Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXFB66XXCBSRSR7MDCP7BM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 30s
Cost:
$0.002637
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at three in the morning. Sharp. Insistent. Aurora Carter froze mid-step, her delivery bag slipping from her shoulder to thud against the floor. She stared at the door, her fingers curling into her palms. Three deadbolts stood between her and whoever was out there. Eva never woke before noon. She peered through the peephole. The hallway was empty. "Eva?" she called, her voice tight. Movement. A shadow shifted into view — tailored charcoal suit, slicked-back platinum hair, that damn ivory-handled cane. Lucien Moreau leaned against the wall, his heterochromatic eyes catching the dim light. One amber. One black. "Charming neighbourhood," he said, his French accent smooth as ever. "Your door smells of curry." Aurora’s heart slammed against her ribs. She hadn’t seen him since the night she’d walked out of his office five months ago. Not a word. Not a call. And now he was here, standing in the dingy hallway of Eva’s flat like he owned the place. She slid the deadbolts open with deliberate slowness, her shoulders squared. "What do you want?" "A drink would be nice." He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his cane tapping lightly against the floor. "Your new living situation is...cosy." "Eva’s place," Aurora corrected, shutting the door behind him. She crossed her arms, her gaze tracking him as he scanned the room. Books. Scrolls. Research notes scattered everywhere. "You left without a word," he said, his back to her. "And you didn’t call." "Touché." He turned, his expression unreadable. "You’ve been busy, though. Delivering Chinese food. Living above a bar." "Silas’ bar," she said, her jaw tightening. "Ah, yes. The man who thinks he’s running London’s underground." Lucien’s lips curved into a faint smile. "Adorable." "What do you want, Lucien?" He tilted his head, studying her. "You’re good at finding things, Rory. Always have been." Aurora’s throat went dry. "Not anymore." "Liar." He stepped closer, the scent of his cologne — something dark and expensive — filling the space between them. "I need your help." "You don’t *need* anything." "True." His cane tapped against the floor again, a rhythmic, deliberate sound. "But I’d prefer your cooperation to inconvenience." Her eyes narrowed. "What are you not saying?" "Clever girl." He reached into his pocket and pulled out a photograph, holding it out to her. Aurora took it, her pulse quickening. The image was grainy, but the subject was unmistakable: Evan, her ex. He was standing in a dimly lit room, his face twisted in anger. "You promised me he wouldn’t bother me again," she said, her voice low. "So I did." Lucien’s expression darkened. "Turns out, Evan’s been...busy. And not in a way I approve of." Aurora’s fingers tightened on the photograph. "What’s this got to do with me?" "Fair question." He stepped closer, his cane now resting against his side. "He’s been asking about you. Specifically, your connections to me." Her breath hitched. "I don’t have connections to you." "We both know that’s not true." His gaze bore into hers, unflinching. "If Evan’s digging into my business, it’s only a matter of time before he finds you again. And given your history..." "He wouldn’t dare." "He would." Lucien’s voice softened, a rarity. "And I won’t let that happen." Aurora’s chest tightened. "What are you proposing?" "Work with me. Find him before he finds you." She shook her head. "I’m done with that life." "Are you?" He tilted her chin up with the tip of his cane, his gaze sharp. "Or are you just hiding?" Her breath caught. "You’re better than this, Rory." His voice was a low murmur now, almost tender. "Better than delivering food and living in fear. You’ve always been stronger than anyone gave you credit for. Including yourself." She looked away, her heart pounding. "I’ll protect you," he said, his tone firm. "But only if you help me." The silence stretched between them, heavy with unspoken words. "Fine," she said finally, her voice steady. "But I’m doing this my way." "Fair enough." He stepped back, his cane tapping against the floor again. "Shall we go?" "Now?" "Evan’s not the only one who’s been busy." His lips curved into a faint smile. "Our first lead awaits." Aurora picked up her jacket, her mind already racing. "And Rory?" Lucien paused at the door, his gaze lingering on her. "Welcome back." Her lips twitched despite herself. "Don’t push it, Luc." He opened the door, holding it for her. She stepped through, her pulse quickening. The night air was crisp, the streets empty. Ahead, a sleek black car idled at the curb. Lucien opened the passenger door for her, his expression unreadable. Aurora hesitated for a moment before sliding in. The leather seats were cool against her skin, the scent of his cologne lingering in the air. He closed the door behind her and walked around to the driver’s side. The engine purred to life. She glanced at him, her heart racing. "Where are we going?" "You’ll see," he said, his gaze fixed on the road. The car pulled away from the curb, the city lights blurring past. Aurora’s fingers tightened on the armrest. Evan. Lucien. Her past and present colliding in ways she hadn’t anticipated. She glanced at Lucien, his profile sharp in the dim light. "How bad is it?" she asked quietly. His jaw tightened. "Bad enough." Her chest constricted. The car sped through the empty streets, the tension between them palpable. Aurora’s mind raced. She’d walked away from this life for a reason. And now, here she was, diving back in. With him. Her gaze drifted back to Lucien, his hands steady on the wheel. The road ahead was dark, uncertain. But one thing was clear: there was no turning back.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:19:54.705Z" 2/19/2026, 12:19:54 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
98.31% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"He stepped back [back]"
2"she asked quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.814
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.102
94.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount955
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount955
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count2
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"pounding"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"racing"
count2
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"palpable"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"unreadable"
2"rhythmic"
3"pulse"
4"pounding"
5"silence"
6"unspoken"
7"racing"
8"tension"
9"palpable"
10"raced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences90
matches
0"d in anger"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords955
ratio0.001
matches
0"need"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
67.54% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount667
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.65
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Movement1
Moreau1
French1
Aurora11
Eva2
Lucien9
Evan2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.675
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount955
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean13.26
std9.9
cv0.747
sampleLengths
052
15
24
36
434
515
646
715
825
928
1011
114
1217
137
1418
155
1615
176
1824
194
2019
218
2217
2331
2413
2518
2613
2722
289
2933
303
3113
327
339
349
3521
363
3734
386
3914
409
4113
4215
431
4419
459
4614
479
488
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs123
matches
0"was standing"
96.77% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences124
ratio0.016
matches
0"A shadow shifted into view — tailored charcoal suit, slicked-back platinum hair, that damn ivory-handled cane."
1"\"Liar.\" He stepped closer, the scent of his cologne — something dark and expensive — filling the space between them."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount667
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.026986506746626688
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005997001499250375
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean7.7
std4.85
cv0.63
sampleLengths
08
11
21
316
411
510
65
75
84
96
101
1116
1213
132
142
1510
165
176
1816
193
203
2118
2211
234
2420
255
269
2713
281
291
304
3111
324
336
3411
357
3617
371
385
396
409
414
422
4320
444
454
4612
477
483
495
68.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4274193548387097
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners53
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences80
matches
0"She stared at the door,"
1"She peered through the peephole."
2"she called, her voice tight"
3"he said, his French accent"
4"She hadn’t seen him since"
5"She slid the deadbolts open"
6"He stepped inside without waiting"
7"She crossed her arms, her"
8"he said, his back to"
9"He turned, his expression unreadable"
10"she said, her jaw tightening"
11"He tilted his head, studying"
12"He stepped closer, the scent"
13"His cane tapped against the"
14"Her eyes narrowed."
15"He reached into his pocket"
16"He was standing in a"
17"she said, her voice low"
18"He stepped closer, his cane"
19"Her breath hitched."
ratio0.538
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences80
matches
0"The knock came at three"
1"Aurora Carter froze mid-step, her"
2"She stared at the door,"
3"Eva never woke before noon."
4"She peered through the peephole."
5"The hallway was empty."
6"she called, her voice tight"
7"A shadow shifted into view"
8"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
9"he said, his French accent"
10"Aurora’s heart slammed against her"
11"She hadn’t seen him since"
12"She slid the deadbolts open"
13"He stepped inside without waiting"
14"Aurora corrected, shutting the door"
15"She crossed her arms, her"
16"he said, his back to"
17"He turned, his expression unreadable"
18"she said, her jaw tightening"
19"Lucien’s lips curved into a"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"she called, her voice tight"
1"he said, his French accent smooth as ever"
2"He stepped, his cane tapping lightly against the floor"
3"He turned, his expression unreadable"
4"she said, her jaw tightening"
5"she said, her voice low"
6"He tilted, his gaze sharp"
7"he said, his tone firm"
8"she said finally, her voice steady"
9"He stepped back, his cane tapping against the floor again"
10"Lucien paused, his gaze lingering on her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora corrected (correct)"
1"Lucien’s voice (lucien voice)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.373
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.068
78.9301%