| 94.74% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 38 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn asked more [more]" | | 1 | "she said finally [finally]" | | 2 | "Eva said slowly [slowly]" | | 3 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 68 | | tagDensity | 0.559 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.105 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |
| 92.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2527 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 80.21% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2527 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "trembled" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "wavered" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "quivered" | | 9 | "etching" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 204 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 204 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 234 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2505 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 33 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 78 | | wordCount | 1835 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.13 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Bowen | 1 | | Quinn | 39 | | Eva | 25 | | Tomasz | 5 | | Morris | 4 | | North | 1 | | Compass | 1 | | London | 1 | | Museum | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Tomasz" | | 3 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Bowen" | | 1 | "Compass" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.437 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 74.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like graffiti" | | 1 | "as if coaxing the scene to speak" | | 2 | "tasted like guilt in her mouth now" | | 3 | "sounded like a plea" |
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| 80.24% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.198 | | wordCount | 2505 | | matches | | 0 | "not enough to dissolve someone, but enough to make a body behave like it had been present in a s" | | 1 | "not at the wall but at the tunnel" | | 2 | "not that a man had been murdered by a human hand, but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 234 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 72 | | mean | 34.79 | | std | 24.41 | | cv | 0.702 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 67 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 75 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 92 | | 26 | 70 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 71 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 52 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 94 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 81 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 58 | | 39 | 58 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 43 | | 42 | 52 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 45 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 32 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 74 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 89.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 204 | | matches | | 0 | "been stripped" | | 1 | "was turned" | | 2 | "been torn" | | 3 | "been wrapped" | | 4 | "was etched" | | 5 | "been pressed" | | 6 | "been woven" | | 7 | "were worn" | | 8 | "been murdered" | | 9 | "been engineered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 352 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 234 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "Her watch face caught the shaft and glinted; she checked it without thinking." | | 1 | "Her hair would not stay behind her ear; she kept tucking it and then tugging it free." | | 2 | "She held a clipboard that read like a student’s list—chain of custody, samples, witness statements—handwriting neat enough to make Quinn bristle." | | 3 | "\"A vendor named Marek. He came in to open; saw the frame and shouted. He said it smelled like burnt paper. He called it in.\" Eva's voice flattened with recital." | | 4 | "Tiny white crystals dusted the weave—ashes with the consistency of ground bone." | | 5 | "She scraped a sliver between her thumbnail; it flaked and smelled of old earth and iron." | | 6 | "The compass needle wavered when close; its motion was quick and then decisive." | | 7 | "She checked the throat for rare traces—no crushed trachea, no ligature." | | 8 | "She had seen copper touches before—not enough to dissolve someone, but enough to make a body behave like it had been present in a storm." | | 9 | "Two of them didn't belong—impractical soles, a pattern that made no sense for London streets." | | 10 | "There were prints in the powder—small prints like fingertips." | | 11 | "Underneath, a row of small teeth—real, bleached and drilled—had been woven into the fabric like a fringe." | | 12 | "An indentation in one palm suggested he had held something small—a coin, a bone, a compass—right before the end." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1850 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 61 | | adverbRatio | 0.032972972972972976 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005405405405405406 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 234 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 234 | | mean | 10.71 | | std | 7.54 | | cv | 0.704 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 42.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 30 | | diversityRatio | 0.32905982905982906 | | totalSentences | 234 | | uniqueOpeners | 77 | |
| 38.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a swath of dark" | | 1 | "Then the pattern shifted under" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 94.42% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "It bounced off tiles stained" | | 1 | "Her watch face caught the" | | 2 | "She liked that." | | 3 | "Her hair would not stay" | | 4 | "She held a clipboard that" | | 5 | "she answered, voice pitched too" | | 6 | "She tucked hair past her" | | 7 | "Her fingers hovered above the" | | 8 | "She smelled ozone and something" | | 9 | "It meant someone had traced" | | 10 | "Her green eyes searched Quinn's" | | 11 | "She cupped her hands and" | | 12 | "She scraped a sliver between" | | 13 | "Her voice flattened into work." | | 14 | "She pressed a thumb into" | | 15 | "She had seen that before." | | 16 | "It marked someone who had" | | 17 | "She wasn't sure why she" | | 18 | "Her partner, Morris, had once" | | 19 | "She drew out a small" |
| | ratio | 0.314 | |
| 12.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 154 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn climbed down into the" | | 1 | "The light from Bowen's torch" | | 2 | "It bounced off tiles stained" | | 3 | "Her watch face caught the" | | 4 | "The seconds were small and" | | 5 | "She liked that." | | 6 | "A shifting of boots." | | 7 | "Eva stood beneath the arch" | | 8 | "Her hair would not stay" | | 9 | "She held a clipboard that" | | 10 | "Eva tightened her grip on" | | 11 | "she answered, voice pitched too" | | 12 | "She tucked hair past her" | | 13 | "Quinn let her eyes sweep" | | 14 | "The stalls had been stripped" | | 15 | "Lanterns hung from hooks, their" | | 16 | "A body lay near platform" | | 17 | "Eva's voice flattened with recital" | | 18 | "The face was turned away." | | 19 | "The collar had been torn" |
| | ratio | 0.895 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 89.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She held a clipboard that read like a student’s list—chain of custody, samples, witness statements—handwriting neat enough to make Quinn bristle." | | 1 | "She tucked hair past her left ear with a finger that trembled a fraction." | | 2 | "Lanterns hung from hooks, their flames guttering as if the air was trying to breathe through a wound." | | 3 | "Her partner, Morris, had once named items like that as if they were people." | | 4 | "The pattern was scorch-like: concentric rings, not unlike the ones that had formed on the tile around the torso." | | 5 | "The same etching of protective lines that tried not to be pretty." |
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| 85.53% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 38 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she answered, voice pitched too high for the space" | | 1 | "Eva asked, voice small now" | | 2 | "Eva's voice sounded, a string snapping toward disbelief" |
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| 61.76% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 28 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva pressed (press)" | | 1 | "Eva observed (observe)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Eva suggested (suggest)" | | 4 | "Eva mouthed (mouth)" | | 5 | "Quinn ordered (order)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 68 | | tagDensity | 0.412 | | leniency | 0.824 | | rawRatio | 0.214 | | effectiveRatio | 0.176 | |