspect had reached a stall draped in black cloth. They handed over the bone token, receiving a wrapped package in return. Quinn's radio crackled. "DI Quinn, what's your position? We're at the construction site." She had to decide. Report back, let the suspect escape with whatever they'd acquired. Or descend into this impossible market, risking everything on the chance it connected to Morris's death. The suspect was moving again, heading deeper into the crowd. In moments, they'd be lost among the stalls and shadows. Tomás watched her, waiting. "Once you cross that threshold, Detective, there's no unknowing what you'll learn. The world's bigger than Scotland Yard teaches." Thunder rumbled overhead, muffled by tons of earth and concrete. Quinn thought of Morris—his laugh, his terrible jokes, the way his eyes had widened in those final moments as something impossible tore through reality. She clicked off her radio. "Tell me the rules."
total_cost0.11055

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.227
leniency0.455
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount877
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount877
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"dancing"
count1
4
word"tinged"
count1
5
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"footsteps"
2"weight"
3"dancing"
4"tinged"
5"raced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords865
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
42.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount650
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.15
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn14
Morris3
Tube1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Spain1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Police"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Spain"
globalScore0.423
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount865
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean23.38
std14.42
cv0.617
sampleLengths
038
13
237
349
429
534
622
711
827
95
1040
1141
1235
1314
1446
1520
1628
173
1828
1913
2022
215
2218
2321
2419
257
2664
275
2829
2923
3013
3130
3220
3323
3434
355
364
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"been abandoned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences84
ratio0.071
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through puddles as she pursued the figure ahead—a blur of dark clothing weaving between late-night pedestrians."
1"There—movement near a boarded-up shop entrance."
2"Construction equipment littered the space—this had been part of the Tube expansion project, abandoned when funding dried up."
3"A faint glow appeared around a bend—candlelight flickering through a doorway."
4"The suspect stood at the platform edge, pulling something from their pocket—a small white object."
5"Quinn thought of Morris—his laugh, his terrible jokes, the way his eyes had widened in those final moments as something impossible tore through reality."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount660
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.021212121212121213
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0030303030303030303
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean10.3
std6.67
cv0.647
sampleLengths
017
121
23
315
411
511
65
716
816
912
106
1115
128
1312
1412
1510
164
1718
182
199
202
212
2223
235
245
2517
2618
276
2810
295
3010
3110
324
335
3415
3511
365
379
383
3912
4017
4114
4215
435
443
4511
4614
473
482
4912
96.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5833333333333334
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences63
matches
0"She yanked it free and"
1"She hauled herself over scaffolding"
2"She pressed her back against"
3"She pulled out her torch,"
4"She peered around the corner."
5"She reached for her warrant"
6"He gestured at the market"
7"Her jaw tightened."
8"His hand went to the"
9"They handed over the bone"
10"She had to decide."
11"She clicked off her radio."
ratio0.19
39.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences63
matches
0"The rain hammered down on"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed"
2"The suspect glanced back, face"
3"Quinn followed, her worn leather"
4"She yanked it free and"
5"Mud sucked at her shoes."
6"The suspect was already scrambling"
7"Quinn's lungs burned, but eighteen"
8"She hauled herself over scaffolding"
9"There—movement near a boarded-up shop"
10"The suspect pried at loose"
11"Quinn sprinted forward, but they'd"
12"She pressed her back against"
13"Rain dripped from her salt-and-pepper"
14"Quinn clicked her radio."
15"The suspect would be gone"
16"Quinn ducked through the gap."
17"The darkness inside was absolute."
18"She pulled out her torch,"
19"Construction equipment littered the space—this"
ratio0.841
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She pulled out her torch, its beam cutting through dust motes and revealing a staircase leading down."
1"Dozens of stalls filled the station, their wares illuminated by floating orbs of light that defied explanation."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.5932%