| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora's voice cracked slightly [slightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.522 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 89.52% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 954 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 954 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "gleaming" | | 2 | "sanctuary" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "crystal" | | 9 | "electric" | | 10 | "crystalline" | | 11 | "dance" | | 12 | "complex" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "fragmented" | | 15 | "dancing" | | 16 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 939 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.29% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "When Aurora brushed one with her fingertips, it chimed a note so pure it made her bones resonate." |
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| 62.16% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 740 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.76 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | Nyx | 5 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.622 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "light that seemed to come from within the water itself" | | 1 | "seemed more vivid edges sharper" | | 2 | "appeared beneath their feet with each step, disappearing behind them like footprints in snow" | | 3 | "as if casting a spell, his mouth open in what might have been triumph or terror" | | 4 | "quite a smile" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 939 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 33.54 | | std | 14.42 | | cv | 0.43 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 46 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 61 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "In its place, wildflowers carpeted rolling hills in colours that had no earthly names—petals that shifted from coral to silver depending on how the light caught them." | | 1 | "There—beneath the rustle of impossible leaves and the distant trickle of water over stone—melody." | | 2 | "Motes of light swirled in complex patterns, occasionally forming shapes—a deer made of starlight, a bird whose wings scattered rainbow dust, faces that almost looked familiar before dissolving back into formless radiance." | | 3 | "Another formed—a man in strange robes, hands raised as if casting a spell, his mouth open in what might have been triumph or terror." | | 4 | "The memory-figure dissolved, replaced by something darker—a shadow that pulsed with malevolent hunger." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 754 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.033156498673740056 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007957559681697613 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 61 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 61 | | mean | 15.39 | | std | 7.89 | | cv | 0.512 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 32 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 42 |
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| 92.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5737704918032787 | | totalSentences | 61 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 68.03% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the stream's song grew" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "Her lungs filled with honey" | | 1 | "she breathed, watching silver ripples" | | 2 | "Her body felt lighter, as" | | 3 | "Her voice seemed to emanate" | | 4 | "They moved deeper along a" | | 5 | "She gestured to Aurora's still-glowing" |
| | ratio | 0.122 | |
| 72.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed the moment" | | 1 | "Her lungs filled with honey" | | 2 | "The words left her mouth" | | 3 | "Richmond Park had vanished." | | 4 | "Isolde's voice drifted from somewhere" | | 5 | "Aurora's boots sank into moss" | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant against her" | | 7 | "Nyx's whisper carried on a" | | 8 | "Aurora stopped, tilted her head." | | 9 | "There—beneath the rustle of impossible" | | 10 | "Harmonies that wove together like" | | 11 | "The sound made her teeth" | | 12 | "Isolde materialized beside a tree" | | 13 | "A stream meandered past, its" | | 14 | "she breathed, watching silver ripples" | | 15 | "The water responded to her" | | 16 | "Nyx flowed closer, their shadow-form" | | 17 | "Her body felt lighter, as" | | 18 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 19 | "Isolde said, though she hadn't" |
| | ratio | 0.776 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Isolde could answer, the" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Nyx's form rippled like smoke caught in a breeze, their violet eyes scanning the impossible landscape that stretched ahead." | | 1 | "In its place, wildflowers carpeted rolling hills in colours that had no earthly names—petals that shifted from coral to silver depending on how the light caught…" | | 2 | "Aurora's boots sank into moss that pulsed with each step, releasing tiny sparks of blue-green light that danced around her ankles like living jewels." | | 3 | "Harmonies that wove together like silk threads, rising and falling with their own mysterious rhythm." | | 4 | "The water responded to her presence, swirling in patterns that almost resembled faces, reaching tendrils that tried to curl around her wrist." | | 5 | "Her body felt lighter, as if gravity held less sway." | | 6 | "They moved deeper along a path that appeared beneath their feet with each step, disappearing behind them like footprints in snow." | | 7 | "But its presence lingered, a chill that made the flower songs falter and the crystal formations dim their light." |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde continued, her tone sharp as winter wind," |
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| 19.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 2 | "Isolde continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.174 | | leniency | 0.348 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.261 | |