Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXFA614MBGHRAK7NM8E6X1

Run Details

Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.001454
Provider:
SambaNova

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in The Fae Grove smelled too sweet, like rotting fruit and honey. Rory’s boot sank into damp moss as she stepped past the ancient standing stones, the boundary that should have felt like a threshold but instead just felt like a trap. Above, the sky was a bruised purple, starless—an hour ago, in Richmond Park, it had been a clear, cold night. Time moved differently here, the note had warned her. The note she’d found slipped under her door, unsigned, written in an elegant, looping script: *If you want the truth about the pendant, come to the Grove at moonrise.* She unzipped her jacket, the silver chain of the Heartstone cold against her collarbone. The pendant itself, that deep crimson stone the size of a thumbnail, lay still. No pulse. No warmth. Just a piece of jewellery given to her by a stranger in a rain-slicked alley two weeks ago, a man with eyes that held no light who had pressed it into her palm and vanished. Since then, her life had felt like a radio tuned slightly off-station, all static and distortion. The grove was a perfect circle of manicured wildness. Flowers she couldn’t name bloomed in violent purples and bloody reds, their colours unreal in the dim, sourceless light. The ancient oaks formed a tight wall around the clearing, their branches weaving a ceiling that blocked out the world. It was quiet. Not a peaceful quiet. A held-breath quiet. The kind that comes before a scream. She walked toward the center, her footsteps muffled by the thick carpet of moss and fallen petals. Her reason for being here felt flimsier by the second. The truth about the pendant. What truth? That it was stolen? Cursed? That the man who gave it to her was something not entirely human? She touched the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit from childhood. A twig snapped to her left. Rory froze, her head whipping around. The trees were?” Her voice was too loud, swallowed by the oppressive silence almost instantly. No answer. Just the gentle, wrong sigh of wind through leaves that shouldn’t have been there—the trees were too dense for any real breeze to penetrate. She took another step. And heard it again. Not a tw time distortion. It’s messing with your head.* She repeated the rationalizations like a mantra, the same ones she’d used when Evan would stand outside her door for hours, not knocking, just waiting. This felt the same. A predatory patience. She reached the center of the grove, a slight depression where the moss was a darker green. This was where the note had told her to wait. She checked her phone. No signal, of course. The screen flashed 11:47 PM. She’d entered the park at 11:30. How long had she been in here? It felt like ten minutes. It could have been ten hours. A low hum began, so deep it was more a vibration in her teeth than a sound. The Heartstone against her skin grew warm. Not a gentle warmth. A sudden, feverish heat. She looked down. The crimson gem was glowing, a faint pulse of light from deep within its core, beating in time with the hum. Thump. Thump. Thump. Like a heart. The scraping sound came again, closer now. Not from one direction, but from all around her, a slow, deliberate circle being drawn around the clearing’s edge. Rory backed up, turning in a slow circle, her breath coming in shallow pants that clouded in the strangely cold air. Shadows pooled and thickened between the trees. They didn’t behave right. They stretched and contracted independent of any light source, sliding over the ground like oil. One of them, long and thin, detached itself from the base of an oak and slithered behind the next tree. She blinked, hard. Nothing there. “I know you’re there,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. Cool-headed. Intelligent. That was her. Out-of-the-box thinking. Right now, the box was a tightening circle of wrongness, and she was stuck in the center of it. A whisper rustled through the leaves above. Not wind. It formed a word. *Laila.* She went rigid. No one called her that. Not since she was a child. Her mother’s pet name for her, abandoned a lifetime ago. The humming intensified, the vibrations moving up from her jaw into her skull. The pendant was hot, almost burning. Its glow cast a faint red light on the ground around her feet. Another whisper, from her right this time. It was a dry, papery sound, the voice of dead leaves. *He’s looking for you.* Evan. It had to be. Panic, cold and sharp, lanced through her. How could it know? This thing, whatever it was, knew the shape of her fears. “Who are you?” she demanded, fists clenched at her sides. “Show yourself!” Laughter answered. Soft, melodic, and utterly without warmth. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere, bouncing off the trees, dripping from the flowers. It was the sound of broken bells. Something moved in her peripheral vision. She snapped her head to the side. For a fraction of a second, she saw it. A figure, tall and impossibly slender, standing between two trees. Its outline was wrong, limbs too long, head tilted at an unnatural angle. It was made of shifting, solid shadow. Then it was gone. The scraping was right behind her. Rory didn’t think. She ran. Not toward the stone boundary—that felt miles away—but diagonally across the clearing, toward what she hoped was a thinner part of the tree line. The air resisted her, thick and syrupy. The glowing pendant bounced against her chest, its red pulse throwing frantic, jumping shadows that made the trees seem to reach for her. The laughter followed, keeping pace with her, a cruel and playful sound. The whispers chased her, a chorus now. *Cardiff...* *The law books gathering dust...* *The way he used to grip your arm...* It knew everything. It was pulling her apart, memory by memory. She burst through a curtain of weeping willow-like branches she hadn’t seen before and stumbled into a smaller, darker clearing within the grove. The humming was deafening here, a physical pressure in the air. The source of the scraping noise was revealed. In the center of the small clearing was a hole. Not dug, but *rotted* into the earth, about three feet wide. The edges were blackened and splintered, like burnt wood. And from within the absolute darkness of that hole came the sound—a dry, relentless scrape, scrape, scrape, as if something were trying to claw its way up. The Heartstone blazed on her chest, searing hot. Its light painted the hole in lurid shades of red. The scraping stopped. The laughter ceased. The whispering died. The silence that fell was absolute and more terrifying than any noise. Rory stood frozen, every muscle taut, staring into the abyss of that hole. A hand shot out. It was long and bone-white, fingers too thin and too numerous, ending in black, cracked nails. It gripped the edge of the pit, the sound of splintering earth unnaturally loud. Another hand, identical, joined it. They strained, pulling. A crown of matted, black hair emerged, then a face. It had no eyes, just smooth, stretched skin where they should be. Its mouth was a wide, dark gash, and it was smiling. It opened that mouth, and the voice that came out was a perfect mimic of her mother’s, sweet and warm and horribly out of place. “Laila,” it crooned, heaving its shoulders out of the hole. “We’ve been waiting for you.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1285
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1285
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"perfect"
count2
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"oppressive"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"perfect"
3"footsteps"
4"oppressive"
5"silence"
6"whisper"
7"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"fists clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
75.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords34
totalWords1275
ratio0.027
matches
0"If you want the truth about the pendant, come to the Grove at moonrise."
1"Laila."
2"He’s looking for you."
3"Cardiff..."
4"The law books gathering dust..."
5"The way he used to grip your arm..."
6"rotted"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1247
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Thump"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove2
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone3
Evan2
Laughter1
Rory5
Thump3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Evan"
2"Laughter"
3"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a threshold but instead just"
1"felt like a trap"
2"felt like a radio tuned slightly off-st"
3"felt like ten minutes. It could have be"
43.14% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.569
wordCount1275
matches
0"Not from one direction, but from all around her, a slow, deliberate circle being drawn a"
1"Not dug, but *rotted* into the earth, about three feet wide"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"opened that mouth"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean32.69
std25.06
cv0.766
sampleLengths
0102
183
265
367
46
521
626
750
864
962
1047
1151
1238
1313
141
1524
1632
1718
184
1927
2012
2131
2256
236
2459
2519
2614
2711
2842
2957
3018
313
323
333
3425
354
3638
3758
3815
61.40% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences64
matches
0"was stolen"
1"been ten"
2"being drawn"
3"was stuck"
4"was, knew"
5"was made"
6"was gone"
7"was revealed"
8"were blackened"
66.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs199
matches
0"was glowing"
1"was pulling"
2"was deafening"
3"were trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences64
ratio0.063
matches
0"Above, the sky was a bruised purple, starless—an hour ago, in Richmond Park, it had been a clear, cold night."
1"No answer. Just the gentle, wrong sigh of wind through leaves that shouldn’t have been there—the trees were too dense for any real breeze to penetrate."
2"Rory didn’t think. She ran. Not toward the stone boundary—that felt miles away—but diagonally across the clearing, toward what she hoped was a thinner part of the tree line. The air resisted her, thick and syrupy. The glowing pendant bounced against her chest, its red pulse throwing frantic, jumping shadows that made the trees seem to reach for her."
3"In the center of the small clearing was a hole. Not dug, but *rotted* into the earth, about three feet wide. The edges were blackened and splintered, like burnt wood. And from within the absolute darkness of that hole came the sound—a dry, relentless scrape, scrape, scrape, as if something were trying to claw its way up."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount341
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.03812316715542522
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.008797653958944282
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean19.92
std17.91
cv0.899
sampleLengths
014
130
220
39
429
514
614
72
82
935
1016
119
1219
1320
143
154
163
177
1817
1910
205
212
224
231
2413
2515
266
276
2815
2926
3050
3164
3262
3347
3451
3538
3613
371
3824
3932
4018
414
4227
4312
4431
4556
466
4759
4819
491
59.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.421875
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners27
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Just a piece of jewellery"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences57
matches
0"She unzipped her jacket, the"
1"It was quiet."
2"She walked toward the center,"
3"Her reason for being here"
4"She touched the small crescent"
5"She took another step. And"
6"She reached the center of"
7"she said, her voice steadier"
8"She went rigid. No one"
9"*He’s looking for you.*"
10"she demanded, fists clenched at"
11"It knew everything. It was"
12"She burst through a curtain"
13"It was long and bone-white,"
14"it crooned, heaving its shoulders"
ratio0.263
12.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences57
matches
0"The air in The Fae"
1"Rory’s boot sank into damp"
2"Time moved differently here, the"
3"The note she’d found slipped"
4"She unzipped her jacket, the"
5"The pendant itself, that deep"
6"The grove was a perfect"
7"Flowers she couldn’t name bloomed"
8"The ancient oaks formed a"
9"It was quiet."
10"A held-breath quiet."
11"The kind that comes before"
12"She walked toward the center,"
13"Her reason for being here"
14"The truth about the pendant."
15"That it was stolen?"
16"That the man who gave"
17"She touched the small crescent"
18"A twig snapped to her"
19"Rory froze, her head whipping"
ratio0.895
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Just a piece of jewellery given to her by a stranger in a rain-slicked alley two weeks ago, a man with eyes that held no light who had pressed it into her palm …"
1"A low hum began, so deep it was more a vibration in her teeth than a sound. The Heartstone against her skin grew warm. Not a gentle warmth. A sudden, feverish h…"
2"The scraping sound came again, closer now. Not from one direction, but from all around her, a slow, deliberate circle being drawn around the clearing’s edge. Ro…"
3"Rory didn’t think. She ran. Not toward the stone boundary—that felt miles away—but diagonally across the clearing, toward what she hoped was a thinner part of t…"
4"In the center of the small clearing was a hole. Not dug, but *rotted* into the earth, about three feet wide. The edges were blackened and splintered, like burnt…"
5"The silence that fell was absolute and more terrifying than any noise. Rory stood frozen, every muscle taut, staring into the abyss of that hole."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"she demanded, fists clenched at her sides"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
67.8193%