Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXG6VT0SNSBWP9YWNRFEW5

Run Details

Duration:
37.6s
Cost:
$0.026805

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air changed the moment they crossed the threshold of standing oaks, thick with something Aurora couldn't name. Her lungs filled with honey and starlight, sweet enough to make her dizzy. "Christ, what is this place?" The words left her mouth before she could stop them, though they sounded muffled, as if spoken underwater. Behind her, Nyx's form rippled like smoke caught in a breeze, their violet eyes scanning the impossible landscape that stretched ahead. Richmond Park had vanished. In its place, wildflowers carpeted rolling hills in colours that had no earthly names—petals that shifted from coral to silver depending on how the light caught them. Ancient trees twisted skyward, their bark gleaming like polished bone, leaves rustling with whispers in languages Aurora's mind couldn't grasp but her soul somehow understood. "Welcome to my sanctuary." Isolde's voice drifted from somewhere ahead, though Aurora couldn't see her silver-haired form anywhere among the luminescent foliage. "Time flows as it wills here. Minutes may pass as hours, or hours as heartbeats." Aurora's boots sank into moss that pulsed with each step, releasing tiny sparks of blue-green light that danced around her ankles like living jewels. The Heartstone pendant against her chest thrummed with warmth, its crimson glow barely visible through her jacket. "The flowers..." Nyx's whisper carried on a wind that tasted of cinnamon and rain. "They're singing." Aurora stopped, tilted her head. There—beneath the rustle of impossible leaves and the distant trickle of water over stone—melody. Harmonies that wove together like silk threads, rising and falling with their own mysterious rhythm. The sound made her teeth ache with beauty. "Don't listen too closely." Isolde materialized beside a tree whose trunk spiraled in perfect helixes, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the grove's ethereal light. "The flower songs call to mortal hearts. Many who hear them never wish to leave." A stream meandered past, its water crystal-clear but wrong somehow. Fish with fins like butterfly wings darted beneath the surface, their scales catching light that seemed to come from within the water itself. When Aurora knelt and dipped her fingers in, the liquid felt warm as blood, electric against her skin. "It's alive," she breathed, watching silver ripples spread from her touch. The water responded to her presence, swirling in patterns that almost resembled faces, reaching tendrils that tried to curl around her wrist. Nyx flowed closer, their shadow-form casting no reflection on the stream's surface. "Everything here lives differently than our world. Can you feel it? The way reality bends?" Aurora could. Her body felt lighter, as if gravity held less sway. When she stood, colours seemed more vivid, edges sharper. The crescent scar on her left wrist tingled, and she glanced down to find it glowing faintly silver. "The grove remembers all who enter," Isolde said, though she hadn't moved her lips. Her voice seemed to emanate from the very air. "It marks you now as its own." They moved deeper along a path that appeared beneath their feet with each step, disappearing behind them like footprints in snow. Crystalline formations jutted from the earth at irregular intervals, humming with contained energy. When Aurora brushed one with her fingertips, it chimed a note so pure it made her bones resonate. "Careful." Nyx's form solidified enough to catch her elbow. "Some harmonies here can shatter mortal minds." The path curved around a hill carpeted in grass that sparkled like emeralds, leading to a clearing where the air itself seemed to dance. Motes of light swirled in complex patterns, occasionally forming shapes—a deer made of starlight, a bird whose wings scattered rainbow dust, faces that almost looked familiar before dissolving back into formless radiance. "Memories," Isolde explained, settling onto a throne-like formation of twisted roots that hadn't been there moments before. "The grove collects them from all who pass through. Fae, mortal, demon—all leave traces." Aurora watched a wisp of light coalesce into the shape of a woman in medieval dress, her face turned skyward in wordless song before she fragmented into a thousand dancing sparks. Another formed—a man in strange robes, hands raised as if casting a spell, his mouth open in what might have been triumph or terror. "That one's mine." Isolde's lips curved in something that wasn't quite a smile. "From when I first discovered this place, centuries ago. Fresh from exile, bitter with loss." The memory-figure dissolved, replaced by something darker—a shadow that pulsed with malevolent hunger. Aurora's pendant flared with heat against her chest, and the Fae-forged blade at her hip grew cold enough to burn through the leather sheath. "And that," Isolde continued, her tone sharp as winter wind, "is why you're here. The grove has shown me what comes. Dark things stir beyond the Veil, testing the boundaries between worlds. Even here, in this protected space, their influence seeps through." The shadow-memory writhed, reaching tendrils toward them before dissipating like smoke. But its presence lingered, a chill that made the flower songs falter and the crystal formations dim their light. Nyx's form rippled with agitation. "I felt that in London too. Something hunting, searching..." "For her." Isolde's lavender eyes fixed on Aurora. "The pendant you wear marks you as significant to powers beyond mortal comprehension. This grove has accepted you, blessed you with its mark." She gestured to Aurora's still-glowing scar. "But acceptance comes with price. You cannot leave unchanged." The wildflowers around them began to close their petals despite the eternal twilight that bathed the grove. Even the stream's song grew mournful, its crystal fish hiding among phosphorescent reeds. "What kind of change?" Aurora's voice cracked slightly. Before Isolde could answer, the air itself screamed.
total_cost0.026805

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora's voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.522
leniency1
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.083
89.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount954
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount954
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count3
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"crystalline"
count1
11
word"dance"
count1
12
word"complex"
count1
13
word"familiar"
count1
14
word"fragmented"
count1
15
word"dancing"
count1
16
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"gleaming"
2"sanctuary"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"whisper"
6"silk"
7"perfect"
8"crystal"
9"electric"
10"crystalline"
11"dance"
12"complex"
13"familiar"
14"fragmented"
15"dancing"
16"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences50
matches
0"d with warmth"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences50
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords939
ratio0
matches(empty)
89.29% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"When Aurora brushed one with her fingertips, it chimed a note so pure it made her bones resonate."
62.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount740
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.76
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Nyx5
Park1
Heartstone1
Fae-forged1
Isolde8
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Park"
globalScore0.622
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"light that seemed to come from within the water itself"
1"seemed more vivid edges sharper"
2"appeared beneath their feet with each step, disappearing behind them like footprints in snow"
3"as if casting a spell, his mouth open in what might have been triumph or terror"
4"quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount939
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
80.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean33.54
std14.42
cv0.43
sampleLengths
031
15
239
356
437
541
616
742
839
951
1033
1127
1239
1330
1452
1516
1656
1731
1855
1928
2037
2142
2230
2314
2446
2530
268
278
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences61
ratio0.082
matches
0"In its place, wildflowers carpeted rolling hills in colours that had no earthly names—petals that shifted from coral to silver depending on how the light caught them."
1"There—beneath the rustle of impossible leaves and the distant trickle of water over stone—melody."
2"Motes of light swirled in complex patterns, occasionally forming shapes—a deer made of starlight, a bird whose wings scattered rainbow dust, faces that almost looked familiar before dissolving back into formless radiance."
3"Another formed—a man in strange robes, hands raised as if casting a spell, his mouth open in what might have been triumph or terror."
4"The memory-figure dissolved, replaced by something darker—a shadow that pulsed with malevolent hunger."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount754
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.033156498673740056
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007957559681697613
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean15.39
std7.89
cv0.512
sampleLengths
018
113
25
318
421
54
627
725
822
915
1024
1117
1214
132
145
1514
1615
178
1824
1915
2010
2123
2218
2311
2422
2512
2615
272
2810
299
3018
3114
329
337
3421
3513
3618
379
387
3924
4032
4117
4214
4331
4424
4513
4615
4713
4824
4942
92.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5737704918032787
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners35
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"Even the stream's song grew"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences49
matches
0"Her lungs filled with honey"
1"she breathed, watching silver ripples"
2"Her body felt lighter, as"
3"Her voice seemed to emanate"
4"They moved deeper along a"
5"She gestured to Aurora's still-glowing"
ratio0.122
72.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences49
matches
0"The air changed the moment"
1"Her lungs filled with honey"
2"The words left her mouth"
3"Richmond Park had vanished."
4"Isolde's voice drifted from somewhere"
5"Aurora's boots sank into moss"
6"The Heartstone pendant against her"
7"Nyx's whisper carried on a"
8"Aurora stopped, tilted her head."
9"There—beneath the rustle of impossible"
10"Harmonies that wove together like"
11"The sound made her teeth"
12"Isolde materialized beside a tree"
13"A stream meandered past, its"
14"she breathed, watching silver ripples"
15"The water responded to her"
16"Nyx flowed closer, their shadow-form"
17"Her body felt lighter, as"
18"The crescent scar on her"
19"Isolde said, though she hadn't"
ratio0.776
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"Before Isolde could answer, the"
ratio0.02
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Behind her, Nyx's form rippled like smoke caught in a breeze, their violet eyes scanning the impossible landscape that stretched ahead."
1"In its place, wildflowers carpeted rolling hills in colours that had no earthly names—petals that shifted from coral to silver depending on how the light caught…"
2"Aurora's boots sank into moss that pulsed with each step, releasing tiny sparks of blue-green light that danced around her ankles like living jewels."
3"Harmonies that wove together like silk threads, rising and falling with their own mysterious rhythm."
4"The water responded to her presence, swirling in patterns that almost resembled faces, reaching tendrils that tried to curl around her wrist."
5"Her body felt lighter, as if gravity held less sway."
6"They moved deeper along a path that appeared beneath their feet with each step, disappearing behind them like footprints in snow."
7"But its presence lingered, a chill that made the flower songs falter and the crystal formations dim their light."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Isolde continued, her tone sharp as winter wind,"
19.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"Isolde explained (explain)"
2"Isolde continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.261
75.2164%