Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXF4YAE317JN95W5HWK44W

Run Details

Duration:
18.9s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, the familiar creak of hinges announcing her arrival. The bar's dim lighting and the scent of aged whiskey wrapped around her like a well-worn coat. She scanned the room, her eyes adjusting to the low light, searching for Silas. He wasn't behind the bar as usual. Instead, she spotted him in the corner booth, hunched over a newspaper. As she approached, Silas looked up, his hazel eyes widening in surprise. "Aurora," he said, his voice rough with emotion. "I didn't expect to see you here." Rory slid into the booth across from him, her straight black hair falling over one shoulder. "I needed to talk to you, Silas. It's been too long." Silas folded his newspaper, setting it aside. His neatly trimmed beard caught the light as he leaned forward. "You're right. It has been too long. How have you been, Rory?" She hesitated, her fingers tracing the rim of her water glass. "I've been... coping. Working at the Golden Empress, trying to move forward." "And Evan?" Silas asked, his tone cautious. Rory's jaw tightened. "He's in the past. Where he belongs." Silas nodded, his expression softening. "I'm glad to hear that. You deserve better." A moment of silence stretched between them, heavy with unspoken words. Rory glanced around the bar, taking in the old maps and black-and-white photographs adorning the walls. It was a place frozen in time, much like their friendship. "I've changed, Silas," Rory said finally, her voice barely above a whisper. "I'm not the same person I was when I left Cardiff." Silas studied her face, his eyes lingering on the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "I can see that. Life has a way of changing us, doesn't it?" Rory nodded, a bitter smile playing on her lips. "It does. Sometimes I wonder if I made the right choice, leaving everything behind." "You followed your heart," Silas said gently. "That's never wrong." "But at what cost?" Rory asked, her bright blue eyes shimmering with unshed tears. "I left my family, my friends... I left Eva behind." Silas reached across the table, his weathered hand covering hers. "You did what you had to do to survive. Eva understands that. She always has." Rory's breath hitched as she looked down at their intertwined hands. "Do you think she'll ever forgive me for not being there when she needed me?" Silas squeezed her hand reassuringly. "Eva loves you, Rory. She knows you love her too. Time has a way of healing wounds, even the deepest ones." Rory nodded, wiping away a stray tear. "I hope you're right, Silas. I really do." They sat in comfortable silence for a moment, the weight of their shared history hanging between them. Silas' silver signet ring caught the light as he withdrew his hand, his hazel eyes filled with understanding. "You know," he said, his voice taking on a lighter tone, "I still remember the first time you walked into this bar. You were just a kid, barely out of university." Rory chuckled softly, the sound a welcome relief from the tension. "I was so nervous. I thought you'd turn me away." "Never," Silas said firmly. "You had that look in your eye, the one that said you were ready to take on the world. I knew you'd be an asset to our network." Rory's smile faded as she leaned back in her seat. "I don't know if I'm cut out for this life anymore, Silas. The danger, the secrecy... it's starting to wear on me." Silas nodded, his expression serious. "I understand. It's not an easy path we've chosen. But you have a gift, Rory. A talent for seeing things others miss, for finding solutions where there seem to be none." Rory shook her head, her black hair swaying with the motion. "I don't know about that. Lately, I've been feeling lost. Like I'm drifting without purpose." Silas leaned forward, his voice low and intense. "You have a purpose, Aurora. You always have. It's just a matter of finding it again." Rory met his gaze, her bright blue eyes filled with a glimmer of hope. "Do you really think so?" "I know so," Silas said firmly. "You're stronger than you realize. And you have people who care about you, who believe in you." Rory's lips curved into a small smile. "Like you, Silas?" "Always," he replied, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. "I'll always be here for you, Rory. No matter what." Rory reached across the table, her hand covering Silas'. "Thank you," she whispered. "For everything." Silas smiled, his weathered face softening. "That's what friends are for, Aurora. That's what we've always been for each other." As they sat there, hands intertwined, the weight of time and unspoken regret seemed to lift, if only for a moment. In that dimly lit corner of The Raven's Nest, two old friends found solace in each other's presence, a reminder of the unbreakable bond they shared. The door creaked open again, and a gust of cold air swept through the bar. Rory and Silas looked up, their hands parting as a new customer entered. But in that fleeting moment, they shared a look of understanding, a silent promise to face whatever the future held together.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:19:48.304Z" 2/19/2026, 12:19:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Rory said finally [finally]"
1"Silas said gently [gently]"
2"Silas said firmly [firmly]"
3"Silas said firmly [firmly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.297
leniency0.595
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.216
71.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount889
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"gently"
2"really"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount889
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"unspoken"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"comfortable"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"firmly"
count2
10
word"solace"
count1
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"fleeting"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"scanned"
2"tracing"
3"silence"
4"unspoken"
5"whisper"
6"comfortable"
7"weight"
8"tension"
9"firmly"
10"solace"
11"reminder"
12"fleeting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a glimmer of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences46
matches
0"g in surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords885
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount483
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity3.31
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Silas15
Rory16
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount885
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
75.70% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean25.29
std10.49
cv0.415
sampleLengths
050
131
215
327
430
523
67
710
813
938
1023
1129
1223
1310
1424
1525
1626
1726
1815
1935
2031
2121
2232
2332
2436
2526
2624
2719
2823
2910
3020
3115
3220
3347
3449
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs87
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences74
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.44% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount453
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.046357615894039736
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.017660044150110375
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean11.96
std6.21
cv0.519
sampleLengths
019
117
214
37
412
512
68
77
816
911
107
1111
1212
1311
1412
157
163
177
185
198
2011
2116
2211
2312
2411
2516
2613
279
2814
297
303
3114
3210
3310
3415
3511
3615
375
3821
397
408
4117
4218
4331
4411
4510
464
4728
4810
4922
54.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.33783783783783783
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners25
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"Instead, she spotted him in"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences45
matches
0"She scanned the room, her"
1"He wasn't behind the bar"
2"he said, his voice rough"
3"His neatly trimmed beard caught"
4"She hesitated, her fingers tracing"
5"It was a place frozen"
6"They sat in comfortable silence"
7"he said, his voice taking"
8"he replied, his hazel eyes"
ratio0.2
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences45
matches
0"Rory pushed through the heavy"
1"The bar's dim lighting and"
2"She scanned the room, her"
3"He wasn't behind the bar"
4"he said, his voice rough"
5"Rory slid into the booth"
6"Silas folded his newspaper, setting"
7"His neatly trimmed beard caught"
8"She hesitated, her fingers tracing"
9"Silas asked, his tone cautious"
10"Rory's jaw tightened."
11"Silas nodded, his expression softening."
12"A moment of silence stretched"
13"Rory glanced around the bar,"
14"It was a place frozen"
15"Rory said finally, her voice"
16"Silas studied her face, his"
17"Rory nodded, a bitter smile"
18"Silas said gently"
19"Rory asked, her bright blue"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She scanned the room, her eyes adjusting to the low light, searching for Silas."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he said, his voice rough with emotion"
1"Silas asked, his tone cautious"
2"Rory said finally, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"he said, his voice taking on a lighter tone,"
4"he replied, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.27
leniency0.541
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.054
76.1663%